作文 11 內(nèi)蒙古卷 - 三年(2019-2021)中考英語(yǔ)滿分作文解析

作文11內(nèi)蒙古卷2021年1．我們國(guó)家歷史悠久，地大物博。有勤勞善良的人民；有綠水青山，美麗的風(fēng)景；有獨(dú)特的美食，傳統(tǒng)的飲食文化。請(qǐng)以”BeautifulChina”為題，寫一篇作文，描寫大美中國(guó)，表達(dá)我們對(duì)祖國(guó)的熱愛(ài)。要求：1.思路清晰，語(yǔ)句通順，書寫規(guī)范。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)與考生本人相關(guān)的校名和姓名等真實(shí)信息。3.詞數(shù)：80詞左右的短文。BeautifulChina____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：BeautifulChinaChinaisacountrywithalonghistoryandvastland.Therearehardworkingandkindpeople,whomakeChinamoreandmoreprosperousandstrong.Therearemanycleanlakesandgreenhills,whichmakeChinahavebeautifulscenery.Thereisrichanduniquefoodthatcreatesitstraditionalfoodculture.Chinaisfamousasitsfoodtastingtourismresourceshomeandabroad.ThisisbeautifulChina,andIloveitverymuch.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目是寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。要求根據(jù)題目要求，并以”BeautifulChina”為題，寫一篇作文，描寫大美中國(guó)，表達(dá)我們對(duì)祖國(guó)的熱愛(ài)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第三人稱來(lái)描述中國(guó)的特點(diǎn)；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；描述中國(guó)時(shí)，應(yīng)描寫細(xì)致、突出亮點(diǎn)；短文需要敘述完整，保證條理清晰。2．英語(yǔ)有句俗語(yǔ)：“Tenthousandlinescanpullaboat.”從這句話中我們深刻體會(huì)到團(tuán)隊(duì)協(xié)作(teamwork)的重要性，請(qǐng)你分享一次團(tuán)隊(duì)協(xié)作的經(jīng)歷，如：體育運(yùn)動(dòng)，小組合作學(xué)習(xí)，團(tuán)隊(duì)游戲等，并談?wù)勀銓?duì)團(tuán)隊(duì)協(xié)作的看法。要求：1.思路清晰，語(yǔ)句通順，書寫規(guī)范。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)與考生本人相關(guān)的校名和姓名等真實(shí)信息。3.詞數(shù):80詞左右的短文。Teamwork____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：TeamworkItissaidthat“Tenthousandlinescanpullaboat.”Teamworkplaysanimportantpartinourdailylife.IstillrememberwhenIwasinGrade8,myphysicswasverypoor.Ihadareallyhardtimewithit.Onceinclass,Istudiedwithsomeclassmatestogether.Iwasveryrelaxedandaskedmyclassmatesalotofquestionsaboutphysics.Ididn'tfeelstressedoutatall.Atlast,Ifinishedmyhomeworkbymyselfforthefirsttime.HowexcitedIwas!Becauseofstudyingingroups,Iamnotworriedaboutphysicsanymore.Igetmoreconfidencewithmyclassmates'help.

Italsogivesmemorechancestoimprovemyselfinmanyways.Inmyopinion,workinginateamprovidesachanceforustocommunicatewitheachother.Itisawaytobroadenourhorizonandtoestablishourfriendshipwithothers.Tosumup,tolearntoworkinateamisreallynecessaryandimportantandweshouldtrytoenjoyit.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作。在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示講述自己團(tuán)隊(duì)合作的一次經(jīng)歷并發(fā)表對(duì)團(tuán)隊(duì)合作的看法。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文主要用第一人稱進(jìn)行寫作，講述經(jīng)歷主要采用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)寫作。講述自己團(tuán)隊(duì)合作的一次經(jīng)歷敘述完整且條理清晰。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：playsanimportantpartin；hadareallyhardtimewith；feelstressedout；atlast；bymyself;becauseof;amworriedabout;inmyopinion;communicatewith;broadenourhorizon;tosumup。句型：it做形式主義主語(yǔ)的句子；itissaidthat…句型；how引導(dǎo)的感嘆句；and表示并列的句子；when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句。3．書面表達(dá)對(duì)于中學(xué)生在學(xué)校是否可以使用手機(jī)，不同的學(xué)生有不同的看法。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格中的提示寫一篇短文。