專題12 書面表達(dá)熱點(diǎn)話題15篇-2023年中考英語逆襲沖刺名校模擬真題特快專遞（江蘇專用）

2023江蘇省中考英語逆襲沖刺名校模擬真題特快專遞第五期專題12書面表達(dá)熱點(diǎn)話題15篇一、話題作文1．（2023·江蘇無錫·統(tǒng)考二模）成長的道路漫長曲折，沿途也有美麗的風(fēng)景，每一次改變都是這場旅途中的回憶?；厥走@幾年的初中時光，你的生活中也一定會有一些變化，請你以“GreatChangesinMyGrowth”為題，談?wù)勛约撼砷L過程中的轉(zhuǎn)變、收獲及打算。注意事項(xiàng)：1.短文須根據(jù)導(dǎo)圖自擬，要求語句通順、意思連貫、符合題意；2.導(dǎo)圖中所示圖片為非限定性內(nèi)容，僅供參考；3.詞數(shù)在100個左右，短文的開頭已在答題卡上給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；4.短文中不得使用真實(shí)的個人及學(xué)校信息；5.短文必須寫在答題卡指定的位置上。Timegoesby,andpeoplesurechange.Iamnotthelittlekidanymore.IamquitedifferentfromwhatIusedtobe.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：GreatChangesinMyGrowthTimegoesby,andpeoplesurechange.Iamnotthelittlekidanymore.IamquitedifferentfromwhatIusedtobe.WhenIwasyoung,Icouldn’treadorwrite.Iwasaslowreader.NowIreadsomethingIenjoyeverydaytoincreasemyreadingspeed.Istarttobecomeinterestedinreading.What’smore,IhaddifficultyinlearningEnglishsoIdidn’tlikeEnglishinthepast.Atpresent,IhavefoundsomewaystoimprovemyEnglish,suchaslisteningtoEnglishsongs,readingEnglishnewspapersandmagazines.Inthefuture,IhopeIcanbecomebetterandletmyparentsbeproudofme.Besides,Iwillworkhardertoentermyidealhighschool.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為話題作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”和“一般過去時”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中每一項(xiàng)內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。開門見山介紹自己與以前相比大有不同；第二步，具體闡述自己成長過程中的改變；第三步，書寫結(jié)語，表達(dá)自己的感受。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①bedifferentfrom和……不同②becomeinterestedin對……感興趣③what’smore另外④inthefuture在未來[高分句型]①NowIreadsomethingIenjoyeverydaytoincreasemyreadingspeed.(動詞不定式作目的狀語)②WhenIwasyoung,Icouldn’treadorwrite.(when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句)2．（2023·江蘇鹽城·統(tǒng)考二模）讓人成長的不是年齡，而是閱歷?？催^的電影，讀過的書，交過的朋友，游覽過的風(fēng)景，做過的難題，和我們促膝交談的師長……都是我們成長過程中不可或缺的部分。豐富多彩的初中生活充滿了苦辣酸甜，讓我們哭，也讓我們笑。請你描述印象最深刻的一次經(jīng)歷，以“Itmakesme”為題寫一篇作文。注意事項(xiàng)：1.補(bǔ)全題目；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等；3.詞數(shù)100詞左右；4.語言通順，意思連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Itmakesme_________Ourjuniorhighschoollifeisfullofsweetnessandbitterness.

