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PAGEPAGE10閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Ilovedreadingbooksverymuchasachild,butmysinglemotherwasstrugglingfinancially,soIoftenwenttothelibrarytoreadforfree.Myfavoritebooksweresciencefiction(科幻小說).Once,Ispentawholeafternoonreadingsciencefictioninthelibrary.
WhileIwasenjoyingreading,anillnessnearlyknockedmedown.Myillnesswasverystrange,andnoonereallyknewwhatitwas.Ialwayswokeupwitharushofurine(尿).AndthenIfoundoutthatthediseasehadimpactedmyentirelife.IrememberwhenIwasinthesixthgrade,Ihadtogotothebathroominthemiddleofaclass.RealizingIhadtogotothefrontoftheclassandwritemynameontheblackboardinordertogotothebathroom,Iputupwithit.Bytheendofclass,theurinehadsoakedinto(滲透)myjeansandmychair.SincethenIhadnodeskmate.Andmyshamespreadfromclasstothewholeschool.Afterthat,Ibecamemoreisolated(孤立的)andsilent,butIgotaridetothelibraryonceaweekandcheckedoutallthesciencefictionnovelsIcouldcarry.Thankstothem,IgotthroughthedayswhenIwassickandcouldn'tgotoschool.WhenIwasfifteen,thehighschoolaskedmymothertotakemeoutofschool.MymotherandIwerebothrelieved.Ihadmanagedtogetexcellentgradesdespitemissing85%ofmyclasses,buttheschoolcouldn'tputupwithmyabsenceofschoolmostofthetime.MymothercouldseehowsickIwas,andknewhowmuchIactuallywantedtobethere.Buttheschoolofficialshadstartedtogetinvolved.Worsestill,mymotherdiedsuddenlynotlongafterIdroppedoutofschool,leavingmeanorphan(孤兒)at17.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。JustwhenIcouldn'tliveanymore,ascience-fictionmagazinesavedme._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Mybackgroundmademyscience-fictionworksmorecreative._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、文章大意文章講述了作者自幼喜愛讀書,尤其熱愛科幻小說,但因家庭經(jīng)濟(jì)困難常去圖書館免費(fèi)閱讀。作者身患奇怪疾病,導(dǎo)致在學(xué)校遭遇尷尬處境而變得孤立沉默。后來因病缺課過多被學(xué)校要求退學(xué),不久后母親又突然離世,使作者成為孤兒,生活陷入絕境。二、伏筆及續(xù)寫回應(yīng)伏筆1:作者對(duì)科幻小說的熱愛貫穿始終,在困境中科幻小說是其精神寄托,為后續(xù)科幻雜志拯救作者以及作者在科幻創(chuàng)作上取得成就做鋪墊。續(xù)寫回應(yīng):在續(xù)寫中,作者因科幻雜志獲得新生,開始創(chuàng)作科幻作品,回應(yīng)了之前對(duì)科幻小說的喜愛,以及科幻小說在其艱難生活中所起的重要作用。伏筆2:作者因病在學(xué)校遭受歧視和孤立,生活充滿苦難,這使他的經(jīng)歷獨(dú)特且情感豐富,為其科幻創(chuàng)作提供了潛在的素材和深度。續(xù)寫回應(yīng):在后續(xù)情節(jié)中,作者的這些經(jīng)歷轉(zhuǎn)化為創(chuàng)作的靈感和特色,使其作品更具創(chuàng)意,回應(yīng)了他所經(jīng)歷的苦難對(duì)其創(chuàng)作的影響。伏筆3:作者雖因病缺課很多,但仍能取得優(yōu)異成績,顯示出其聰明才智和學(xué)習(xí)能力,為他在科幻創(chuàng)作領(lǐng)域取得成功埋下伏筆。續(xù)寫回應(yīng):在續(xù)寫中,作者憑借自身的智慧和才能在科幻創(chuàng)作上有所建樹,回應(yīng)了他在學(xué)習(xí)上的潛力以及在困境中展現(xiàn)出的堅(jiān)韌和天賦。