作文05 2021年內(nèi)蒙古包頭卷（滿分作文+同類作文+素材積累）-備戰(zhàn)2022年中考英語(yǔ)滿分作文+萬(wàn)能模板+熱點(diǎn)素材

2021年中考滿分作文特快?？骖}在線作文05內(nèi)蒙古自治區(qū)包頭卷真題在線（內(nèi)蒙古自治區(qū)包頭市2021年中考英語(yǔ)試題）假定你是李華，下周你校將組織去郊外游玩一天。你班英國(guó)交換生Alan發(fā)來如下郵件。請(qǐng)給Alan回復(fù)一封電子郵件，郵件需包括箭頭所指內(nèi)容。…Hi!Guesswhat?MyparentssaidIcouldgoonthedaytripintothecountrysidenextweek!Ourteachersaidwecoulddosomewalkingduringthetriporworkonafarm,didn’tshe?Whichwouldyouprefertodo?Whatdoyouthinkweshouldtakewithus?Doyouwanttomeetbeforethetriptotalkaboutit?AlanGreat!SaywhichandwhyGivesuggestionsYes-saywhenandwhere注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)反映考生信息的真實(shí)人名、地名等內(nèi)容。DearAlan,That’sgreat!I’msohappyyou’reabletocome!___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Seeyouthen!Yours,考題解析LiHua考題解析該題目屬于應(yīng)用文寫作，但寫作時(shí)要按郵件格式寫，在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)承接短文開頭，根據(jù)英語(yǔ)提示的內(nèi)容，先敘述作者的感覺，選擇的活動(dòng)及其理由以及針對(duì)此項(xiàng)活動(dòng)的建議、具體細(xì)節(jié)等。滿分范文滿分范文DearAlan,That’sgreat!I’msohappyyou’reabletocome!Iknowwe’llhaveagoodtime.I’drathertrylearningfromfarmersthandosomewalking,becauseIaminterestedinmilkingacowandfindingoutwhentopickfruitsorvegetablestheyplanted.It’smorechallenging.Besides,bathedinsunshineandfreshair,wewillrelaxourselves.Whydon’twetakesomesandwiches?I’llmakesomeforus.Couldyoubringsomebottlesofwater?Besides,don’tforgettowearclothesthataremoresuitableforsports.Let’smeetthisweekendfordetails.Wecanmeetatthecoffeeshopnexttoourschool.Seeyouthen!Yours,LiHua名師點(diǎn)評(píng)名師點(diǎn)評(píng).2021年包頭市的英語(yǔ)作文跟近幾年相比，體裁形式?jīng)]有太大波動(dòng)，均以郵件形式為主，且題目中已經(jīng)給出了相對(duì)應(yīng)的提示，對(duì)于該篇文章的寫作，既有一定的限制，也給了考生一定的空間發(fā)揮?？忌趯懽鲿r(shí)應(yīng)該用第一人稱為主來敘述內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)；在敘述內(nèi)容時(shí)，力求語(yǔ)句通順，敘述完整，保證行文連貫，條例清晰。佳句積累1.I’drathertrylearningfromfarmersthandosomewalking，…【亮點(diǎn)】該句運(yùn)用了高分句型“wouldratherdo…thando…”，意為“寧愿…而不愿…”。2.Besides,bathedinsunshineandfreshair,wewillrelaxourselves.【亮點(diǎn)】該句有兩個(gè)亮點(diǎn)，第一個(gè)是連詞“besides”的用法，表增補(bǔ)，可用于替代“and”。第二個(gè)亮點(diǎn)為非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的運(yùn)用。3.Besides,don’tforgettowearclothesthataremoresuitableforsports.【亮點(diǎn)】該句有兩個(gè)亮點(diǎn)，第一個(gè)是連詞“besides”的用法，表增補(bǔ)，可用于替代“and”，還可用“what’smore”來替換。第二個(gè)亮點(diǎn)為定語(yǔ)從句的運(yùn)用。舉一反三相似題①假如你叫Sam，以下是你的好友Kevin發(fā)的一封電子郵件，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)該郵件內(nèi)容給Kevin回復(fù)。HiSam,Howisitgoing?I’mgladwewillmeetsoon.IwanttoknowtheplanforSaturday.“Whereandwhenwillwemeet?”“Wherearewegoing?”and“Whatarewegoingtodo?”I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Kevin注意：1.