2020年高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)備戰(zhàn)202114-書面表達-專題練習(xí)

備戰(zhàn)2021高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)專題訓(xùn)練14書面表達1.〔2021·新高考I〕假定你是李華，上周日你校舉辦了5公里越野賽跑活動。請你為校英文報寫一篇報道，內(nèi)容包括:1〕參加人員:2〕跑步路線：從校門口到南山腳下:3〕活動反響。注意:1〕寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右:2〕請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。ACross-CountryRunningRace【答案】ACross-CountryRunningRace

LastSundaywitnessedanextraordinarycross-countryrunningrace,whichnearlydrewtheattentionofeverystudentandteacherofourschool.

Thestudentsselectedfromeveryclasstookpartinthecompetition.Theroutemeasuredfivekilometers,fromourschoolgatetothefootofNanshanMountain.Everyrunnertriedtheirbesttofinishthetask,withtheirclassmatesalongthewaygivingthemnecessarilyhelpaswellasencouragement.Atlast,alltherunnersmanagedtoarrivethefinishline,receivingcheersfromallthedirections.

Theactivitywashighlyspokenof,becausenotonlydiditprovidechanceforustoexercise,butalsomadeusmorecohesive.【解析】【分析】此題是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，要求考生以李華的身份為校英文報寫一篇報道，報道上周日你校舉辦了5公里越野賽跑活動。寫作要點已經(jīng)給出，屬于提綱類作文，內(nèi)容包括：1〕參加人員:2〕跑步路線：從校門口到南山腳下:3〕活動反響?？忌鷮懽鲿r注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要富有變化。【點評】本篇作文要點齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，條理清晰，應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，熟練地使用了語句間的連接成分，使整個文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，很好地完成了寫作任務(wù)。例如：LastSundaywitnessedanextraordinarycross-countryrunningrace,whichnearlydrewtheattentionofeverystudentandteacherofourschool.運用了非限制性定語從句；

Everyrunnertriedtheirbesttofinishthetask,withtheirclassmatesalongthewaygivingthemnecessarilyhelpaswellasencouragement.運用了with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)；Atlast,alltherunnersmanagedtoarrivethefinishline,receivingcheersfromallthedirections.運用了現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語；

Theactivitywashighlyspokenof,becausenotonlydiditprovidechanceforustoexercise,butalsomadeusmorecohesive.運用了原因狀語從句和倒裝句。2.〔2021高二上·上饒期末〕假定你是某國際學(xué)校的學(xué)生李華。你市正在實施垃圾分類，請你給21stCenturytens投稿。內(nèi)容包括：1〕垃圾分類的好處；2〕你打算如何做；3〕你的建議。參考詞匯：垃圾分類garbageclassification注意：1〕詞數(shù)100左右；2〕可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Deareditor,Yours,LiHua【答案】Deareditor,

I'mLiHua,astudentfromFuxinInternationalSchool.Inordertodealwithwastescientificallyandeffectively,ourcityhasstartedtopromotegarbageclassificationthisyear.

Iapproveofthenewideacompletelybecauseitcannotonlyreducetheharmdonetotheenvironmentbutalsosaveresourcesthroughrecycling.Asaresponsiblecitizen,I'lltrytolearnbasicknowledgeabouthowtosortgarbageandapplywhatIlearntopractice.Meanwhile,I'lltellpeoplearoundmeabouttheimportanceandnecessityoftheprogram,whichwillinspirethemtoclassifygarbagevoluntarily.

Let'sgetinvolvedinthisprogram.IbelievethatthroughjointeffortstheEarthwillbecomeacleanerandmorecomfortableplacetolivein.Yours,LiHua【解析】【分析】此題是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，要求考生以某國際學(xué)校的學(xué)生李華的身份給21stCenturytens投稿，介紹你市正在實施的垃圾分類。寫作要點已經(jīng)給出，屬于提綱類作文，內(nèi)容包括：1〕垃圾分類的好處；

2〕你打算如何做；3〕你的建議?？忌鷮懽鲿r要認真閱讀所給提示，根據(jù)所列出的要點，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來。同時要注意時態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運用，并選用適宜的連接詞或過渡詞，適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫?！军c評】本書面表達要點齊全，上下文連貫，使用一定數(shù)量的句式結(jié)構(gòu)，讓句子更加生動飽滿，同時運用了許多高級詞匯和固定短語，提高文章的檔次，表達了對英語的熟練的駕馭能力。例如：I'mLiHua,astudentfromFuxinInternationalSchool.運用了同位語；Inordertodealwithwastescientificallyandeffectively,ourcityhasstartedtopromotegarbageclassificationthisyear.運用了目的狀語從句；

