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寫作指導(dǎo)續(xù)寫步驟文本解讀隨堂練筆546讀后續(xù)寫任務(wù)要求考生在一段350詞以內(nèi)的語言材料基礎(chǔ)上，根據(jù)該材料內(nèi)容、所給段落開頭語進行續(xù)寫，將其發(fā)展成

一篇與給定材料有邏輯銜接、情節(jié)和結(jié)構(gòu)完整的150詞左右的短文。寫作文體主要考查敘事類文體，所選材料一般具有較強的故事性、邏輯性的特點。材料主要涉及學(xué)生的實際生活或?qū)W生關(guān)心的話題。續(xù)寫要彰顯人性光輝，體現(xiàn)人與自然和諧相處。這樣的文章才更適合考查學(xué)生的邏輯思維、批判性思維和創(chuàng)新

思維能力?！疽?、題型要求】1.

時間不夠用——無法認真、順利完成“理解→構(gòu)思→表達”全過程。2.理解不到位——跑題。3.構(gòu)思不充分——故事不真實、不符合邏輯、可讀性差。4.語言表達——片面追求“高級、復(fù)雜”，生搬硬套痕跡明顯；與原文不一致、不和諧、不協(xié)調(diào)。不顧原文特點，只求個性張揚或辭藻華麗，

弄巧成拙，文章可讀性降低。5.只重視“寫”，忽視“讀和思”——“寫”

失去基礎(chǔ)，造成跑題、不一致、不協(xié)調(diào)、不真實等諸多影響得分檔次的問題?！径?、問題應(yīng)對】應(yīng)試突出問題1.讀（5-8mins）：原文閱讀+信息梳理讀情節(jié)+讀語言+讀線索（原文每段找出時間，地點，人物，做了什么，結(jié)果怎樣）2.后續(xù)（5-8mins）：潛心構(gòu)思+情節(jié)預(yù)設(shè)+明確方向（先用中文先寫出后續(xù)故事，第一段大意：兩個首句決定；第二段大意：第二個首句與故事正能量結(jié)尾，來確定框架3.寫（20-25mins）：初稿勾勒+潤色提升+正規(guī)謄寫三、讀后續(xù)寫基本流程：閱讀和欣賞故事

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語篇類型和要素閱讀理解思考構(gòu)思語言表達未知—寫作三大步，六小步已知—

閱讀思考與構(gòu)思語篇結(jié)構(gòu)和故事脈絡(luò)②

思考文章各部分內(nèi)在邏輯關(guān)系，特

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根據(jù)“段落開頭語”提示，構(gòu)思、

規(guī)劃段落內(nèi)容?！舅摹⒗m(xù)寫步驟】三大步，六小步困難

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列提綱，分2段，7-8句/段，150詞。⑤打草稿，順?biāo)悸?，補細節(jié)，續(xù)情節(jié)，

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修改錯誤，謄抄到答題卡上。【四、續(xù)寫步驟】思考構(gòu)思定調(diào)Key

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Whatwillhappen?三大步，六小步組織句子

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書面表達語言表達閱讀理解1.

讀文——讀出有效信息解題步驟精析【課堂小結(jié)1】2.

構(gòu)思——推測后續(xù)情節(jié)3.寫作——寫出出彩作文DadandMomhadgottogoonafour-daybusinesstrip.TheytaughttheireldersonDanielandyoungerdaughterJanehowtofeedandlookaftertheirdog,Spot,howtotakegoodcareofthemselves—learningtocookiftheycould,ororderingpizza—withmoneyleftonthetable—iftheywerebusy,andtoldthemtokeeptheirroomscleanandtidy.TheyaskedDanieltobeincharge.Ontheverymorningwhentheparentsleft,MomkissedthemandsaidtoDanielgently,“Youngman,dotakecareofSpotandJane.”Danielpromised,“Iwill,Mom.”Tooexcitedtofallasleepagain,DanielandJanejumpedoutofbed,callingouteachothertogetup.Theirpetdog,Spot,heardthesimilarvoiceandrushedin,withaballinitsmouth.Janestuck(伸)herheadintoDaniel’sroom,“Spotgotupanhourearlier.Let’swalkit.”Danielsaidexcitedly,“I’mcoming,but,Jane,don’tforgettokeepyourroomcleanandtidy.”“Iwill.”TheyranwiththedogintheyardandthrewtheballawayforSpottobringitback.TheyhadfunplayingwithSpotthewholemorning.WashingSpotwasslowandtiringasitwasthefirsttimetheyhaddoneit.ThenDanielsettleddowntohishomeworkwhileJanedidherreadingwithinterest.Thefollowingday,Janebeggedherbrothertoorderpizzaforlunch.Danielagreedexcitedly,“Wehaven’ttastedthatforlongandwebehaveourselves,right?”Afterawhile,headded,“Weshouldsavemoney,too.”Withinhalfanhour,theytreatedthemselvestoabigpizza.However,intheafternoon,Spotlookedsick,lyinglazilyandunwillingtomove.DanielwasconcernedaboutthedogandtookittothepetclinicimmediatelywithJaneastheirparentshaddone.注意：(1)續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；(2)請在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。WhenDadandMomarrivedadayearlier,theywereamazedtofindeverythinginamess._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Danielranintohisroom,withtearsinhiseyes,“Jane,thereisnoneedtoexplainandMomwon’ttrustmeanylonger.”_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【原文再現(xiàn)】【五、文本解讀】Activity1

