2024年中考英語(yǔ)熱點(diǎn)突破訓(xùn)練書(shū)面表達(dá)之熱點(diǎn)話題類三含解析

書(shū)面表達(dá)之熱點(diǎn)話題類青少年是祖國(guó)將來(lái)的建設(shè)者，為了實(shí)現(xiàn)宏大的中國(guó)夢(mèng)，應(yīng)當(dāng)不斷地補(bǔ)充正能量(positiveenergy)。正能量包括以下幾個(gè)方面：品德＂正能量＂：酷愛(ài)祖國(guó)(motherland)，關(guān)愛(ài)他人，愛(ài)護(hù)環(huán)境…學(xué)業(yè)＂正能量＂：好學(xué)上進(jìn)，成為有用的人才(anableman)健康＂正能量＂：熬煉身體，遠(yuǎn)離垃圾食品，生活習(xí)慣健康要求：依據(jù)以上提示，就如何補(bǔ)充正能量寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文談?wù)勛约旱目捶?，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不少于80詞。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Youngpeoplearethebuildersofthemotherland’sfuture.InordertoachievethegreatChinesedream,weshouldaddmorepositiveenergy.Firstly,weshouldloveourmotherland,careforothers,andprotecttheenvironment.Secondly,ifwewanttomakeprogress,weshouldworkhard.Whenwegrowup,wecanbecomeablemen.Atlast,tokeephealthy,wemuststayawayfromjunkfood.Wemusthavehealthyeatingdiet,wecandomoreexercise.【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】這篇短文主要介紹三方面的內(nèi)容。我們要留意內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和精確性及上下文的連貫性?！緦懽髁咙c(diǎn)】這篇短文基本覆蓋了全部?jī)?nèi)容要點(diǎn)；應(yīng)用了較豐富的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；句子通順、表達(dá)清晰，沒(méi)有語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤；書(shū)寫工整；字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求。達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。為了弘揚(yáng)中華傳統(tǒng)文化，你校即將實(shí)行＂中華傳統(tǒng)文化·大家談＂的演講競(jìng)賽，你準(zhǔn)備參與競(jìng)賽，請(qǐng)依據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇演講稿，介紹廣州的傳統(tǒng)文化——逛花街。時(shí)間春節(jié)前夕地點(diǎn)各區(qū)不同，最傳統(tǒng)的是西湖路花市活動(dòng)1.賞花、買花2.吃傳統(tǒng)小吃3.欣賞傳統(tǒng)燈飾感受與家人摯友一起、增進(jìn)感情……（至少一點(diǎn)）對(duì)傳統(tǒng)文化的看法……（至少一點(diǎn)）要求：1.詞數(shù)80字左右（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）2.不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。3.參考詞匯：燈籠lanternGuangzhouisabeautifulcitywhichisfulloftraditionalculture.VisitingtheFlowerMarketisoneofthetraditionsinGuangzhou.Nowletmeintroduceittoyou.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Guangzhouisabeautifulcitywhichisfulloftraditionalculture.VisitingtheFlowerMarketisoneofthetraditionsinGuangzhou.Nowletmeintroduceittoyou.PeopleinGuangzhouliketovisittheFlowerMarketbeforetheSpringFestival.Differentdistricthasdifferentplaces.ThemostfamousFlowerMarketliesinXihuRoad.Youcanenjoydifferentkindsofflowersthere.Ifyoulike,youcanalsobuysome.Besidesflowers,youwillalsotastealotoftraditionalsnacks.Alongthestreet,youcanalsoenjoythebeautyofdifferenttraditionallanternsandlights.IlikevisitingtheFlowerMarketbecauseitisagoodwayforpeopletogettogetherandcommunicatewitheachother.Whenyouarethere,youwillhaveastrongfeelingthattheNewYeariscoming.Chinahasmuchtraditionalculture.It’sourdutytospread/introduceourtraditionalculturetotheworldandletthemlearnmoreaboutChina.【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】1.題干解讀：本題要求介紹廣州的傳統(tǒng)文化——逛花街，是表格式作文。