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PAGE3.高考概要寫作高分技巧(2024·浙江高考)閱讀下面短文,依據其內容寫一篇60詞左右的內容概要。Parentseverywherepraisetheirkids.JennBerman,authorofTheAtoZGuidetoRaisingHappyandConfidentKids,says,“We’vegonetotheoppositeextremesafewdecadesagowhenparentstendedtobemorestrict”.Bygivingkidsalotofpraise,parentsthinkthey’rebuildingtheirchildren’sconfidence,when,infact,itmaybejusttheopposite.Toomuchpraisecanbackfireand,whengiveninawaythat’sinsincere,makekidsafraidtotrynewthingsortakeariskforfearofnotbeingabletostayontopwheretheirparents’praisehasputthem.Still,don’tgotoofarintheotherdirection.Notgivingenoughpraisecanbejustasdamagingasgivingtoomuch.Kidswillfeellikethey’renotgoodenoughorthatyoudon’tcareand,asaresult,mayseenopointintryinghardfortheiraccomplishments.Sowhatistherightamountofpraise?Expertssaythatthequalityofpraiseismoreimportantthanthequantity.Ifpraiseissincereandfocusedontheeffortnottheoutcome,youcangiveitasoftenasyourchilddoessomethingthatdeservesaverbalreward.“Weshouldespeciallyrecognizeourchildren’seffortstopushthemselvesandworkhardtoachieveagoal”,saysDonahue,authorofParentingWithoutFear:LettingGoofWorryandFocusingonWhatReallyMatters.“Onethingtorememberisthatit’stheprocessnottheendproductthatmatters.”Yoursonmaynotbethebestbasketballplayeronhisteam.Butifhe’soutthereeverydayandplayinghard,youshouldpraisehiseffortregardlessofwhetherhisteamwinsorloses.Praisingtheeffortandnottheoutcomecanalsomeanrecognizingyourchildwhenshehasworkedhardtocleantheyard,cookdinner,orfinishabookreport.Butwhateveritis,praiseshouldbegivenonacase-by-casebasisandbeproportionate(相稱的)totheamountofeffortourchildhasputintoit.練考場審題Step1:精準審題謀篇布局文體爭論文時態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時原文分析第一段:指出父母過多表揚孩子的弊端其次段:指出表揚得太少也不好第三、四段:給出建議,要依據孩子實際付出的努力而非最終的結果來表揚孩子Step2:頭腦風暴字字珠玉(1)美詞:extreme,enthusiasm,insufficientpraise,anappropriateamountof,basedon,ratherthan(2)佳句①Expertswarnabouttwoextremeswhenitcomestoparents’praisefortheirchildren.②Therefore,thegivenadviceisthatanappropriateamountofpraiseshouldbegivenbasedonprocessratherthantheresult.Step3:斟酌詞句妙筆生花要點1:專家警告家長們不要太多或太少表揚孩子。一般表達:Expertswarnparentsnottopraisetheirchildrentoomuchortoolittle.句式升級(時間狀語從句)專家警告說,父母對孩子的表揚存有兩個極端。Expertswarnabouttwoextremeswhenitcomestoparents’praisefortheirchildren.

要點2:因此,家長們應當基于過程而不是結果表揚孩子。一般表達:Therefore,parentsshouldpraisechildrenbasedontheprocessratherthantheresult.句式升級(表語從句,被動語態(tài))因此,給出的建議是,適當的表揚應當基于過程而不是結果。Therefore,thegivenadviceisthatanappropriateamountofpraiseshouldbegivenbasedonprocessratherthantheresult

Step4:連接過渡斐然成篇Expertswarnabouttwoextremeswhenitcomestoparents’praisefortheirchildren.Ontheonehand,toomuchpraisemightleadtochildren’slackofenthusiasmtoexplorenewthings,forthey’reafraidtheywon’tmeetparents’expectations.Ontheotherhand,insufficientpraisemightletchildrenconsidereffortspointless.Therefore,parentsshouldpraisechildrenbasedontheprocessratherthantheresult.1世紀金榜導學號讀下面短文,依據其內容寫一篇60詞左右的內容概要。Ifyou’veheardpeoplesaytheyarehaving“hightea”insomeexclusive,smarthotellobby,youcansmiletoyourself,knowingthat“hightea”isseldomservedtotouristswithfancylodging.“Hightea”doesn’trefertothe“fancy”fixings,theelegantsilver,thepure-whitetablelinens,ortheluxurysurroundingsofahigh-classsalon.Itisactuallythemainmealoftheday,servedbetween6:00and7:00p.m.The“high”inthephrasecomesfromthetimeoftheday,meaning“l(fā)ate”or“high”intheafternoon.Foralongtime,thelowerandmiddleclassescouldaffordonlyonemealperday.Inordertomakeitthroughtothenextday,themainmealwouldbetakenafterworkandwouldconsistofanythingfromtheremnantsoflunchtotheverybasicfoodstaplesofthetime:asliceofbread,ahunkofcheese,apieceofsausage,allofwhichwereeatenwhiledrinkingtheireveningtea.However,asthecountryadvanced,thecommonpeoplegotwealthier,andeveningmealsbegantobesupplementedwithheavierfoodslikeroastbeef,fish,eggs,vegetables,andpotatoes.Sometimesreferredtoasa“meattea”,ora“hamtea”,theterm“hightea”hasbeenreplacedwiththemodernequivalentofdinner.Incontrast,“l(fā)owtea”,or“afternoontea”isservedearlierintheafternoon,usuallybetween4:00and5:00.OriginallystartedbyAnna,theDuchessofBedford,thetraditionbeganwhenAnnaneededalittlesustenancetotideherover.Tidbitswereservedwithtea,andAnnainvitedfriendstoshareconversationoverthesesmallsnacksbeforetheaffairoftheeveningmeal.Inreality,peoplewhohavebeautiful“teas”withfancypastriesandcakesnowadays,arepartakingofthe“l(fā)owtea”or“l(fā)ighttea”thatbegansomanyyearsagoinAnna’stime.Whiletherefreshmentsarepretty,theyare“l(fā)ight”andtheemphasisofthe“afternoontea”isonthepresentationofthetea,andtheconversationoftheguests.