高三英語一輪復習讀后續(xù)寫思路寫作課件

高考讀后續(xù)寫

ContinuationWritingII

learningobjectives(1)knowthebasicelementsofthegivenpassage;(2)masterthestepsofwritingacontinuationwriting;(3)writeagoodendingtothepassage.1.beconsumed/overwhelmedwithguilt

深感內(nèi)疚2.beashamedofoneself

為自己感到羞愧3.guiltiswrittenalloverone’sface

滿臉愧疚4.lower/hang/dropone’sheadinembarrassment

尷尬地低下頭5.Burdenedbyasenseofguiltn.懊悔；悔恨；自責；1.Janethoughtregretfully,withtearswellingupinhereyes.簡后悔地想，眼里涌出了淚水。2.Iwasovercomebyawaveofguiltandwordsfailedtoexpressmyregret.我被一陣內(nèi)疚所壓倒，言語無法表達我的遺憾。3.Filledwithguilt,IrushedouttoapologizetoTom.我滿懷內(nèi)疚，沖出去向湯姆道歉。候課記背

讀后續(xù)寫:

提供一篇350詞以內(nèi)的材料，要求考生依據(jù)材料內(nèi)容、所給段落開頭語及所標關鍵詞進行續(xù)寫（150詞左右），將其發(fā)展成一篇與給定材料有邏輯銜接、情節(jié)和結構完整的短文。（滿分25分）01原文一致原則內(nèi)容要前后銜接，上下連貫，語言表達風格一致。02曲折性原則凡是故事都應有跌宕起伏，其中人物會遇到困難或問題，但最終能解決。03正能量原則故事內(nèi)容一定要正能量，弘揚社會主義核心價值觀。如迷路了但最終一定回到了家；失敗了或遇到困難了，但最終一定成功了；吵架了但最后一定是言歸于好，和睦相處；犯錯了，最后一定會改過自新，重新做人；賊逃了，最后一定是繩之以法，等。三大原則Writing（續(xù)寫故事）Predicting（預測發(fā)展）Reading（讀取信息）Polishing（潤色定稿）細節(jié):

動作，情感（感受），對話，

表情，獨白，外貌，環(huán)境，…過渡:then,but,therefore,however,unfortunately,obviously,infact,tohisjoy,nextday,…豐富的句子結構:with復合結構,非謂語動詞“V-ing/-ed/todo”做狀語，never,so等引導的倒裝句,三大從句，It形式主語句，虛擬語氣….

無語法拼寫錯誤,詞匯、句型的打磨升級。情感連貫,符合邏輯,銜接自然,與原文融洽度高logical+vivid+coherent+correct寫作思路與步驟Reading（讀取信息）Basicinformation(基本信息):who;when;where;what;why;how第一段（逆向思維）：結合原文，由第一段首句和第二段首句推出故事情節(jié)，列出要點第二段:結合上文，根據(jù)第二段首句展開內(nèi)容，列出要點Tips:1.充分利用原文提示，回扣原文2.動作，情感（感受），對話，表情，環(huán)境3.積極的、正能量的、溫暖的新高考卷Writing五步曲一個主題：故事的完整性（思路不要偏，不要天馬行空的想象）兩個關鍵：兩端首句關鍵詞

三個銜接：情節(jié)之間的銜接，情節(jié)越簡單越好，推進要簡潔四個細節(jié)：動作+心理+情感+對話（環(huán)境）五個注意：邏輯、時態(tài)、詞匯、句式、書寫Afewyearsago,thecompanyIworkedforsentmywifeandmetoliveinNewYorkforayear.I’vealwayslovedrunning,soIwasreallyhappywhenIfoundoutIlivednexttoCentralPark.ThismeantthateverymorningIcouldgoforarunbeforeIwenttowork.Becausealotofpeoplehadtoldmetobecarefulofrobbers(搶劫犯)inthepark,sousuallyIdidn’ttakeanythingwithme.HowcouldtheyrobmeifIdidn’thaveanything?Butonemorning,mywifegavemea$10billandaskedmetobuysomebreadontheway.Itwasabeautifulmorningandtheparkwasquietwithveryfewpeoplewalkingorjogging(慢跑)around.WhileIwasrunningthroughthepark,anotherjoggerknockedintome.Heapologizedandcontinuedrunning.Forawhile,Ididn’tthinktoomuchofit.However,whenInoticedthewidepathwhereIwasrunning,Ithoughtitwaskindofstrange.Thewarningofrobbersintheparkoccurredtome.“Itcouldhavebeenarobber!”Isuddenlybecamealarmed(警惕的),soIcheckedmypocketandfoundthatthemoneywasmissing.

