專題21書面表達(dá)考點(diǎn)4敘事描寫類（第02期）-2021年中考英語真題分項(xiàng)匯編專題id12285348

2021年中考真題英語分項(xiàng)匯編專題21書面表達(dá)考點(diǎn)4敘事描寫類A（2021·遼寧遼陽·中考真題）根據(jù)要求完成大作文。詞數(shù):80﹣100詞。每個(gè)人都會(huì)從不同的經(jīng)歷中獲得不同的感受。哪一種感受經(jīng)常伴隨著你呢？請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的圖示寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容包括:（1）Howdoyouoftenfeel?（2）Whatmakesyouso...Why?（3）Doyouwanttomakeanychanges?How?要求:（1）內(nèi)容完整,語意連貫,層次清晰,書寫規(guī)范。（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名。（3）短文開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Ioftenfeel____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Ioftenfeelangry.I’mangrywithmyself.Ihopetodevelopsomehealthyhabitslikegettingupearlyortakingmoreexercise,butIstillspendmostofmytimestayingupplayingputergames.I’malsoangrywithmyfriendBill.HearguedwithmeseveraldaysagoandIdon’twanttotalktohimanymore.ButIreallywanttochangethesethings.MaybeIshouldbestrictwithmyselfandmaybeIshouldsaysorrytoBillfirst.Afterall,Idon’twanttolosemybestfriend.Ihopemylifecanbefilledwithpeaceandhappiness.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本題為材料作文，要求根據(jù)題目要點(diǎn)提示，寫一篇關(guān)于自己情緒的作文。題目所給要點(diǎn)提示必須全部包括，切忌遺漏。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)人稱應(yīng)用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)根據(jù)動(dòng)作發(fā)展時(shí)段正確使用過去時(shí)、現(xiàn)在時(shí)或?qū)頃r(shí)。這是一篇提綱作文，題目要求圍繞提示內(nèi)容寫作，命題既有限制又給予學(xué)生發(fā)揮的空間。在寫作中要綜合運(yùn)用所學(xué)知識(shí)，適當(dāng)運(yùn)用連詞、副詞等進(jìn)行過渡。B（2021·山東中考真題）在你的學(xué)校生活、家庭生活、社會(huì)活動(dòng)及興趣愛好等方面，一定有讓你引以為豪的事情。請(qǐng)以“OneThingI’mProudof”為題，根據(jù)以下要求與提示，用英語寫一篇短文，記述一件令你感到自豪的事情。要求：1.短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息,否則不予評(píng)分；2.不少于60詞。提示：1.Whatisthethingyou’reproudof?2.

Whyareyouproudofit?OneThingI’mProudof____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】OneThingI’mProudofIstillrememberhowIbecamegoodatEnglish.EveryEnglishclassusedtobelikeabaddreamforme.Ididn’tunderstandmyteachermostofthetime.Oneday,theteachertalkedwithmeandgavemesomeusefuladvice.Ibegantoreviewnewwordsfromtimetotime,evenonthewaytoschool.Ireadaloudtopracticepronunciation.IwatchedEnglishvideos,andkeptadiaryinEnglish.WheneverImetnewwords,Ilookedthemupinadictionary.IkeptusingEnglisheveryday.Practicemakesperfect.Abouttwomonthslater,Igotan“A”inthefinalexam.Iamreallyproudofthisexperience,becauseithelpsmerealizethateveryonecanachievetheirgoalsthroughhardwork.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于提綱作文寫作。在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)根據(jù)題目和提示內(nèi)容以及相關(guān)經(jīng)歷講述一件令自己感到自豪的事情，并介紹原因。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文采用第一人稱進(jìn)行寫作，時(shí)態(tài)以一般過去時(shí)為主；講述自己英語學(xué)習(xí)的轉(zhuǎn)變過程，具體細(xì)致；結(jié)尾介紹原因簡(jiǎn)潔有力，全文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰明了。C（2021·湖南張家界市·中考真題）假如你是李華，你們班上打算舉辦關(guān)于“MyHabits”的主題班會(huì)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示，寫一篇英語短文。要求∶1.內(nèi)容必須包括所提示信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;2.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱;3.不少于50詞（文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。GoodHabitsBadhabitsActivitiesexercisereadbooksdrinkjuiceHowoftenalwayseverydayoftenActivitieswatchTVeathamburgershelpwithhouseworkHowoftenalwaysoftenneverHello,everyone.I’mLiHua._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyou!【答案】Hello,everyone!I’mLiHua.TodayIwanttotalkaboutmyhabits.Ihavealotofgoodhabits.Ialwaysexerciseandreadbookseveryday.Also,Ioftendrinkjuice.However,Ihavesomebadhabits,too.IusuallywatchTVformorethantwohoursaday,andIofteneathamburgersfordinner.MyparentsarenothappybecauseIneverhelpwithhousework.That’sall.Thankyou!【詳解】1.