觀點(diǎn)贊成反對(duì)理由1.易于和父母及朋友保持聯(lián)系2.空余時(shí)間可以聽(tīng)音樂(lè)……1.浪費(fèi)時(shí)間2.對(duì)眼睛有害……你的觀點(diǎn)及建議（至少用2至3句話進(jìn)行闡述）要求：1.文章應(yīng)包括所有要點(diǎn)并圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名等；3.詞數(shù)90詞左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Nowadays,moreandmoreteenagersusemobilephones.Canmiddleschoolstudentsusemobilephonesatschool?Differentstudentshavedifferentopinionsaboutit._______【答案】Nowadays,moreandmoreteenagersusemobilephones.Canmiddleschoolstudentsusemobilephonesatschool?Differentstudentshavedifferentopinionsaboutit.Somestudentsthinktheycanusemobilephonesatschool.First,usingmobilephonesmakesiteasytokeepintouchwiththeirparentsorfriends.Second,theycanalsotakephotosorlistentomusictorelaxthemselvesintheirfreetime.Besides,theycangetinformationonmobilephones.Forexample,theycanlookupnewwordsandexpressions.However,somestudentsdisagree.Theythinkusingmobilephonesatschoolisawasteoftime.ManystudentsspendtoomuchtimeongamesandQQ.It’sbadfortheireyesanditalsohasabadeffectonstudy.Inmyopinion,we’dbetternotusemobilephonesatschoolbecauseit’sbadforourhealthandstudy.Weshouldspendmoretimeonourstudyinsteadofusingmobilephones.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于議論文寫作，寫作時(shí)要擺事實(shí)，講道理。在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)承接短文開(kāi)頭；第二段把支持用手機(jī)一方的觀點(diǎn)和論據(jù)擺出來(lái)，進(jìn)行論證；第三段是反對(duì)使用者的觀點(diǎn)和論據(jù)；最后發(fā)表自己的看法。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用總分總的行文格式；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，論證時(shí)采用擺事實(shí)，講道理結(jié)合；擺事實(shí)時(shí)，先主后次，按順序講道理，用first…,second,besides。轉(zhuǎn)折連詞however聯(lián)系雙方不同觀點(diǎn)。最后Weshouldspendmoretimeonourstudyinsteadofusingmobilephones.運(yùn)用情態(tài)動(dòng)詞should使文章語(yǔ)氣委婉。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：moreandmore；lookup；keepintouchwith；Inmyopinion；bebadfor；insteadof。句型：usingmobilephonesmakesiteasytokeepintouchwith；句型theycanalsotakephotosorlistentomusictorelaxthemselvesintheirfreetime.?！军c(diǎn)睛】首先要認(rèn)真閱讀題意要求，對(duì)于提示內(nèi)容要仔細(xì)分析，從贊成和反對(duì)兩方面進(jìn)行論述。如贊成者的觀點(diǎn)的論據(jù)要充分，反對(duì)者的論據(jù)要擺事實(shí)，講道理，列舉害處。最后一定要表明自己對(duì)這一現(xiàn)象的看法，并說(shuō)明理由。最后提出希望。4．你校正在開(kāi)展主題為“Whatshouldagoodstudentbelike?”的討論，校園小記者采訪了一些老師和家長(zhǎng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)采訪內(nèi)容，結(jié)合自己的觀點(diǎn)，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文與大家分享。要求：1、用上表格中所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，100詞左右（短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2、不得引用或抄襲試卷前面閱讀材料中的語(yǔ)句，否則不予賦分；3、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名、地名，否則不予賦分；4、請(qǐng)?jiān)诖痤}卡指定位置作答，否則不予賦分。Whatshouldagoodstudentbelike?Teachersandparentshavedifferentopinionsaboutwhatagoodstudentshouldbelike.Asforteachers,theythink_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Teachersandparentshavedifferentopinionsaboutwhatagoodstudentshouldbelike.Asforteachers,theythinkthatontheonehand,weshouldloveourcountryandfollowtheschoolrules.Ontheotherhand,weshouldgetonwellwithothersandtreatotherspolitely.Asforparents,wearesupposedtobenotonlyhealthyandhappybutalsokindandconfident.AsfarasIamconcerned,tobeagoodstudents,weshouldprotecttheenvironmentbecauseweonlyhaveoneearth.Eveniftherearemanydifferentideasaboutwhatshouldagoodstudentbelike,weneedtodowhatweshoulddo.