2024年高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫語(yǔ)料積累之如何表達(dá)激動(dòng)背誦與測(cè)試（詞-句-文）講義（原卷版）

讀后續(xù)寫語(yǔ)料積累之如何表達(dá)激動(dòng)背誦與測(cè)試（詞-句-文）講義

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背誦積累區(qū)：背誦遷移舉一反三

一、必背單詞

1.激動(dòng)類形容詞：

excited,thrilled,exciting,thrilling

2.激動(dòng)類副詞：

excitedly

3.激動(dòng)類名詞：

excitement,thrill

4.激動(dòng)類動(dòng)詞：

excite,thrill

二、高頻語(yǔ)塊

1.cheerup振奮起來(lái)

2.with/inexcitement激動(dòng)地

3.flushwithexcitement激動(dòng)得滿臉通紅

4.conceal/hideone\excitement難掩激動(dòng)

5.containone'sexcitement抑制內(nèi)心的激動(dòng)

6.toone'sexcitement/thrill令某人激動(dòng)的是

7.ascreamofthrill/excitement激動(dòng)的尖叫聲

8.aripple/shiver/wave/surgeofexcitement——陣興奮

三、佳句賞析

1.Hisvoicewaschokedwithemotion.他情緒激動(dòng)，難以成聲。

2.Hisfacewaslitupwithexcitement.他的臉由于激動(dòng)而放出光彩。

3.Herfacewasglowingwithexcitement.她因興奮而顯得容光煥發(fā)。

4.Arippleofexcitementranthroughthem.一陣興奮的漣漪掠過(guò)他們。

5.Herflushedfacewasshiningwithexcitement.她紅紅的臉因激動(dòng)而發(fā)亮。

6.MyheartisinmymouthwheneverIhearthenationalanthem.每當(dāng)我聽到國(guó)歌就激動(dòng)不已。

7.Herheartwasflutteringwithanxietyaswellasexcitement.她的心又興奮又不安，怦怦亂跳。

8.Ashiverofexcitementpassedthroughherstomachwhensheheardthenews.聽到這個(gè)消息，一陣激動(dòng)的

戰(zhàn)栗傳到她的胃里。

9.Theteachefsencouragementwarmedhisheart.Hefeltasurgeofexcitement.老師的鼓勵(lì)溫暖著他的心,

他感到一陣興奮。

10.Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,awildexcitementtookholdofher.當(dāng)主持人宣布她

獲獎(jiǎng)時(shí)，她興奮得不能自己。

11.Dadsaidwewouldgocampingnextweek,hiseyesglittering\twinklingwithexcitement.爸爸說(shuō)下

星期去露營(yíng)，他的眼中閃爍著興奮的光芒。

12.Unabletocontainhisjoyandexcitement,hethrewhimselfintomyarms,murmuring,“Thankyou,

dearmum."不能抑制住他的高興和激動(dòng)，他一下子撲到我的懷里，喃喃道：媽媽，辛苦了。

測(cè)試鞏固區(qū)：分級(jí)測(cè)試步步為贏

一、高頻語(yǔ)塊漢譯英

1.振奮起來(lái)

2.激動(dòng)地

3.激動(dòng)得滿臉通紅

4.難掩激動(dòng)

5.抑制內(nèi)心的激動(dòng)

6.令某人激動(dòng)的是

7.激動(dòng)的尖叫聲

8.一陣興奮

二、佳句賞析漢譯英

1.他情緒激動(dòng)，難以成聲。

2.他的臉由于激動(dòng)而放出光彩。

3.她因興奮而顯得容光煥發(fā)。

4.一陣興奮的漣漪掠過(guò)他們。

5.她紅紅的臉因激動(dòng)而發(fā)亮。

6.每當(dāng)我聽到國(guó)歌就激動(dòng)不已。

7.她的心又興奮又不安，怦怦亂跳。

8.聽到這個(gè)消息，一陣激動(dòng)的戰(zhàn)栗傳到她的胃里。

9.老師的鼓勵(lì)溫暖著他的心，他感到一陣興奮。

10.當(dāng)主持人宣布她獲獎(jiǎng)時(shí),她興奮得不能自己。

1L爸爸說(shuō)下星期去露營(yíng)，他的眼中閃爍著興奮的光芒。

三、情感表達(dá)片段運(yùn)用

請(qǐng)運(yùn)用以上必備單詞或高頻語(yǔ)塊，把下面的語(yǔ)篇補(bǔ)充完整。

Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.Wedecidedtocampalong

theriver.Theviewsonthejourneyweresurprisinglybeautiful,1（媽媽激動(dòng)不已）.

