2025屆中考英語復(fù)習(xí)寫作培優(yōu)冊（外研版廣西專用）07-人與自我-主題7 經(jīng)歷與感受

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高頻主題三階寫作指導(dǎo)人與自我主題7

經(jīng)歷與感受（與家人、朋友之間的事情；讓你成長、改變的經(jīng)歷；難忘的經(jīng)歷）【教材模塊/單元鏈接】外研版人教版譯林牛津版八（下）M1

感受八（下）M2

個人經(jīng)歷九（上）M4

獨自在家的生活九（下）M3

現(xiàn)在的生活&過去的生活八（下）U5

難忘的事情九（全）U4

我們的變化九（全）U11

感受八（下）U1

改變（過去和現(xiàn)在）九（上）U2

顏色和心情九（上）U3

不同的煩惱一階

素材積累與訓(xùn)練素材積累短語與句型積極正面的感受1.be

deeply

moved

by...

被……深深地感動2.be

thankful

to

sb.感激某人3.be

proud

of...

為……感到驕傲/自豪4.be

pleased

with...

對……滿意5.be

surprised

at…

對……感到驚訝6.be

sure

about…

確信；對……有把握7.be

excited

about…

對……感到興奮8.be

of

help/helpful有幫助的9.enjoy

doing

sth.喜歡做某事10.enjoy

oneself=have

a

good/great/nice/wonderful

time

玩得開心11.look

up

to欽佩，仰慕12.cheer

up使……振作13.The

most

exciting

moment

was…

最激動人心的時刻是……14.a

sense

of…

一種……感15.can’t

wait

to

do

sth.

迫不及待做某事?lián)?其他感受1.be

afraid

of

（doing）

sth.害怕/擔(dān)心（做）某事2.be

afraid

to

do

sth.因害怕而不敢做某事3.be/feel

sorry

for…

為……感到抱歉4.be

tired

of/be

bored

with…

對……感到厭倦5.be

angry

with

sb.生某人的氣6.be

angry

at/about

sth.因某事而生氣7.be

mad

at

sb.生某人的氣8.be

in/get

into

trouble陷入困境9.say

sorry

to…

向……道歉10.It’s

a

pity

that…

很遺憾……開頭句1.I’m

having

a

wonderful

time

in

Beijing.

I’ve

done

so

many

things!［外研八（下）M2］2.During

my

lifetime，

I’ve

had

a

lot

of

unforgettable

experiences.

Among

them，

the

most

important

experience

was

a

basketball

game

when

I

was

14.

［人教九（全）U11］3.Everyone

has

his

or

her

own

fears.

No

matter

how

big

or

small

it

is，

learning

how

to

overcome

it

is

especially

important.中間句介紹經(jīng)歷與表達(dá)感受1.I

often

feel

a

bit

sad

at

first

when

I

leave

my

mum

and

dad

for

a

few

days,

and

I’m

quite

shy

when

I’m

with

strangers.

I

feel

nervous

when

I

speak

Chinese,

but

I’ll

be

fine

in

a

few

days.［外研八（下）M1］2.I

worried

that

I

had

let

my

teacher

and

classmates

down.

But

to

my

surprise，

they

all

comforted

me

with

warm

words.［人教九（全）U11］3.Last

Thursday,

Wang

Hong

saw

an

elderly

blind

man

wandering

around

the

street

corner

on

her

way

home.

Wang

Hong

offered

to

help

him

cross

the

road

after

communicating

with

the

old

man.

When

they

crossed

the

road,

the

drivers

on

the

road

stopped

their

cars

and

waited

patiently.

Wang

Hong

took

the

old

man

across

the

road

and

said

goodbye

to

him.

I

think

Wang

Hong

is

really

a

very

warm-hearted

and

kind

girl.

I

should

learn

from

her

and

try

my

best

to

help

others.結(jié)尾句1.From

this

experience，

I

learned

that

it’s

not

terrible

to

fail

as

long

as

I

can

stand

up

in

failure.［人教九（全）U11］2.In

short,

I

think

the

excellent

game

will

be

in

my

mind

forever.3.I

was

so

thankful

that

I

decided

to

help

others

from

then

on.4.In

my

view,

helping

others

gives

me

a

strong

feeling

of

being

needed

and

brings

me

happiness.俗語/諺語1.Many

hands

make

light

work.眾人拾柴火焰高。2.Failure

is

the

mother

of

success.失敗是成功之母。3.Experience

is

the

best

teacher.經(jīng)驗是最好的老師。4.God

helps

those

who

help

themselves.天助自助者。句型訓(xùn)練1.The

memories

of

the

junior

high

school

are

sweet.