題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示詞語和提示要點(diǎn)，描述自己的習(xí)慣，包括好習(xí)慣和壞習(xí)慣等，寫作時(shí)要運(yùn)用正確的英語表達(dá)，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語。

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寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要緊扣主題，用第一人稱來寫作，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，要做到要點(diǎn)齊全，無單詞拼寫和語法錯(cuò)誤。D（2021·北京中考真題）現(xiàn)實(shí)中，大到自然環(huán)境和社會(huì)環(huán)境，小到個(gè)人生活和學(xué)習(xí)，變化無處不在，面對(duì)變化，唯有積極適應(yīng)，才能有所進(jìn)步和收獲。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“適應(yīng)變化”為主題的征文活動(dòng)，假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勀闵钪械囊粋€(gè)變化，你是如何應(yīng)對(duì)這個(gè)變化的,以及有什么收獲。提示詞語：help,enjoy,new,challenge,takeaction提示問題：Whatisthechangethathappenedinyourlife?Howdidyoudealwithit?Whathaveyoulearnedfromtheexperience?Therearemanychangesinaperson’slife.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Therearemanychangesinaperson’slife.WhenIenteredmiddleschool,Ifeltlonely.Imissedmyoldfriends,butIknewIhadtofitin.Iofferedhelptomyclass,joinedintheafterschoolactivitiesandinvitedmyclassmatestomybirthdayparty.Gradually,Imadesomefriendsandenjoyedthepanyofmynewclassmates.Fromthisexperience,Igettoknowchangebringschallengesaswellasopportunities.Whenchangees,weshouldfaceitandtakeaction.【詳解】1.

題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示詞語和問題，寫出自己在生活中的一個(gè)變化，以及如何應(yīng)對(duì)這個(gè)變化，有什么收獲等，可以適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫作時(shí)要運(yùn)用正確的英語表達(dá)，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語。

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寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要與已給出的開頭融合起來，用第一人稱和其他人稱相結(jié)合來寫作，時(shí)態(tài)以一般過去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，要做到要點(diǎn)齊全，無單詞拼寫和語法錯(cuò)誤。E（2021·湖北中考真題）沒有共產(chǎn)黨，就沒有新中國(guó)。七十多年前，為建立新中國(guó)，在黨的領(lǐng)導(dǎo)下，中國(guó)人民浴血奮戰(zhàn)，涌現(xiàn)出許許多多的英雄人物。今天我們來用英語講述小英雄王二小的故事吧！要求：1.故事必須包含圖表所提供的四個(gè)要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使行文連貫；2.80詞左右。故事開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：兒童團(tuán)theChildren’sLeagueTheStoryofWangErxiaoAlongtimeago,therewasayounghero,whowasWangErxiao.Pleasefollowmetorecallhisstory.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】TheStoryofWangErxiaoAlongtimeago,therewasayounghero,whowasWangErxiao.Pleasefollowmetorecallhisstory.WangErxiaowasbornin1929.Whenhewaselevenyearsold,hisparentspassedaway.ThenhebecameamemberoftheChildren’sLeague.Wangwascleverandbrave.OnthemorningofOctober25,1942,hewaskilledbyenemiesforprotectingvillagers.Hewasjustthirteenyearsold.Weliveintimesofpeaceandmaybewedon’tneedtosacrificeourselves.Butweshouldremembertheheroeswhooncefoughtfortheircountry.Atthesametime,weshouldstudyhardtobuildabettersociety.