山東省泰安市2024-2025學(xué)年高二上學(xué)期11月期中英語(yǔ)試題讀后續(xù)寫為愛剃發(fā)光頭背后的家庭溫情與勇氣講義

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Allthespecialiststolduswhatwouldhappenduringmyfiveyearoldsister’streatment.Thedoctorstalkedaboutthepotentialsideeffectsofthedrugsthatmightoccuroverthenexttwoyearsoftreatment.Whenourparentstoldoursistershehadcancer,herbiggestconcernwaslosingherhair.“Willallmyhairreallyfallout?Willpeoplemakefunofme?”sheasked,hervoicefilledwithworry.“Don’tworry,”Ilatertoldherinsecret.“Whenyouloseyourhair,I’llshaveminewitharazor(剃刀)andwe’llbothbebald(禿頭的).We’llwalkdownthestreetproudlywithourbaldheadsheldhigh.We’llswim,gotoparksandplayatthebeachwithourbaldheads.”“Promise?”sheasked.“Promise,”Ireplied,thinkingitwasasmallsacrifice(犧牲)aslongasitcouldcheerherandhelpherrecover.Thedaysandweeksoftreatmentbegantoaffectherlittlebody.Asthedoctorshadwarned,shebegantoloseherhair.Atfirst,Ifoundsomeonherclothesandtowels.Ashorttimelater,Ifoundherhaironthebacksofthesofasandchairsshe’dbeenon.Beforelong,thereweremassesofhaironherpilloweverymorningassheawokefromherrestlesssleep.Afewdayslater,shewasfinallypletelybald.HerheadwasverysmoothandsoftasIheldher.ItremindedmeofthatwonderfultimewhenIheldherinmyarmsandwasamazedathowluckyIwastohavesuchabeautifulandhealthybabysister.Herbaldheadwasbeautiful,butitalsoshowedthesignsofherbattlewithcancer.Oneafternoonathome,Ithoughtitwastimetoshavemyhead.HoweveritwasthenthatIbeganseriouslyworryingaboutsomething.HowuglywouldIbeewhenIwasbald?Wouldmyparents—whoalwaysencouragedustomaintainacertainimage—scold(責(zé)備)meforhavingmyheadshaved?Wouldpeople,especiallymyclassmates,makefunofme?注意：（1）續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；（2）請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Iwaslookingatmyselfinthemirrorwhenmysisterapproached.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________“It’sbeautiful.Pleasealsohelpshaveourheads,”ourparentssmiled.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：五歲的妹妹被診斷患有癌癥，治療藥物會(huì)有副作用，妹妹最擔(dān)心掉頭發(fā)被人嘲笑。“我”承諾妹妹會(huì)陪她一起剃光頭，治療過程中妹妹頭發(fā)逐漸脫落直至全禿。當(dāng)“我”準(zhǔn)備履行承諾剃光頭時(shí)，卻開始擔(dān)心自己變丑、被父母責(zé)備以及被同學(xué)嘲笑等問題。

伏筆與回應(yīng)：伏筆：妹妹擔(dān)心掉頭發(fā)被嘲笑，“我”承諾陪她剃光頭?；貞?yīng)：妹妹看到“我”猶豫后鼓勵(lì)“我”，最終“我”剃了光頭。伏筆：醫(yī)生提到治療藥物的副作用?；貞?yīng)：妹妹出現(xiàn)掉發(fā)等副作用。伏筆：“我”覺得陪妹妹剃光頭是小犧牲?；貞?yīng)：真正面臨剃發(fā)時(shí)“我”卻有諸多顧慮。伏筆：“我”擔(dān)心父母在意形象會(huì)責(zé)備自己?；貞?yīng)：父母支持并要求一起剃光頭。伏筆：“我”擔(dān)心同學(xué)嘲笑?；貞?yīng)：文章未明確續(xù)寫中同學(xué)反應(yīng)，但可推測(cè)家人的支持給予“我”面對(duì)外界眼光的勇氣。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)：

