2024年新高考Ⅰ卷英語作文解析與范文（上篇）

2024年新高考Ⅰ卷英語作文解析與范文（上篇）【2024·新高考Ⅰ卷】第一節(jié)應(yīng)用文寫作(滿分15分)假設(shè)你是李華,上周五你在公園上了一節(jié)美術(shù)課。請(qǐng)你寫信給你的英國(guó)好友Chris進(jìn)行分享。內(nèi)容包括：1.你的畫作內(nèi)容；2.你對(duì)課程的感受。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)在80詞左右；2.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearChris,Ihopethisletterfindsyouwell.LastFriday,ourclasshadanartlessoninaparknearourschool.Yours,LiHua【審題指導(dǎo)】該寫作任務(wù)考察學(xué)生是否具有如下潛質(zhì)和能力:1.重視學(xué)習(xí)生活實(shí)踐和體驗(yàn)命題要求分享在公園上的美術(shù)課經(jīng)歷，這強(qiáng)調(diào)了通過實(shí)踐與親身體驗(yàn)來學(xué)習(xí)的重要性。在公園這樣的自然環(huán)境中上課，無疑為學(xué)生提供了一個(gè)更為生動(dòng)、直觀的學(xué)習(xí)場(chǎng)景，有助于激發(fā)學(xué)生的創(chuàng)作靈感和興趣，從而更深入地理解和掌握知識(shí)。弘揚(yáng)個(gè)性化與創(chuàng)造性2.美術(shù)作為一種表達(dá)和創(chuàng)作的藝術(shù)形式，本身就強(qiáng)調(diào)個(gè)體的獨(dú)特性和創(chuàng)造性。命題要求描述自己的畫作內(nèi)容，這反映了尊重每個(gè)學(xué)生的個(gè)性和創(chuàng)造力，鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生發(fā)展自己的藝術(shù)風(fēng)格和表達(dá)能力。3.考察跨學(xué)科與綜合性能力在公園上美術(shù)課不僅涉及到繪畫技巧的學(xué)習(xí)，還可能涉及到對(duì)自然景觀的觀察、對(duì)色彩的感知、對(duì)構(gòu)圖的理解等多個(gè)方面的知識(shí)。這種跨學(xué)科的學(xué)習(xí)方式有助于培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的綜合素質(zhì),使他們能夠從多個(gè)角度理解和解決問題。4.合作與交流的教育精神雖然命題沒有直接提到與他人的合作或交流，但在實(shí)際的課堂環(huán)境中，學(xué)生之間、學(xué)生與老師之間的合作與交流是不可或缺的。這種教育精神鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生與他人分享自己的作品和想法,通過交流和合作來共同提高?？傊?，該高考命題充分體現(xiàn)了高考重視考察考生的綜合素質(zhì)，充分體現(xiàn)了高考服務(wù)社會(huì)，培養(yǎng)新時(shí)代五育(德智體美勞)青年接班人的宗旨，凸顯了現(xiàn)代教育的核心理念，有助于養(yǎng)學(xué)生的綜合素質(zhì)和創(chuàng)新能力?！緦懽鹘ㄗh】1.文章要清晰地描述美術(shù)課的內(nèi)容并真實(shí)表達(dá)個(gè)人的感受，避免空洞或泛泛而談。在描述畫作內(nèi)容時(shí)，可以通過描繪具體的場(chǎng)景、色彩、光影等元素，使內(nèi)容更加生動(dòng)、具體。例如，可選擇公園里湖泊里的樓臺(tái)亭閣作為主題，并通過描述樓閣倒影在靜謐的湖水、周邊樹木等細(xì)節(jié)，展現(xiàn)畫作的內(nèi)容。這里可能還會(huì)有設(shè)計(jì)到一些專業(yè)詞匯問題，如畫布canvas，畫筆paintingbrush,顏料pigment,paints,油畫oilpainting,背景background或setting,角度angle等。當(dāng)然，如果這些詞匯不會(huì)的話，我們就應(yīng)該想著用別的什么方法來表達(dá)了。這就是可能有些考生想去表達(dá)創(chuàng)作過程而不能很好表達(dá)的難度之一了。2.文章最好分段寫。第一段簡(jiǎn)明扼要，可在提示句后一句話概括一下總體感受。第二段寫畫作內(nèi)容和創(chuàng)造過程。