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：①ItmakesmegrowupOurjuniorhighschoollifeisfullofsweetnessandbitterness.Ididn’trealizethatteamworkismuchmoreimportantthanpersonalperformanceuntilIlostthesoccermatch.Lastweek,ourteamlostthegameinthe“CityMayorCup”.IstillrememberclearlywhenIhadtheballonthefield,cominguptothegoal.Iwasinabetterpositiontopasstheballinsteadofshooting.Oneofmyteammateswasinthebestpositiontoshootandscore.ButIreallywantedtoscorethegoalmyselfandwinthematch.Iwantedtobethehero.Ishotbutfailed.Iwassoupsetanditfeltlikeabigblackcloudwashangingovermyhead.Afterthematch,Iapologizedtomyteammatesandmycoach.Theydidn’tblameme.Butmycoach’swordsstayedwithme.Hesaid,“Thegameisnotallaboutwinningorlosing.”Theexperiencemademegrowupandtaughtmetheimportanceofteamwork.例文：②ItmakesmehappyOurjuniorhighschoollifeisfullofsweetnessandbitterness.WhenIstartedmiddleschool,Ihadnoideahowtotalktomyclassmates.Ioftenfeltlonely.Butanunexpectedsmallthinghappenedandendedmyboringschoollife.Oneofmyclassmatesinvitedmetoherbirthdayparty.Iwassosurprisedbecausewewerenotfamiliarwitheachotheratall.ButIacceptedtheinvitation.Onherbirthday,Igaveherflowersandabirthdaycardaspresents.Wewatchedamovietogetherandtalkedaboutit.Sharingthesameviewswithhermademefeelexcited.Iregrettedthatwecouldnotbefriendsearlier.Itendedjustasyou’dexpect-webecamebestfriends.Idon’tfeelboredatschoolanymore.IalwaysrememberthatdayandIrealizewhatbestfriendsmeantomylife.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為話題作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)主要用“一般過去時”；③提示：以“Itmakesme…”為題寫一篇有關(guān)你初中生活中印象最深刻的一次經(jīng)歷的作文，注意敘述完整，語句通順，意思連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，總述初中生活中印象最深刻的一次經(jīng)歷；第二步，簡要介紹事情的經(jīng)過；第三步，總結(jié)全文并敘述自己的收獲。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①befamiliarwith熟悉②eachother互相③makesb.dosth.讓某人做某事[高分句型]①Iwassosurprisedbecausewewerenotfamiliarwitheachotheratall.（because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句）②IalwaysrememberthatdayandIrealizewhatbestfriendsmeantomylife.（含and的并列句；what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）3．（2023·江蘇連云港·校考一模）十里春風(fēng)拂過，人間芳菲未落?；叵脒@三年的初中生活真是感慨萬千。在即將到來的青春儀式上，學(xué)校將舉行“感恩教育儀式”。請你根據(jù)以下提示，用英語為該活動寫一篇短文，簡述這三年來要感恩的人和事，以及你的感想和未來打算。要求：1、語句通順，意思連貫，條理清晰，字跡工整；2、舉例證明你的觀點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)拓展；3、100詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；4、不得透露真實(shí)的個人信息。Howtimesflies!ThreeyearshaspassedsinceIcametothesecondaryschool.Duringthepastthreeyears,Ihavegainedalotandgrownalot.First,Ishouldsaythankstomydearparents.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Howtimesflies!ThreeyearshaspassedsinceIcametothesecondaryschool.Duringthepastthreeyears,Ihavegainedalotandgrownalot.First,Ishouldsaythankstomydearparents.Theytakegoodcareofmewithoutanycomplaint.Theyworkhardtosupportthewholefamily.Theyarealwaystryingtheirbesttomakemeliveabetterlife.Second,I’mthankfultoallmyteachersfortheirgreathelpandsupport.Theyarepatientenoughtospendlotsoftimeexplainingproblemstome.Besides,theyalwaysencouragemewhenIamintrouble.It’sunselfishofthemtodevotetheirtimetoeducation.Finally,Ialsofeelverygratefultomyclassmates.Weworktogetherandsharethingswitheachother.Weoftenhelpeachotherandlearnfromeachother.Asaresult,wehavemadegreatprogress.IthinkIamluckytohavesomuchloveandcare.Iwillneverforgetthesehappydaystogether.Iamgoingtodowellinthefuturesothattheycanbeproudofme.