2024-2025學(xué)年外研版九年級(jí)英語上學(xué)期考點(diǎn) 專題06 書面表達(dá)（10篇） 【考題猜想】

專題06書面表達(dá)1．（23-24九年級(jí)上·天津西青·期中）前段時(shí)間同學(xué)們觀看了“天宮課堂”之后，紛紛表示要向三位宇航員學(xué)習(xí)，成為一名有理想，有抱負(fù)的青少年。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，以“Howtobeabetterteenager?”為題，在下周的主題班會(huì)上發(fā)言。內(nèi)容提示：(1)努力學(xué)習(xí)，積極鍛煉，養(yǎng)成健康的生活習(xí)慣；(2)尊敬長(zhǎng)輩，樂于助人；(3)學(xué)會(huì)做家務(wù)；(4)熱愛中國(guó)文化，培養(yǎng)各種興趣愛好；(5)感想……要求：(1)詞數(shù)：80～100個(gè)。(2)短文的題目和開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。(3)要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。參考詞匯：積極鍛煉activelyexercise尊敬respect樂于做bewillingto文化cultureHowtobeabetterteenager?Hello,everyone!TodayI’dliketosharemyideasabouthowtobeabetterteenager.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyou!【答案】Onepossibleversion:Howtoabetterteenager?Hello,everyone!TodayI’dliketosharemyideasabouthowtobeabetterteenager.Firstofall,weshouldstudyhardandactivelyexercisetodevelophealthylivinghabits.Astrongbodyandasharpmindarenecessaryforachievingourgoals.Secondly,wemustrespecttheelderlyandbewillingtohelpothers.Thirdly,learningtodohouseworkisimportant.Ithelpsusbecomemoreindependentandresponsible.Additionally,weshouldloveChinesecultureanddevelopvarioushobbies.Thiscanenrichourlivesandbroadenourhorizons.Althoughitisnoteasytobeabetterteenager,weshouldalwaysstrivetoimproveourselves.Onlyinthiswaycanwecontributetoastrongerandbettercountry.That’sall.Thankyou!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇發(fā)言稿；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，根據(jù)所給內(nèi)容提示具體描述如何成為一個(gè)更好的青少年；第二步，表達(dá)自己的感想。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①develophealthylivinghabits養(yǎng)成健康的生活習(xí)慣②bewillingtodo樂意做③strivetodo盡力做[高分句型]①Thirdly,learningtodohouseworkisimportant.（動(dòng)名詞作主語）②Althoughitisnoteasytobeabetterteenager,weshouldalwaysstrivetoimproveourselves（讓步狀語從句）③Onlyinthiswaycanwecontributetoastrongerandbettercountry.（部分倒裝）2．（23-24九年級(jí)上·天津北辰·期中）英語課上，老師要求學(xué)生就“如何與人相處”的話題展開小組討論，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下你們小組討論的結(jié)果，以“Howtogetonwellwithothers”為題，寫一篇英語短文。(1)要尊重他人，學(xué)會(huì)理解他人；(2)要誠(chéng)實(shí)，要禮貌待人；(3)當(dāng)他人處于困境時(shí)，要主動(dòng)幫助；(4)當(dāng)你犯錯(cuò)誤時(shí)要主動(dòng)道歉；(5)你認(rèn)為……參考詞匯：尊重respect要求：(1)詞數(shù)：80～100個(gè)。(2)開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。(3)要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。HowtogetonwellwithothersAsweknow,goodrelationship(關(guān)系)canmakeushappyandcomfortable.Buthowdowegetonwellwithothers?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文HowtogetonwellwithothersAsweknow,goodrelationshipcanmakeushappyandcomfortable.Buthowdowegetonwellwithothers?First,weshouldrespectothersandtrytounderstandthem.Everyonehastheirownideasandfeelings,soweneedtobeconsiderate.Second,honestyisveryimportant.Weshouldalwaysbehonestandtreatotherspolitely.Third,weshouldoffertohelpotherswhentheyareintrouble.Helpingotherscannotonlymakethemfeelgood,butalsomakeusfeelhappy.Fourth,whenwemakemistakes,weshouldtaketheinitiativetoapologize.Thisshowsthatweareresponsibleandcanearnthetrustofothers.Inaddition,Ithinkthatbeingpatientandunderstandingiskeytogettingalongwithothers.Weshouldlearntolistentoothersandtrytoseethingsfromtheirperspective.Also,weshouldbewillingtocompromiseandfindsolutionsthatarebeneficialtoeveryone.Inaword,gettingonwellwithothersrequiresoureffortsandsincerity.Onlybytreatingotherswithkindnessandrespectcanwebuildgoodrelationshipsandliveahappylife.【詳解】［總體分析］①題材：本文是一篇材料作文。②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”。③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)要明確，需要按照題目要求，圍繞“如何與人相處”展開論述，包括尊重他人、理解他人、誠(chéng)實(shí)禮貌、幫助他人、主動(dòng)道歉等方面，并適當(dāng)添加自己的觀點(diǎn)，不要遺漏相關(guān)內(nèi)容。［寫作步驟］第一步，表明寫作意圖。開頭點(diǎn)明良好的人際關(guān)系能讓人快樂舒適，進(jìn)而引出如何與人相處的話題。第二步，具體闡述與人相處的方法，如尊重他人、誠(chéng)實(shí)禮貌、幫助有困難的人、犯錯(cuò)誤時(shí)主動(dòng)道歉等。第三步，書寫結(jié)語，總結(jié)與人相處需要努力和真誠(chéng)，只有善待他人才能建立良好關(guān)系，過上幸福生活。［亮點(diǎn)詞匯］①offertohelp主動(dòng)幫助②taketheinitiative主動(dòng)③inaword總之［高分句型］①Weshouldoffertohelpotherswhentheyareintrouble.（when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句）②Ithinkthatbeingpatientandunderstandingiskeytogettingalongwithothers.（that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）3．（23-24九年級(jí)上·天津?yàn)I海新·期中）你邀請(qǐng)了幾個(gè)外國(guó)朋友到合肥的博物館來參觀，請(qǐng)你用英語寫一份入館須知，漢語提示已經(jīng)給出。要求：80詞左右，要點(diǎn)提示必須寫上，其它可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。注意：書寫規(guī)范。入館須知：歡迎來到我市博物館參觀，請(qǐng)遵守以下規(guī)則：1.開放時(shí)間：8:00-16:00：周一到周五；2.禁止在展館內(nèi)吸煙；禁止拍照；3.保持展館內(nèi)安靜，禁止大聲喧嘩；不得觸摸展品；4.保持展館內(nèi)清潔衛(wèi)生；5.如果想了解展品的詳細(xì)情況，請(qǐng)咨詢工作人員；6.你的想法……exhibits展品