第三段寫學(xué)習(xí)、體驗(yàn)感受。3.通過語言描述的美來體現(xiàn)畫作美，可能也是我們要值得注意的地方。此寫作任務(wù)啟示了我們要注意關(guān)注身邊的美、并能善于發(fā)現(xiàn)美、描述美和欣賞自然美，傳達(dá)了作者對(duì)美術(shù)課的積極情感?！痉段?】DearChris,Ihopethisletterfindsyouwell.LastFriday,ourclasshadanartlessoninaparknearourschool.Itwasauniqueandenjoyableexperience.Aftertakingourteacher'scarefulguidance,wewereencouragedtopaintanythingintheparkthatimpressedus.Ichosetopaintthebluelakesurroundedbywillowtrees,usingamixofbluesandgreenstoproduceasenseofpeaceandharmony.Throughtheclass,Ifindpaintingisjustliketakingajourneyofdiscoverynotonlywitheyesbutalsowithourhearts.Ialsolearnthatthebestpaintingisnatureitself.Ihopeyoulikemysharing.Keepintouch!Yours,LiHua【范文2】DearChris,Ihopethisletterfindsyouwell.LastFriday,ourclasshadanartlessoninaparknearourschool.Iamstillthrilledaboutit.Thespringsceneryintheparkwasbreathtaking.Apavilionstandingonthelakecaughtmyattention.Withtheteacher'shelp,Ichosetousedifferentskillsandcoloredpaintstopaintit.Thepavilionanditsshadowmirroredinthelakesoonappearedonthecanvas.ItwasthebestpaintingthatIhadeverproduced.Thefreedomtoexpressmyselfthroughartinsuchanaturalsettingwasterrific.Throughthislesson,Iimprovedmytechniquesanddeepenedmyunderstandingofcolorandposition.Ilookforwardtomoresuchlessonsinthefuture.Yours,LiHua【范文3】DearChris,Ihopethisletterfindsyouwell.LastFriday,ourclasshadanartlessoninaparknearourschool.Hearingthatyouareanenthusiastinpainting,Icouldhardlywaittosharemydelightfulexperiencefromourpaintingclass.LastFridaywitnessedourventuringintothepark,auniquesettingthatinspiredmetocreateapaintingoftheserenelakesurroundedbylushgreentrees.Thetranquilityofnaturewastrulycaptivating.Notonlywaspaintingoutdoorsarefreshingchange,butitalsoallowedmetoseecolorsandshapesinanewlight.Moreover,itwasasensoryfeastthatheightenedmyperceptionandappreciationforthebeautyofournaturalworldevenmore.Needlesstosay,itwasadayfilledwithcreativityandasenseofpeace.Lookingforwardtohearingaboutyouradventures!Yours,LiHua【范文4】DearChris,Ihopethisletterfindsyouwell.LastFriday,ourclasshadanartlessoninaparknearourschool.