【詳解】1.題目解讀：本文是一篇材料作文，要求根據(jù)給出信息，介紹英雄王二小的故事。并寫出自己的感悟，注意要點(diǎn)齊全，行文流暢。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文開頭已給出，正文部分可分為兩段，一段介紹故事，一段介紹感悟。介紹王二小故事時(shí)，使用一般過去時(shí)，介紹感悟，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。注意多使用從句和短語，為文章增色。F（2021·廣西柳州市·中考真題）假設(shè)你是李華，某英語網(wǎng)站正在舉辦以“感恩父母”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格中的內(nèi)容用英文寫一篇題為“ALettertoMyParents”的短文，用于投稿。你的感謝父母養(yǎng)育你、每天為你做飯、生病時(shí)照顧你父母信任你、關(guān)心你的個(gè)人感受、遇到困難時(shí)鼓勵(lì)你你的決心努力學(xué)習(xí)你的祝愿祝愿父母健康快樂注意：1.詞數(shù)70左右；2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.短文的開頭和結(jié)尾部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名與校名。參考詞匯：感謝某人.....thanksb.for...養(yǎng)育raise做飯cookfood生病besick信任trust關(guān)心careabout個(gè)人感受personalfeeling處于困難中beintrouble健康的healthyALettertoMyParentsDearMumandDad,I’mwritingtoexpressmythanksforallyourcareandlove.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanksagainforeverythingyouhavedoneforme.Love,LiHua【答案】ALettertoMyParentsDearMumandDad,I’mwritingtoexpressmythanksforallyourcareandlove.Firstofall,Iwanttothankyouforraisingme.IthankyouforcookingformeeverydayandtakingcareofmewhenI’msick.Iwouldalsoliketothankyouforyourtrustandcareaboutmypersonalfeelings.YouencouragedmewhenIwasintrouble.SoIhavetostudyhardtorepayyou.Atthesametime,Iwishyoukeephealthyandhappy.Thanksagainforeverythingyouhavedoneforme.Love,LiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：這是一篇給材料的書信作文，題目要求圍繞提示內(nèi)容寫一篇題為“ALettertoMyParents”的短文，來感恩父母。注意要點(diǎn)齊全。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：短文主要以第一人稱來行文，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，也給出了相關(guān)要點(diǎn)的詞匯，在寫作中要綜合運(yùn)用所學(xué)知識(shí)，適當(dāng)運(yùn)用連詞、副詞等進(jìn)行過渡。注意保證語法正確，無單詞的拼寫錯(cuò)誤。G（2021·山東中考真題）俗話說：“讀萬卷書，行萬里路?！蹦愕挠?guó)筆友John不明白這句話的意思，寫信向你咨詢。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)來信內(nèi)容用英語給他寫一封回信。DearLiHua,RecentlyIhavereadabookaboutChina.Inthebook,thereisanoldChinesesaying“Read10,000booksandtravel10,000miles.”Whatdoesitmean?Wouldyoupleasetellmeaboutit?Doyoulikereading?Chinesestudentsareoftenbusywithhomework.Whendoyouusuallydosomereading?Doyouenjoytravelling?Couldyoutellmesomethingaboutyourfavoritetrip?Ihopetohearfromyousoon.Yours,John要求：1.要點(diǎn)齊全，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名與校名；3.卷面整潔，書寫美觀，可適當(dāng)加23分；4.80詞左右。開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearJohn,Thanksforyourletter.I’mverygladtotellyouabouttheChinesesaying“Read10,000booksandtravel10,000miles.”