山西省太原市2023-2024學年高一上學期期中學業(yè)診斷考試英語試題英語讀后續(xù)寫-自行車上的善意與希望之旅講義

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。WhenIwasyoung,welivedinasmalltown.EveryoneknewRoyashewasatopstudentinthetown.Hewasofmyage,buthelosthisparentsinanaccidentattheageof8.Sohelivedaloneanddeliverednewspaperstosupporthimselfandhiseducation.Everytimehedeliverednewspaperstoourhome,heworeabroadsmileonhisfaceandgreetedmymomgently.Mymomwasgreatlysurprisedwhensheknewhisdailyroutine.Hegotupeverymorningby5o’clockandwalked5kilometersfromwherehelivedtothenewspaperofficetocollectthenewspapers.By6:00,hecarried50piecesofnewspapers—morethan5kilogramsandwalked3kilometersback.Aftersendingthenewspapers,herushedanother3kilometershometocookasimplebreakfastbeforehurryingtoschool.Thismorning,seeinghelefthurriedlyinastrongwind,mymomandIdecidedtodosomethingforhim.Afterschool,Iwaitedforhimattheschoolgateandtoldhimthatmymomwouldliketoinvitehimtoourhome.Whenheaskedwhy,Ireplied,“Youwillknowsoon!”Thinkingforashortwhile,hefollowedmetomyhomenearby.Itwaspossiblethatheassumedmymomwouldcontinuetosubscribetothenewspaper.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為100個左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Mymomstoodatthedoor,waitingforus.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Seeingthebikeinfrontofhim,hecouldn’tholdbackhistears.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：羅伊是小鎮(zhèn)上的優(yōu)等生，8歲時父母因事故離世，他獨自生活，靠送報紙維持學業(yè)。他每日行程忙碌辛苦，“我”和媽媽知曉后決定幫助他。放學后“我”邀請羅伊到家中，故事在此處展開續(xù)寫。文章主要圍繞羅伊的不幸遭遇與堅強自立以及“我”和媽媽的善意幫助展開。伏筆與回應：伏筆：羅伊父母早亡，獨自生活且生活艱辛?；貞哼@使得“我”和媽媽想要幫助他，為后文媽媽送自行車等幫助行為做鋪墊。伏筆：羅伊送報行程忙碌，時間緊張。回應：媽媽送自行車能幫助他節(jié)省時間，提高效率，改善他忙碌奔波的狀況。伏筆：“我”邀請羅伊到家中且未說明原因?；貞阂鹆_伊的好奇與疑惑，在到家后謎底揭開，情節(jié)有起伏。伏筆：羅伊匆忙離開時刮著大風?；貞和怀鏊蛨蟓h(huán)境的惡劣，也側面反映他生活不易，更凸顯媽媽送自行車的雪中送炭。伏筆：媽媽知道羅伊的日常行程后很驚訝。回應：媽媽驚訝后便心生憐憫與幫助之意，才有后續(xù)的邀請和送自行車情節(jié)。續(xù)寫要點：情感線：第一段從羅伊的疑惑到感受到媽媽熱情后的感動與些許不安；第二段從看到自行車時的震驚與感動到對未來充滿希望與感激。故事線：第一段媽媽熱情招待羅伊，講述對他的敬佩與關心，提及要送他東西；第二段媽媽推出自行車，羅伊明白用意后表達感激，“我”和媽媽鼓勵他，羅伊帶著希望離開。主旨升華句：Kindnessisthesunshinethatcanpenetratethecloudsofmisfortune.（善良是能穿透不幸陰霾的陽光。）Inthefaceofadversity,ahelpinghandcanrewritethestoryoflife.（在逆境面前，援助之手能改寫人生故事。）Alittlecareinacoldworldcankindlethefireofhope.（冷漠世界中的一點關懷能點燃希望之火。）Truegenerosityliesnotingivingmuchbutingivingwhenitmattersmost.（真正的慷慨不在于給予多少，而在于在最關鍵的時候給予。）Thebeautyofhumanityispaintedwiththebrushofkindnessandpassion.（人性之美是用善良與同情之筆描繪而成。）寫作示范一：Mymomstoodatthedoor,waitingforus.ShegreetedRoywithabig,warmsmileandledhimintothehouse.Roywasabitshyandhesitant,butmymommadehimfeelatease.ShetoldRoyhowmuchsheadmiredhisperseveranceandhardwork.Thenshesaid,“Roy,weknowyouhaveatoughlife.Wewanttohelpyou.”Roylookedpuzzled.Mymomtookhimtothebackyard,whereabrandnewbicyclewasparked.

Seeingthebikeinfrontofhim,hecouldn’tholdbackhistears.Hewasdeeplytouched.Hestammered,“Thankyousomuch.Thiswillchangemylife.”Mymompattedhisshoulderandsaid,“Youdeserveit.Webelieveyouwillhaveabrightfuture.”Ialsosaid,“Nowyoucandelivernewspapersmoreeasily.”Roynodded,hiseyesfilledwithgratitudeandhope.Hepromisedtoworkevenharderandmakeusproud.Thenherodethebikeaway,withanewfounddeterminationinhisheart.寫作示范二：Mymomstoodatthedoor,waitingforus.AssoonasRoyentered,mymomofferedhimaseatandaglassofwater.Shebegantotalkabouthowshehadnoticedhiseffortsandsacrifices.Roylistenedquietly,hiseyesshowingamixtureofsurpriseandgratitude.Mymomthensaid,“Wehaveasmallgiftforyou.”Roywascurious.

Seeingthebikeinfrontofhim,hecouldn’tholdbackhistears.Hewalkedslowlytowardsitandtoucheditgently.“Ineverexpectedthis.Itmeanssomuchtome,”hesaid,hisvoicetrembling.Mymomexplainedthatitwastomakehisdailymuteeasier.Iaddedthatwehopeditwouldbringhimsomeconvenience.Roywipedhistearsandsaidhewouldrememberthiskindnessforever.Hegotonthebikeandrodearoundtheyardalittle,asmileofhopespreadingacrosshisface.【答案】范文Mymomstoodatthedoor,waitingforus.Assoonasshesawus,sherushedovertogiveusabighugandthenledustothediningroom.WeinvitedRoytojoinusfordinner,andthoughhehesitatedatfirst,heeventuallyaccepted.Asmymomfilleduphisplate,hesaiditbroughtbackmemoriesofhappydaysspentwithhisparents.Later,ashepreparedtoleave,Isteppedinsideandbroughtoutanewbike.“Thisisforyou,”mymomsaidwithasmile.Seeingthebikeinfrontofhim,hecouldn’tholdbackhistears.Withtearsofgratituderolling