作者開(kāi)宗明義點(diǎn)出話題VisitingtheFlowerMarketisoneofthetraditionsinGuangzhou；然后從時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)和活動(dòng)三個(gè)方面介紹逛花街的傳統(tǒng)習(xí)俗；最終介紹自己的感受和對(duì)傳統(tǒng)文化的看法。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：這篇習(xí)作是＂總分總＂結(jié)構(gòu)。用其次和第一人稱綻開(kāi)論述，時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；短文開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題，內(nèi)容充溢，連接自然，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，表達(dá)條理，是一篇優(yōu)秀的習(xí)作。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：fullof,oneof,differentkindsof,liketodo,SpringFestival,alotoftraditionalsnacks,gettogether,communicatewith,eachother,inaword,letsb.dosth.句型：It’sourdutytospread/introduceourtraditionalculturetotheworldandletthemlearnmoreaboutChina.（固定句型）Ifyoulike,youcanalsobuysome.（條件狀語(yǔ)從句）IlikevisitingtheFlowerMarketbecauseitisagoodwayforpeopletogettogetherandcommunicatewitheachother.（緣由狀語(yǔ)從句）Whenyouarethere,youwillhaveastrongfeelingthattheNewYeariscoming.（復(fù)合時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句結(jié)構(gòu)）假如你獨(dú)創(chuàng)的＂飛行單車＂在學(xué)?？萍脊?jié)中獲獎(jiǎng)，被舉薦參與一個(gè)國(guó)際青少年科技展覽。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)介紹你的獨(dú)創(chuàng)，內(nèi)容包括下圖中1—4項(xiàng)。＂飛行單車＂＂飛行單車＂1.外觀：兩個(gè)輪子，兩只翅膀2.用途：行駛于地面和空中、可拍照、能對(duì)話3.特點(diǎn)：速度快、運(yùn)用太陽(yáng)能、環(huán)保4.改進(jìn)安排（1~2點(diǎn)）留意：（1）參考詞匯：輪子wheel太陽(yáng)能solarpower（2）詞數(shù)80左右（文章的開(kāi)頭己給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）。（3）不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。Myinventionisaflyingbike....________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Myinventionisaflyingbike．Itisfast，convenientandgreen!Theflyingbikehastwowheelsandtwowings．Ithasatopspeedof300km/h.Youcangotofartherplacesinashortertime．Itcanrunonlandandflyintheair．Ifyoushout"fly"thebikewillturnintoaplanein30seconds．Thenyoucanflyintheair．Youwillbeasfreeasabird．Itcantakephotos，too．Insteadofpetrol,thebikeusessolarpower，soitwillnotpollutetheair．Iwilladdaseatbehinditsothatitcancarrytwopersons.Myinventionwillhelppeopleliveabetterlifeinthefuture．建設(shè)平安校內(nèi)是我們每個(gè)人的責(zé)任與義務(wù)。作為一名學(xué)生，我們更應(yīng)當(dāng)珍惜自己的生命，更應(yīng)當(dāng)留意自己的人身平安。假如你是LiHua，并擔(dān)當(dāng)校學(xué)生會(huì)主席，請(qǐng)你就平安問(wèn)題，向全校學(xué)生發(fā)出倡議，寫一封平安倡議書(shū)。包括以下要點(diǎn)：1）不帶管制刀具到學(xué)校；2）不打架；3）上學(xué)放學(xué)的途中應(yīng)當(dāng)留意交通平安；4）遇緊急狀況，馬上報(bào)告警察或老師。5）……參考詞匯：管制的：restricted；緊急狀況：emergency寫作要求：1）用詞恰當(dāng)，要點(diǎn)全面，層次清晰，書(shū)寫規(guī)范。2）可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，80詞左右，開(kāi)頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3）嚴(yán)禁出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校等相關(guān)信息。Dearstudents,Asyouknow,safetyisthemostimportantthinginourlives.