讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)情感描寫(xiě)-幸福和激動(dòng)-2025屆高三下學(xué)期英語(yǔ)作文復(fù)習(xí)專(zhuān)項(xiàng)

WritingSkillContinuationWritingfunctionsofemotions

Inthecontinuationwriting,one“vividtouch”(驚艷一筆)istheapplicationofemotions,whichcan:highlightthecharacter'spersonaltraits.promotethedevelopmentofthestory.HowtoDescribeEmotions

——HappinessandExcitementWritingSkillContinuationWritingNounsAdjectivesjoyful/joyousoverjoyedthrilledexhilaratedStep1:Brainstorm:wordshappinessexcitementdelightcheerjoythrillexhilarationHappinessExcitementhappyexciteddelightedcheerfulHowtoDescribeHappinessandExcitementmorevividly?

Showthereaderseverything,

tellthemnothing.

--ErnestHemingway

Don’ttellmethemoonisshining.Showmetheglint(閃光）oflightonbrokenglass.--AntonChechovShowToTell:giveusinformationdirectlyToShow:helpusformpicturesinourmindthroughdetails.How？compare:1.Hearingthegoodnews,hewassohappy.2.Hearingthegoodnews,abrightsmilespreadacrosshisface.Herfacelit/brightened/glowedwithjoy.She

smiled/grinnedfromeartoear.Hereyesweretwinkling.Heclappedhishandsandjumpedupanddownwithjoy.Thegirlburstintolaughter/giggled(咯咯笑)withjoy.

.facebodyvoiceHappinessExcitementFacebodyvoiceSummary:Usephrasestodescribeface,bodyandvoice.Referenceglowwithjoy閃爍著快樂(lè)的光芒grinfromeartoear咧嘴笑

beam眉開(kāi)眼笑,abrightsmile,burstintolaughter,one’seyesshine/twinkle/sparklewithexcitementtearsofjoy喜極而泣c(diǎn)laphands,jumpupanddown,dance,hugsbtightly,tremblewithexcitement,jump/springtoone’sfeet(一躍而起)burstoutlaughing,burstintocheers,inanexcitedvoice,yell/shoutwithjoyHappinessExcitementFaceBodyVoice變式訓(xùn)練:Usephrasestoshowtheirhappinessandexcitement.Knowingtheboygot709points,theyweresooverjoyedthatthey(voice).Hisfather(face).Hismother(body)withjoy.burstoutlaughinggrinned/smiledfromeartoearclappedherhandsExploreandsummarize:sentencewritingtechnique(寫(xiě)作手法）1.Heisoverthemoon.

2.Ifeltontopoftheworld.3.Hiseyeswereshininglikediamonds.4.Shefeltashappyasaking.5.

Delightandexcitementseizedher.6.Hervoicebetrayed(出賣(mài)/泄露)thejoyshewastryingtohide.Hyperbole夸張simile明喻Personification

擬人Userhetoric（修辭）他無(wú)比高興。他感覺(jué)像在世界之巔/無(wú)比高興。他的眼睛像鉆石一樣閃爍。她快樂(lè)似神仙。她的聲音泄露了她試圖隱藏的開(kāi)心。高興和激動(dòng)抓住了她。變式訓(xùn)練:Completethesentence.1.Knowingtheboygot709points,they

(無(wú)比高興).2.Thelittlegirlthrewherselftoherdad

(像一只快樂(lè)的小鳥(niǎo)).3.Goldensunlight

(舞動(dòng))inherlonghairandthechildren'slaughterfloatedintheair.wereoverthemoonlikeahappybirddancedIfelthappy.Ifelt

excited.Happinessseizedme.Excitementfloodedme.SentencePatternExploration:Compare&Observe&Summarize

高興/激動(dòng)

名詞動(dòng)詞sb.“無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)”（Inanimatesubject）簡(jiǎn)單理解就是“沒(méi)有生命力”的東西做主語(yǔ)。名詞：高興、激動(dòng)固定動(dòng)詞seize抓住catch(caught)抓住surround圍繞著takeholdof控制washover讓人感到comeover包圍/支配envelop籠罩overwhelm使難以承受flood淹沒(méi)somebodySentencepattern1.無(wú)靈主語(yǔ):高興激動(dòng)+固定動(dòng)詞+somebodyAttention2.

當(dāng)大衛(wèi)終于下定決心繼續(xù)賽跑時(shí),我被欣慰和開(kāi)心給包圍了。(2022年新高考卷)

Reliefanddelightcameover/surroundedme

whenDavidfinallybecame

determinedtocontinuetherace.

變式訓(xùn)練：1.當(dāng)我看到自己的名字在獲獎(jiǎng)名單上時(shí)，我非常高興和激動(dòng)。（2023年新高考卷）Joyandexcitementtookholdof/floodedmewhenIsawmynameonthewinner’slist.Sentencepattern1.無(wú)靈主語(yǔ):高興激動(dòng)名詞+固定動(dòng)詞+somebodySentencePatternExploration:Compare&Observe&SummarizeMyteacher

wavedatmeandexpressedhiscongratulations.

Myteacher

wavedatmeandexpressedhiscongratulations,

withhiseyes

twinkling

likediamonds.(2023新高考卷)Sentencepattern:

sb.didsth,with+n.+doing/done/todo.

Sentencepattern2:sb.didsth,with+n.+doing/done/todo.

變式訓(xùn)練:1.

Withexcitedandconfidentsmile________(write)onhisface,Davidlookedtotallydifferent.

（2022年新高考卷）2.Aftercrossingthefinishline,Davidlookedatmeexcitedly,___________________________________(眼睛閃閃發(fā)光).(2022新高考卷)3.她們緊緊地?fù)肀В?dòng)的淚水流下來(lái)。writtenwithhiseyesshining/twinklingbrightlyTheyhuggedtightly,withtearsofexcitementrollingdown.01020304PHRASEWORDPARAGRAPHSENTENCEParagraphWriting:Describehappinessandexcitementinparagraph.2021年新高考卷改編：

Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.雙胞胎大喊:“母親節(jié)快樂(lè)!”,眼睛里閃爍著興奮的光芒。當(dāng)媽媽看到早餐時(shí)，驚訝和高興淹沒(méi)了她。媽媽緊緊地?fù)肀е麄儯f(shuō)這是她吃過(guò)最好吃的早餐。聽(tīng)到媽媽說(shuō)的話(huà)，雙胞胎高興得似乎在世界之巔。Reference:

Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Thetwinsshouted

“HappyMother’sDay”,withtheireyestwinklingwithexcitement.Whentheirmothersawthebreakfast,surpriseandjoyfloodedher.Momhuggedthemtightly,sayingitwasthebestbreakfastthatshehadeverhad.Hearingwhattheirmothersaid,thetwinsfeltontopoftheworld.Drawamind-maptosummarizewhatyouhavelearntinthisclass.SUMMAR