高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+西雅圖的舞臺夢與意外波折之旅 課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)西雅圖的舞臺夢與意外波折之旅1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文WhenIwasinmiddleschoolmyfamilymovedtoSeattle,wheremyparentsstartedtheirnewbusiness—asmallgrocerystoredownstairsmyhouse.Asagirlofshyandreservednature,Ihadtotakeafreshstarttofitintothecitylife.Onesunnyday,myschoolannouncedanexcitingevent,atalentshowforthelocalfoodbank.StudentswereencouragedtoshowcasetheiruniquetalentsinfrontofthepublicinthecityhallonNationalDay.Abuzzofexcitementfilledtheschoolaseveryonebeganpreparingforthebigday.Deepdown,Ifeltasparkofcuriosityandadesiretoparticipate.However,myself-doubtheldmeback,“Idon’thaveanyspecialskillstoshare.”4續(xù)寫原文Daysturnedintoweeks,andthetalentshowdrewcloser.Icouldn’tshaketheupsettingfeelinguntilonedayEmma,oneofthemostpopulargirlsinmyclass,cametomewhileIwashelpinginthegrocerystoreafterclass.“Howaboutsingingtogetherinthetalentshow?”Shegrinned(笑),“Iheardyousingingatune,alongthewaybackhome.Ican’thelpfollowingyouhere.”Gosh,Icouldn’tbelievemyears.Emma,withpersonalityandpopularity,acknowledgedmylittletalent.SinceEmmahadtheworld’sprettiestvoice,Ifeltlikebeingfavouredbyfortune.5續(xù)寫原文“Youtwo?Thetalentshowforthefoodbank?”Mymumbenttowardsusandherfacelitup.“Abigoccasion.”Thenalightbulbseemedtogoinherhead.“Whynotpractiserightnowupstairs?Ibetyou’llbeaperfectmatch.”Winkingatus,sheseemedtoknowwewerethinkingalike.EmmaandIembarkedonrehearsing(排練)almosteverysingledayafterschool.Webrainstormed,exchangedideasandrehearsedthescene.Asthedaysrolledby,Iwasfeelingprettygoodaboutouract.Butthedaybeforetheperformance,Emmacalledthatshehadanacutestomachacheandwasnotinanyshapetoperform.6段首句Paragraph1:Iwascompletelyshockedbythenews.Paragraph2:Finallycamethebigmoment.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9本文以人物為中心展開，文章講述了文章講述了作者一家搬至西雅圖后，所在學(xué)校計劃舉辦為當(dāng)?shù)厥澄镢y行籌款的才藝表演。生性害羞的作者本因自認為無特長而想放棄，然而人氣頗高的艾瑪卻邀請她一同唱歌，這讓作者受寵若驚并開始積極準(zhǔn)備。在媽媽的提議下，兩人在作者家樓上刻苦排練，作者也逐漸對表演有了信心。可就在表演前一天，艾瑪突發(fā)急性胃痛無法登臺，這突如其來的變故使即將到來的才藝展示陷入了未知與危機之中，讓作者再次陷入了困境與糾結(jié)，不知該如何應(yīng)對這一局面。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Iwascompletelyshockedbythenews.我被這個消息徹底震驚了。腦袋里瞬間一片空白，滿心都是即將到來的演出該怎么辦。我在房間里來回踱步，手中緊緊攥著為表演準(zhǔn)備的歌詞紙，手心里全是冷汗。我試圖給艾瑪打電話詢問情況，可電話一直無人接聽。無奈之下，我只能獨自練習(xí)，可每唱一句，都仿佛能聽到艾瑪?shù)穆曇?，心里越發(fā)慌亂。我想過放棄，可又不甘心就這樣辜負了大家的期待，內(nèi)心陷入了極度的掙扎與煎熬之中。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Finallycamethebigmoment.終于，那個重要的時刻來臨了。我站在后臺，緊張得雙腿發(fā)軟，看著臺下熙熙攘攘的人群，心提到了嗓子眼。當(dāng)主持人報出我們節(jié)目的名字時，我深吸一口氣，硬著頭皮走上舞臺。聚光燈打在身上，我感覺有些暈眩，腦海里突然閃過和艾瑪排練的點點滴滴。我緩緩開口，起初聲音還有些顫抖，但隨著歌曲的推進，我漸漸沉浸其中，忘記了緊張與不安，用盡全力去演唱，仿佛在那一刻，舞臺上只有我和對音樂的熱愛，我要用歌聲為這次波折的經(jīng)歷畫上一個獨特的句號。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Iwascompletelyshockedbythenews.Myheartseemedtostopbeatingforasecond.Icouldn'tbelievethatEmmawasunabletoperformatthelastminute.PanicfloodedovermeasIthoughtabouttheapproachingtalentshow.Ipacedbackandforthinmyroom,thesheetoflyricsfortheperformancecrumpledinmysweatyhand.ItriedcallingEmmaseveraltimes,buttherewasnoanswer.Withnootherchoice,Istartedtopracticealone,yeteverynoteIsangremindedmeofher,makingmyuneasinessgrow.Thethoughtofgivingupcrossedmymind,butIcouldn'tbeartoletdownthosewhohadexpectations.Iwastrappedinastateofextremestruggleandanxiety.14范文呈現(xiàn)Finallycamethebigmoment.Standingbackstage,mylegsfeltlikejelly.Ipeekedatthebustlingcrowdintheauditoriumandmyheartleapedintomythroat.Whenthehostannouncedthenameofourprogram,Itookadeepbreathandforcedmyselftowalkontothestage.Thespotlightshoneonme,andIfeltabitdizzy.Allofasudden,thememoriesofrehearsingwithEmmaflashedthroughmymind.Istartedtosing,myvoicetremblingatfirst.Butasthesongprogressed,Igraduallyimmersedmyselfinit,forgettingaboutthenervousness.Isangwithallmymight,asifatthatmoment,therewasonlymeandmyloveformusiconthestage.Iwasdeterminedtoendthiseventfulexperiencewithmybestperformance.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)IwascompletelyshockedbythenewsthatEmmawasunabletoperformattheeleventhhour.Myheart,whichseemedtoceasebeatingmomentarily,wasoverwhelmedbyadelugeofpanicastheapproachingtalentshowloomedlarge.Pacingbackandforthinmyroom,withthecrumpledsheetofperformancelyricsinmysweatyhand,IrepeatedlydialedEmma'snumber,onlytobegreetedbysilence.Leftwithnoalternative,Icommencedpracticingalone,everynoteIsangaccompaniedbyagrowingsenseofuneaseasmemoriesofEmmahauntedme.Thethoughtofthrowinginthetoweldidcrossmymind;however,itwastheexpectationsofothersthatanchoredme,trappingmeinamaelstromofextremestruggleandanxiety.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Finallycamethebigmoment.Standingbackstage,mylegsaswobblyasjelly,Ipeekedattheteemingcrowdintheauditorium,myheartleapingintomythroat.Whenthehostannouncedthenameofourprogram,Itookadeepbreathand,withdetermination,steppedontothestage.Bathedinthespotlight,Ifeltatrifledizzy.Suddenly,memoriesofrehearsingwithEmmaflashedacrossmymind.Istartedtosing,myvoicequiveringinitially.Butasthesongunfolded,Igraduallyimmersedmyselfinit,thenervousnessfadingaway.Itwasasif,onthats