I

will

always

keep

them

in

my

heart.（用so…that…

引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句升格句子）___________________________________________________________________________________________The

memories

of

the

junior

high

school

are

so

sweet

that

I

will

always

keep

them

in

my

heart.2.對我來說，最難忘的經(jīng)歷是和同學(xué)們?nèi)ヒ盃I。（漢譯英）____________________________________________________________________________________As

for

me,

the

most

unforgettable

experience

is

going

camping

with

my

classmates.3.每當(dāng)我?guī)椭鷦e人的時候，都會有一種強烈的幸福感。（漢譯英）_______________________________________________________________________I

always

have

a

strong

feeling

of

happiness

when

I

give

others

a

hand.4.遺憾的是，我們沒有時間品嘗當(dāng)?shù)氐氖澄?。（漢譯英）_______________________________________________________It’s

a

pity

that

we

didn’t

have

time

to

try

the

local

food.5.我非常感謝我的英語老師，在她的幫助下，我取得了很大的進(jìn)步。（漢譯英）____________________________________________________________________________________I’m

very

thankful

to

my

English

teacher,

and

with

her

help,

I

have

made

great

progress.二階

主題典例探究

心若芬芳，花自開。生活中總有一些瞬間讓我們心生歡喜:一杯熱茶、一次偶遇、抑或是一次成功……某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“My

little

happiness”為題的征文活動。請你用英語寫一篇短文投稿。內(nèi)容包括：1.一次讓你心生歡喜的經(jīng)歷（交到新朋友、得到贊揚……）；2.讓你心生歡喜的原因；3.你的感受/收獲。注意：1.詞數(shù)為80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名及學(xué)校名稱；4.短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：fail

an

exam（未通過考試）,

comfort（v.

&

n.

安慰）,

promise（n.

&

v.

承諾）,

moved（adj.

感動的）My

little

happiness

Happiness

is

always

around

us

if

we

put

our

heart

into

it.

______________________寫作剖析一、仔細(xì)審題1.文體：本文要求記敘一次讓自己心生歡喜的經(jīng)歷，是一篇________；記敘文2.時態(tài)：記敘一次讓自己心生歡喜的經(jīng)歷及自己心生歡喜的原因，時態(tài)以____________為主；介紹自己的感受/收獲，用一般現(xiàn)在時或現(xiàn)在完成時；一般過去時3.人稱：記敘一次讓自己心生歡喜的經(jīng)歷及自己心生歡喜的原因，用第____人稱和第____人稱；介紹自己的感受/收獲用第____人稱。一三一二、構(gòu)思框架，列出要點構(gòu)思框架列出要點1.______________________________想要做某事2.___________________與某人分享某物3.____________告訴某人某事4.___________________結(jié)交一個新朋友5._____________________做某事感到高興would

like/love/want

to

do

sth.share

sth.

with

sb.tell

sb.

sth.make

a

new

friendfeel

happy

to

do

sth.6.______________

被……表揚7.______________________________某人下定決心做某事8._________________________我將永遠(yuǎn)記得……9._________________________我真的很高興……be

praised

bymake

up

one’s

mind

to

do

sth.I

will

always

remember…I

feel

really

happy

that…三、遣詞造句，連句成文My

little

happiness

Happiness

is

always

around

us

if

we

put

our

heart

into

it.

I’d

love

to

tell

you

what

happened

in

class

that

day.

I

am

a

shy

girl.

I

am

always

afraid

of

failing

in

the

exam,

because

I

don’t

study

very

well.

However,

that

day,

I

got

my

courage

and

confidence

back.

When

the

teacher

told

me

my

grades

were

not

higher

than

others,

I

was

very

upset.

But

my

teacher

added,

“Your

handwriting

is

the

most

beautiful

writing

in

the

class.”

All

my

classmates

cheered

for

me.

What’s

more,

my

teacher

praised

me,

which

made

me

happy.

I

have

made

up

my

mind

to

study

better,

answer

more

questions

in

class

and

work

harder

on

tests.

I

feel

really

happy

that

I

had

this

experience—it

gave

me

confidence,

courage

and

support

from

my

classmates

and

teachers.三階

寫作實戰(zhàn)訓(xùn)練

在校園生活和家庭生活中，我們經(jīng)常會遇到一些困難。在克服這些困難的過程中，我們收獲了解決問題的經(jīng)驗，且能力也在逐步提升。你校英文報正在開展以“Difficulties

help

me

grow

up”為題的征文活動。請你用英語寫一篇短文投稿。內(nèi)容包括：1.介紹你曾遇到過的一個困難；2.你是如何面對并戰(zhàn)勝它的（向父母尋求幫助、勇敢面對……）；3.克服困難后你的感受/收獲。注意：1.詞數(shù)為80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名及學(xué)校名稱；4.短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：challenge（v.

&

n.挑戰(zhàn)），get

over（克服）Difficulties

help

me

grow

up

Everyone

meets

difficulties

on

the

way

to

success.

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________When

I

was

in

middle

school,

I

had

a

big

problem

with

my

English

learning.

It

was

really

hard

for

me

to

understand

grammar

rules

and

remember

new

words.

To

deal

with

this

challenge,

I

decided

not

to

be

afraid.

Every

day,

I

spent

more

time

studying

English.

I

made

word

cards

and

practiced

writing

simple

sentences.

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________