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考范文】Dearstudents,Asyouknow,safetyisthemostimportantthinginourlives.Inmyopinion,followingthesesafetyrulescanmakeusliveinpeace.Firstly,wemustn’tbringrestrictedknivesorthingstoourschoolbecausethesethingsmaycauseseriousproblems.Secondly,weshouldbefriendlytootherssofightingisstronglybanned.And,itisnecessaryforustopayattentiontothetrafficonourwaytoschoolorhome.Furthermore,mindthestepswhenyouaregoingdownthestairs.Don’tplaywithothersatthattime.Lastbutnottheleast,ifwemeetsomeemergency,wemustcallforhelpfromthepoliceorourteachers.Inaword,weshouldtryourbesttomakesurewearesafe.YoursLiHua【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于應(yīng)用文，文章需運(yùn)用書(shū)信格式寫作。在文章開(kāi)頭應(yīng)當(dāng)寫出寫作目的，并引出下文；其次段具體講解并描述自己的觀點(diǎn)；第三段總結(jié)自己的觀點(diǎn)。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采納三段式；時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；作者對(duì)于自己的觀點(diǎn)闡述特別完整，而且條理清晰。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：asyouknow;inmyopinion;firstly;secondly;furthermore;Lastbutnottheleast;Inaword句型：itisnecessaryforsb.todosth.對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)做某事是必要的Weshoulddosth.我們應(yīng)當(dāng)做某事今日是星期天，你以＂環(huán)境愛(ài)護(hù)＂為主題，與老師和同學(xué)們一起綻開(kāi)了一系列的活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你依據(jù)此活動(dòng)，寫一篇70詞左右的日記。要點(diǎn)包括：1．動(dòng)身時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)：上午8:00；校門口；2．目的地：蘇州市旁邊的一個(gè)小鎮(zhèn)；3．交通工具：校車；4.活動(dòng)內(nèi)容：撿垃圾、塑料袋，打掃街道，種樹(shù)、種花；5．返回時(shí)間：下午6點(diǎn)。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【寫作思路】對(duì)于話題作文，句子要達(dá)意、完整、語(yǔ)法正確、合乎習(xí)慣，特殊是句式，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的形式要有根有據(jù)，選用比較有把握的詞匯，用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫蛯懗鰷?zhǔn)確反映內(nèi)容要求的句子。寫作時(shí)要留意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)，留意供應(yīng)的觀點(diǎn)、材料，要留意句子的完整性，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式，句子之間的連接和過(guò)渡。要忠實(shí)于材料，不必?cái)U(kuò)展過(guò)多，留意用好連詞，多用非謂語(yǔ)，慎用較難的句型，肯定不能寫錯(cuò)句?！緟⒖挤段摹縎undayJune3,2024FineTodayIwasveryexcitedbecauseIdidalotofthingswithmyteachersandclassmatestoprotectourenvironment.Wemetattheschoolgateat8:00inthemorning.WewenttoasmalltownnearSuzhouinourschoolbus.Wecollectedlitterandpickedupplasticbags.Wecleanedthedirtystreets.Thenweplantedmanytreesandflowers.Atsixwecamebackhome.Ifeltverytiredbuthappy.共享單車(bike-sharing)被譽(yù)為中國(guó)現(xiàn)代新四大獨(dú)創(chuàng)之一。如今廈門的大街小巷也隨處可見(jiàn)共享單車的身影。請(qǐng)你依據(jù)表格內(nèi)容，簡(jiǎn)要介紹共享單車的發(fā)展及運(yùn)用方法，并表達(dá)一下你自己對(duì)共享單車的看法。DevelopmentFirstusedinHolland,1965introducedinChinain2007beenpopularsince2024InstructionscantheQRcode(二維碼)unlockthesmartlockpaythebillOpinionhealthy,...blocking(堵塞)theway,...要求：1.必需包含所提示信息，字?jǐn)?shù)100詞左右；2.意思清晰，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書(shū)寫規(guī)范；3.請(qǐng)勿在文中運(yùn)用真實(shí)姓名、校名及提示信息之外的地名。提示詞：sharedbikes共享的自行車________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【寫作思路】這是一篇給材料作文。要求依據(jù)表格中所給出的內(nèi)容，簡(jiǎn)要介紹共享單車的發(fā)展及運(yùn)用方法，并表達(dá)一下你自己對(duì)共享單車的看法。文章時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要是第一、第三人稱