____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearJohn,Thanksforyourletter.I’mverygladtotellyouabouttheChinesesaying“Read10,000booksandtravel10,000miles.”Itmeansthatreadingandtravelingcanmakeuslearnmoreknowledge.Ilikereading,becauseIcanlearnalotfrombooks.IusuallyreadafterIfinishmyhomeworkorbeforelgotobed.Ialsoliketravelling.ThevisittoBeijinglastyearwasmyfavoritetrip.IvisitedtheplacesofinterestinBeijingandlearnedaboutitstraditionalculture.Ireallyunderstandthemeaningof“OnewhofailstoreachtheGreatWallisnotahero.”Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)John的來信寫回信，告訴他“讀萬卷書，行萬里路?！钡暮x，并講講自己是否喜歡讀書、什么時(shí)候讀書、是否喜歡旅行，并介紹自己最喜歡的一次旅行?？蛇m當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要以第一人稱為主，結(jié)合一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)來行文，要保證來信中的問題都有答到?？煞譃槿问剑旱谝欢纬薪娱_頭，介紹“讀萬卷書，行萬里路?！钡暮x；第二段講自己是否愛讀書、讀書習(xí)慣，是否愛旅行、最喜歡的旅行；第三段表達(dá)美好祝愿。最后要主語信件落款。做到無單詞拼寫和語法錯(cuò)誤。H（2021·湖北黃石市·中考真題）Asanoldsayinggoes,“Atruefriendreachesforyourhandandtouchesyourheart.”假如你叫李華，在你的初中學(xué)習(xí)生涯中，一定有許多朋友給了你不少幫助。在畢業(yè)之際，請(qǐng)給你的好友李雷寫一封感謝信。要點(diǎn)：1.感謝他（她）對(duì)你的幫助。2.他（她）是如何幫助你的。要求：1.請(qǐng)結(jié)合具體事例，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；語言通順，意思連貫。2.文中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)信息。3.80詞左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。DearLiLei,Howtimeflies!Wearegoingtograduatefromjuniorhighschool.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Wishyouallthebest!Yours,LiHua【答案】DearLiLei,Howtimeflies!Wearegoingtograduatefromjuniorhighschool.Ireallywanttoexpressmythankstoyou.IstillrememberthatwhenIfirstarrivedatthisnewschool,Iwasshyandnervous.Ididn’tknowanyoneinourclassandyouwerethefirsttosayhellotome.Ifeltwarmandhappy.Duringthethreeyearsofstudy,youalwayshelpedmewhenIhaddifficultylearning.YouhelpedmewithmyEnglishandgavemealotofusefulsuggestions.MyEnglishhasimprovedalot.Wishyouallthebest!Yours,LiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇書信作文。要求針對(duì)初中生活好友的幫助，給李雷寫一封感謝信，注意要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要以第一和第二人稱來行文，時(shí)態(tài)以一般過去時(shí)為主。作文可分為三段，第一段引出話題，感謝對(duì)方的幫助；第二段介紹他是如何幫助你的；第三段收尾。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯(cuò)誤。I（2021·內(nèi)蒙古中考真題）我們國(guó)家歷史悠久，地大物博。有勤勞善良的人民；有綠水青山，美麗的風(fēng)景；有獨(dú)特的美食，傳統(tǒng)的飲食文化。請(qǐng)以”BeautifulChina”為題，寫一篇作文，描寫大美中國(guó)，表達(dá)我們對(duì)祖國(guó)的熱愛。要求：1.思路清晰，語句通順，書寫規(guī)范。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)與考生本人相關(guān)的校名和姓名等真實(shí)信息。3.詞數(shù)：80詞左右的短文。