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，主要講述不同的人認(rèn)為一個(gè)好學(xué)生應(yīng)該是什么樣子的。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如ontheonehand...ontheotherhand、followtheschoolrules、getonwellwith、asfor、besupposedto、notonly...butalso...、asfarasI'mconcerned等，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)，例如followtherules，getonwellwith,besupposedto等；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作，在寫作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，如：ontheonehand...ontheotherhand,asfor,notonly...butalso,asfarasIamconcerned等，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。2020年5．假定你是李華，下周你校將組織去郊外游玩一天。你班英國(guó)交換生Alan發(fā)來(lái)如下郵件。請(qǐng)給Alan回復(fù)一封電子郵件，郵件需包括箭頭所指內(nèi)容?！璈i!Guesswhat?MyparentssaidIcouldgoonthedaytripintothecountrysidenextweek!Ourteachersaidwecoulddosomewalkingduringthetriporworkonafarm,didn’tshe?Whichwouldyouprefertodo?Whatdoyouthinkweshouldtakewithus?Doyouwanttomeetbeforethetriptotalkaboutit?AlanGreat!SaywhichandwhyGivesuggestionsYes-saywhenandwhere注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)反映考生信息的真實(shí)人名、地名等內(nèi)容。DearAlan,That’sgreat!I’msohappyyou’reabletocome!___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Seeyouthen!Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearAlan,That’sgreat!I’msohappyyou’reabletocome!Iknowwe’llhaveagoodtime.I’drathertrylearningfromfarmersthandosomewalking,becauseIaminterestedinmilkingacowandfindingoutwhentopickfruitsorvegetablestheyplanted.It’smorechallenging.Besides,bathedinsunshineandfreshair,wewillrelaxourselves.Whydon’twetakesomesandwiches?I’llmakesomeforus.Couldyoubringsomebottlesofwater?Besides,don’tforgettowearclothesthataremoresuitableforsport.Let’smeetthisweekendfordetails.Wecanmeetatthecoffeeshopnexttoourschool.Seeyouthen!Yours,LiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于應(yīng)用文寫作，但寫作時(shí)要按郵件格式寫，在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)承接短文開(kāi)頭，根據(jù)英語(yǔ)提示的內(nèi)容，先敘述作者的感覺(jué)，選擇的活動(dòng)及其理由以及針對(duì)此項(xiàng)活動(dòng)的建議、具體細(xì)節(jié)等。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱為主來(lái)敘述內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)；在敘述內(nèi)容時(shí)，力求語(yǔ)句通順，敘述完整，保證行文連貫，條例清晰。三、材料作文6．對(duì)于每個(gè)人來(lái)說(shuō)，生命只有一次。注意安全，就是珍惜生命的一種有效途徑。每年因意外事故傷亡的中學(xué)生有很多，為了讓自己健康平安成長(zhǎng)，你該如何保護(hù)自己的人身安全呢?請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提示，以"ProtectOurselves,Cherish（珍愛(ài)）OurLives"為題，寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。安全建議校園安全和同學(xué)友好相處，不打架生命安全不獨(dú)自游泳，不在危險(xiǎn)地區(qū)游泳網(wǎng)上安全安全上網(wǎng)，不獨(dú)自會(huì)見(jiàn)網(wǎng)友交通安全遵守交通規(guī)則要求：1.文章應(yīng)包括所有要點(diǎn)并圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名等；3.詞數(shù)90詞左右，標(biāo)題和開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。ProtectOurselves,CherishOurLivesLifeisonlyonceforeverybody.It'simportanttocherishourlives.Asstudents,whatshouldwedo?Herearesomesuggestions.