Iapproveofthenewideacompletelybecauseitcannotonlyreducetheharmdonetotheenvironmentbutalsosaveresourcesthroughrecycling.運用了原因狀語從句；Asaresponsiblecitizen,I'lltrytolearnbasicknowledgeabouthowtosortgarbageandapplywhatIlearntopractice.運用了賓語從句；Meanwhile,I'lltellpeoplearoundmeabouttheimportanceandnecessityoftheprogram,whichwillinspirethemtoclassifygarbagevoluntarily.運用了非限制性定語從句；

Let'sgetinvolvedinthisprogram.運用了祈使句；IbelievethatthroughjointeffortstheEarthwillbecomeacleanerandmorecomfortableplacetolivein.運用了賓語從句。3.〔2021·江蘇模擬〕近年來，隨著人們生活水平的提高，旅游業(yè)也日益興盛。然而，隨之也引發(fā)了一系列的問題。請根據(jù)以下列圖片和要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文?！緦懽鲀?nèi)容】1〕簡要描述圖片內(nèi)容；2〕分析產(chǎn)生這一現(xiàn)象的原因；3〕談?wù)勀銓Υ爽F(xiàn)象的看法。【寫作要求】1〕對所給要點逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯；2〕作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱?！驹u分標準】內(nèi)容完整，語言標準，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。參考詞匯：旅行社travelagency

利潤最大化profitmaximization【答案】

Asisshowninthepicture,inthemiddleofalake,aboatmanaskstwotouristsonboardtopayanotheronethousandyuanperperson,whichmakesthetouriststotallysurprised.Thepictureshowsaseeminglymoreandmorecommonsituationinmanytouristspots—dishonestyintourism.

Thereasonsfordishonestyintourismarevarious.Firstandforemost,benefitisthehiddendrivebehindit.Sometravelagenciesusealltoolstotricktheircustomersinordertogetmoremoney.Secondly,tosurviveinthecompetition,travelagencieshavetomakeenoughprofits.Torealizeprofitmaximization,theylie.Lastbutnotleast,thevictimsseemtohavelittlesenseofdefendingtheirrights.

Toregulatetravelagenciesandprotecttherightsoftourists,thegovernmenthasmadevariousrulesandregulations.However,Ithinktouristscantakethefollowingtipstoavoidbeingtricked.Firstly,chooseadependabletravelagencyforyourtrip.Secondly,useyourcommonsenseandbecarefulwhiletraveling.Finally,defendyourselfifyouaretricked.【解析】【分析】此題是一篇看圖作文，考生要從以下幾個方面進行著手：1、要使文章能準確地反映圖意，看清畫面是不可無視的。要能看清畫面，一是總觀全面，看全貌，并有步驟地進行觀察。二是觀察背景和人物。如畫面的背景反映了什么，近景和遠景怎樣配合，它們和畫面上的人物有什么關(guān)系；還有人物的身體、年齡、活動情況等。三是觀察細節(jié)?！踩缛宋锉砬?、服飾、用具等〕。最重要的是要善于看清畫面上有哪些細節(jié)，想一想作者畫這些細節(jié)的目的。四是體會作者的創(chuàng)作意圖。對一幅畫的主題抓得準，看圖作文才能寫得好。這樣，我們就要細心體會作者的創(chuàng)作意圖。2、要發(fā)揮聯(lián)想和想象力?？磮D作文中的想象，就是從眼前所展現(xiàn)的畫面的內(nèi)容出發(fā)，在已有知識和已有經(jīng)驗的根底上，想出不在眼前的新的人、事、景、物的具體形象。看圖作文中的聯(lián)想，就是由眼前的畫面內(nèi)容引發(fā)，想到與此相關(guān)的另外的一些人、事、景、物的具體形象?？磮D作文的具體步驟〔舉例說明〕提供應(yīng)我們作文的圖畫有兩種，一種是單幅的，另一種是多幅的。多幅圖畫的的各幅圖之間是互相聯(lián)系的，但是，如果圖與圖之間有跳躍性，不像文章那樣緊密相連。那么，要怎樣來處理？1、讀圖，即確定圖畫的內(nèi)容要點，即分析圖畫所提供的信息，充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，正確理解圖中內(nèi)容確實切含義。碰上這類試題，考生首先應(yīng)仔細審題，看懂圖片所表達的意思，根據(jù)圖畫內(nèi)容整理出幾個要點，再根據(jù)這些要點決定要采用的語言形式。通過認真看圖后我們可以知道：①體裁：議論文體。②主要時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時。③人稱：第三人稱。寫好看圖作文的考前須知：1、語言根本無誤；2、注意用詞表達得當(dāng)；3、重視英語虛詞的使用?！军c評】本書面表達要點齊全，上下文連貫，使用一定數(shù)量的句式結(jié)構(gòu)，讓句子更加生動飽滿，同時運用了許多高級詞匯和固定短語，提高文章的檔次，表達了對英語的熟練的駕馭能力。例如：Asisshowninthepicture,inthemiddleofalake,aboatmanaskstwotouristsonboardtopayanotheronethousandyuanperperson,whichmakesthetouriststotallysurprised.運用咯額非限制性定語從句；

Sometravelagenciesusealltoolstotricktheircustomersinordertogetmoremoney.運用了不定式作目的狀語；

However,Ithinktouristscantakethefollowingtipstoavoidbeingtricked.運用了賓語從句；Firstly,chooseadependabletravelagencyforyourtrip.運用了祈使句；Secondly,useyourcommonsenseandbecarefulwhiletraveling.運用了并列句；Finally,defendyourselfifyouaretricked.運用了條件狀語從句和祈使句。4.〔2021·泰州模擬〕請閱讀下面文字，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。

DuetotheoutbreakofCOVID-19,schoolsacrossthecountryhaveputoffmorethantwomonths,studentshavebeentakingonlineclassesathome.