Everytimewegottoanewplace,Momcouldhardly2（抑制興奮），andwould

3（振奮起來(lái)）likeachild.Shewouldgetoffthecar,laughinganddancingaround

4（興奮地）.Themomentwearrivedatthecampingplace,5（激動(dòng)得

尖叫起來(lái)），Momlocatedaclearingandimmediatelyguidedustopitchthetent6（眼

里閃著激動(dòng)的光芒），wesatonthegrass,enjoyingthesplendidnature.

四、情感表達(dá)語(yǔ)篇運(yùn)用

1.（2023上?廣西?高三校聯(lián)考階段練習(xí)）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)

成一篇完整的短文。

I'veforgottenalmosteverythingaboutmyearlychildhoodexcepttheconcert,andmymotheralso

remembersit.

WhenIwasafive-year-oldboy,Iwaslearningtoplaythepianoinamusicalschool.Oneday,afamous

pianomasterwassaidtoholdapianoconcertinourcity.Wishingtoencouragemyprogressonthepiano,my

mothertookmetotheconcert.Afterwewereseated,mymotherspottedafriendintheaudience,whoshehadn't

metforalongtime.Soshetoldmetostayinmypositionandthenwalkeddownthepassagetogreetherfriend.

Mymotherandherfriendstoodchattinghappilyforawhilebeforetheperformance.Meanwhile,Iwassoexcited

toseetheconcertstagethatIstoodupandeventuallymademywaythroughadoormarked“NoAdmittance^^to

explorethewondersoftheconcerthall.

Whenthehouselightsbecamedimandtheconcertwasabouttobegin,mymotherreturnedtoherseat.And

shediscoveredthatIwasmissing.Mymothersaidshefeltreallyguiltyatthattimeandthatshesaidtoherself,

“It'smyfault.Ishouldn'thaveleftmylittlesonaloneinhisplace.^^Confusedandanxious,shelookedaround,but

Iwasnowheretobeseen.Suddenly,thecurtainpartedandspotlightsfocusedontheimpressivepianoonthestage.

Tohersurprise,shesawmesittingbythekeyboardinnocentlyplayingTwinkleTwinkleLittleStaronthepiano.

Atthatmoment,thepianomastermadehisentrance.Seeingme,alittleboy,sittingatthecenterofthestage

andplayingthepiano,heseemedtobecompletelyataloss.Butthenhequicklymovedtothepianoand

whisperedinmyear,"Don'tquit.Keepplaying.^^Leaningover,hereachedaroundtotheothersideofmeand

soonaddedarunningobbligato（伴奏）.Together,wetransformedafrighteningsituationintoacreativeexperience.

Theaudiencehadneverseensuchaperformanceform.Theylistenedcuriouslyandattentively,lostinthe

wonderfulmusicworld.

注意：

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右：

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Whenthepiececametoanend,thepianomasterbreathedasighofrelief.

Aftertheconcert,mymotherandIwaitedforthepianomasterbackstage.

