讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)微技能之如何寫(xiě)作

讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)微技能之如何寫(xiě)作（1）情緒：消極情緒（2）細(xì)節(jié)：進(jìn)一步解釋描寫(xiě)（3）轉(zhuǎn)折：個(gè)人的努力或借助外界（4）轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)：事情似乎有了轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)，并抱有希望，感到欣慰（5）失望：但是問(wèn)題還是沒(méi)有解決或出現(xiàn)了新問(wèn)題（6）新法：突然有了一個(gè)想法（一句話(huà)說(shuō)明這個(gè)想法）（7）結(jié)局：過(guò)了一段時(shí)間；事情有了最后的轉(zhuǎn)折（8）總結(jié)：點(diǎn)題，呼應(yīng)前文第1步：消極情緒典型表達(dá)是：感到（這個(gè)可以有很多表達(dá)方式，并且可以結(jié)合在每一個(gè)環(huán)節(jié)中，可有非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式和介詞短語(yǔ)）1.aflushof(表情緒的名詞)=awaveof...=afeeling/senseof...一陣...2.joy/excitement/pride/anger/rage/panic/terror/sorrow/sadness/grief/embarrassment/disappointment/guilt/shame...)3.(表情緒的名詞)floodedoversb=sweptoversb因...顫抖tremble//shiver/shake(withfear,panicexcitement,rage...)第2步：細(xì)節(jié)進(jìn)一步細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)典型是：流淚；心里想……流淚：1.Tearsblurredone'seyes.

2.One'seyesgotmisty.

3.One'seyesmisted/dimmedwithtears.淚眼模糊4....beclosetotears幾乎要哭了5.tears(rolldownone'seyes/cheeks/face)淚水落下心里想1.

Aninnervoicetoldsbthat從句內(nèi)心的聲音告訴某人...

2....thought/saidtooneself第3步：轉(zhuǎn)折（個(gè)人努力或借助外界）典型是：鼓起勇氣或另外一方的鼓勵(lì)；毫不猶豫pluckup/take/gather/one'scourage(todo...)毫不猶豫：1.sbcouldhardlywaittodosth

2.withoutasecondthought3.withouteventhinking

4.withoutdelay

5.withouthesitation第4步：事情似乎有了轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)，并抱有希望，感到欣慰典型表達(dá)是：似乎：1.Itwaslikedoingsth好像...2.Itseemedasif/that...好像...希望：1.hopingthat從句抱著一絲希望

2.see/feelaglimmerofhope看到一絲希望3.tryinghardtodosth

欣慰：1....breathedasighofrelief松了一口氣

2....sighedwithrelief松了一口氣3.(Awaveof)relieffloodedthrough/washedoversb

4.toone'srelief,..

使人欣慰的/放心的是第5步：失望但問(wèn)題還是沒(méi)有解決或出現(xiàn)了新問(wèn)題Amandafeltasgrayastheskyoutsidewhenshelookedacrossthetableatherthree-year-oldsister.

典型是：不幸的是；不知道做什么不幸的是：1.Butbadluckforsb,...但是某人真不走運(yùn)3....,butinvain

4....,butwithoutsuccess

5....,butnouse

不知道做什么1.Sbdidsth,wonderingwhattodonext.2.Sbdidsth,notknowingwhattodonext.3.Sbdidsth,unsureofwhattodonext.

4.Sbwasatalosswhattodo.5.Sbwasinadilemmaaboutwhethertodoornot.感到難以決定...第6步：新法突然有了一個(gè)想法：一句話(huà)表示想法典型：某人想到/明白...;有了主意1.Itsuddenlyoccurredtosbthat從句=Ithitsbthat從句=Itstruckmethat從句=Itdawnedonsbthat從句2.(idea,thought...)occurred/cametosb.=...came/flashedintoone'smind=...crowdedinone'smind3.One'smindbegantorace第7步：皆大歡喜過(guò)了一段時(shí)間，事情有了最后的轉(zhuǎn)折過(guò)了一段時(shí)間1.notlongafterthat,...=shortlyafterwards,...=beforelong,...=Itdidn'ttakelongbefore從句=Ittooksometimebefore從句不久,...

2.foraninstant/moment一瞬間有了結(jié)果1.Toone'ssurprise(delight)/Strangelyenough,itturnedoutthat從句2.Butonsecondthoughts,...但是轉(zhuǎn)而一想，...3.Butwhathappenednextwaspuremagic.接下來(lái)發(fā)生的非常奇妙第8步：最后總結(jié)，點(diǎn)題典型是：直到...才意識(shí)到...1.倒裝句：Notuntil時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)didsbrealize/noticethat從句2.強(qiáng)調(diào)句：Itwasonly時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)thatsbrealizedthat從句還記得某人的話(huà)；還在某人的腦海中1.One'swords(echoed/rangout)inone'sears.2.One'swords(voice/song)lingered/whisperedinone'smind/head.

3.One'sheadwasstillfullof...

經(jīng)歷與教訓(xùn)1.Whata/an...lessonsbtaughtme(sblearnedfromsb)!

(valuable/useful/great/painful)2.Whata/an...experiencesbhad!

(enjoyable/pleasant/wonderful/unforgettable/memorable/interesting/valuable)3.Downdeepinone'sheart,...在某人的內(nèi)心深處高考真題實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練浙江卷故事梗概：父親帶兒子去西部荒野的一個(gè)朋友家體驗(yàn)農(nóng)場(chǎng)生活，見(jiàn)父親和叔叔騎馬，兒子也很想騎，于是親身上馬體驗(yàn)。臨走叔叔告誡我們不要走偏了路（"Don’tbelateforsupper,"UnclePaulcried,"andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon’tgetlost!"）。一路上，風(fēng)景優(yōu)美，讓人陶醉。Paragraph1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.1.Awaveofnervousnesssweptovermeespeciallywhenthehorseranlikecrazy.（情緒）2.Myheartpoundingandmypalmssweating,aninnervoicetoldmethatIhadtocalmdown.（細(xì)節(jié)詳述）3.Thoughinapanic,Ipluckedmycouragetopullonthereigns.（轉(zhuǎn)折：個(gè)人努力）4.Luckily,itdidn’ttakelongbeforeIsettleddownthehorse.（轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)：成功，希望來(lái)了）5.Justatthatmoment,Dadranover,gasping

forair.（銜接句：新問(wèn)題來(lái)了）6.“Boy,wearewayoffthetrack.”Hesaidseriously,alookofconcernspreadingacrosshisface.（銜接句：新問(wèn)題來(lái)了）Paragraph2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.1.Hungryandfrustrated,wetriedtofindawayoutbutinvain.(努力，失敗)2.Itsuddenlydawnedonmewecouldrodedowntherivernearby.（突然有了辦法）3.Unexpectedly,theriverbroughtustothefamiliartrackatlast.（開(kāi)始做）4.Afterwhatseemedtwohours,UnclePaul’sfarmhousedidcomeintosight.（成功了）5.Myfather’sfacebrightenedup,sodidmine.（感受）6.Uponourarrival,Uncle