BeautifulChina____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】BeautifulChinaChinaisacountrywithalonghistoryandvastland.Therearehardworkingandkindpeople,whomakeChinamoreandmoreprosperousandstrong.Therearemanycleanlakesandgreenhills,whichmakeChinahavebeautifulscenery.Thereisrichanduniquefoodthatcreatesitstraditionalfoodculture.Chinaisfamousasitsfoodtastingtourismresourceshomeandabroad.ThisisbeautifulChina,andIloveitverymuch.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目是寫一篇英語短文。要求根據(jù)題目要求，并以”BeautifulChina”為題，寫一篇作文，描寫大美中國(guó)，表達(dá)我們對(duì)祖國(guó)的熱愛，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第三人稱來描述中國(guó)的特點(diǎn)；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；描述中國(guó)時(shí)，應(yīng)描寫細(xì)致、突出亮點(diǎn)；短文需要敘述完整，保證條理清晰。J（2021·新疆中考真題）三年將盡，未來已來，我們?nèi)绾纬蔀楦玫淖约?？?qǐng)以“ToBeaBetterMan”為題，寫一篇英文短文，從學(xué)習(xí)方法、生活習(xí)慣、交友溝通等方面進(jìn)行描述。寫作要求：1.參考所給提示，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.條理清晰，語句通順；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)姓名、學(xué)校名等個(gè)人真實(shí)信息；4.短文詞數(shù)在80至120詞之間。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ToBeaBetterManEveryonewantstobebetter.Inordertoimprovemyself,Ihavemadesomeplans.Firstofall,Iwillstudyharder.Iamgoingtolistentotheteacherscarefullyinclassandfinishthehouseworkontime.WhenImeetdifficulties,Iwilltrymybesttosolvethem.Second,Iplantopayattentiontomyhealth.Iwilleatmorehealthilyanddomoreexercise.What’smore,itisimportanttokeepagoodmoodandbehappyeveryday.IfIfeeltired,Iwilllistentosomemusictorelaxmyself.Third,Iintendtotrymybesttogetalongwellwiththepeoplearoundme.Atschool,Iwillhelpmyfriendsinneed.Iwillmunicatewithmyparentsmore.Besides,Iwillkeepsmilingandbekindtoeveryone.Inshort,thereisnosuccesswithouteffort.IthinkIcanbemoreexcellentifIkeeptrying.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇話題作文。要求以“ToBeaBetterMan”為題，從學(xué)習(xí)方法、生活習(xí)慣、交友溝通等方面進(jìn)行寫作，注意要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要以第一人稱來行文，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。作文可分為五段，第一段引出話題；第二、三、四段分別從學(xué)習(xí)方法、生活習(xí)慣、交友溝通三方面進(jìn)行闡述；第五段收尾。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯(cuò)誤。K（2021·內(nèi)蒙古中考真題）假定你是李華，下周你校將組織去郊外游玩一天。你班英國(guó)交換生Alan發(fā)來如下郵件。請(qǐng)給Alan回復(fù)一封電子郵件，郵件需包括箭頭所指內(nèi)容?！璈i!Guesswhat?MyparentssaidIcouldgoonthedaytripintothecountrysidenextweek!Ourteachersaidwecoulddosomewalkingduringthetriporworkonafarm,didn’tshe?Whichwouldyouprefertodo?Whatdoyouthinkweshouldtakewithus?Doyouwanttomeetbeforethetriptotalkaboutit?AlanGreat!SaywhichandwhyGivesuggestionsYessaywhenandwhere注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)反映考生信息的真實(shí)人名、地名等內(nèi)容。DearAlan,That’sgreat!I’msohappyyou’reabletoe!__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Seeyouthen!Yours,LiHua【答案】DearAlan,That’sgreat!I’msohappyyou’reabletoe!Iknowwe’llhaveagoodtime.I’drathertrylearningfr