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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構成一個完整的短文。APerfectPartyOneday,myfriendMaryandIwereenjoyingourfreetimeinmylivingroom.Whilelookingthroughamagazine,Marysaid,“Thislooksfun.”Sheheldupaphotoofacrowdofhappypeopleandatablecoveredwithcolorfuldecorationsandplatesofdeliciouslookingfood.Theheadlineonthenextpageread“CelebrateYourWeekendwithaPerfectPotluckParty.”“Weshoulddothat!”Isaidexcitedly.“Let’sinviteourfriendstoapotluckpartyinmyyard!”“Goodidea,”shereplied.“There’sjustoneproblem,”Isaid.“Thatit’sgoingtobetoomuchfun?”Maryjoked.Ilaughed.“Notexactly.Ineedtoaskpermission(許可),butmymommightnotbeasexcitedaboutthrowingapartyasweare.Myparentshavebeenreallybusywiththeirworkrecently.”Whenmymomgothomefromwork,Icautiouslyshowedherthemagazinearticleandtoldherouridea,waitingforherreply.Afterwhatseemedlikeacentury,mymomsaid,“Thatlookslikefun,but...I’mafraidIwon’thavetimetohelpyouplanit.Doyouthinkyoucandoitonyourown?”Atherwords,Iasked”So,mom,willyoupermitustodosoifwecanarrangethepartywell?”Mymomnoddedwithasmile.Unabletocontainmyjoyandexcitement,Ithrewmyselfintoherarms,murmuring,“Thankyou,dearmum.”ThenIcontinued.“IpromiseMaryandIwilldoeverylastbitofplanningandcleaningandeverything!”“Everything?Whataboutfood?”mymomasked.“It’llbeapotluckparty,”Iexplained.“Soeveryonewillbringsomethingtoshareoutamongtheguests!”Shenodded.“OK.Ifyouwanttomakesureyouhavetherightbalanceoffoodatapotluck,youshoulddefinitelytalktotheguestsaheadoftimeaboutwhatthey’rebringing.Besides,Isupposeyoucoulddrawupaguestlist,makeinvitationsinadvanceanddecoratetheyardcarefully.”“That’sgreat!”Isaid,“It’llbeaperfectpotluckparty.You’llsee!”注意:1.續(xù)寫短文詞數(shù)應為150左右;2,請按如下格式作答。Paragraph1:ThenextfewdayswereextremelybusyforMaryandI.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Finally,thebigdaycame.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意:“我”和朋友Mary看到雜志上的派對照片后,想在“我”家院子舉辦一場百樂餐派對?!拔摇毕蛎β档膵寢屨埱笤S可,媽媽同意只要我們能自行安排好一切。文章續(xù)寫圍繞我們籌備派對以及派對當天的情況展開,主要體現(xiàn)我們?yōu)榕蓪Ω冻龅呐团蓪Φ臍g樂氛圍。續(xù)寫要點:情感線:第一段從籌備時的忙碌與期待,到遇到困難時的焦慮與堅持;第二段從派對當天的興奮與緊張,到派對成功舉辦后的喜悅與自豪。故事線:第一段講述我們制定賓客名單、設計邀請函、提前與賓客溝通食物并精心裝飾院子,過程中遇到小麻煩但努力解決;第二段描述派對當天賓客到來,食物豐富,大家盡情享受歡樂時光,最后派對圓滿結束。主旨升華句:Friendshipandcooperationcanturnanideaintoawonderfulmemory.(友誼與合作能將一個想法變成一段美好的回憶。)Theeffortputintoacelebrationisrewardedwithjoyandlaughter.(為慶?;顒痈冻龅呐Q來歡笑與喜悅。)Asuccessfulpartyisnotjustaboutfoodanddecorations,butalsotheloveshared.(一場成功的派對不僅在于食物和裝飾,更在于分享的愛。)Whenwetaketheinitiativetocreate,weopenthedoortohappiness.(當我們主動去創(chuàng)造時,就打開了通往幸福的大門。)Thejourneyofplanningapartyisatestamenttothepowerofdetermination.(籌備派對的過程見證了決心的力量。)寫作示范一:Paragraph1:
ThenextfewdayswereextremelybusyforMaryandI.Weimmediatelystartedmakingtheguestlist,carefullychoosingourfriendswhowouldenjoytheparty.Thenwedesignedtheinvitations,usingcolorfulpaperandourbesthandwriting.Wecalledeachguesttotalkaboutthefoodtheywouldbring,makingsuretherewasagoodvariety.Decoratingtheyardwasabigtask.Wehungfairylights,arrangedflowers,andsetuptablesandchairs.Therewereafewhiccups,likewhenthestreamersgottangled,butwedidn'tletitstopus.Weworkedlateintothenight,excitedfortheparty.
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Finally,thebigdaycame.Thesunwasshiningbrightlyasweputthefinishingtouchesontheyard.Guestsstartedarriving,eachbringingadeliciousdish.Thetablewassoonfilledwithawonderfularrayoffood.Weallsatdown,ate,talked,andlaughed.Thereweregamesandmusic,andeveryonewashavingagreattime.Astheeveningdrewtoaclose,welookedaroundatthehappyfacesandknewourhardworkhadpaidoff.Ittrulywasaperfectpotluckparty.寫作示范二:Paragraph1:
ThenextfewdayswereextremelybusyforMaryandI.Wedrewupadetailedguestlistandspenthoursmakingtheinvitations.Wevisitedeachguestinpersontodiscussthefoodtheywouldcontribute,ensuringabalanceofsweetandsavory.Fortheyarddecoration,wesearchedforideasonlineandboughtmaterials.Westrunguplights,madepaperlanterns,andlaidoutabeautifultablecloth.Thereweremomentsofstress,suchaswhenwerealizedwedidn'thaveenoughplates,butwequicklyfoundasolution.Weweredeterminedtomakethepartyasuccess.
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Finally,thebigdaycame.Wewokeupearlytodoublecheckeverything.Whentheguestsarrived,theywereamazedbythedecorations.Thefoodwasdelicious,andeveryonesharedstoriesandjokes.Weplayedfungameslikecharadesandhadadanceparty.Theatmospherewasfilledwithjoyandlaughter.Bytheendofthenight,wewereexhaustedbutextremelyhappy.Ourperfectpotluckpartyhadbroughtourfriendstogetherandcreatedmemoriesthatwouldlastalifetime.【答案】Paragraph1:ThenextfewdayswereextremelybusyforMaryandI.Wewereasbusyasbees,makingfullpreparationsfortheparty.Asmymomhadsuggested,wedrewupaguestlistfirst,includingthefriendswewantedtoinvite.Afterthat,wecalledourfriendsandmadeinvitations.Hearingourplan,theywereoverwhelmedwithexcitement.Wetoldthemthedishestheywereexpectedtobring.Everythingwentsmoothly.Maryboughtsomecolorfulballoons,whileIpreparedsomeflowerstodecoratetheyard.Wespenthoursmakingdecorations,cleaningthebackyard,andsettingeverythingup.Seeingwhatwehaddone,mymomwasproudof
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