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文ProtectOurselves,CherishOurLivesLifeisonlyonceforeverybody.It'simportanttocherishourlives.Asstudents,whatshouldwedo?Herearesomesuggestions.First,weshouldgetonwellwithourclassmatesatschool.Don’tfightwiththem.Ifwereallyhavetroubleincommunicatingwiththem,wecanaskourteachersforhelp.Second,weshouldn’tswimaloneorswimindangerousplaces.Itisdangerous.Third,weshouldsurftheInternetsafely,andweshouldn’tmeetnet-friendsalone.Fourth,wehadbetternotsmokeordrinkwineandwemustmakesureourfoodissafe.What’smore,therearemoreandmorecarsnowadays.Sowemustfollowthetrafficrules.Weshouldwalkonthezebracrossingwhencrossingthestreet.Safetycomesfirst.Sowemustbecarefulatanymoment.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是材料作文，要求以"ProtectOurselves,CherishOurLives"為題，結(jié)合表格提示內(nèi)容介紹保護(hù)自己、珍愛(ài)生命，可進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用三段式，用一、三人稱敘事，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。第一段介紹珍愛(ài)生命是重要的；第二段介紹如何保證人身安全；第三段概括安全是第一位的。要保證語(yǔ)言連貫，無(wú)語(yǔ)法和拼寫錯(cuò)誤。7．有一種付出叫作默默無(wú)聞，有一類平凡英雄叫作志愿者。你校100位同學(xué)踴躍報(bào)名參加團(tuán)委組織的志愿者服務(wù)活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列信息，寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。A．collectlitterinthecommunityB．tidyupbooksinthereadingroomC．visittheoldpeople'shome（敬老院）要點(diǎn)：1.依據(jù)圖表，描述報(bào)名結(jié)果；2.你想?yún)⒓右陨夏姆N志愿者服務(wù)活動(dòng)？說(shuō)明你的理由；3.談?wù)勀銓?duì)參加志愿者服務(wù)活動(dòng)的看法。寫作要求：1.行文連貫，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，書寫工整；2.包含以上所有要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.詞數(shù)80-100詞。開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4.文中不得出現(xiàn)與考生本人相關(guān)的真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等信息。TheLeagueCommitteecallsonallthestudentstotakepartinthevolunteerwork.100studentsintendtoworkasavolunteeractively.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：TheLeagueCommitteecallsonallthestudentstotakepartinthevolunteerwork.100studentintendtoworkasavolunteeractively.Accordingtothechart,thirtystudentswanttocollectlitterinthecommunity.Andanother40studentschoosetotidyupbooksinthereadingroom.Visitingtheoldpeople'shomeistherestofthestudents'plan.I’dliketocollectlitter.Thisisbecausepeopleoftenthrowlittereverywhere,anditmakesourcommunitydirty.IbelieveIcancalloneveryonetoprotecttheenvironmentwhichisthoughttobethe“home”forallofusbytakingthisaction.Infact,volunteerworkismoreandmorepopulararoundtheworld.Mostpeoplewanttodosomethingmeaningfulforothers.Asteenagers,weshouldtryourbesttotakeitup.Ithinkitcanmakeuskeepintouchwithotherpeoplebetter.Atthesametime,wecanexperiencehowourparentsworkhard.Inaword,doingvolunteerworkisgoodforourfuturelife.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本題是一篇材料作文，要求根據(jù)表格中的內(nèi)容介紹100位同學(xué)報(bào)名志愿服務(wù)活動(dòng)的結(jié)果，介紹自己想?yún)⒓拥闹驹阜?wù)活動(dòng)及原因，闡述自己對(duì)志愿服務(wù)活動(dòng)的看法，故文章中需包含以上三點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，缺一不可。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要以第一人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題；介紹100位同學(xué)報(bào)名情況時(shí)要引用正確的數(shù)據(jù)，介紹自己參加志愿活動(dòng)的原因及看法時(shí)要合乎情理，真情實(shí)意，以達(dá)到和讀者的共鳴；寫作時(shí)注意按要點(diǎn)分段敘述，文章層次清晰，語(yǔ)句通順，使讀者一目了然。8．我們?cè)谧分鹎啻簤?mèng)想的同時(shí)，不能忽視"勞動(dòng)最光榮"的優(yōu)良傳統(tǒng)。