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生不要遺漏“未來的打算”，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖，直接點(diǎn)明下文內(nèi)容；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容，從“父母、老師到同學(xué)”三個方面表達(dá)謝意；第三步，書寫書面結(jié)語，表達(dá)自己的感想和未來的打算。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①takegoodcareof好好照顧②devotetheirtimeto奉獻(xiàn)……③feelverygratefulto感激④Asaresult結(jié)果[高分句型]①Theyworkhardtosupportthewholefamily.（動詞不定式作目的狀語）②It’sunselfishofthemtodevotetheirtimetoeducation.（It’sadj.ofsb.todosth.結(jié)構(gòu)的使用）③Iamgoingtodowellinthefuturesothattheycanbeproudofme.（sothat句型的使用）4．（2023·江蘇無錫·統(tǒng)考三模）成長的歷程多姿多彩，但總也伴隨著諸多的不解與困惑。每每這時，年少的我們總希望得到別人的幫助與支持。學(xué)校心理輔導(dǎo)中心（schoolpsychologicalservicecentre）便在這種情況下應(yīng)運(yùn)而生。請根據(jù)以下的提示，選擇一種你更喜歡的交流方式，談?wù)劺碛?，并提?—2種合理的減壓方式。Face-to-faceCommunicationOnlineCommunicationFrom8a.m.to5p.m.everydayFace-to-facecommunicationwithexperiencedexperts(專家)Offerareportwiththeexpert’sadvice...From6p.m.to9p.m.everydayOnlinecommunicationwith5studentsofyourageNorecordofyourpersonalinformation...注意事項(xiàng)：1.短文須自擬，要求觀點(diǎn)明確、語句通順、意思連貫、符合題意；2.文章中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名或校名等信息。3.詞數(shù)在100個左右，短文已給出部分內(nèi)容，不計入總詞數(shù)；4.短文必須寫在答題卡指定的位置上。Ourschoolpsychologicalservicecentrehasbeenopensincelastmonth.IthinkifIhaveproblems,Iprefer__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文:Ourschoolpsychologicalservicecentrehasbeenopensincelastmonth.IthinkifIhaveproblems,Iprefertheface-to-facecommunication.Thecentreprovidesface-to-facecommunicationservicefrom8a.m.to5p.m.everyday.DuringthattimeIamrightatschool,soIcangetenoughtimetohaveface-to-facecommunicationwithexperiencedexpertsandtellthemmyworries.BeforeIleave,Icanreceiveareportwiththeiradvice.I’msureit’llbevaluabletome.ThesuitabletimeandexperiencedexpertsmakemefeelitisawiserchoicewhenIfeelblue.Inaddition,whenIfeelstressed,Iusuallylistentolightmusicorgorunning.Ithinkmusicandsportscanmakemerelaxandcalmmedown.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時態(tài)：以“一般現(xiàn)在時”為主；③提示：選擇表格中給出的其中一種交流方式，說明理由，理由在表格中已經(jīng)給出，需要表達(dá)成句子，且體現(xiàn)“心理輔導(dǎo)”，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)；還需描述自己的減壓方式。[寫作步驟]第一步，說明要選擇面對面交流方式；第二步，講述選擇面對面交流方式的理由；第三步，介紹自己的減壓方式。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①tellthemmyworries告訴他們我的憂慮②inaddition另外③bevaluabletome對我來說有價值④feelblue悶悶不樂⑤haveface-to-facecommunicationwith和……面對面交流[高分句型]①ThesuitabletimeandexperiencedexpertsmakemefeelitisawiserchoicewhenIfeelblue.（省略了that的賓語從句）②Inaddition,whenIfeelstressed,Iusuallylistentolightmusicorgorunning.（when引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句）③Ithinkmusicandsportscanmakemerelaxandcalmmedown.（省略了that的賓語從句）二、材料作文5．（2023·江蘇南京·統(tǒng)考二模）請根據(jù)你校校刊EnglishGarden中Teentalk欄目的征稿內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇短文。ARTICLESWANTED!EnjoyEnglishHomework.AtTeenTalkwewouldlikeyoushareyourideasaboutourschoolsothatyoucanletotherkidsknowwhatyouthink.Thisweek’stopicisaboutEnglishHomework.What’syourfavouritekindofEnglishhomework,hands-onproject,readingorspeaking?Whydoyoulikeit?Canyoushareoneofyourexperiencesindoingthiskindofyourhomework?Writeanarticleansweringthesequestionsandwewillpublishthebestonesinourmagazine.注意：1.文中不能出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。2.語言通順，意思連貫，條理清晰，書寫規(guī)范。3.詞數(shù)80左右，郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾部分已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Wordbank:hands-onproject動手實(shí)踐項(xiàng)目DoingEnglishhomeworkhelpsustopracticeandusewhatwe’velearnedinclass.