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了小時(shí)候媽媽帶著作者去看音樂(lè)會(huì)，作者誤走入舞臺(tái)上彈鋼琴的故

事。

【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“當(dāng)這首曲子結(jié)束時(shí)，鋼琴大師松了一口氣?！笨芍?，第一段可

描寫作者彈完鋼琴后鋼琴大師鼓勵(lì)作者，觀眾也給作者鼓掌，作者很高興。

②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“音樂(lè)會(huì)結(jié)束后，我和媽媽在后臺(tái)等鋼琴大師?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫媽媽向鋼琴大師

道歉，大師很欣賞作者，認(rèn)為作者以后會(huì)有所作為，多虧了大師，作者現(xiàn)在能登上舞臺(tái)，而且對(duì)未來(lái)的音

樂(lè)之路充滿信心。

2.續(xù)寫線索：彈完曲子一鋼琴大師鼓勵(lì)作者一觀眾鼓掌一高興，回到座位上欣賞音樂(lè)一音樂(lè)會(huì)結(jié)

束一向大師道歉一大師很欣賞作者一作者如今音樂(lè)有所作為

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①擁抱某人：hugsb./givesb.ahug

②鼓掌：clap/applaud

③走近：comeupto/approach

情緒類

①興奮地：Excitedly/withexcitement

②感動(dòng)的：touched/moved

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Excitedlyandhappily,Iranintomymother飛armsandtookmyseatagain.（由副詞作伴

隨狀語(yǔ)）

[高分句型2]Seeinghimcoming,mymothercameuptohimandsaidapologetically,6<Itakemylittlesontoyour

concertinthehopethathecanbenefitfromit.（由現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)和that引導(dǎo)的同位語(yǔ)從句）

2.（2023上?湖南岳陽(yáng)?高三校聯(lián)考階段練習(xí)）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之

構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

Forsomeweeks,Ihadnoticedanelderlywomanwalkingpastourhouse,pushingagrocerycartfilledwith

trashbags.Icouldn'thelpbutfeelsorryforherassheshuffled（拖著月卻走路）along.Occasionally,shewould

pauseandpickupacanfrombesidetheroad.Shewouldcarefullyputitintooneofthebagsandcontinueonher

way.

Iwonderedwhatcircumstanceshadbroughthertothispointinlife.Didshehavenofamily?Wasthereno

onetolookafterher?

Oneevening,Icouldnolongerstandit.Asshewalkedby,Iwentouttothestreetandstoppedher.

“Madam,“Isaid."CanIaskyousomething?^^

Sheturnedtolookatmewithbeautiful,darkeyesthattwinkledinherwrinkledface.Iknewthenthatshe

wasnoordinaryhomelessperson.Therewasdignityand,yes,evenjoyabouther.Suddenly,Ifeltembarrassedto

askhermyquestions,butIinsisted.

'Tveseenyouforafewweekspickingupcans,^^Iexplained.t4Doyousellthemtobuygroceries?^^

shesaidwithasmile.dothistohelpthechildren.^^

Imusthavelookedconfusedbecauseshewentontoexplain.

“Ihadcancer-twice-andbothtimesIwenttoabighospitalinanothertown.Theycuredme.ButwhileI

wasthere,Imetthechildren,andI'veneverforgottenthem.Idon'thaveanymoney,butIcanstillwalk,andI

pickupthesecanstosellthemformoneyforthehospital.^^

Shetoldmethatshespendsmanyhoursaweekcollectingcans;atleasttwobusinessessavecansforher.

Whenshehasenough,sheloadsthemallintoafriend^pickup,andthetwoofthemtakethemtothecitywhere

thehospitalislocated.Theretheygetcashedout.

注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Aswecontinuedtotalk,Ilearnedmoreaboutwhatshethought.

“No,no.Idon'twantyourmoney,9,sherepliedwithawaveofherhand,backingawayabit.

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了幾個(gè)星期以來(lái)，作者注意到了一個(gè)推著一輛裝滿垃圾袋的購(gòu)物車

的老婦人，于是詢問(wèn)老婦人的個(gè)人情況，在得知了老婦人遇到的困難后，作者想要給老婦人錢，但是開始

被拒絕了，在我的堅(jiān)持下她收下了錢。作者認(rèn)為老婦人像天使一樣。

【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：

①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“隨著我們繼續(xù)交談，我越來(lái)越了解她的想法”可知，第一段可描寫作者和老婦人交談