askthestaff詢問職員Welcometoourcitymuseum_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopeyouhaveagoodtimeinthecitymuseum.【答案】例文Welcometoourcitymuseum.Herearesomerulesyouneedtofollow:First,theopeninghoursarefrom8:00to16:00fromMondaytoFriday.Second,smokingandtakingphotosareforbiddenintheexhibitionhalls.Third,keepquietinthemuseum.Don’tshoutormakeanynoise.Also,don’ttouchtheexhibits.Fourth,pleasekeepthemuseumcleanandtidy.Fifth,ifyouwanttoknowmoredetailsabouttheexhibits,youcanaskthestaffforhelp.Finally,Ihopeeveryonecanhaveagreattimeandlearnsomethingmeaningfulduringthevisit.Hopeyouhaveagoodtimeinthecitymuseum.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，是一份通知寫作。②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”。③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)要明確，需要按照要求列出了博物館的開放時(shí)間、禁止事項(xiàng)、注意事項(xiàng)等，不要遺漏相關(guān)內(nèi)容，并適當(dāng)添加了希望大家能在參觀中有所收獲的內(nèi)容。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。開頭歡迎大家來到博物館參觀，并說明需要遵守相關(guān)規(guī)則。第二步，具體闡述各項(xiàng)規(guī)則，包括開放時(shí)間、禁止吸煙和拍照、保持安靜、不觸摸展品、保持清潔、咨詢工作人員等。第三步，書寫結(jié)語，希望大家能在博物館度過愉快的時(shí)光。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①followtherules遵守規(guī)則②makenoise制造噪音[高分句型]①Ifyouwanttoknowmoredetailsabouttheexhibits,youcanaskthestaffforhelp.（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）②Ihopeeveryonecanhaveagreattimeandlearnsomethingmeaningfulduringthevisit.（賓語從句）4．（23-24九年級(jí)上·天津河西·期中）假如你是Dave，昨天收到了好朋友Jim的郵件，他在郵件中向你傾訴了他的煩惱。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)郵件中提到的問題，用英語回一封郵件，給他提出一些建議。以下是Jim提出的煩惱：(l)父母不了解自己，偷看自己的日記；(2)自己喜歡踢足球，但花費(fèi)太多時(shí)間導(dǎo)致成績(jī)下降，感到非常苦惱；(3)晚上熬夜寫作業(yè)，第二天上課非常困。要求：(l)詞數(shù)：80~100個(gè)；

(2)開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

(3)可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearJim,I’mgladtohearfromyouandI’msorrytohearthatyouareintroublewithyourparentsandstudy.

