高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+托尼街頭奇遇：直面不速之+“猩”+課件

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)托尼街頭奇遇：直面不速之“猩”1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Tonywaswalkingdownthestreet.Hewastryingtogettoastorebeforeitclosed,andhewasnotthinkingaboutanythingbutthat.Hehadhisshoppinglistinhandandwasrushingthroughthecrosswalks,tryingtoavoidgettinghitbycars.Arrivingatacrosswalk,Tonystopped,waitingforthegreenlighttocross.Theflashingredhandshowedhimnottowalk,butinfact,hedidconsiderwhethertogothroughtheredlight,astherewerenotmanycars.Still,itdidn’tseemlikeagoodidea,sohecontinuedtowait.Notfaraway,heheardamantalkingonthephone,sayingsomethingaboutanimals.”4續(xù)寫原文Outofnowhere,agorilla（大猩猩）appearedandheadedovertoTonyonitsfeet.ThereweresomanypeoplearoundthatTonydidn’tnoticeitatfirst,hismindtotallyfocusedonthestore,whichhecouldseefaraway,justablockortwoahead.Anxious,Tonyrecheckedhislist.Ifhedidn’tgeteverythingonthelist,hismotherwouldbeangry.Heoftenforgotsomething,sohewantedtomakesurehediditrightthistime.Justashewascheckinghislistcarefully,hefeltataponhisshoulder.“Pardonme,”Tonysaid,steppingtooneside,incaseithadbeenhisproblem.5續(xù)寫原文Hefeltanothertap.“Hey,watchyourself.”Tonylookedoverinanger,onlytorealizehiswarningfellondeafears—orrather,hairyones.Hewasnosetonosewithagorilla!Hesteppedback,suddenlyfearful.Thegorillamadeashort,lowsoundandfollowedhim.Tonylookedaroundhimselfindisbelief.Allaroundhimwerepeoplewhowerewatchingwithgreatinterest.Somelookedafraidandwerebackingaway.Somewhisperedbehindtheirhandsandwatchedwithwideeyes.Afewevenhadtheirphonesoutandwererecordingvideosortakingpictures.6段首句Paragraph1：Tony’sheartskippedabeatwhenherealizedthesituation.Paragraph2：Asthegorillawasledaway,Tonyletoutadeepbreathinrelief.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章講述了托尼著急趕在商店關(guān)門前去購(gòu)物，他一門心思趕路，手持購(gòu)物清單穿梭在街道和人行橫道。在一處人行橫道等待綠燈時(shí)，他雖有闖紅燈的念頭但最終還是選擇等待。此時(shí)不遠(yuǎn)處有人在講關(guān)于動(dòng)物的電話，接著一只大猩猩突然出現(xiàn)走向他，而托尼因?qū)Ｗ⒂谶h(yuǎn)處的商店起初未察覺。托尼著急購(gòu)物生怕遺漏物品惹媽媽生氣，再次查看清單時(shí)大猩猩輕拍他，他轉(zhuǎn)頭竟發(fā)現(xiàn)是大猩猩，震驚之余又有些害怕，周圍人有的害怕后退，有的則在圍觀拍照錄像。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Tony’sheartskippedabeatwhenherealizedthesituation.Tony的心臟在看到大猩猩的那一刻仿佛停跳了一拍，他瞪大了眼睛，滿臉驚恐地與大猩猩對(duì)視著，雙腳像是被釘在了地上，無法挪動(dòng)分毫。周圍人們的驚呼聲和倒吸冷氣的聲音仿佛漸漸遠(yuǎn)去，他的世界里此刻只剩下這只近在咫尺的大猩猩。它那龐大的身軀和強(qiáng)壯的四肢，讓Tony真切地感受到了危險(xiǎn)的氣息。他的大腦飛速運(yùn)轉(zhuǎn)，卻一片空白，不知道該如何應(yīng)對(duì)這突如其來的狀況，冷汗不停地從額頭冒出，順著臉頰滑落。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Asthegorillawasledaway,Tonyletoutadeepbreathinrelief.就在Tony感到絕望之時(shí)，動(dòng)物管理員終于趕到，熟練地用專業(yè)工具和手段引導(dǎo)著大猩猩離開。隨著大猩猩逐漸遠(yuǎn)去的身影，Tony緊繃的神經(jīng)終于放松下來，他長(zhǎng)長(zhǎng)地呼出一口氣，身體也隨之微微顫抖。他用手擦了擦額頭上的冷汗，環(huán)顧四周，看到那些還在指指點(diǎn)點(diǎn)、議論紛紛的人群，心中涌起一股復(fù)雜的情緒。他拍了拍自己的胸口，暗自慶幸這場(chǎng)意外終于結(jié)束，然后整理了一下被弄亂的衣服，再次看了看手中的購(gòu)物清單，決定還是先去完成購(gòu)物任務(wù)，只是腳步相比之前放慢了許多，仿佛還未從剛才的驚嚇中完全緩過神來。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Tony'sheartskippedabeatwhenherealizedthesituation.Hiseyeswidenedinsheerhorrorashecamefacetofacewiththegorilla.Theworldaroundhimseemedtofreezeforamoment,withthebustlingstreetsoundsfadingintothebackground.Hecouldfeelhispalmsgettingsweatyandhislegsturningtojelly.Everyinstinctinhisbodyscreamedtorun,butfearheldhimcaptive.Hismindraced,franticallysearchingforawaytoescapeoratleastprotecthimself.Thegorilla'sintensegazeboreintohim,makingitimpossibleforhimtolookaway.Hewasacutelyawareofthedangerhewasin,andthethoughtofwhatmighthappennextsentshiversdownhisspine.14范文呈現(xiàn)Asthegorillawasledaway,Tonyletoutadeepbreathinrelief.Hisshouldersslumpedasthetensiondrainedoutofhisbody.Hewatchedtheanimalbeingescortedoff,stillinadazefromtheencounter.Theonlookers'chatterandtheclickingofcamerasnowseemeddistantandunimportant.Hewipedthesweatfromhisforeheadwiththebackofhishandandtookamomenttocomposehimself.Glancingathisshoppinglist,whichhehadnearlycrumpledinhishandduringthecommotion,herealizedhowclosehehadcometonotonlymissingoutonhisshoppingbutalsofacingapotentiallylife-threateningsituation.Withashakystep,hebegantomakehiswaytowardsthestoreagain,thistimewithanewfoundgratitudefortheordinaryandtheuneventful.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Tony'sheartskippedabeatthemomenthegraspedthesituation.Standingthere,petrified,hewasconfrontedbythegorillawhosesheersizeandpresencewereintimidating.Neverhadheexpectedsuchasurrealencounteronhiswaytothestore.Hismindwentblank,withfeargrippinghimtightly.Itwasasiftimestoodstill,thehustleandbustleofthestreetfadingintoinsignificance.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Then,tohisgreatrelief,thegorillawasskillfullyledawaybytheanimalhandlers.Withthedangergone,Tonyletoutadeepbreath,hisbodytremblingslightly.Onlythendidhefullyappreciatetheordinarinessoflifethathehado