Itgavemeabrandnewperspectivetobeexposedtoartlessonoutdoors.Everyoneinourclasswasassignedwiththetaskofcreatingalandscapepaintingbasedonwhatwewitnessedaroundthepark.Appealedbyacoupleofgeese’sbeautyagainstmassesoflotuses,Ican’twaittomakeitreflectedinmypainting.Aftertwohoursofhardwork,ashadowoftwogeesedancinggracefullyacrossthelakewashighlightedinmypaintingboard,withtalltreesstandingamongthepark.Thisuniquemethodofarteducationreallyarousedmyinspirationinpainting,consideringthatitactsasabridgetolinkartlearningwiththeoutdoorexperience,notonlyboostingourengagementbutalsocultivatingcreativityinartisticexpressioninaway.Inanutshell,itwasoneofthemostimpressiveartclassesI’veeverhad.Iamgreatlyconvincedthatyouwillalsotakeafancytoit.Hopefully,wecanunitesoonandmayaswellhaveasimilaroutingtopainttogether!Yours,

LiHua提分詞句1.

提分詞匯：brandnew全新的beexposedto接觸，體驗(yàn)beassignedwith被指派去做

beappealedby被......吸引

dancegracefully優(yōu)雅地跳舞highlignt突出，強(qiáng)調(diào)boost提升inaway在某種程度上inanutshell總的來說takeafancyto喜歡unite相聚mayaswell不妨，最好2.

提分句型：第二段倒數(shù)第二行出現(xiàn)了consideringthat引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句；最后一段出現(xiàn)了過去完成時(shí)句型itwasoneofthemostimpressiveartclassesIhaveeverhad.句型升級(jí)指南1.Theartclassislikeamagicalwindow,fromwhichwecanfindtheaccesstothebeautifulartisticworld.2.Whateverclassyouattend,youcan’tfindamoreimpressiveartclasslikethis.3.Theartclassisanimpressiveworldwhereyoucanuseyourimaginationtopaintanythingthatappealtoyou.【范文5】DearChris,

Ihopethisletterfindsyouwell.LastFriday,ourclasshadanartlessoninaparknearourschool.Itwassucharefreshingandunforgettableexperience.Uponarrival,wewereencouragedtocreateapaintingbasedonthescenewesawinthepark.Iwasdeeplyattractedbythewarminteractionbetweenanoldmanandasquirrelinthetree.ThemanhadjustfinishedpracticingTaiChiwhenhesawalittlesquirrelstaringathim,whichwasprobablyinterestedinthisactivity.Fascinatedbyit,themanapproachedthesquirrelandpattedaffectionatelyonitshead,whilethelittleoneswungitsfurrytailwithsatisfaction.OnlyinthisinnovativeformofarteducationwasIprovidedwiththeopportunitytoappreciatelandscapesandwitnesstheharmoniouscoexistencebetweenman,animalsandnature.Itstruckmethatartcouldalsobeapowerfultooltoconveylifephilosophyaswellasenhancingourcreativity.Idohopethatyoucanjoinusinthenextartoutingclass.

Yours,

LiHua提分詞句1.

提分詞匯/短語：refreshingadj.令人神清氣爽、耳目一新、精神振奮的uponarrival/uponarriving一到達(dá)beencouragedtodosth.被鼓勵(lì)做某事finishdoingsth./practicedoingsth.完成做某事/練習(xí)做某事hadjustdonesth.when…剛剛做完某事這時(shí)（突然）…beattracted/fascinatedby…被…所吸引/迷住affectionatelyadv.喜愛地，深情地，親切地withsatisfaction滿意地providesb.with.sth.提供某人某物Itstrikes/strucksb.that…某人突然想到/意識(shí)到…enhanceone’screativity提升某人的創(chuàng)造力2.

提分句型：which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句while，而，表對(duì)比only+狀語謂語句首引導(dǎo)的倒裝句句型升級(jí)指南1.

ItwasthewarminteractionbetweenanoldmanandasquirrelinthetreethatIwasdeeplyfascinatedby/capturedmyattention.【強(qiáng)調(diào)句】2.

Whatimpressed/inspiredmemostistheharmoniouscoexistencebetweenman,animalsandnature.【主語從句】【范文6】DearChris,

Ihopethisletterfindsyouwell.LastFriday,ourclasshadanartlessoninaparknearourschool.Theexperiencewasbothcalmingandinvigorating,anditfurtherignitedmypassionforart.Surroundedbynature,Idevoted

myselftocapturingtheessenceofnature,andIendedupsketchingavibrantlandscapethatincludedanarrayofflourishingtreesandameanderingstream.Thetranquilityoftheenvironmentseepedintomysoul,providingasenseofharmonythatresonatedwithinmyartwork.Paintingoutdoor,Ifeltaprofoundconnectionwithnature,appreciatingitsbeautythroughthelensofmycreativity.Notonlydidthisactivityenhancemyartisticskillsbutalsoallowedmetoembracetheserenityoftheoutdoors.Yours,

