高一上學期英語讀后續(xù)寫例題詳解導學案

2024年秋高一第十一周讀后續(xù)寫【2023年南通高一上期末】Engagement(訂婚)isanexcitingandmemorableeventthatmanypeoplelookforwardto.BaileyDavis,whohadbeeninlovewithherboyfriendformorethantwoyears,likemanyothers,recentlyexperiencedthisjoyousoccasionwhenshegotengaged.Asforthefuture,Baileyknewthatnomatterwhatchallengesorobstaclescameherway,shewouldalwaysholdontothememoriesandexperiencesshesharedwithherpartner.Shehasbeenproudlywearingherbeautifulengagementringeversince,valuingitasasymbolofherloveandcommitment.However,herhappinesswasshort-lived.Asasalesgirlofalargechainstore,Baileywasasbusyasabee,goingonbusinessalonefromtimetotime.Onthisparticularday,Columbus,Ohiowasherdestination.Shegotupveryearly,packedallherbaggage,anddrovetherehappily.Whileatareststop,sheusedtherestroom.Here,shetookoffherring.Butlittledidsheknowthatshe’dalsoleaveitthere.Itwasn’tuntilshearrivedinColumbusthatsherealizedherringwasmissing.“IhaddrivenalreadytwohoursawaytoColumbusbeforeIrealizeditwasn’tonmyhand,”Baileyrecalled.“Iwasshakyandsweating—IfeltlikeIwasgoingtopuke(嘔吐).”Bythetimeshereturnedtothereststopbathroom,theringwasgone.Atthatmoment,Baileyfeltcertainshewouldneverseeherpreciousringagain.Bailey’sheartbegantosinkatthethoughtofthespecialvalueofthering.Forher,itwasnotjustapieceofjewelrybutasymboloftheloveandcommitmentshesharedwithherpartner.Shecouldn’thelpbutfeeladeepsenseoflossanddisappointment.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數應為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。However,Baileyrefusedtogiveuphope._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Justwhenshe’sabouttoloseheart,somethingamazinghappened._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【解析】【導語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了BaileyDavis的訂婚戒指失而復得的故事。【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內容“然而，貝利拒絕放棄希望?！笨芍谝欢慰擅鑼懾惱麤]有放棄想方設法去找戒指。②由第二段首句內容“就在她快要灰心喪氣的時候，驚人的事情發(fā)生了?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫一位好心人找到了戒指并還給了她。2.續(xù)寫線索：拒絕放棄希望——開始聯系休息站——繼續(xù)尋找——開始感到無望——驚人的事發(fā)生了——好心人找到了她的戒指——感激和寬慰——感悟第一段：但是，她拒絕放棄希望。她開始聯系休息站，希望有人撿到她的戒指并上交。她還發(fā)布在社交媒體上，很多人轉發(fā)并鼓勵安慰。她聯系了當地的珠寶商店，甚至報警了。盡管她的種種努力，戒指依然沒有找到，她開始絕望。第二段驚人的事情發(fā)生了。她接到休息站的電話。有個善良的員工發(fā)現了戒指卻不知道交給誰直到看到休息站發(fā)布的尋物啟事。Bailey不能相信她的運氣趕忙沖到休息站。當她再一次拿到\看到戒指時，她感到高興\感激\寬慰（松了一口氣）。=1\*GB3①從那一天起，這個戒指不僅象征著她和伴侶之間的愛和承諾，還有陌生人的，作為一個提醒，是愛和善良讓這個世界運轉。=2\*GB3②她意識到她和伴侶之間的愛和承諾是不可替代的。這個經歷也教會了她珍惜生活中真正重要的東西。