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文DoingEnglishhomeworkhelpsustopracticeandusewhatwe’velearnedinclass.Asforme,Ilikethehands-onprojectbestbecauseitconnectswhatI’velearntwithreallifeinaninterestingway.Lastweek,wewereaskedtomakeanEnglishposterabouttheDragonBoatFestival.First,Icollectedlotsofinformationonthefestival.ThenIdesignedtheEnglishposter.Finally,Inotonlyfinishedthetaskperfectlybutalsogotadeeper.Inmyopinion,thehands-onprojectarousesmyinterestinEnglishandenrichesmyexperiencesinlearning.【詳解】[總體分析]題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”，圍繞主題“關(guān)于英語家庭作業(yè)”，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹做英語家庭作業(yè)的好處；第二步，具體闡述我是如何做好英語家庭作業(yè)的；第三步，總結(jié)表達(dá)自己的感想。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①Asforme對我來說②lotsof許多③notonly...butalso...不但……而且……[高分句型]①Asforme,Ilikethehands-onprojectbestbecauseitconnectswhatI’velearntwithreallifeinaninterestingway.（because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句中包含what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）②Finally,Inotonlyfinishedthetaskperfectlybutalsogotadeeper.（notonly...butalso...句型）6．（2023·江蘇南通·模擬預(yù)測）無規(guī)矩不成方圓。有規(guī)矩的家庭，更能培養(yǎng)人格獨(dú)立、德行兼優(yōu)的孩子。但有時我們并不能理解這些規(guī)矩存在的意義，經(jīng)常與父母產(chǎn)生矛盾。就此話題，請發(fā)表你的看法。提示如下：1.Whataretherulesinyourhome?2.Whatdoyouthinkofthesehomerules?3.Whateffortsdoyouoryourparentsmaketounderstandeachother?要求：1.內(nèi)容須包括提示中的三個要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名；3.詞數(shù)90個左右，開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Asthesayinggoes,“nothingcanbeaccomplishedwithoutrules.”Becauseofthis,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Therearestillmany“don’ts”inmyhome.Butnothingisunchangeable.It’sallaboutunderstandingeachother.【答案】Onepossibleversion:Asthesayinggoes,“nothingcanbeaccomplishedwithoutrules.”Becauseofthis,myparentsareverystrictwithme.Therearemanyrulesatmyhome.First,I’mnotallowedtogooutwithmyfriendsatnight.Then,myparentspaytoomuchattentiontomyexamresults.It’snotallowedtomakemistakesbecauseofcarelessness.Third,Imustn’tlietoanyonebecausehonestyisimportant.However,Itrymybesttounderstandmyparents.Althoughtheydon’tallowmetomakemyowndecisionsandputtoomuchpressureonme,Iknowthatitisbecausetheyreallycareaboutmeandwantmetohaveabrightfuture.Tokeepagoodrelationshipwithmyparents,Iworkhardandobeytherulesmostofthetime.IalsospeakupwhenIfeelstressed.IfIdowanttostayoutwithmyfriendsatnight,Ikeepintouchwithmyparents.Tobesafe,Igetbackhomebefore10pm.Therearestillmany“don’ts”inmyhome.Butnothingisunchangeable.It’sallaboutunderstandingeachother.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說明文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，不能遺漏信息，以第一人稱為主。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹你家里有什么規(guī)矩；第二步，說明你覺得這些家庭規(guī)定怎么樣；第三步，最后介紹你和你的父母在相互理解方面做了哪些努力；[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①beallowedtodosth被允許做某事②payattentionto注意③tryone’sbesttodo盡力做某事[高分句型]①Third,Imustn’tlietoanyonebecausehonestyisimportant.（because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句）②Althoughtheydon’tallowmetomakemyowndecisionsandputtoomuchpressureonme,Iknowthatitisbecausetheyreallycareaboutmeandwantmetohaveabrightfuture.（although引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句）7．（2023·江蘇南通·模擬預(yù)測）時光荏苒，光陰似箭。在三年的初中生活里，你肯定遇到過許多良師益友，其中誰會是你最難忘的人呢？請以“TheMostUnforgettablePerson”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，講述你和他（她）之間的故事。注意：1.內(nèi)容必須包括所給的提示要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.詞數(shù)90左右，短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。3.表達(dá)中請勿提及真實(shí)校名及姓名。