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高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)“千層面之愛(ài)”傳遞全球溫暖1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文RhiannonMennlaunchedamovementtodeliverlasagna(千層面)andlovetostrugglingneighbors.RhiannonMennisthefounderofLasagnaLove,aglobalnonprofitthatconnectsneighborsthroughhomemademealdelivery.InMarch2022,sheandherhusbandownedadesignandbuildingcompany,buttheirprojectswereputonhold.Rhiannonfelthelplessandwonderedwhatshecoulddotobeuseful.Itdidn’ttakeherlongtodecide.“Cookingismyhappyplace,”shesays,Sheorderedgroceriesonlineandgottowork.Sheandherdaughter,Cimorene,thenthree,madeextrapansoflasagna,andRhiannonpostedinalocalmoms’grouponsocialmedia,offeringtodropoffafreehome-cookedmealtoanyonewhowantedone.Somepeoplerequestedameal,EvenmorewantedtohelpRhiannonfeedthosewhowerestruggling.4續(xù)寫原文Rhiannoncreatedaspreadsheetforeachvolunteer,matchingthemwithfamilieswho’drequestedameal.Wordofwhatshewasdoingspreadquicklyonsocialmedia.Someoneofferedtocreateanonlineportal(門戶網(wǎng)站)tomanagethevolunteersandmealrequests.ThisautomatedsystemfreedRhiannontodowhatshereallyloves:Cookandreachpeopleinneed.Volunteerchefslogintotheportalandinputhowmanymealsthey’dliketodeliverthatweek.Thesystemmatchesthemwithnearbyfamiliesrequestingameal,andthevolunteertextsthefamilytosetupadeliverytime.5續(xù)寫原文TheorganizationiscalledLasagnaLove,butvolunteerscandeliveranyhome-cookedmealthey’dlike.Rhiannon’srecipeisherownhomemadelasagna,makingithealthierwithgratedzucchiniandyellowsquash.“I’vesharedmyrecipe,butvolunteersarewelcometousetheirownrecipesforanydishesthey’dliketomake,”shesays.6段首句Paragraph1:Asyearspassed.LasagnaLove’sreachexpandedbeyondRhiannon’shometown,acrossthenationandeveninternationally.Paragraph2:Wheninterviewedbythelocaljournalist,RhiannonMennsmiledwithpride.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章講述了2022年3月,RhiannonMenn所在公司項(xiàng)目擱置,她決定發(fā)揮廚藝,和三歲女兒制作千層面,在社交媒體為有需要的人免費(fèi)送餐。隨后,她創(chuàng)立非營(yíng)利組織“LasagnaLove”,招募志愿者,為求助家庭送餐,還建在線門戶網(wǎng)站方便管理。多年過(guò)去,該組織從本地走向國(guó)際,各地人們用家鄉(xiāng)美食傳遞愛(ài)心,成為凝聚社區(qū)、打破隔閡的溫暖力量。點(diǎn)1:位于續(xù)寫第一段段首,流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ);點(diǎn)2:位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾,流暢銜接第二段段首句;點(diǎn)3:位于續(xù)寫第二段段首,續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語(yǔ);點(diǎn)4:文章結(jié)尾升華,給予讀者正能量,揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1:Asyearspassed.LasagnaLove’sreachexpandedbeyondRhiannon’shometown,acrossthenationandeveninternationally.隨著時(shí)間推移,“LasagnaLove”的影響力不斷擴(kuò)大。在美國(guó)的各個(gè)城市,志愿者們紛紛行動(dòng)起來(lái),有的精心烤制披薩,有的準(zhǔn)備豐盛的燉菜,為那些身處困境、無(wú)暇做飯的家庭送去關(guān)懷。在歐洲,鄰里之間互相分享著傳統(tǒng)的烘焙點(diǎn)心,孩子們也參與其中,幫忙包裝食物。在亞洲的社區(qū),志愿者們制作特色壽司、熱粥等,大家齊心協(xié)力,讓這份愛(ài)心跨越國(guó)界,溫暖每一個(gè)需要的人。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2:Wheninterviewedbythelocaljournalist,RhiannonMennsmiledwithpride.當(dāng)被當(dāng)?shù)赜浾卟稍L時(shí),RhiannonMenn眼中滿是自豪。她回憶起最初的艱難起步,從一個(gè)小小的念頭,到如今龐大的愛(ài)心網(wǎng)絡(luò),感慨萬(wàn)千。她強(qiáng)調(diào)這不僅僅是送餐,更是在傳遞人與人之間的信任與關(guān)愛(ài)。她希望這份愛(ài)心能一直延續(xù),讓更多人明白,微小的善舉也能匯聚成改變世界的力量,讓每一個(gè)角落都充滿愛(ài)與希望。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Asyearspassed,LasagnaLove’sreachexpandedbeyondRhiannon’shometown,acrossthenationandeveninternationally.Volunteerssprangupeverywhere.InbigcitiesofAmerica,somewerebakingpizzascarefullywhileotherswerepreparingheartystewstosendwarmthtothosestrugglingfamilieswhohadnotimetocook.InEurope,neighborssharedtraditionalbakedtreats,withchildrenhelpingtopackthefood.AcrossAsiancommunities,volunteersmadespecialsushi,hotporridgeandsoon.Allunitedtomakethislovecrossbordersandwarmeveryoneinneed.14范文呈現(xiàn)Wheninterviewedbythelocaljournalist,RhiannonMennsmiledwithpride.Sherecalledtheinitialtoughstart,fromatinyideatothehugelovenetworknow.Sheemphasizedthatitwasnotjustaboutdeliveringmealsbutalsobuildingtrustandcareamongpeople.Shehopedthislovewouldlastforever,makingmorepeopleunderstandthatsmallactsofkindnesscouldgatherintoapowertochangetheworld,fillingeverycornerwithloveandhope.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Asyearspassed,LasagnaLove’sreachexpandedbeyondRhiannon’shometown,acrossthenationandeveninternationally.Volunteersemergedindroves.InbustlingAmericancities,somemeticulouslybakedpizzaswhileotherswhippedupheartystews,reachingouttofamiliestoobeleagueredtocook.InEurope,neighborsswappedage-oldbakeddelicacies,childrenpitchingintowrapthegoodies.AcrossAsiancommunities,volunteerscraftedspecialsushiandsteamingporridge.United,theysentlovetranscendingborderstowarmtheneedy.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Wheninterviewedbythelocaljournalist,RhiannonMennsmiledwithpride.Recallingthefledglingstart,shemarveledathowagermofanideahadburgeonedintoavastlovenetwork.“It’snotmerelymealdelivery,”shestressed.“It’sforgingbondsoftrustandcare.”Shehopedthislovewoul
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