專家指出，經(jīng)常做家務(wù)不僅能鍛煉我們的動(dòng)手能力，還能增強(qiáng)我們的責(zé)任感。想要做最好的自己，就從做家務(wù)開(kāi)始吧!請(qǐng)以“Tobeahelperofmyfamily”為題目寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。要點(diǎn)：1．你經(jīng)常做哪些家務(wù)?2．描述一次你印象最深刻的家務(wù)勞動(dòng)過(guò)程，并寫出勞動(dòng)后的感悟。要求：1．書寫規(guī)范，詞數(shù)60﹣100；2．要點(diǎn)齊全，條理清晰，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名、地名，否則不予賦分；4．請(qǐng)?jiān)诖痤}卡指定位置作答，否則不予賦分。參考詞匯：makethebed，washthedishes，dosomewashing/leaning/cooking，lookafter，diligent(勤勞的)，hard﹣working，responsible，besatisfiedwith，confident…Tobeahelperofmyfamily______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：TobeahelperofmyfamilyIoftendohouseworkathome,suchasmakingthebed,washingthedishes,dosomewashing,lookingaftermyyoungersisterandsoon.LastFriday,theeveningfell,butmyparentsdidn'tcomebackhomeyet.Istoppeddoingmyhomeworkanddecidedtomakeamealformyfamilyinsteadofjustwaiting.Itwasmyfirstcooking.IsurfedontheInternettolearnhowtodohomestyledishes.Withthestep-by-stepdirections,Imanagedtomakemyfirstdish.ThenItriedtocookanother．Whenmyparentscamebackhome,theycouldn'tbelievetheireyestoseethedishesmadebyme.Myparentswereverysatisfiedwithme.Ithinkitisresponsibleforeveryfamilymembertosharehousework.Weshouldbehard-working.Afterthat,Ibecomemoreconfident.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作。寫作時(shí)分為三部分，第一部分經(jīng)常做哪些家務(wù)；第二部分分享一次做家務(wù)的經(jīng)歷；第三部分自己的感悟。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用第一人稱來(lái)敘述；時(shí)態(tài)上在敘述經(jīng)歷時(shí)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，點(diǎn)題部分和總結(jié)部分用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；描述經(jīng)歷時(shí)，起因、過(guò)程和結(jié)果要敘述完整，保證條理清晰。2019年9．假定你是李華，請(qǐng)給你的筆友Alan寫封郵件，告訴他今年你將去他所在的城市游玩，并制定了旅行計(jì)劃。你想征求他的意見(jiàn)，同時(shí)詢問(wèn)他是否可以接機(jī)。郵件還應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：Yourarrivetime10:30a.m.July2YourtravelPlangotoconcertgocamping….Meansoftransport(交通方式)duringyourvisitbybike,bybus…..注意：1、詞數(shù)90左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾部分已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2、可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3、文中不得出現(xiàn)反映考生信息的真實(shí)人名、地名等內(nèi)容。DearAlan,Howisitgoing?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourreply.YoursLiHua【答案】例文DearAlan?Howisitgoing?I'mthinkingoftakingatriptoyourcitythissummervacation,Iwonderifyouwillmeetmeattheairportat10:30am,July2,sinceitismyfirstvisitthere.Besides,I’vemadeatravelplan,includingenjoyingmusicataconcert,goingcampingandvisitingsomeplacesofinterest.I'veheardthattherearesomeamazingsightsinyourcity!Wouldyoupleasegivemesomeadvice?Eithertravelingbybikeorbybuswouldsuitmefine.It'senvironmentallyfriendly.Doyouhaveanyplansforthecomingvacation?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.LiHua【解析】【詳解】假定你是李華，請(qǐng)給你的筆友Alan寫封郵件，告訴他今年你將去他所在的城市游玩，并制定了旅行計(jì)劃。你想征求他的意見(jiàn)，同時(shí)詢問(wèn)他是否可以接機(jī)。文章要使用第一人稱為主。注意所給要點(diǎn)提示。建議在寫作時(shí)，盡量使用你熟悉句式和詞匯，同時(shí)添加適當(dāng)內(nèi)容，讓文章更加自然流暢。特別注意不要出現(xiàn)中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)思維的句式?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文很好地完成了文字提示要求的所有任務(wù)，時(shí)態(tài)和人稱運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確無(wú)誤。