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Goodluck!Yours,Dave【答案】例文：DearJim,I’mgladtohearfromyouandI’msorrytohearthatyouareintroublewithyourparentsandstudy.Asyourbestfriend,I’dliketogiveyousomeadvice.First,Ithinkyou’dbettertalkwithyourparentsaboutyourlifeandyourfeelings.Theywanttoknowmoreaboutyou,sotheyreadyourdiaries.Theydothisbecausetheycareaboutyou.Ifyoutalkwiththem,theywon’tworryaboutyou.Iknowthatyoulovetoplayfootball.However,don’tspendtoomuchtimeonit,oryou’llhavelessenergytostudy.Finally,whynotfinishyourhomeworkasearlyasyoucanandmakesuretogotobedbeforeten?Ihopethatmyadvicecanhelpyou.Goodluck!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；③提示：結(jié)合好友Jim郵件中提出的問題，給他恰當(dāng)?shù)慕ㄗh，避免語法錯(cuò)誤，確保行文連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步；關(guān)于父母偷看自己的日記，介紹你的觀點(diǎn)；第二步：因?yàn)樘咦闱?，Jim成績(jī)下降，為此提出你的建議；第三步：由于熬夜寫作業(yè)，導(dǎo)致Jim第二天上課犯困，為此給出幫助Jim的建議；第四步：希望這些建議能給Jim帶來幫助。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①talkwith與……交談②asearlyasyoucan

盡可能早……③makesure確保[高分句型]①Theydothisbecausetheycareaboutyou.(because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句)②Iknowthatyoulovetoplayfootball.(賓語從句)5．（23-24九年級(jí)上·天津紅橋·期中）假如你是某中學(xué)學(xué)生李華，最近你在電視里看到英國(guó)作家、旅行者威廉·林賽保護(hù)長(zhǎng)城的令人感動(dòng)事跡報(bào)道。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，給你的英國(guó)好友Peter寫一封信，與他分享你的感動(dòng)。(1)11歲時(shí)，他第一次在地圖上看見長(zhǎng)城。(2)30歲時(shí)，他來到中國(guó)，登上長(zhǎng)城。(3)1998年的一天他去長(zhǎng)城拍照，看到垃圾，感到傷心。(4)他開始組織志愿者在長(zhǎng)城撿垃圾，現(xiàn)已堅(jiān)持20多年。(5)你認(rèn)為……要求：1.詞數(shù)：80~100。2.開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3.要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。參考詞匯：組織organize

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登上長(zhǎng)城walkontheGreatWallDearPeter,Howareyou?IhavewatchedareportaboutWilliamLindesay,aBritishwriterandtraveller.HehasbeenprotectingandstudyingtheGreatWall.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Doyouhaveastorytotell?Hopetohearfromyou.Yours,LiHue【答案】例文DearPeter,Howareyou?IhavewatchedareportaboutWilliamLindesay,aBritishwriterandtraveller.HehasbeenprotectingandstudyingtheGreatWall.Attheageof11,hefirstsawtheGreatWallonamap.Attheageof30,hecametoChinaandclimbedtheGreatWall.Onedayin1998,hewenttotheGreatWalltotakephotos.Hefeltsadwhenhesawlittereverywhere.SohebegantoorganizevolunteerstocollectgarbageintheGreatWall.Nowhehasinsistedonitformorethan20years.IthinkthatonewhofailstolovetheGreatWallisnotahero.WeshouldtakeactionstolovetheGreatWall.Doyouhaveastorytotell?Hopetohearfromyou.Yours,LiHue【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為書信作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般過去時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中每一項(xiàng)內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹英國(guó)作家、旅行者威廉·林賽保護(hù)長(zhǎng)城的舉動(dòng)和行為；第二步，表達(dá)自己的感想。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①attheageof在……歲時(shí)②begintodosth開始做某事③insiston堅(jiān)持[高分句型]①Hefeltsadwhenhesawlittereverywhere.（when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句）②IthinkthatonewhofailstolovetheGreatWallisnotahero.（who引導(dǎo)的定語從句）6．（23-24九年級(jí)上·浙江溫州·期中）隨著時(shí)代的變遷，中國(guó)青少年的娛樂方式也逐漸發(fā)生著變化。某英語報(bào)社就此話題進(jìn)行了征稿。請(qǐng)你參考下圖，談?wù)勀銓?duì)此變化的理解，并倡議青少年進(jìn)行有益的娛樂活動(dòng)，給報(bào)社投稿。InthepastNow參考詞匯：滾鐵環(huán)rollahoop注意：（1）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校等信息；（2）詞數(shù)110左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Nowadays,teenagershavedifferentwaysforfunfromthepast._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：

Nowadays,teenagershavedifferentwaysforfunfromthepast.

