高中英語應(yīng)用文寫作

關(guān)于高中英語應(yīng)用文寫作Whatmakesagoodessay?Theessay第2頁,共26頁，星期六，2024年，5月StructureofaGoodComposition1.Topicparagraph2.SupportingParagraphs3.Concludingparagraph第3頁,共26頁，星期六，2024年，5月四大內(nèi)容：Topicparagraph(Introductionparagraph)

Generalstatement

開頭段：四大內(nèi)容：問候；自我介紹；寫信背景；寫信目的。第4頁,共26頁，星期六，2024年，5月Wellbegunishalfdone.開頭段：1、問候Howareyoudoing?Howiseverythinggoing?2、自我介紹Iam

Lihua,a17-year-oldboystudyinginXXXmiddleschool.IamLiHua,who…第5頁,共26頁，星期六，2024年，5月Wellbegunishalfdone.3、寫信背景（寫信的緣由）Iheard/learnedthat…Yousaidinyourlastletterthat…4、寫信目的Now,Iamwritingthislettertodosth.第6頁,共26頁，星期六，2024年，5月hadplannedtodosth.gotothemovies/gotothecinema/watchamovieon(this)Sundayafternoon/on(at)theweekendbreak/keepone’spromise/wordapologizetosb.fordoingsth.makeanapologytosb.fordoingsth.I’msorrytodosth./that…因為失約，向?qū)Ψ降狼傅?頁,共26頁，星期六，2024年，5月DearPeter,IfeelterriblysorrytohavebrokenmypromisethatIwouldseeafilmwithyouonthiscomingSundayafternoon.Pleaseacceptmysincereapology!因為失約，向?qū)Ψ降狼竧hat引導(dǎo)同位語從句第8頁,共26頁，星期六，2024年，5月

SupportingParagraphs(Body)Paragraphs

TSSSSSSSSSFirstly,...Secondly,...Moreover,...Finally,...However,...Inaddition（另外）,Furthermore（而且）,第9頁,共26頁，星期六，2024年，5月TheparagraphWhatmakesagoodparagraph?第10頁,共26頁，星期六，2024年，5月正確使用有關(guān)連接詞

時間先后：first,then,later,intheend,eventually,最后sincethen,afterawhile轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系：but,however,onthecontrary（相反地）nevertheless（然而）因果關(guān)系：because,since,as,thanksto,owingto,asaresultof,dueto,becauseofforthereasonthat,thus,therefore第11頁,共26頁，星期六，2024年，5月正確使用有關(guān)連接詞

讓步關(guān)系：though,although,evenif,eventhough,as

遞進關(guān)系：what’smore/worse,tomakemattersworseinaddition,furthermoreontheonehand…ontheotherhand條件關(guān)系：if,unless,aslongas（只要）,onconditionthat…(如果）表列舉：forexample/instance,take…forexample,that’stosay,inotherwords表總結(jié)：inshort,inbrief,inconclusion,inaword,onthewhole,ashasbeenstated,allinall,tosumup,personally,insummary第12頁,共26頁，星期六，2024年，5月FirstlySecondlyThirdly......①Tobeginwith/Firstofall②Inaddition/besides/furthermore/moreover/What'smore/atthesametime③AtLast/intheend/finally/eventually/Lastbutnotleast正確使用一些承上啟下的連接詞或短語第13頁,共26頁，星期六，2024年，5月用于陳述觀點的詞或短語Personally,Frommypointofview,Inmyopinion,Inmyview,AsfarasI'mconcerned,Iholdtheideathat......Asforme,Asregardstome,第14頁,共26頁，星期六，2024年，5月解釋失約的原因（時態(tài)），安排下次活動esbeabouttodosth.when…beonthepointofdoingsth.when…receiveone’scallsbcallme,sayingthat…/tellingmethat…takepartin/joinin/attendtheassaycontestthetestwillbeheldonSundayafternoonthereason(why…)isthat…forgive/pardonsb.ifyouarefree…/ifit’sconvenientforyou…gofor/onapicnic,goshopping……Isuggestdoingsth/

Isuggestthat…該部分內(nèi)容可以適當拓展第15頁,共26頁，星期六，2024年，5月解釋失約的原因(時態(tài)），安排下次活動es

Yesterdayafternoon,IwasabouttoleavethedormitorywhenIreceivedmyChineseteacher’scall,tellingmethatIhavetoattendtheessaycontestheldthisSundayafternoon.Ihopethechangewon’tcausetoomuchtroubleforyou.ShallwegotohaveamealtogethernextSundayafternoon?Ifitisconvenientforyou,let’smeetat5:00p.m.outsidetheschoolgate.Ifnot,pleaseletmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.WhenIreceivedacallfrommyChineseteacherwhoaskedmetoattendtheessaycontest……第16頁,共26頁，星期六，2024年，5月TheconclusionWhatmakesagoodconclusion?第17頁,共26頁，星期六，2024年，5月take…intoconsideration/accountIwouldappreciateitifyoucould…Iwouldbegratefultoyouifyoucould…I’mlookingforwardto…結(jié)尾段第18頁,共26頁，星期六，2024年，5月I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.結(jié)尾段第19頁,共26頁，星期六，2024年，5月1.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.（使用名詞性從句）2.ThoughI’mweak,I’llmaketheeffort.(使用as倒裝句)3.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用強調(diào)句型)4.Ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhelp.(強調(diào)句）What

surpriseshimisthat

thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.Practice怎樣使用較豐富的句式和高級詞匯WeakasIam,I’llmaketheeffort.

Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.

ItwasbecauseofyourhelpthatIpassedthephysicsexam.第20頁,共26頁，星期六，2024年，5月5.Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.(使用過去分詞)6.Theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool.(使用V-ing形式)7.Iwon’tbelievewhathesays.（nomatterwhat狀語從句）

8.Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakerapidprogress.

（祈使句+and…）Followedbymanystudents,shewalkedoutofthelab.Singingandlaughing,theywentbacktoschool.Nomatterwhathesays,Iwon’tbelieve.

Studyhardandyou’llmakerapidprogress.第21頁,共26頁，星期六，2024年，5月9．Hehadhardly

comebackfromBeijingwhenhewassentabroad.(使用倒裝句)10.Weallthinkheisagreatman.(thinkhighlyof)11.Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.(turnout)12.Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.(themore…themore)Hardly

hadhecome

backfromBeijing

when

hewassentabroad.Weallthinkhighlyofhim

.Itturnedouttobe

thattheplanwasafailure.Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhefelt.第22頁,共26頁，星期六，2024年，5月句式改寫

e.g.

大家都知道，清明節(jié)是我國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。在這一天，人們會去給親人掃墓來寄托他們的哀思。Weallknow