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--應用文BiodiversityGradeanalysisofWriting19分及以上5人LearningObjectivesBytheendoftheclass,youwillbeableto:1.knowthebasicstructureandlearnsomespecificexpressionsaboutmainwritingpoints;2.Identifyandcorrectyourproblemsandpolishyourwriting.假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Jasper對你在“科學三分鐘”(3-minuteScienceSpeechActivity)中介紹的生物多樣性研究很感興趣，想了解你如何應對研究中的挑戰(zhàn)。請你寫一封郵件回復，內(nèi)容包括：1．研究困難；2．解決方法。注意：1．寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右；2．請按如下格式在答題紙的相應位置作答。ActivityI.AnalyzeandOrganiseGenre(體裁):Person(人稱):Tense(時態(tài)):Contents(內(nèi)容):aletterofreplymainlyfirstpersonmainlypasttense1.challenges

2.solutions-Para.1:

backgroundinformationwritingpurpose(replyandshare)-Para.2:challenges&solutions

-Para.3:expresswishes，feelingsandearlyreplyStructure:Para1：

backgroundinformationwritingpurposePara2：

challenges：

limitedareasextinctionofsomesamplessolutions:

askschoolforhelpapplynewtechnology句型，詞匯Para3：

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ActivityⅡ.IdentifyYourProblems審題—體裁偏差+人稱誤用AletterofsuggestionAletterofreplymainlyfirstperson審題—中心要點偏離主題biodiversityresearch:challengesandsolutions3-minuteScienceSpeechActivityActivityⅡ.IdentifyYourProblems審題—缺失要點2+語言表達準確性limitedaccesstodifferentcreatures

ActivityⅡ.IdentifyYourProblemsByexpandingourresearchrange/searchinginformationonline構(gòu)思—要點1、2沒有針對性

ActivityⅡ.IdentifyYourProblemshardandtime-consumingtosearchfortheinformationonlybyreferencebooksWhy?limitedways?devices?fewaccesstospecies?書寫：不允許使用涂改筆；書寫潦草；劃痕太多；結(jié)構(gòu)布局：兩段或四段，應分為三段審題：人稱；體裁para2構(gòu)思/要點：偏離中心主題（生物多樣性）；

要點缺失；要點沒有針對性；語言：語義表達的準確性；語篇連貫性；詞匯和句式的豐富度

ActivityⅡ.IdentifyYourProblemsReflectionCheckyourcompositionandfindoutyourprolemsMainTask:Learnhowtoexpresschallengesandsolutionsaccuratelyandspecifically假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Jasper對你在“科學三分鐘”(3-minuteScienceSpeechActivity)中介紹的生物多樣性研究很感興趣，想了解你如何應對研究中的挑戰(zhàn)。請你寫一封郵件回復，內(nèi)容包括：1．研究困難；2．解決方法。注意：1．寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右；2．請按如下格式在答題紙的相應位置作答。Ⅲ.ReadandExploreWhatcouldbethechallenges?Howtodealwiththem?

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others...Whatchallengeswouldyoufacewhenexploringtheseaspects?Andsolutions?havenoaccesstosomespecieshardtoobserveandrecord...time-consumingtocollectdatausedronesandGPSdevicesforremoteobservationexpandingtheobservationrangelackspeciesknowledge/expertise（inaccuracy）askbiologyteacherforhelpturntotheInternetimproveidentificationskillscostalot(time;money;humanresources;devices)limitedexperimentalconditionsandequipmentapplyforschoolgrantsseeksponsorshippurchaseprofessionalinstrumentssharingresources(borrow)Ⅳ.PolishyourwritingChallenges:①sbhavedifficulty/troubleindoing...

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others...Whatchallengeswouldyoufacewhenexploringtheseaspects?Andsolutions?havenoaccesstosomespecieshardtoobserveandrecord...time-consumingtocollectdatausedronesandGPSdevicesforremoteobservationexpandingtheobservationrangelackspeciesknowledge/expertise（inaccuracy）askbiologyteacherforhelpturntotheInternetimproveidentificationskillscostalot(time;money;humanresources;devices)limitedexperimentalconditionsandequipmentapplyforschoolgrantsseeksponsorshippurchaseprofessionalinstrumentssharingresources(borrow)IV.SampleWritingDearJasper,I’mgladthatyoufoundmypresentationonbiodiversityresearchatthe“3-MinuteScienceSpeechActivity”interesting.Ithasbeenanexcitingyetchallengingexperience.

Onesignificantdifficulty

wasidentifyingnumerousspeciesinthefield,whichrequirednotonlytimebutalsoalevelofexpertise(專業(yè)知識)thatIinitiallylacked.Toaddressthis,Iemployedimagerecognitionsoftware(圖像識別軟件),simplifying(簡化)theidentificationprocess,andaskedlocalbiologistsforhelp,whoseknowledgeprovedinvaluableandpractical.Additionally,collectingdatainremoteareaswasquitechallenging.Uponencounteringthetrouble,Iutiliz