讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)+落選后的嫉妒與友誼修復(fù)：心靈的覺(jué)醒之旅 講義 高三上學(xué)期期中聯(lián)考英語(yǔ)試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。“We’vegotthis,”myfriendAlexlaughedloudlyaswesteppedoffthelibrarysteps.“Absolutely,we’vegotthis,”Iagreed,performingalittlevictorydanceonthesidewalkoncethelibrarydoorhadclosedbehindus.Wehadbothbeennominated(提名)fortheYouthExcellenceProgram,anhonorandachancealmosteverystudentwascrazyabout.Thatweekend,AlexandIsatinmylivingroom,carefullycompletingtheprogramapplication.Weeachaimedtoshowwehadallqualitiestheprogramvalued:academicexcellence,leadership,communityservice,integrity,andcivicresponsibility.Idetailedmydevotiontochallengingcourses,whileAlexdescribedhisvolunteerworkatthelocalfoodbank.Weleftnostoneunturned,fullyconfidentinourjointsuccess.Thefollowingday,wesubmittedourapplicationstotheteacherhopefully.Weekspassed.Thenoneday,Ireceivedaletterabouttheproject.Irushedoutoftheclassroomandopenedit.Ifeltastabofsadnessrightinmyheart:mynamewasnotonthelist.Atthatverymoment,IsawAlexcamejoggingover,wavinghisletterwithabeamingsmile.Itwasclearhehadnewsthatcontrastedwithmyown.Withouthesitation,Iturnedawaytoavoidhim.Iknewhewaseagertosharehisjoy.Perhaps,heevenhadplannedtocelebratethegoodnewstogetherwithme.ButIjustcouldn’tfaceit:

theypickedhimbutrefusedme.Howcouldfatebesounjust?Angeranddespairjustblindedme.Thatafternoon,ontheschoolbus,IsataloneandavoidedeyecontactwithAlex.Whenthebusarrivedatmystreet,Ijustjumpedoff,withoutsayinggoodbyeorsmilingtohim.Ihurriedhome,thrusting(塞)theletterintomymom’shands.Iburiedmyfaceinthecushions,sobbinguncontrollablyaswavesofheartachesweptoverme.注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:

Fromthatdayon,Ididn’ttalktoAlex._________________________________Paragraph2:

Finally,Momtalkedwithme,sayingAlexwasn’ttheonetoblame.