TheMostUnforgettablePersonHowtimeflies!I’llgraduatefrommymiddleschoolsoon.Overthepastthreeyears,I’vemetlotsofimportantpersons._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：TheMostUnforgettablePersonHowtimeflies!I’llgraduatefrommiddlemyschoolsoon.Overthepastthreeyears,I’vemetlotsofimportantpersons.Amongthem,mydeskmateMaryisthemostunforgettablepersonforme.HersmileissobrightthatshewontheheartofminewhenIfirstmether.What’smore,Maryisalwaysreadytohelpotherswhogetintotrouble.Shehaschangedmealotsincewebecamedeskmates.Iusedtobelazyandalwaysmadeagreatmessonmydesk.AndIwasalwaysmadwhenlookingformyexercisebooksandtestpapers.Sheoftenremindedmetotidymydesk.Sometimessheevenhelpedmelookforthings.Gradually,Iformedthegoodhabitofputtingeverythinginorder.Tome,Maryisjustlikethebrightlightinmylife.ShehasleftmemanyhappymemoriesandIwillneverforgether.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”和“一般過去時”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏提示中的關(guān)鍵信息，結(jié)合給出的三個問題來介紹自己最難忘的人。[寫作步驟]第一步，點(diǎn)明最難忘的人是誰；第二步，具體介紹這個人為何是最難忘的；第三步，介紹自己對這個人的感覺。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①lotsof許多②bereadytodosth.準(zhǔn)備好做某事③getintotrouble遇見麻煩④usedtobe過去曾經(jīng)是⑤lookfor尋找⑥formthegoodhabitof養(yǎng)成……的好習(xí)慣[高分句型]①HersmileissobrightthatshewontheheartofminewhenIfirstmether.（that引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語從句；when引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句）②What’smore,Maryisalwaysreadytohelpotherswhogetintotrouble.（who引導(dǎo)定語從句）8．（2023·江蘇南京·模擬預(yù)測）黑發(fā)不知勤學(xué)早，白首方悔讀書遲。請根據(jù)以下征稿內(nèi)容，為校英語廣播站寫一篇短文。Welcometoourradioprogram.ThisweekweinviteyoutosaysomethingaboutTangping(躺平):●whatTangpingmeansforteenagers●whetheryouchooseTangpingandwhy●youradvicetoteenagerswhochooseTangpingWehopetohearfromyou.注意：1.內(nèi)容涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)，全文連貫通順。2.詞數(shù)80左右(已給出的文章開頭，不計入總詞數(shù))。3.文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。Inmyopinion,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Inmyopinion,Tangpingmeansnotstudyinghardforteenagers.Idon’tchooseTangpingbecauseitcanonlygiveuspleasureforashorttime.MyfriendTomoncechoseTangpingduringthesummerholiday.Atfirst,hehadfunplayingonlinegames.Butlater,hefailedtheexams.Hewasnothappyanymore!IhavesomeadviceforthosewhochooseTangping.First,youshouldhaveapurposeforyourlife,suchasgoingtocollegeorbeingadoctorinthefuture.Second,stayawayfrommobilephones.Ifyoufeelbored,playsportsinsteadofplayingcomputergamesorwatchingshortvideosontheInternet.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”和“一般過去時”；③提示：寫作要求已給出，學(xué)生不要遺漏題目中的要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，寫作時保持主謂一致，注意字?jǐn)?shù)要求。[寫作步驟]第一步，首先講述躺平對青少年意味著什么；第二步，講述自己是否會選擇躺平及原因；第三步，談?wù)勛约簩x擇躺平的青少年的建議。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①havefundoingsth做某事很有趣②suchas例如③insteadof而不是[高分句型]①Idon’tchooseTangpingbecauseitcanonlygiveuspleasureforashorttime.（原因狀語從句）②IhavesomeadviceforthosewhochooseTangping.（定語從句）9．（2023·江蘇揚(yáng)州·校聯(lián)考二模）學(xué)校安全教育旨在把生命為本的意識埋進(jìn)青少年心靈深處。假定你們學(xué)校英語報正在開展題為“Howtokeepsafe”的征文活動，請根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示寫一篇短文投稿。要點(diǎn)：1.請遵守交通規(guī)則；2.在家和在學(xué)校都要注意安全，……；3.注意心理健康（mentalhealth）安全，學(xué)會分享心理壓力，……。要求：1．所寫內(nèi)容必須包括提供的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.文章詞數(shù)100個左右。3．語意通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范。4．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名等信息。HowtokeepsafeindailylifeRecently,moreandmoreattentionhasbeenpaidtoteenagers’personalsafety_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：