Inthepast,theentertainmentmethodsforteenagerswereverysimple.Atthattime,theydidn’thaveaTV,computerorphone.Theyusuallygottogethertoplayallkindsofoutdoorgames.Themostpopulargamewasrollingahoop,whichisasingle-playergame.Althoughtherewasnomodernentertainment,theyallhadagoodtime.

Withthedevelopmentoftechnology,nowtheyhavemanymoderngames,suchascomputergamesandmobilegames.Althoughtheiractivitiesareenriched,theyoftenfeellonely.Somestudentshopethattraditionalgamescanreturntoschoolsothattheycanexperiencethejoyofpastlife.Anyway,Ihopethatteenagersshoulddomoreactivitiesthatarebeneficialtothemselves.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇議論文，為看圖作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過去時(shí)”和“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：圖片內(nèi)容表達(dá)清楚，全文注意時(shí)態(tài)切換。[寫作步驟]第一步，點(diǎn)題寫出文章討論話題；第二步，介紹過去青少年的娛樂方式及自己看法；第三步，描述現(xiàn)在青少年的娛樂方式，發(fā)出倡議。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①single-playergame單人游戲②thedevelopmentof...……的發(fā)展③bebeneficialto有益于[高分句型]①Althoughtherewasnomodernentertainment,theyallhadagoodtime.（讓步狀語從句）②Somestudentshopethattraditionalgamescanreturntoschoolsothattheycanexperiencethejoyofpastlife.（賓語從句、結(jié)果狀語從句）7．（23-24九年級(jí)上·浙江溫州·期中）假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)閱讀從英國(guó)來溫州的交換生Jenny的郵件，并根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容給予回復(fù)。DearLiHua,Longtimenosee!NowadaysIfeelsoworriedbecauseit’stoohardformetorememberChineseancientpoems.AndIhopetotakesometripsduringweekendsbutIdon’tknowwheretogo.Canyougivemesomeadvice?I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,Jenny注意：1.郵件必須包含所提問題的回復(fù)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息；3.詞數(shù)：110詞左右。DearJenny,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文：DearJenny,

How’sitgoing?I’msorrytohearaboutyourproblems.Butdon’tworry.HereissomeadviceforyoutorememberChineseancientpoems.Firstofall,it’sagoodideatounderstandthepoemwell.Therearemanyvideosonlinewhichexplainthepoeminaninterestingway.YoucanalsoaskyourChineseteachersandclassmatesforhelp.Besides,readthepoemloudlyinthemorningandenjoyitsbeauty.Ibelieveyouwillfinditeasytorememberthepoem.