以及老婦人的感受。

②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“，不，不。我不要你的錢，’她回答說(shuō)，揮了揮手，后退了一點(diǎn)。”可知，第二段可描

寫老婦人拒絕了作者的錢，作者如何說(shuō)服她收下錢以及作者的感悟。

2.續(xù)寫線索：交談——深入了解——拿錢幫助——被拒絕——說(shuō)服老人收下——作者感悟

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①撿起：collect/pickup

②看見：see/spot/notice

③確保：ensure/makesure

情緒類

①幸運(yùn)：blessed/lucky

②值得：worthit/worthwhile

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]“Iknowhowyoufeelwhenyouseealadyofmyagestillwalkontheroadtomakesome

moneybycollectingcans,“shesaid.（運(yùn)用了how引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句和when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）

[高分句型2]Iwatchedasshebeganwalkingdownthestreetagain,pushingthecartofcans,stopping

occasionallytopickuponeortwo.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)）

3.（2023?全國(guó)?模擬預(yù)測(cè)）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的

短文。

WhenIenteredmyfirstrodeo（牛仔競(jìng)技比賽），Iwas12yearsold.Itwasmorelikeaplaydaythanarodeo,

buttoa12-year-oldgirllikeme,IfeltlikeIwasattheNationalFinalsRodeo!

Astobarrelracing（繞桶賽），Ididn'tknowmuchaboutit,onlywhatmydadhadtoldme.ButIhadbeen

determinedtoentertheplayandwintheplayeversinceIwastoldthatmynotsomucholdercompetitivecousin

Courtneywouldbethere.ThiswasmynighttofinallyshowherthatIcouldrideahorsejustasgoodorbetter,and

doanythingelseshecoulddo.Shewasinforasurprise!

Courtneyalwaysthoughtshewasbetterthanme.Shealwayssaidherhorsewasbetterthanmine,too.

CourtneyhadaPalominohorsenamedBuck.Hewasfast,andbeautiful.MyhorsewasabigAppaloosanamed

Zipper.Hewasn'tbeautifulorflashylikeBuckbuthewaskindandwillingtopleasetheskinnylittlegirlthatfed

himsugarseverydayafteradayofriding.ThatwasthereasonIknewwecouldbeatCourtney,becausewehad

somethingshedidn't-apartnership,onewebothrespected.

CourtneyandIwereinthe12-14agegroup.AsIwatchedthemeninthearena（競(jìng)技場(chǎng)）setthethreebarrels

upintheirplaces,Ifeltnervousandalittlescaredforthefirsttimethatnight.ThoughIhadpreviouslypracticeda

lotwithZipper,andZipperracedfastandmadeturnsstably,Istillgotupsetwhenthinkingaboutracingagainst

Courtney!

Iclosedmyeyes,takingadeepbreath.Suddenly,Ifeltawarmfamiliarhandonmyshoulder.ItwasDad.He

smiledatme,saying,<6Areyouscaredornervous?Orboth?”"Both,butI'mmorescaredthatI'mgoingtomess

up,“Ireplied,truthfully.

注意：

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式作答。

“Youwon't.Justhavefaithinyourself,andZipper,Dadsaid.

Gameover,ItookZippertorest,givinghimsugarsforajobwelldone.

【答案】

“Youwon't.Justhavefaithinyourself,andZipper,Dadsaid.ThafswhenIrealizedIwasnotgoinginto

thatarenaalone,butwithmypartner!Zipperhadbeenpracticingjustashardasme.SoIthought,ifImessedup,

hewouldberighttheretocorrectme."Iknowwhattodo,Dad.Thankyou.^^Dadjustsmiled,t4Nowgowarmup

andwinatrophy!"Soon,itwasmyturn.ZipperandIdidtogethersmoothlyalltheway.Andtomygreat

surpriseandexcitement,IbeatCourtneyandwon,thoughitwasjustanarrowvictory.

Gameover,ItookZippertorest,givinghimsugarsforajobwelldone.WhileZipperwasenjoyingthe

sugars,IwenttoDad.Hewassittinginhislawnchairtothesideofthearena,watchingtherid