HowtokeepsafeindailylifeRecently,moreandmoreattentionhasbeenpaidtoteenagers’personalsafety.Herearesomesuggestionsabouthowtokeepsafeindailylife.First,weshouldobeythetrafficrules.Whenthetrafficlightsarered,weshouldn’tcrosstheroad.Andweshouldn’tridetheelectricbikes.Second,weshouldpayattentiontothefoodsafety.Besurenottoeattoomuchjunkfood.Third,whenwegoupstairsordownstairs,weshouldkeeptotheright.Fourth,becarefulwhiledoingsports.Fifth,remembernottoswimintheriver.It’sdangerous.What’smore,weshouldbecarefulwhenwemakefriends,especiallyonline.Ifwe’reindanger,wemustcallthepoliceforhelpintimesothatwecankeepourselvessafe.Last,Weshouldpayattentiontomentalhealthsafety,too.Inshort,safetymustcomefirst.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：這是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)。適當(dāng)添加內(nèi)容，并突出寫作要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。由“越來越多的人關(guān)注青少年的安全”引出“Howtokeepsafeindailylife”這一主題。第二步，具體描述寫作內(nèi)容。從“交通，食品，交友，游泳，心理健康安全等”幾個方面來描寫怎樣保持安全。第三步，書寫結(jié)語。表達(dá)自己的想法。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①