LiHua提分詞句1.提分詞匯/短語：calming

(adj)平靜的

invigorating

(adj)精力充沛的，生機(jī)勃勃的

ignite(vt)點(diǎn)燃

passion(n)熱情

capture(v)捕獲；描述essence(n)本質(zhì)

sketch(v)畫素描；簡(jiǎn)述vibrant(adj)充滿活力的flourishing(adj)繁榮的meanderingstream曲折的小溪

tranquility(n)寧靜，安寧

resonate

(v)回蕩，引起共鳴profound(adj)深刻的，深切的

endupdoingsth以做某事而結(jié)束anarrayof一排...devoteoneselfto...全身心地投入到某事seepinto滲入asenseofharmony和諧的感覺thelensofmycreativity

創(chuàng)意鏡頭句型升級(jí)指南1.過分作狀語：Surroundedbynature,Idevoted

myselftocapturingtheessenceofnature,2.notonly...butalso不但...而且...：部分倒裝Notonlydidthisactivityenhancemyartisticskillsbutalsoallowedmetoembracetheserenityoftheoutdoors.【范文7】

DearChris，

Ihopethisletterfindsyouwell.LastFriday,ourclasshadanartlessoninaparknearourschool.Inthisoutdoorartclass,westudentswereencouragedtoposetheiroriginalperspectiveofthegorgeousnaturesurroundedusandthenpaintedwhattheysawandwhatwethoughtonthedrawingboard.Emerginginsuchastunningscenery,Iimmediatelydeterminedtotakeacolorsketchingofthisthickwoods,remotesmountainsandadorableanimals.Triedanddistressed,Igotaprettymacroscopicdescriptionofthelandscapeeventually.

Witnessingmypeersbravelysharingtheirworks,Ifeltastrongsenseofgrouphonor

andwasremindedofthecreativeandromanticwaysinwhichnatureforce

andartcanintegrate

tocreatesomethingtrulymeaningful.Therawemotionandcreativitydisplayedontheboardweretrulyaweinspiring.Ifullyrecognized

thepowerofartasagloballanguagenotjustforaestheticfeeling

butasamediumforpersonalexpression.

LookingforwardtoyourvisittoChinainthenearfutureandthuswecanpainttogetherandsharesomethingdeepindrawing.Yours,

LiHua提分詞句中國(guó)水墨畫Chineseinkpainting

；水彩畫watercolorpainting；肖像portraiticon

；寫生畫sketching；寫意畫freesketch/freehandbrushwork，山水風(fēng)景l(fā)andscapescenery

；

畫板drawingboard；色調(diào)colortone

；自然主義畫派naturalism；美術(shù)課：artclass/artlesson/outdoorartprojects；欣賞：appreciate/admire；激發(fā)：stimulate/motivate/arouse/inspire/spark句型升級(jí)指南[高分句型1]Anartclassoftraditionalchinesepaintingswasheldbyourschool,whichsparkedsuchagrowingloveforthenatureandtraditionalartthateverystudentwasweletosharethework.[高分句型2]Mostofthestudentsthoughthighlyofthisartclass,whichprovidedaplatformforthemtoexplorethebeautyofnatureandexperiencedthecharmofChineseart.[高分句型3]Throughthisoutdoorartproject,notonlycanyouadmirewonderfulscenery,butalsoenabledthestudentstounderstandtheartoftraditionalChinesepaintingbetter.【范文8】DearChris,

Ihopethisletterfindsyouwell.LastFriday,ourclasshadanartlessoninaparknearourschool.ItisoneofthemostimpressiveartclassesI’veeverhad.Oncewegottherethatmorning,wewereaskedtofreelycreateapieceofworkfeaturing