三、續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)第一段:描述作者發(fā)現(xiàn)科幻雜志后的驚喜和如獲至寶的感覺,以及雜志如何給他帶來希望和動(dòng)力。講述作者開始嘗試根據(jù)雜志上的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行科幻創(chuàng)作,投入其中并逐漸找到生活的意義。提及作者在創(chuàng)作過程中對(duì)自己疾病和生活經(jīng)歷的思考,以及如何將這些融入到作品中。第二段:闡述作者的科幻作品因獨(dú)特背景而具有的創(chuàng)意特點(diǎn),如對(duì)人性、疾病、孤獨(dú)等主題的獨(dú)特詮釋。講述他的作品逐漸受到關(guān)注和認(rèn)可,可能獲得一些獎(jiǎng)項(xiàng)或發(fā)表機(jī)會(huì),以及這對(duì)他生活的改變。說明作者從這段經(jīng)歷中領(lǐng)悟到的關(guān)于苦難與創(chuàng)作、堅(jiān)持與成功的道理,升華主題。四、情感線從患病后的羞恥和孤立導(dǎo)致的絕望,到母親離世后的極度痛苦和無助,再到因科幻雜志找到希望的喜悅,最后到在創(chuàng)作中獲得認(rèn)可的自豪和對(duì)生活的重新熱愛,情感經(jīng)歷了巨大的起伏和轉(zhuǎn)變。五、故事線作者喜愛科幻小說→患病在學(xué)校受辱→退學(xué)后母親離世→科幻雜志拯救→開始科幻創(chuàng)作→作品因獨(dú)特背景有創(chuàng)意→獲得認(rèn)可及感悟六、主旨升華句Adversitycanbethecatalystforcreativity,andthroughthepowerofimagination,wecantransformourpainintoartthattouchestheheartsofothers.(逆境可以成為創(chuàng)造力的催化劑,通過想象的力量,我們可以將痛苦轉(zhuǎn)化為觸動(dòng)他人心靈的藝術(shù)。)Thehardshipswefaceinlifecanbecomethewellspringofourcreativity,asweuseourexperiencestocraftstoriesthatresonatewiththeworldandfindmeaninginthemidstofchaos.(我們?cè)谏钪忻媾R的困難可以成為我們創(chuàng)造力的源泉,因?yàn)槲覀兝梦覀兊慕?jīng)歷來創(chuàng)作與世界產(chǎn)生共鳴的故事,并在混亂中找到意義。)Inthefaceofdespair,apassioncanbeoursalvation,leadingustocreateworksthatnotonlyexpressourinnerselvesbutalsoconnectwithothersandprovethateventhedarkesttimescangivebirthtosomethingbeautiful.(在絕望面前,一種激情可以成為我們的救贖,引導(dǎo)我們創(chuàng)作不僅表達(dá)我們內(nèi)心自我,還與他人聯(lián)系的作品,并證明即使是最黑暗的時(shí)刻也能孕育出美麗的東西。)Ouruniquelifeexperiences,nomatterhowpainful,canbetheingredientsthatmakeourcreationsstandout,showingthatfromtheashesofadversity,thephoenixofcreativitycanriseandsoar.(我們獨(dú)特的生活經(jīng)歷,無論多么痛苦,都可以成為使我們的創(chuàng)作脫穎而出的因素,表明從逆境的灰燼中,創(chuàng)造力的鳳凰可以崛起并翱翔。)Thejourneyfromorphanedandhopelesstoarecognizedcreatorisatestamenttothepowerofperseveranceandtheabilityofthehumanspirittoturntragedyintotriumphthroughthemediumofartandcreativity.(從孤兒和絕望到成為一個(gè)被認(rèn)可的創(chuàng)作者的旅程證明了堅(jiān)持的力量和人類精神通過藝術(shù)和創(chuàng)造力將悲劇轉(zhuǎn)化為勝利的能力。)七、寫作示范寫作示范一JustwhenIcouldn'tliveanymore,ascience-fictionmagazinesavedme.Oneday,whilewanderingaimlesslyinthestreet,Isawadiscardedscience-fictionmagazinelyingontheground.IpickeditupwithtremblinghandsasifIhadfoundaprecioustreasure.Thevividpicturesandimaginativestoriesinitimmediatelycapturedmyheart.Idevouredeverywordandpage,anditwaslikealightshiningintomydarkworld.Inspiredbythemagazine,Idecidedtotrywritingmyownscience-fictionstories.Ipouredallmyemotions,thoughtsaboutmyillness,andthelonelinessandpainIhadexperiencedintomywriting.Dayandnight,Iimmersedmyselfincreating,andgradually,Ifoundanewpurposeinlife.Throughwriting,Iwasabletoexpresstheunspeakableandfindawaytocopewithmydifficultsituation.Mybackgroundmademyscience-fictionworksmorecreative.Myuniqueexperiencesofdealingwithillnessandtheisolationitbroughtgavemystoriesadepthandauthenticitythatsetthemapart.Iwroteaboutcharacterswhofacedextraordinarychallenges,muchlikemyself,andexploredthemesofsurvival,hope,andthepowerofthehumanspiritinthefaceofadversity.AsIcontinuedtowrite,myworksbegantoattractattention.Oneofmystorieswaspublishedinasmallliterarymagazine,anditreceivedpositivereviews.Thisrecognitiongavemeahugeboostofconfidence.Irealizedthatmyhardshipshadnotbeeninvain.Theyhadbecomethesourceofmycreativityandallowedmetoconnectwithreaderswhocouldrelatetothestrugglesandhopesinmystories.Iwasdeterminedtokeepwritingandsharingmyperspectivewiththeworld,usingmywordstoturnmypainintosomethingmeaningfulandbeautiful.寫作示范二JustwhenIcouldn'tliveanymore,ascience-fictionmagazinesavedme.Istumbleduponascience-fictionmagazineinathriftstore.ThemomentIlaidmyeyesonit,Ifeltastrangeconnection.IboughtitwiththelittlemoneyIhadandrushedhometoreadit.Theamazingworldsandconceptsinthemagazineopenedupanewdimensionforme.Itgavemeanidea-whynotcreatemyownscience-fictionuniverse?Istartedwritingimmediately,usingmyillnessasabackdropandincorporatingthefeelingsofisolationanddesperationIhadfelt.Iimaginedafuturewherediseasescouldbecuredinextraordinarywaysandwherepeoplelikemecouldfindhopeandacceptance.AsIwrote,Ifeltasenseofliberation,asifIwasescapingtheharshrealityandenteringaworldofmyowncreation.Mybackgroundmademyscience-fictionworksmorecreative.ThepainandlonelinessIhadenduredbecametheessenceofmystories.Mycharacterswereoftenoutsiders,strugglingtofitinaworldthatdidn'tunderstandthem,muchlikemyexperienceinschoolandaftermymother'sdeath.Mydescriptionsofthefuturewerefilledwithasenseoflongingforabetterlifeandahopethateveninthedarkesttimes,therecouldbeaglimmeroflight.Eventually,myworkcaughttheattentionofalocalwritingcompetition.Isubmittedmystoryandtomysurprise,Iwon.Thisvictorynotonlybroughtmesomefinancialsupportbutalsogavemeasenseofvalidation.Iunderstoodthatmypasthadshapedmeintoauniquewriter.Iwasnolongeravictimofcircumstancesbutacreatorwhocouldusemyexperiencestotouchtheheartsofothers.Fromthenon,Icontinuedtopursuemypassionforwriting,knowingthateveryobstacleIhadovercomewasasteppingstonetoamorecreativeandfulfillinglifeint
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