Asfortheplacestovisit,IsuggestyougotoJiangxinIsland/Wumastreet/YandangMountain.Youcannotonlyseethebeautifulviewsbutalsolearnaboutthelocalculture.Ihopemyadviceishelpful.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”③提示：根據(jù)材料中的電子郵件內(nèi)容可分析出，對(duì)方有兩個(gè)問題需解決：背不會(huì)中國(guó)古詩(shī)和不知道去哪玩，應(yīng)根據(jù)這兩點(diǎn)提出自己的建議，不要遺漏。適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，開門見山。安慰對(duì)方，跟對(duì)方說不用擔(dān)心，會(huì)給他建議。第二步，針對(duì)不會(huì)背古詩(shī)和去哪里玩給出合適的建議，比如尋求老師的幫助，看視頻等來輔助自己背古詩(shī)，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)展開描述。第三步，書寫結(jié)語。希望自己的建議能被采納，并期待對(duì)方回信。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①ask...forhelp向……尋求幫助②localculture當(dāng)?shù)匚幕痆高分句型]①Therearemanyvideosonlinewhichexplainthepoeminaninterestingway.（therebe句型）②Youcannotonlyseethebeautifulviewsbutalsolearnaboutthelocalculture.（“notonly...butalso...”句型）8．（22-23九年級(jí)上·浙江溫州·期中）學(xué)校校報(bào)“青春進(jìn)行時(shí)”欄目很受同學(xué)們歡迎，他們可以來信訴說學(xué)業(yè)和校園生活中的困惑。假設(shè)你是該報(bào)編輯李華，請(qǐng)你從最近收到的這兩封信中，選擇一位同學(xué)的困惑回復(fù)，給予合理的建議和理由。注意：1.110詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)個(gè)人真實(shí)的姓名和校名。IamnotsurewhetherIshouldtakepartintheschoolpianocompetitionthisyear.IpractisethepianoeverydayandIlikeit.Ihaveenteredthecompetitionseveraltimes.However,Ineverwonaprize.IwonderifIshouldjustgiveup.—JackMyfriendPeterfindsmathsverydifficult.Hewantsmetolethimcopymyhomework.Iwanttorefusebecauseitisnotright,butIdon’twantPetertogetintotroublewithhisparents.TheywereangrywithPeterfornotfinishinghismathhomework.—KateDearI’mgladtoreceiveyourletter.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJack,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletter.AsfarasIknow,youarenotsurewhetheryoushouldtakepartinpianocompetition.Herearesomeadviceofmine.Inmyopinion,Ithinkyoushouldtakepartinthepianocompetition.Forthecompetition,winningtheprizeisnottheimportant,buttoimproveyourselfthroughthecompetitionismoreimportant.Atthesametime,youcanmakemorenewfriendswhoaretalentedinpiano,andyoualsocantalkaboutmoreskillsaboutthepianowhichwillbemorehelpfulforyoutoimproveyourabilityinthefuture.Ihopemyadvicewillbeuseful.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇書信作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)未給出，結(jié)合書信內(nèi)容寫出對(duì)應(yīng)建議，考生應(yīng)注意補(bǔ)充要點(diǎn)，使得語法正確，句子通順。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫信目的，給Jack一些建議。第二步，詳細(xì)寫明建議內(nèi)容和理由。第三步，書信結(jié)尾，希望建議和理由能夠給Jack提供幫助。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①betalentedin對(duì)……有天賦②takepartin參加[高分句型]①Forthecompetition,winningtheprizeisnottheimportant.（動(dòng)名詞作主語）②Atthesametime,youcanmakemorenewfriendwhoaretalentedinpiano.（who引導(dǎo)的定語從句）9．（22-23九年級(jí)上·浙江溫州·期中）作為一名九年級(jí)的學(xué)生，李華有一些煩惱，例如上英語課聽不懂，愛玩游戲……假如你是英語報(bào)社編輯Diana，請(qǐng)結(jié)合你自己的想法和圖片提示給他寫一封信，幫助他走出困境。注意：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等相關(guān)信息；2.詞數(shù)：約110詞。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearLiHua,I’msorrytohearthatyouhavesomeproblems.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Diana【答案】例文DearLiHua,I’msorrytohearthatyouhavesomeproblems.Iunderstandyourfeelings.Youareworriedbecausecan’tunderstandtheteacherinEnglishclassandlovetoplaygames.Herearemysuggestions.Firstofall,youshouldthinkaboutwhyyoucan’tunderstandtheteacher.YoucantalktoyourEnglishteachertofindoutyourproblems.Thenyoushouldaskyourteacherforsomegoodlearningmethods.Asforgames,youcanplayappropriately.Butyoushouldn’tspendtoomuchtimeplayinggames.Ifyouspendmostofyourtimeongames,yourstudywillbeaffected.Besides,spendingtoomuchtimelookingatyourphoneisbadforyoureyes.Ihopemysuggestionswillhelpyou.Lookforwardtoyourgoodnews.Yours,Diana【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為書信；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”為主；③提示：要求結(jié)合自己的想法和圖片提示給李華寫一封信，幫助他走出英語學(xué)習(xí)的困境。可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致，注意字?jǐn)?shù)要求。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出話題，表示已聽說李華的困境；第二步，給李華提出建議；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。希望提出的建議對(duì)李華有幫助。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①Firstofall首先②talktosb.與某人交談③findout找出④spendtime(in)doingsth.花時(shí)間做某事[高分句型]①Firstofall,youshouldthinkaboutwhyyoucan’tunderstandtheteacher.（賓語從句）②Ifyouspendmostofyourtimeongames,yourstudywillbeaffected.（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）10．（22-23九年級(jí)上·浙江溫州·期中）假如你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Sam想了解中國(guó)學(xué)生的課外活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下圖提示，介紹兩到三種你喜歡的課外活動(dòng)，并談?wù)勏矚g他們的原因以及給你所帶來的好處。

要求：①結(jié)合上圖，可適當(dāng)拓展；②文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)