請(qǐng)回復(fù)電子郵件中所提及的三個(gè)問題，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.郵件中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名或校名等相關(guān)信息；3.詞數(shù)：80詞左右。To:Kevin_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】To:KevinI’mgladtohearfromyou.WearegoingtohaveapicnicthisSaturdayatthepark.Wewillgettherebybus.Wearegoingtomeetat9o’clockatmyschoolgateinthemorning.Inthepark,wearegoingtotakesomephotos,playgames,flykitesandsingsongs.Youcantakesomesandwichesandsomebottlesofwaterwithyouforlunch.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,Sam【考題解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇書信作文。向Kevin介紹周六的活動(dòng)計(jì)劃。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文采用一般將來時(shí)。向?qū)Ψ浇榻B見面的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)，去哪里做什么，需要準(zhǔn)備的東西等內(nèi)容。寫作時(shí)需保持主謂一致性，邏輯性要強(qiáng)，無(wú)語(yǔ)法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。相似題②假定你是李平，最近收到意大利朋友Linda的電子郵件。以下是郵件的一部分，請(qǐng)你閱讀后回復(fù)，詞數(shù)80左右?！緟⒖挤段摹緿earLinda,ThankyousomuchforagreeingtoshowmybrotheraroundRome.Nowletmetellyousomethingaboutmybrother.Heisthirteenyearsold,easy-goingandhumorous-wegetalongreallywell.Helovesdifferentcultures.Heisinterestedinmuseumsandlikestryinglocalfood.Mybrotherisalsocute.He'sofmediumheightwithshortstraightblackhair.HeisgoodatChinesekungfu,andusuallywearsT-shirtsandjeans.Thanksagainforyourhelp!Yours,LiPing【考題解析】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作，寫作時(shí)要按郵件格式寫。在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)開頭感謝Linda同意帶著弟弟去羅馬觀光；第二段介紹了自己弟弟的基本信息；第三段對(duì)Linda表示感謝。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用三段式；用第三人稱來敘述內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，介紹自己的弟弟的基本信息，敘述完整且條理清晰。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：agreetodosth；beinterestedin；likedoingsth；begoodat；thanksforsth。句型：主系表結(jié)構(gòu)的句子Mybrotherisalsocute.；and連接的并列復(fù)合句HeisgoodatChinesekungfu,andusuallywearsT-shirtsandjeans.相似題③假如你是Amy，你有一個(gè)來自美國(guó)的網(wǎng)友名叫Linda。今天，她給你寫了一封電子郵件想了解一下你最好的朋友。請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀下面內(nèi)容，給她回復(fù)一封電子郵件。To:Amy@Hotmail.comFrom:Linda@hotmail.comSubject:ThebestfriendDearAmy,Howareyou?IamveryhappytoreceiveyourletterbecauseI’veknownmoreaboutyou.AndIalsowanttoknowsomethingaboutyourbestfriend!Wouldyoupleaseintroducehimorhertomeaccordingtothefollowinginformation?1.Whatdoesyourbestfriendlooklike?2.Howisyourbestfriend’sschoollife?3.Whydoyouchoosehim/hertobeyourbestfriend?I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Bestwishes!Yours,Linda注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右?；貜?fù)郵件的開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.