obeythetrafficrules遵守交通規(guī)則②

goupanddownstairs上下樓梯③

what’smore而且④

indanger處于危險之中⑤

mentalhealthsafety心理健康安全[高分句型]①

Ifweareindanger,wemustcallthepoliceforhelpintimesothatwecankeepourselvessafe.（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）②

Remembernottoswimintheriver.（remembertodosth記得做某事）10．（2023·江蘇徐州·統(tǒng)考二模）近日，在公共場所，人們身著漢服拍照，演奏古箏、二胡等傳統(tǒng)樂器；校園里，學(xué)生吟誦古典詩詞，寫毛筆字……處處彰顯著中國傳統(tǒng)文化的魅力。你校英文報正在組織題為SpreadingTraditionalChineseCulture的征文活動，請你選擇下表中的一種傳統(tǒng)文化的形式，寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.你最喜歡的一種傳統(tǒng)文化的形式；2.你體驗(yàn)該傳統(tǒng)文化的經(jīng)歷；3.你的收獲及感受。①穿漢服wearingHanfu②寫毛筆字learncalligraphy③講中國故事tellChinesestories④演奏中國傳統(tǒng)樂器playtraditionalChinesemusicalinstrument⑤……（自擬）注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；2.短文中不得泄露個人信息；3.參考詞匯僅供選擇使用。SpreadingTraditionalChineseCultureNowadays,withthepopularityofChinesestyle,morepeopleshowgreatinterestintraditionalChineseculture.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：SpreadingTraditionalChineseCultureNowadays,withthepopularityofChinesestyle,morepeopleshowgreatinterestintraditionalChineseculture.MyfavoritetraditionalChinesecultureiscalligraphy,whichhasalonghistoryandhasinfluencedmanypeople.Istartedlearningcalligraphyateight.Atfirst,itwaschallengingformetousethebrushtowriteChinesecharacters.Mywristwouldacheafterholdingthebrushforalongtime.Fortunately,withthehelpofmyteacher,Igraduallyimproved.Now,Icanwritespringcoupletsformyfamilyeveryyear.Itmakesmeproud.Learningcalligraphyhasagreatinfluenceonme.Ibecomemorepatientandcarefulthankstoyearsofpractice.IalsofeelhonoredtobeabletopassdownthistraditionalChineseculture.【詳解】[整體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文；②時態(tài)：采用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時；③提示：要求包含所有提示內(nèi)容且適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。[寫作步驟]第一步：闡述自己最喜歡的傳統(tǒng)文化；第二步：闡述個人體驗(yàn)該傳統(tǒng)文化的經(jīng)歷；第三步：闡述個人的收獲及感受。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①passdown流傳②withthehelpof在……幫助下③morepartientandcareful更加有耐心和細(xì)心④feelhonored感到榮幸[高分句型]①M(fèi)yfavoritetraditionalChinesecultureiscalligraphy,whichhasalonghistoryandhasinfluencedmanypeople.（定語從句）②Learningcalligraphyhasagreatinfluenceonme.（動名詞作主語）三、講稿11．（2023·江蘇南京·統(tǒng)考二模）學(xué)校英語俱樂部將要開展英語辯論活動。假如你是俱樂部成員，請根據(jù)活動要求，用英語寫一篇辯論稿。Adebateiscoming!Topic:WhenlearningEnglish,speakingismoreimportantthanwriting.Areyoufororagainstit?Writetotellus:YouropinionReasonsforyouropinionYourEnglish-learningexperiencesSendyourarticletoenglishclub@163.com.Deadline:May26th,2023注意：1.內(nèi)容涵蓋要點(diǎn)，全文連貫通順。2.詞數(shù)80左右（文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。3.文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。AsaGrade9student,IthinkwhenlearningEnglish,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文

AsaGrade9student,IthinkwhenlearningEnglish,speakingismoreimportantthanwriting.

Foronething,speakingisthefirstreactionofpeople.Speakingnotonlyisthemostdirectwayofcommunicationbutalsothebasisofwriting.Forexample,thoughtheilliteraciesdon’tknowthewordandcannotwrite,theylivenormallybecausetheycanspeak.Foranotherthing,thesocietywillbecomeinternationalinthefuture.Bythetime,everyoneisspeakingEnglishinsteadofwriting.Forinstance,whenyoucommunicatewithaforeignerinEnglishfluently,theforeignermayfeelcomfortable.ButifyourspokenEnglishisnotsogoodandyoucanonlywritebutspeak,youwillmisslotsofchances.

Inordertoimprovetheabilityofspeaking,I