SuHua:IamrequiredtoattendonlineclasseseverydayandIalwayslistenattentivelytowhatteachersinstruct.Astoquestionsputforwardbyteachers,Itrytoanswerandtalktomyself,evenwhenteacherscan'thearmyvoice.Icancompletedailyonlinehomeworkasexpected.Sometimes,food,orotherthingsdistractme,butIcanputthemaway.Ifeelcontentwithmyeverydayprogress.Ithinkthebestwaytolearnefficientlyduringtheextendedholidayistomanagemyselfeffectively.

LiJiang:MyparentshavesaidIattendonlineclasseseveryday,butdonotpayattentionatall.Ican'tresistthetemptationtoplaygameswithsmartphones.Thus,itisdifficultformetofinishassignmentsonmyown.Lastweek，whenIwentbacktoschooltotakethefirstexam，theresultswerenotsatisfying.IfeelregretfulforwastingsomuchtimebutIcouldn'tcontrolmyself.Therootcausemaylieinlackofself-discipline.【寫作內(nèi)容】1〕用約30個單詞概述上述信息的主要內(nèi)容；2〕結(jié)合上述信息，談?wù)?自律"的重要性(至少兩點)；3〕就如何培養(yǎng)"自律"，提出你的建議(至少兩點)。【寫作要求】1〕寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；2〕作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3〕不必寫標題?！驹u分標準】內(nèi)容完整，語言標準，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)?！敬鸢浮?/p>

Duringtheextendedholiday,SuHuacompletedvarioustasksonschedulewhileLiJiangfailedtofulfilltherequirementswithregret.Theobviousdifferenceshowsthegreatimportanceofself-discipline.Self-disciplineisoneoftheessentialqualitiesthatcontributeeffectivelytoaperson'sprogress.Tobeginwith,itisevidentthatstudentswithself-disciplinetendtostayfocusedforalongertime,whichenablesthemtoattaintheirgoals.Moreover,self-disciplinedstudentsareliabletoresistvarioustemptationsanddevelopahighersenseofcontrol,thusshapingtheircharacters.

Tocultivateself-discipline,onefirstneedstodivideagreatgoalintosmallplans,whichwillhelpdirecthiseffortsonaregularbasis.Secondly,itisbeneficialtomeasurehiscurrentbehavioragainstpastperformancetokeephimmotivated,enhancinghisself-discipline.Lastbutnotleast,thereisonethingtokeepinmind:Onedisciplineleadstoanotherdiscipline.【解析】【分析】此題是一篇任務(wù)型寫作。共分兩個任務(wù)：第一個任務(wù)要求用約30個詞概述所給信息的主要內(nèi)容；第二個任務(wù)要求1.結(jié)合上述信息，談?wù)?自律"的重要性(至少兩點)；2.就如何培養(yǎng)"自律"，提出你的建議(至少兩點)。第二局部給出了寫作提綱，兩大要點是中心。注意完成第一任務(wù)時，語言使用應(yīng)簡練、準確、到位。在第二個任務(wù)中，應(yīng)涵蓋題目所列出的兩大要點。本文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。寫作過程中注意使用平時學(xué)到的短語和句型，注意行文的連貫和邏輯性?！军c評】本書面表達要點齊全，上下文連貫，使用一定數(shù)量的句式結(jié)構(gòu)，讓句子更加生動飽滿，同時運用了許多高級詞匯和固定短語，提高文章的檔次，表達了對英語的熟練的駕馭能力。例如：Duringtheextendedholiday,SuHuacompletedvarioustasksonschedulewhileLiJiangfailedtofulfilltherequirementswithregret.運用了比照并列句；Self-disciplineisoneoftheessentialqualitiesthatcontributeeffectivelytoaperson'sprogress.運用了限制性定語從句；Tobeginwith,itisevidentthatstudentswithself-disciplinetendtostayfocusedforalongertime,whichenablesthemtoattaintheirgoals.運用了主語從句和非限制性定語從句；

Tocultivateself-discipline,onefirstneedstodivideagreatgoalintosmallplans,whichwillhelpdirecthiseffortsonaregularbasis.運用了非限制性定語從句。5.〔2021高一下·唐山期末〕閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。(總分值25分)

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