2024年Ⅰ卷和Ⅱ卷讀后續(xù)寫解析-2025屆高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)專項

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寫作指導(dǎo)話題：人與社會——與出租車司機的誠信之約一.文本解讀分析通過記敘文要素（5w），梳理關(guān)鍵信息，確定文章主旨?！拔摇币虮╋L(fēng)雨航班延誤，下飛機后匆忙搭乘出租車去趕最后一輛巴士。1.文本分析

ImetGunteronacold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptember.IhadplannedtoflytoViennaandtakeabustoPragueforaconference.Duetoabigstorm,myflighthadbeendelayedbyanhourandahalf.ItoucheddowninViennajust30minutesbeforethedepartureofthelastbustoPrague.ThemomentIgotofftheplane,Iranlikecrazythroughtheairportbuildingandjumpedintothefirsttaxiontherankwithoutasecondthought.“我”和出租車司機Gunter經(jīng)過一番曲折和溝通后終于前往巴士站。1.文本分析

ThatwaswhenImetGunter.ItoldhimwhereIwasgoing,buthesaidhehadn’theardofthebusstation.Ithoughtmypronunciationwastheproblem,soIexplainedagainmoreslowly,buthestilllookedconfused.WhenIwasabouttogiveup,Gunterfishedouthislittlephoneandrangupafriend.Afteraheateddiscussionthatlastedforwhatseemedlikeacentury,Gunterputhisphonedownandstartedthecar.“我”會順利趕上最后一班巴士嗎？“我”在出租車司機Gunter的幫助下及時趕到巴士站。1.文本分析

Finally,withjusttwominutestosparewerolledintothebusstation.Thankfully,therewasalongqueue(隊列)stillwaitingtoboardthebus.Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabigsmileonhisface.“Wemadeit,”hesaid.“我”發(fā)現(xiàn)自己沒帶現(xiàn)金，銀行卡支付失敗，感到無助。1.文本分析

JustthenIrealisedthatIhadzerocashinmywallet.IflashedhimanapologeticsmileasIpulledoutmyPortuguesebankcard.Hetrieditseveraltimes,butthecardmachinejustdidnotplayalong.AfeelingofhelplessnesswashedovermeasIsawthebusqueuethinningout.“我”跑向車站的取款機取現(xiàn)金，卻發(fā)現(xiàn)機器故障無法使用。1.文本分析

Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghallofthebusstation.There,attheentrance,wasacashmachine.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthemessage:“Outoforder.Sorry.”

“我”無法支付車費，為了趕上最后一班巴士，應(yīng)該如何解決？narrative敘述settings

背景1Elementsofnarrativewritingcharacters

人物2theme

主題3plots

情節(jié)4emotions

情緒5Readingforsettings(5W)WhenInacoldeveninginSeptemberWhereInViennaWhoI,TaxidriverGunterWhyIhurriedlytookataxitocatchthelastbusduetomyflightbeingdelayed.WhatIdidn’thaveanycashandtriedseveralmethodsbutcouldn’tpaythetaxifare,andthebuswasabouttoleave.IReadingforcharactersdecisive...andjumpedintothefirsttaxiontherankwithoutasecondthought.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachinecalm...smileasIpulledoutmyPortuguesebankcard.GunterhelpfulGunterfishedouthislittlephoneandrangupafriend.friendly...andlookedatmewithabigsmileonhisface.Ihurriedlytookataxitocatchthelastbusduetomyflightbeingdelayed.Ilackedcashandtriedmultiplewaysbutcouldn’tpaythetaxi,andthebuswasabouttodepart.IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.BeginningReadingforplotsDevelopmentClimaxGuntereventuallygotmetothestationontime.MidpointEndinganxiousrelievedhelpless

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續(xù)寫的兩段“我”的情感線會如何變化呢？思考1：“我”是否成功登上了最后一班巴士？Para.1:ItoucheddowninViennajust30minutesbeforethedepartureofthelastbustoPrague.1.文本分析Para.4:butthecardmachinejustdidnotplayalong.AfeelingofhelplessnesswashedovermeasIsawthebusqueuethinningout.思考2：“我”會如何解決當時不能支付車費的問題？思考3：針對這一情況司機會是什么態(tài)度？又會怎么做？

Gunterfishedouthislittlephoneandrangupafriend.helpfulnessandtrustbetweenstrangersGunter的積極幫助：當Gunter不確定車站位置時，他主動打電話詢問朋友。這顯示了他愿意幫助作者找到車站，并確保作者能趕上巴士。(1)Finally,withjusttwominutestosparewerolledintothebusstation.Gunter的努力和承諾：盡管時間緊迫，Gunter還是盡力開車，最終及時將作者送到了車站。這展示了他的承諾和盡職盡責。(2)Readingforthemeclue:Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghallofthebusstation.Gunter的理解和寬容：在得知作者沒有現(xiàn)金且銀行卡無法使用時，Gunter并沒有生氣或拒絕，而是指引作者去尋找自動取款機，這體現(xiàn)了他的理解和寬容。(3)“3銜接、2過渡、1主題”寫作框架Para.1IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.Para.2Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.銜接句1過渡句1主題句銜接句2銜接句3過渡句2范文賞析IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.

Iexplainedtohimtheurgencyofcatchingthebus,emphasizingthatotherwiseIwouldbeforcedtostayovernightandbuyanewticketthenextmorning.

Ultimately,Isuggested,“IwillreturntoViennain4days.Ifit’sOKwithyou,Icanpayyouthen,withanadditional10eurosasagestureofmygratitude.”

Followinganuncomfortablepause,hesimplynodded,saying,“Iagreetothisarrangementandtrustyou.”

Ithankedhimwiththebiggestsmileyoucanimagine,andweexchangedcontactinformationbeforeIgotonthebus.動作描寫，與所給開頭有效銜接，說明“我”的困境“我”繼而提出請求建議該句中的trust點明主旨動作及情緒描寫，生動形象地描述了“我”激動的心情，互換聯(lián)系方式與下文段首句有效銜接范文賞析Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.

Wearrangedtomeetattheairport,anduponourarrival,wehuggedeachotherlikelonglostfriends.

WhenIgavehimtheextra€10Ihadpromised,hedidn’taccept.“BuymeabeernexttimeyouareinVienna,”hesaidwithawarmsmile.Thenwepartedwayswithafirmhandshakeandapromisetokeepintouch.Gunter’skindnesshadturnedapotentiallydisastrouseveningintoamemorablestoryIwouldcheri