回復(fù)郵件須包括所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使全文連貫、通順；3.回復(fù)郵件中不得提及真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。DearLinda,Thanksforyouremail.Imissyouverymuch.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】DearLinda,Thanksforyouremail.Imissyouverymuch.Ihaveabestfriendatschool.HernameisJenny.Shehasaheadofblackhair,smalleyes,smallnoseandabigmouth.Shestudiesverywell,andsheisthemonitorofourclass.Shelikesstudying,butdoesn’tlikesports.Sheenjoysfishing.Sometimessheasksmetogowithherandherdadtogofishing.Shecangetonwellwitheveryone.Weoftensharehappinessandsorrow.Ilikestudyingandplayingwithher.Ithinksheismyrealfriend.Yours,Amy【考題解析】1.題干解讀：本題為書信作文，寫作時(shí)要注意使用標(biāo)準(zhǔn)書信格式，題目要求介紹自己的一位好友，根據(jù)題目問題提示從好友外貌、學(xué)校生活以及與他（她）成為好友的原因等方面進(jìn)行敘述。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)應(yīng)用第一、三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)用現(xiàn)在時(shí)，寫作內(nèi)容不要脫離題目中的三個(gè)問題所限范圍。寫作時(shí)要注意條理清晰，層次分明，不要出現(xiàn)單詞拼寫和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。相似題④假設(shè)你是LiHua，以下是你的美國(guó)筆友Alex發(fā)給你的一封電子郵件，謝你根據(jù)該郵件內(nèi)容給Alex回一封郵件。要求：①考生需按電子郵件格式完成整封郵件；②郵件中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等相關(guān)信息；③字?jǐn)?shù)90—110?！緟⒖挤段摹縁romLiHuaToAlexSubjectCan’twaittomeetyou!HiAlexThanksforyourlastletter,andIcan’ttellyouhowexcitedIamnow!IplantoflytoAmericaonJuly10andstaythereforaboutthreeweeks.IwilltakeanEnglishcoursetoimprovemyspokenEnglish.Ifpossible,IhopetovisitsomeAmericanfamiliestoexperiencetheirlifeandlearnmoreaboutAmericanculture.AlsoI’dliketotaketripstoHollywoodandDisneyland.Thatmustbereallyinteresting.OfcourseIneedtobuysomepresentsformyfamilyandfriends.Doyouhaveanysuggestions?Can’twaittomeetyou!Yours,LiHua【考題解析】寫作分析：這篇寫作的體裁是信件，需要寫一封回信。寫作之前需要正確閱讀原來信件中的內(nèi)容，才能明白需要完成什么樣的寫作任務(wù)。通過讀信，發(fā)現(xiàn)Alex得知LiHua要早七月來洛杉磯，他想知道LiHua到達(dá)的時(shí)間、停留的時(shí)間以及想在美國(guó)做的事情。寫作難度不大，但需要注意書信的格式以及使得文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整。寫作亮點(diǎn)：回信一開始需要表達(dá)對(duì)收到信件的感謝（Thanksforyourlastletter），表達(dá)自己對(duì)于旅途的期待，然后需要按照順序描述自己的計(jì)劃。增添的細(xì)節(jié)是“IwilltakeanEnglishcoursetoimprovemyspokenEnglish.”（我將要上一次英語(yǔ)課程來提高自己的口語(yǔ)。），在這個(gè)前提下，表達(dá)了自己希望在美國(guó)做的事情。對(duì)于自己想要去的地方也進(jìn)行了陳述，但表述也不止于此，還提到了去玩之后還想買一些禮物，這樣的做法使得全文連貫得體。最后再次表達(dá)了自己的迫切之情（Can’twaittomeetyou!），總體來說文章語(yǔ)言連貫、結(jié)構(gòu)完整。相似題⑤（2019·浙江中考真題）書面表達(dá)假設(shè)你是LiMing，以下是你的南非筆友Seb發(fā)給你的一封電子郵件，請(qǐng)根據(jù)該郵件內(nèi)容給Seb回一封郵件。要求：1.考生需按電子郵件格式完成整封郵件；2.郵件中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等相關(guān)信息；3.詞數(shù)：90~100【參考范文】From:LiMingTo:SebSubject:LearningChineseinQuzhouHi,Seb,I’msogladtha