高興、感激Whensheheldtheringonceagain,afeelingofhappinesswelledupinsideher.Themomentshecaughtsightofthering,herfacelitupwithdelight,tearsofgratitudestreamingherface.Atthesightofthering,shewasoverwhelmedwithjoy,hereyesshiningandherfacebeaming(herhandstrembling).Sheexpressedheartfeltgratitudetoeveryonefortheirhelpandcare.Hewasovercomebyfear,handstremblingandeyeswideopen.他被恐懼沖昏了頭腦，雙手顫抖，眼睛睜得大大的。Iwasovercomebyshame,myheartthumpingandmyfaceblushing.我被羞愧沖昏了頭腦，心砰砰直跳，臉色泛紅。Theywereovercomewithsadness,tearsstreamingdowntheirfaces.他們傷心欲絕，淚流滿面。Iwasovercomewithexcitement,myheartracingrapidlyandmyeyesshining/twinklingwildly.我被激動的心情沖昏了頭腦，心跳加速，雙眼狂閃。Hewasseizedbyagreatsenseofanger,hiseyesglaringatthem.感悟，升華句型句型一：It’s...that...(強調句）ItislovethatmakestheworldgoroundandBernardfeltitdeepinhislittleheart.（2020.7高考山東卷）正是愛讓世界轉動，Bernard在心里深深地感受到了這一點。It’sMrJohnson’sencouragementthatgavemecourageandconfidence.是Johnson老師的鼓勵給予了我勇氣和自信。It’sherselflessloveandpowerfulsupportthatchangedourlife.是她無私的愛和堅實的支持改變了我的人生。2.句型二：fromthenon+行動1）Fromthenon,Imadeupmymindtopasson“l(fā)ove”toothers.Justasasayinggoes,“Rosesgiven,fragranceinhand.”從那以后,我下定決心向別人傳遞“愛”。俗話說:“玫瑰予人，手留余香?！?)Fromthatdayon,everytimeImeetsomeonewhoneedshelp,Ialwaysreachouttothem,hopingtopassonthekindnessthatMexicanfamilyofferedme.（2021年1月八省聯考）從那天起，每當我遇到需要幫助的人，我總是伸出手去幫助他們，希望把墨西哥家庭給予我的善良傳遞下去。3.句型三：Itdawnedonsb.that...1）Itdawnedonmethatamomentofkindnesscouldmeansomuchtoanother,andthatasimpleactcouldmaketheworldsomuchbetter.我恍然大悟，那一刻的善良對另一個人來說意義重大，而一個簡單的行為可以使世界變得如此美好。2）ItdawnedonMiathatsometimesasmallactofkindnessmaybepowerfulenoughtomakeahugedifference.米婭突然意識到，有時候一個小小的善舉可能會產生巨大的影響。4.句型四：Only...（倒裝句）1）Onlywhenweopenupthedoorofourheartcanwebebathedinthebrilliantsunshineandenjoythewarmthoflove.只有當我們打開心扉，我們才能沐浴在陽光中享受愛的溫暖。OnlythendidIrealizethatitwaskindnessandlovethatmadeourworldsowarmandbeautiful.直到那時候，我才意識到，正是愛和善意讓我們的世界如此溫暖美麗。

翻譯練習正是這次特別的經歷使我明白了幫助別人是多么寶貴的品質。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________是媽媽偉大無私的愛讓我們健康快樂成長。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________從那天起，Lily清楚意識到奉獻的重要性，她下定決心，以后遇到有需要幫助的人，她會主動伸出援手。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________她恍然大悟，善良是打開心扉的鑰匙。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________直到那時候，他才清楚明白到幫助別人是多么有意義的事情。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

第一段However,Baileyrefusedtogiveuphope.Shestartedbycontactingthereststopmanagement,hopingthatsomeonemighthavefoundherringandturneditin.Shealsopostedaboutherlostringonsocialmedia.Theresponsewassurprisingwithpeoplesharingherpostandofferingwordsofencouragement.Daysturnedintoweeks,andBaileycontinuedhersearch.Shecontactedlocaljewelrystoresandevencalledthepolice.Despiteherefforts,theringremainedhardtofind,andBaileybegantofeelhopeless.第二段Justwhenshe’sabouttoloseheart,somethingamazinghappened.Shereceivedacallfromthereststopmanagement.Akind-heartedemployeehadfoundherringbutdidn’tknowwheretoturnitin.Baileycouldn’tbelieveherluckandrushedbacktothereststop.Assheheldtheringinherhandonceagain,Baileywasoverwhelmedwithgratitudeandrelief.Fromthedayon,thepreciousringdidn’tonlysymbolizetheloveandcommitmentshesharedwithherepartner,butalsothekindnessfromacompletestranger,servingasareminderthatitisloveandkindnessthatmakestheworldgoround.Sherealizedthatmaterialpossessionscancomeandgo,buttheloveandmemoriessheshareswithherpartnerareirreplaceable.Theexperiencehastaughthertheimportanceofcherishingandvaluingwhattrulymattersinlife.翻譯練習Itwasthespecialexperiencethatmademerealizethathelpingothersisanimportantvirtue.Itwasmother’sgreatandselflesslovethatmadeusgrowhealthilyandhappily.Fromthatdayon,Lilyclearlyrealizedtheimportanceofdevotion,andshemadeuphermindthatshewouldofferahelpinghandtothoseinneedinthefuture.Itdawnedonherthatkindnessisthekeytoopenone’sheart.Onlythendidheclearlyrealizehowmeaningfulitwastohelpothers.

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