①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“當(dāng)爸爸和媽媽提前一天到達時，他們驚奇地發(fā)現(xiàn)所有的東西都是一團糟?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫父母非常生氣。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“丹尼爾跑進自己的房間，眼里含著淚水：“簡，沒有必要解釋了，媽媽不會再相信我了?！薄笨芍?，第二段可描寫爸爸媽媽了解了真相并向丹尼爾道歉?！径温浣馕觯骸坷m(xù)寫段落續(xù)寫：5續(xù)寫線索onbusiness興奮洗澡生病生氣原諒出差excitedwashingsickangryforgiveafour-daybusinesstriplookaftertakegoodcareofinchargefallasleeptoo…to…rushedinsettleddowntobeconcernedaboutthepetclinicadayearlierbeamazedtoinamessnot…anylongerusedup/

runoutoftherestofthemoneybesatisfiedwith【短語再現(xiàn)】請翻譯下列短語：【短語再現(xiàn)】請翻譯下列短語：afour-daybusinesstriplookaftertakegoodcareofinchargefallasleeptoo…to…rushedinsettleddowntobeconcernedaboutthepetclinicadayearlierbeamazedtoinamessnot…anylongerusedup/

runoutoftherestofthemoneybesatisfiedwith出差四天照顧負責(zé)入睡太…而不能…沖進專心做…關(guān)心不再…動物診所提前一天驚奇地，吃驚地一團糟用盡，用完剩余的錢對…感到滿意照顧好【六、隨堂練筆】1.媽媽很生氣，喊道：“聽我說，年輕人，我讓你負責(zé)了。

（incharge）2.買食物的錢已經(jīng)用完了，但為什么Spot看起來仍然很餓呢？（usedup；still）3.簡焦急地解釋說：“媽媽，斯波特病了，所以我們把剩下的錢把它帶到了寵物診所。”

（spenttherestofthemoney）4.媽媽后悔這么生氣，對丹尼爾學(xué)會對別人負責(zé)感到滿意。(besatisfiedwith)5.她真誠地向丹尼爾道歉。(apologized;sincerely)1.“Whatdidyoudowiththemoneyweleft?”2.ComfortingMom,Dadsaidcalmly,“Thereisprobablyagoodexplanationforeverything.”3.Hearingthelittledaughter’swords,MomunderstoodthatthereasonwhytheyhadnotimetocleanthehousewasthattheywaitedforSpotattheclinicallday.4.Momhuggedhiminherarms,sayingthat“youarereallygrowingupintoayoungman.”5.Theywereamazedtofindeverythinginamess.3’1’分層次訓(xùn)練英漢互譯Activity25:004:594:584:574:564:554:544:534:524:514:504:494:484:474:464:454:444:434:424:414:404:394:384:374:364:354:344:334:324:314:304:294:284:274:264:254:244:234:224:214:204:194:184:174:164:154:144:134:124:114:104:094:084:074:064:054:044:034:024:014:003:593:583:573:563:553:543:533:523:513:503:493:483:473:463:453:443:433:423:413:403:393:383:373:363:353:343:333:323:313:303:293:283:273:263:253:243:233:223:213:203:193:183:173:163:153:143:133:123:113:103:093:083:073:063:053:043:033:023:013:002:592:582:572:562:552:542:532:522:512:502:492:482:472:462:452:442:432:422:412:402:392:382:372:362:352:342:332:322:312:302:292:282:272:262:252:242:232:222:212:202:192:182:172:162:152:142:132:122:112:102:092:082:072:062:052:042:032:022:012:001:591:581:571:561:551:541:531:521:511:501:491:481:471:461:451:441:431:421:411:401:391:381:371:361:351:341:331:321:311:301:291:281:271:261:251:241:231:221:211:201:191:181:171:161:151:141:131:121:111:101:091:081:071:061:051:041:031:021:011:000:590:580:570:560:550:540:530:520:510:500:490:480:470:460:450:440:430:420:410:400:390:380:370:360:350:340:330:320:310:300:290:280:270:260:250:240:230:220:210:200:190:180:170:160:150:140:130:120:110:100:090:080:070:060:050:040:030:020:010:00ABor【課堂檢測】1.媽媽很生氣，喊道：“聽我說，年輕人，我讓你負責(zé)了。（incharge）2.買食物的錢已經(jīng)用完了，但為什么Spot看起來仍然很餓呢？（usedup；still）3.簡焦急地解釋說：“媽媽，斯波特病了，所以我們把剩下的錢把它帶到了寵物診所?！?/p>

4.媽媽后悔這么生氣，對丹尼爾學(xué)會對別人負責(zé)感到滿意。5.她真誠地向丹尼爾道歉。(apologized;sincerely)Momwasangryandshouted,“Listentome,youngman—Ileftyouincharge.ThemoneyforfoodhasbeenusedupbutwhydoesSpotstilllookhungry?Janeexplainedanxiously,“Mummy,Spotissick,sowespenttherestofthemoneytakingittothepetclinic.”MomregrettedactingsoangrilyandwassatisfiedthatDaniellearnttoberesponsib