【參考范文】Asthefillingbetweentwodaysbythepoorhistorically,highteaisnowthemainmeal,servedbetween6:00and7:00p.m.(要點1)Incontrast,afternoonteawasonceservedbyAnna,theDuchessofBedford,beforethebigmealtoherguestswithsnacks.(要點2)Gradually,withtheimprovementofpeople’slivingstandards,dinnergrewoutofhightea,andpeoplearefocusingonconversationoverafternoontea.(要點3)2閱讀下面短文,依據其內容寫一篇60詞左右的內容概要。TheU.S.FishandWildlifeService(FWS)hasissuedamajorupdatetothenation’spolicyonelephantivory.ThemeasurebansalmostallivorysalesandtradeintheU.S.Itwasalreadyillegaltoimportelephantivoryfromothercountries.Thenewrestrictionscoverivorythathasalreadybeenimported.Officialshopethemovewillhelpstoppoachingofelephants.Africanelephantsareathreatenedspecies,inlargepartbecauseofillegalhunting.Conservationgroupsestimatethatbetween30,000and50,000wildelephantshavebeenkilledbypoacherseachyearsince2008.Themainreasonwhypoacherstargetelephantsisfortheirivory,whichisveryvaluable.TheU.S.isthesecond-largestmarketforivory,behindChina.Anti-poachinggroupssaythenewbanmakesanimportantstatement.Thenewivorybanincludesveryfewexceptions.Someantiquesandobjectsthatcontainarelativelysmallamountofivory,canstillbeboughtandsold.Thenewrestrictionsreplaceacomplexsetofrulesthatmadeitbothdifficulttoknowwhativorywaslegaltosellandeasytocheatthesystem.Forexample,itwaslegaltotradeivoryobjectsthathadbeenmadebeforeelephantsbecameendangered.Unfortunately,someivorydealersgotaroundthisrulebydeliberatelymakingnewitemsappearolder.TheseandotherstrategiesmeantitwasrelativelyeasytosellillegalivoryintheU.S.TheFWS’snewrestrictionsclosesuchloopholes.Conservationistsagreethatoneofthemostimportantwaystoprotectelephantpopulationsistogivepoachersfewerwaysofmakingmoneyfromtheirkills.Thelessdemandforivorythereis,thelessappealingitwillbetopoachelephants.Somepeopleareworriedthatthenewbanwillturnpeoplewhocurrentlyownantiqueitemscontainingivory,likemusicalinstrumentsandtrinkets,intolawbreakers.Conservationistsapplaudtherestrictions,however.TheU.S.isalsohopingothernationswillfollowinitsfootstepswithmorerestrictiveivoryrules.Asitbecomesmorechallengingtosellivoryproducts,thehopeisthatpoachingwillslowandelephantpopulationswillgrow.【參考范文】Ivoryproductsbenefitdealerssomuchthatpoacherssparenoefforttokillelephantswithoutmercy,leavingthemdyingout.(要點1)Toprotecttheendangeredspecies,FWSbansanyivorysalesandtrade,includingthoseimportedlongago.(要點2)Thoughthereareconcernsfromsome,conservationistsstandbythebanstrongly.(要點3)Also,Americaisexpectingothernationstofollowsuittomaketheelephantsmultiplyquickly.(要點4)閱讀下面短文,依據其內容寫一篇60詞左右的內容概要。Hungerisaresultofpoverty,butitalsocausespoverty.Inmanycountrieswomen,althoughtheydomuchofthefanning,lackaccesstotraining,creditorland.Conflict,poororcorruptmanagementofnaturalresources,displacementofsmallfarmersbynaturaldisasters,andfinancialandeconomiccrisesthateliminatejobsatthelowestlevels,allcontributetocreatingconditionsthatpushthepoorestintohunger.Tobreakthisviciouscycle,theUnitedStateslaunched,in2010,FeedtheFutureInitiative,whichaimstoreduceglobalhunger,poverty,andundernutritionbyfocusingonsmallholders,increasinginvestmentsinagricultureandsupportingcountry-ownedplansforimprovingfoodsecurityandnutritionwhilegeneratingopportunitiesforeconomicgrowthandtrade.Backthen,theU.S.governmentselected19countriesinAfrica,AsiaandLatinAmericatoparticipateintheinitiative,basedon5criteria.Since2010,FeedtheFuturehashelped9millionpeoplelivingintheparticipatingcountries,pullthemselvesoutofpoverty.ThepassageoftheU.S.GlobalFoodSecurityActof2024endorsedFeedtheFuture’sapproachandusheredinaneweraoftheU.S.governmentglobalfoodsecurityinvestment.Anew,correspondingglobalfoodsecuritystrategydevelopedbytheU.S.governmentisguidingFeedtheFuture’sworkastheinitiativeintoitssecondphase.OnAugust31st,USAIDAdministratorMarkGreenannouncedthatBangladesh,Ethiopia,Ghana,Guatemala,Honduras,Kenya,Mali,Nepal,Niger,Nigeria,Senegal,andU