___________文章大意：“我”和朋友亞歷克斯都被提名參加青年卓越計(jì)劃，周末一起精心準(zhǔn)備申請(qǐng)材料，信心滿(mǎn)滿(mǎn)。幾周后“我”收到未入選的通知，而亞歷克斯顯然入選了，“我”因嫉妒和失落而避開(kāi)他，獨(dú)自傷心難過(guò)，甚至對(duì)亞歷克斯產(chǎn)生怨恨，回家后向媽媽哭訴。五處伏筆及回應(yīng)：伏筆：兩人都被提名且精心準(zhǔn)備申請(qǐng)，都認(rèn)為能成功?；貞?yīng)：結(jié)果一人入選一人落選，形成巨大反差，導(dǎo)致“我”心理失衡。伏筆：“我”在收到落選通知時(shí)看到亞歷克斯跑來(lái)且面帶笑容?；貞?yīng)：這促使“我”因嫉妒而轉(zhuǎn)身避開(kāi)他，為后續(xù)兩人關(guān)系的破裂埋下伏筆。伏筆：“我”在公交車(chē)上獨(dú)自避開(kāi)亞歷克斯。回應(yīng)：續(xù)寫(xiě)中兩人關(guān)系持續(xù)僵持，直到媽媽介入。伏筆：“我”回家后把信塞給媽媽并哭訴?；貞?yīng)：媽媽因此與“我”談心，開(kāi)導(dǎo)“我”，推動(dòng)故事發(fā)展。伏筆：“我”認(rèn)為命運(yùn)不公?；貞?yīng)：媽媽的開(kāi)導(dǎo)讓“我”重新審視自己的想法，認(rèn)識(shí)到不應(yīng)遷怒于他人。續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)：第一段：從那以后，我繼續(xù)冷落亞歷克斯。在學(xué)校里，我看到他和其他同學(xué)說(shuō)笑，心中的怨恨更甚。他試圖找我說(shuō)話(huà)，我都冷漠以對(duì)，我們之間的友誼仿佛被一道無(wú)形的墻隔開(kāi)，我沉浸在自己的痛苦和嫉妒中無(wú)法自拔。第二段：媽媽告訴我，亞歷克斯也很關(guān)心我，他的入選是他努力的結(jié)果，不應(yīng)把自己的失敗歸咎于他。我開(kāi)始反思自己的行為，意識(shí)到自己的狹隘。我決定向亞歷克斯道歉，重新修復(fù)我們的友誼，也明白要學(xué)會(huì)正視自己的失敗。情感線(xiàn)：開(kāi)始是落選后的極度失落、嫉妒與憤怒，對(duì)亞歷克斯產(chǎn)生怨恨而冷漠對(duì)待，在媽媽開(kāi)導(dǎo)后，從自我反思中的愧疚到最后想要修復(fù)友誼的釋然與成長(zhǎng)。故事線(xiàn)：“我”落選后與入選的亞歷克斯關(guān)系破裂，媽媽與“我”談心，“我”反思并決定修復(fù)友誼，重新面對(duì)自己的失敗。主旨升華句：Truefriendshipshouldwithstandthetestofbothsuccessandfailure.Jealousyisapoisonthatcancorrodethebondoffriendship,butunderstandingcanhealit.Whenfacedwithsetbacks,weshouldlookinwardratherthanlashoutatothers.Successandfailurearebuttwosidesofthesamecoin;it'sourattitudethatmatters.Arealfriendisnotonewhosharesonlyjoysbutalsostandsbyintimesofsorrowandself-reflection.寫(xiě)作示范一：Paragraph1:Fromthatdayon,Ididn’ttalktoAlex.Inschoolhallways,Ipretendednottoseehim.Hewasalwayswithagroupoffriends,laughingandchatting.EachtimeIwitnessedhishappiness,mybitternessgrew.Hetriedtoapproachmeseveraltimes,butIjustwalkedaway,leavinghimwithapuzzledandhurtlook.Myheartwashardenedbyenvyandself-pity,andIwastrappedinmyowndarkworldofdisappointment.Paragraph2:Finally,Momtalkedwithme,sayingAlexwasn’ttheonetoblame.ShepointedoutthatAlexhadhisowneffortsandmerits,andmyfailurewasnothisfault.Hissuccessshouldbeaninspirationratherthanasourceofresentment.Ilistenedandgraduallyrealizedmymistake.IdecidedtoswallowmyprideandtalktoAlex.Ifoundhiminthelibraryandsaidsorry.Heforgavemeinstantly,andwehugged.Ilearnedthatfriendshipismorepreciousthananycompetitionresult.寫(xiě)作示范二：Paragraph1:Fromthatdayon,Ididn’ttalktoAlex.Ichangedmyseatinclasstobeasfarawayfromhimaspossible.Atrecess,Iavoidedtheplacesheusuallywent.Ievenunfollowedhimonsocialmedia.ThemoreIisolatedmyself,themoreIfeltjustifiedinmyanger.Butdeepdown,asmallvoicewastellingmeIwasbeingunfair.However,Ichosetoignoreitandcontinuedmycoldwarwithhim.Paragraph2:Finally,Momtalkedwithme,sayingAlexwasn’ttheonetoblame.ShetoldmethatAlexhadbeenaskingaboutmeandwasworried.Shesaidthatlifeisfullofcompetitionsandrejections,andweshouldhandlethemwithgrace.Ifeltashamed.Thenextday,IwaitedforAlexattheschoolgate.Whenhearrived,Ilookedhimintheeyeandapologized.Hesmiledandsaidheunderstood.Wewalkedintoschooltogether,ourfriendshipstrongerafterthistrial.參考答案Paragraph1:Fromthatdayon,Ididn’ttalktoAlex.Iburiedmyselfinmystudies,tryingtoforgetaboutthewholething.ButeverytimeIsawhimintheclassroomorinthehallway,apangofpainandjealousyshotthroughme.Istoppedparticipatingingroupactivitiesthathewaspartof.Ourmutualfriendsnoticedthechangeandtriedtointervene,butIwastoostubborntolisten.Iconvincedmyselfthathedidn'tcareaboutmeanymorenowthathehadachievedwhatIhadn't.Paragraph2:Finally,