Step1Reading

Withoutthinkingtwice,Iranafterthatjogger.Ifinallycaughtupandheldhimbythearm.Ishouted,“Givemethe$10bill!Now!”Iamnotusuallyahot-headed(性急的)person,butIgotreallyangrythistime.Icouldn’tbelievetherobberywasactuallyhappeningtome.Filledwithanger,Ishookmyfistathim.Thisseemedtofrightenhim.Hequicklyputhishandinhispocketandgavemethemoney.Thenheranawayasfastashecould.Iboughtthebreadandwenthome.AssoonasIgothome,Icouldn’twaittotellmywifemystory.“Youwon’tbelievewhathappenedtome,”Istartedwithpride.Sheimmediatelystoppedme,“Iknow,youleftthemoneyforthebreadonthekitchentable.”abeautifulmorning

WhenWhereCentralPark；homeWhoI,mywife，anotherjoggerMainIdeamywifegavemea$10billandaskedmetobuysomebreadontheway......WhatWhyBecausealotofpeoplehadtoldmetobecarefulofrobbers(搶劫犯)intheparkHowSheimmediatelystoppedme,“Iknow,youleftthemoneyforthebreadonthekitchentable.”

Step1Reading

Para1:Lookingatthemoneyonthetable,Istoodthere,shocked.Para2:Forseveraldays,Iwaitedatthesamespot(地點).

Tip1:第一段（逆向思維）：結合原文，由第一段首句和第二段首句推出故事情節(jié)，列出要點第二段:結合上文，根據(jù)第二段首句展開內(nèi)容，列出要點Tip2:充分利用原文提示,回扣原文(詞匯、細節(jié)）Tip3:從人物的動作，情感（感受），對話，表情等展開預測。Tip4:升華主題，主旨(落腳點）應該是積極的，溫暖的，正能量的

Step2Predicting(預測發(fā)展)

作者深感內(nèi)疚——決定找機會對那個人道歉——再次去到公園但沒有找到那個人等到了那個人——道歉和歸還了十美元——升華主題：了解真相之前判斷一個人還為時過早Lookingatthemoneyonthetable,Istoodthere,shocked.Iwasconsumed/overwhelmedwithguilt我深感內(nèi)疚.“HowcouldIbesorudetohimwithoutknowingthetruth?”Istillremembered

that

terrorwaswrittenalloverhisface

whenIscaredhimawaylikeamonster當我像個怪獸一樣嚇跑他時，他滿臉恐懼.Ideterminedtofindachancetoapologizetohim我決定找機會向他道歉.Thenextmorning,Igotupandwenttotheparkasusual像往常一樣去到公園,butnotforjogging.Ijusthungaround到處晃悠,attemptingtocomeacrosshim,butinvain嘗試偶遇他，但是徒勞無功.Forseveraldays,Iwaitedatthesamespot.Buttomydisappointment,hedidn'tturnup令我失望的是，他沒有出現(xiàn).ItwasalmostaweeklaterbeforeIfinallyspottedhimagain我最終再次發(fā)現(xiàn)了他.I,the“robber”,gavethe$10billbacktohimandsaidsorrytohimagainandagain.Fortunately,heforgavemeforwhatIhaddonetohim幸運的是，他原諒了我對他做的事情andsaid,“Oh,itdoesn'tmatter.”Manyyearshavepassed,butIwasstillovercomebyawaveofshame我被一陣羞愧所壓倒.FromtheexperienceIhavelearnedthatitistooearlytojudgeapersonbeforeyouknowthetruth.Lookingatthemoneyonthetable,Istoodthere,shocked.Iwasconsumed/overwhelmedwithguilt深感內(nèi)疚.“HowcouldIbesorudetohimwithoutknowingthetruth?”Istillrememberthatterrorwaswrittenalloverhisface滿臉恐懼whenIscaredhimaway

likeamonster像個怪獸一樣嚇跑他.Ideterminedtofindachancetoapologizetohim向他道歉.Thenextmorning,Igotupandwenttotheparkasusual,butnotforjogging.Ijusthungaround到處晃悠

,attemptingtocomeacrosshim,butinvain徒勞無功.For