北師大版高三英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)類型二第6講續(xù)寫話題生活趣事課件

第三部分寫作專題突破類型二讀后續(xù)寫第6講續(xù)寫熱門話題生活趣事閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。(2021·浙江1月卷改編)Pumpkin(南瓜)carvingatHalloweenisafamilytradition．WevisitalocalfarmeveryOctober．Inthepumpkinfield，Icompetewithmythreebrothersandsistertoseekoutthebiggestpumpkin．Mydadhasarulethatwehavetocarryourpumpkinsbackhome，andastheeldestchildIhaveanadvantage—Icarriedan85-pounderbacklastyear．Thisyear，itwashardtotellwhethermyprizeortheonechosenbymy14-year-oldbrother，Jason，wasthewinner．Unfortunatelyweforgottoweighthembeforetakingouttheirinsides，butIwasdeterminedtoprovemypoint．Allofuswerehardatworkatthekitchentable，withmymomfilmingtheannualevent．I'munsurenowwhyIthoughtforcingmyheadinsidethepumpkinwouldsettlethematter，butitseemedtomakeperfectsenseatthetime．Withthepumpkinrestingonthetable，holeuppermost，Ibentoverandpressedmyheadagainsttheopening．AtfirstIgotjammedjustabovemyeyesandthen，asIwentonwithmytask，unwillingtoquit，mynosebrieflypreventedentry．FinallyImanagedtoputmywholeheadintoit，likeacork(軟木塞)forcedintoabottle．Iwasabletostraightenupwiththehugepumpkinrestingonmyshoulders．Myexcitementwasshort-lived．Thepumpkinwasheavy．“I'mgoingtosetitdown，now，”Isaid，andwithJasonhelpingtosupportitsweight，Ibentbackoverthetabletogiveitsomewheretorest．ItwasonlywhenItriedtoremovemyheadthatIrealizedgettingoutwasgoingtobelessstraightforwardthangettingin．WhenIpulledhard，mynosegotintheway．IgotintoapanicasIpressedfirmlyagainstthetableandmovedmyheadaroundtryingtofindtherightangle，butitwasnouse．“Ican'tgetitout！”Ishouted，myvoicesoundingunnaturallyloudintheenclosedspace．注意：1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2．請(qǐng)按如下格式作答。Iwasstuckforfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger．__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ThevideowaspostedthedaybeforeHalloween．____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________寫作指導(dǎo)：Ⅰ．梳理原文細(xì)節(jié)，理清篇章結(jié)構(gòu)。Ⅱ．依據(jù)首句提示，構(gòu)思后續(xù)情節(jié)。第一段：由續(xù)寫第一段及續(xù)寫第二段的提示語(yǔ)可知，該段應(yīng)該描述我的頭被拔出來(lái)的整個(gè)過(guò)程。第二段：由續(xù)寫第二段的提示語(yǔ)可知，該段應(yīng)該描述這段視頻被上傳到網(wǎng)上走紅，我也成了網(wǎng)絡(luò)紅人。范文佳作：I

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Halloween．Mybigrednoseandmysorechinbecamenetizens'favoritetopic．Bytheendofthatday，ithadover1，000views．PeopleaskedMomtoputitonYouTube，andweevengotcallsfromTVbreakfastshows．Meanwhile，thevideostartedrackinguphundredsofthousandsofviews．WhenIwentout，IwasrecognizedbypeopleIhadnevermet．Thepumpkinalsobecameaminorcelebrity．Passers-byandtrick-or-treaterswouldknockandaskforselfieswithit．WhatanunforgettableHalloween!話題佳句：1．Amusedbyhissillymistake，welaughedourheadoff．我們被他愚蠢的錯(cuò)誤逗樂(lè)了，狂笑不已。2．Withcrowdsoftheaudiencearound，soembarrassedwasshethatshestoodthereawkwardly，feelingthebloodrushtoherface．周圍有大批觀眾，她感到很難堪，尷尬地站在那里，感覺血液涌上了自己的臉。3．Thecookiescooledonthetable，fillingthekitchenwiththeirsweetsmell，makinghermouthwater．小甜餅在桌上變涼了，廚房里充滿了甜甜的味道，饞得她直流口水。4．Seeingnootherpeoplenoticeus，Iroseandslippedoutofthehousesilently．見沒(méi)有其他人注意到我們，我便站起來(lái)，悄悄地溜出了房子。5．Heslidtothewindowofthehut，raisedhimselfontiptoe，andstoleaglance．他溜到小屋的窗口，踮起腳尖，偷偷看了一眼。6．Ispenttherestofthedayinastateofexcitement，theextremelygoodmoodIhadeverexperienced．那天剩下的時(shí)間我都在興奮中度過(guò)，這是我經(jīng)歷過(guò)的最愉快的心情。7．Islowlypulledmypictureoutofmydrawerandhelditup．Theentireclasssuddenlyexplodedwithlaughter!我把我的畫慢慢地從抽屜里拿出來(lái)，舉了起來(lái)，全班同學(xué)突然哄堂大笑！8．Whenrecognizingwhothevisitorwas，Johnopenedhismouthwithhiseyeswidening．當(dāng)認(rèn)出來(lái)訪者是誰(shuí)時(shí)，約翰張大了嘴巴，眼睛睜得大大的。9．Shedroppedhereyesandstaredatherfeet，hopingnoonewouldnoticehowembarrassedshewas．她垂下眼睛，盯著自己的腳，希望沒(méi)有人會(huì)注意到她有多尷尬。10．Shepulledoffhershoesanddashedintoherbedroom，barefootandfast．她脫下鞋子，光著腳飛快地跑到自己臥室中。11．Theylaughedloudly，exceptforme，