文章的結(jié)構(gòu)較為合理，顯得層次分明。用到了一些好的句型：I'veheardthattherearesomeamazingsightsinyourcity!Wouldyoupleasegivemesomeadvice?給文章增色不少。10．初級(jí)寫作：臨近畢業(yè)，學(xué)校在學(xué)習(xí)小組內(nèi)開(kāi)展了初中階段自評(píng)和組評(píng)活動(dòng)，假設(shè)你是Rainbow小組的組長(zhǎng)ZhangHong,請(qǐng)你為你的組員LiMing進(jìn)行綜合素質(zhì)的評(píng)價(jià)，寫一份素質(zhì)報(bào)告。內(nèi)容包括：1、他的愛(ài)好；2、他的優(yōu)點(diǎn)(兩條)；3、他的缺點(diǎn)或存在的問(wèn)題；4、你對(duì)他的建議(兩條)。要求：1.表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；2.要點(diǎn)必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)班級(jí)、姓名等；3.詞數(shù)：不少于80詞(所給內(nèi)容不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。LiMingisamemberofmyteamcalledRainbow.【答案】LiMingisamemberofmyteamcalledRainbow.Generallyspeaking,heisawarm-heartedandoutgoingboy.Heisalwaysreadytohelpotherswithoutaskingforanythinginreturn.Hecanalsogetonwellwithteachersandclassmates.Inhissparetime,helikesreadingbooksonhistory,soheknowsalotofknowledgeabouthistory.Butasafamoussayinggoes“Everycoinhastwosides”,sometimeshedoesn’tworkhardenoughonhislessons.Iadvisehimtospendmoretimeonthesubjectsfromnowon.What’smore,he’dbetteranswerquestionsinclassactivelysothathecanmakegreatprogress.I’msureifhecantryhardertoimprovehimself.He’llbeanexcellentstudentsoon.【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如amemberof，warm-heartedandoutgoing，bereadytodo，helpothers，askfor，inreturn，getonwellwith，alotof，advisesb.todo，spendmoretimeonsth.，fromnowon，sothat，makegreatprogress等。而非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu)Heisalwaysreadytohelpotherswithoutaskingforanythinginreturn.和Inhissparetime,helikesreadingbooksonhistory,soheknowsalotofknowledgeabouthistory./What’smore,he’dbetteranswerquestionsinclassactivelysothathecanmakegreatprogress./I’msureifhecantryhardertoimprovehimself.等復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。四、書信作文11．新型冠狀病毒肺炎疫情改變了我們的生活和學(xué)習(xí)方式。假如你是李華，你很關(guān)心國(guó)外筆友Jack，請(qǐng)你給他寫一封信。內(nèi)容包括：1.為了抗擊疫情，你給他的有關(guān)保持健康的四條建議。2.你的線上學(xué)習(xí)情況。3.鼓勵(lì)他克服恐懼心理，保持積極心態(tài)，相信一定會(huì)戰(zhàn)勝病毒。參考詞匯：thenovelcoronavirus（新冠肺炎）;mask（口罩）;virus（病毒）要求：1.語(yǔ)言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔、可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;2.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和校名等;3.80—100詞左右，文章的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearJack,Howareyou?Asweknow,thenovelcoronavirushaschangedourlife.Toprotectourselves,herearesomegoodsuggestionsforyou._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文:DearJack,Howareyou?Asweknow,thenovelcoronavirushaschangedourlife.Toprotectourselves,herearesomegoodsuggestionsforyou.First,youshouldavoidgoingtocrowdedplaces!Ifyouhaveto,remembertowearamask.You'dbetterkeepatleastonemeterofdistancebetweenyourselfandotherpeople.It'snecessaryforustoopenwindowstoletinfreshairduringtheday.Keephealthyhabitssuchaseatingabalanceddietandexercisingregularly,aswellasgettingenoughsleep.Thenovelcoronavirusstoppedusfromhavinglessonsinschools.However,ourgovernmentandschoolshavemadeeffortstomakeitpossibleforustostudyonline.Wecansharemorelearningresources.Thenewwayisveryconvenientandeffective.Last