情感線：從猶豫擔(dān)憂到在妹妹鼓勵(lì)下堅(jiān)定決心，最后因父母的支持而感動(dòng)。

故事線：妹妹看到“我”在鏡子前猶豫，鼓勵(lì)“我”，“我”鼓起勇氣剃了光頭，父母看到后表示支持并要求一起剃光頭。主旨升華句：Trueloveisnotjustwords,butthecouragetoactinthefaceofdifficulties.（真愛不只是言語(yǔ)，更是在困難面前付諸行動(dòng)的勇氣。）Family'ssupportisthestrongestshieldagainstthearrowsoftheoutsideworld.（家庭的支持是抵御外界利箭的最堅(jiān)固盾牌。）Thepowerofpromiseliesinitsunwaveringfulfillment,regardlessofthecost.（承諾的力量在于不計(jì)代價(jià)地堅(jiān)定履行。）Inthejourneyoflife,family'slovelightsthewaythroughthedarkestvalleys.（在人生旅途中，家人的愛照亮穿越最黑暗山谷的道路。）Whenwefacefearsforthesakeoflovedones,wediscoverourtruestselves.（當(dāng)我們?yōu)榱怂鶒壑嗣鎸?duì)恐懼時(shí)，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)了最真實(shí)的自己。）寫作示范一：

Iwaslookingatmyselfinthemirrorwhenmysisterapproached.Sheseemedtosensemyhesitation.“Don'tbeafraid.Youpromised,andIknowyou'llbethebravestsister.”Herwords,thoughsoft,werelikeaboltoflightningthatjoltedmebacktomysenses.Itookadeepbreath,pickeduptherazor,andwithadeterminedhand,startedshaving.Aslocksofmyhairfell,Ifeltastrangemixtureofnervousnessandliberation.Whenitwasdone,Ilookedatmybaldheadandsmiledather.

“It'sbeautiful.Pleasealsohelpshaveourheads,”ourparentssmiled.Tearswelledupinmyeyes.Theirunexpectedsupportmademerealizehowluckyweweretohavesuchalovingandunderstandingfamily.Wehuddledtogether,ourbaldheadsshininginthelight,asymbolofourunbreakablebondandthepowerofloveandsacrifice.Inthatmoment,Iknewthatnomatterwhatchallengeslayahead,aslongaswehadeachother,wecouldfacethemwithcourage.寫作示范二：

Iwaslookingatmyselfinthemirrorwhenmysisterapproached.Shereachedoutandtouchedmyhand.“Youdon'thavetoifyou'rescared.ButI'llbewithyou.”HertouchandwordsgavemethestrengthIneeded.Iturnedtoherandsaid,“No,Imadeapromise.”Icarefullyshavedmyhead,strandbystrand.AsIfinished,shegrinnedandhuggedmetightly.Ifeltanewfoundconfidenceandadeepsenseofloveforher.

“It'sbeautiful.Pleasealsohelpshaveourheads,”ourparentssmiled.Iwasstunned.Myparents'acceptanceandwillingnesstojoinuswasoverwhelming.Wespentthenexthourshavingtheirheadstoo.Ourbaldfamilystoodinacircle,auniqueandheartwarmingsight.ItwasthenthatIunderstoodthatfamilylovewasnotaboutappearancebutaboutstandingbyeachotherthroughthickandthin.Thisactofunitywouldbeamemorythatwouldcarryusthroughthetoughtimesofmysister'scancertreatmentandbeyond,atestamenttothepowerofloveandfamily.參考答案Iwaslookingatmyselfinthemirrorwhenmysisterapproached.Shestaredatmewithherbig,innocenteyesandsaid,“Sister,don'tbesad.Youaretheprettiestinmyheartevenwithouthair.”Herwordsmademyheartache.IhuggedhergentlyandtoldherIwasjustthinkingabouthowtomakeourbaldheadslookevencooler.Then,Itooktherazorandstartedshavingmyhairslowlyandcarefully.Mysisterwatchedmeintently,herlittlehandholdi