2025屆高考英語復習讀后續(xù)寫練習+雪夜被困的救援之旅+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習雪夜被困的救援之旅1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文ThesnowstormwastohittheeveningofMonday,Jan.31,2022.Afterwork,Ihadtotakethelaptopmycolleagueleftinmyofficetohishousebeforeitcame.Onthewaytohisplace,IpickeduptwopizzasbecauseI’dpromisedmykidsI'dbringsomehomefordinner.Ittookmeabout15minutestogettomycolleague’shouse,whereIdroppedoffthelaptopcaseandgotrightbackontheroad.Thenthesnowstartedanditwascomingdownfast.Itcameinfastandsowindythatitscreamed.Thewindowswerefoggingupandgettingcoveredwithsnow.Ididn’thaveacluewhereIwas.IstoppedbecauseIwasafraidofdrivingintoafarmer'sfield.Icalled911.Thedispatcher(調度員)toldmetosittightandwaitthingsoutforthenight—nobodywascomingtogetmeuntilmorningattheearliest.4續(xù)寫原文Thosesecondsafterthecallwereagony.Gettingouttowalkinthewhiteworldwithzerovisibility,highwindsandalowtemperaturewasn’tawiseoption.WouldthestormcontinueforlongerthanpredictedorwouldIbefoundtoolate?Mykids!Itwasthefirsttimetheywouldeverbespendinganightwithoutmeathome.Iwasliterallyterrifiedatthescenethatthesnowwaspiledup.IstayedinthecarandtextedmycolleaguewhoselaptopbagIhadjustreturned.Hehadanidea.“PinyourlocationonGoogleMapsandsendittome,”hesaid.Idid,andafewminuteslaterhetoldmethatIwasonaroadcalledBouvierLane,inbetweentwofarms.At6:30p.m,IpostedthisnewinformationtomyFacebookcommunitygroup,hopingforanyonewhoknewwholivedonthefarmstohelpmegetrescued.At8p.m,mycellphonerang.ItwasthesonofthefarmerwhoownedthelandbesidetheroadIwasstrandedon.Hetoldmethathisdad,Andy,wascomingtogetme.5段首句Paragraph1：Later,Isawatallfiguremovingtowardmeinthedark,carryingaflashlightandashovel(鏟子).Paragraph2：InAndy’shome,hiswife,MaryannBouvier,treatedmetohotdrinks.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8文章講述了文章講述了作者在雪storm來臨前，送同事的筆記本電腦回家，途中遭遇大雪被困。作者向911求助，之后同事幫忙定位，得知自己在一條叫布維爾巷的道路上。最終一位農民兒子打來電話，農民安迪前來救援。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節(jié)構建的重點9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Later,Isawatallfiguremovingtowardmeinthedark,carryingaflashlightandashovel(鏟子).作者在黑暗中看到安迪拿著手電筒和鏟子走來。安迪的身影在雪夜中顯得格外清晰，他用手電筒照亮周圍，走到車旁，打開車門，讓作者下車。作者跟隨安迪在雪地里艱難前行，雪不斷地打在臉上。安迪一邊走一邊安慰作者，讓作者不要害怕。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：InAndy’shome,hiswife,MaryannBouvier,treatedmetohotdrinks.作者來到安迪家，安迪的妻子瑪麗安端來熱飲。作者坐在沙發(fā)上，喝著熱飲，感受著溫暖。安迪和瑪麗安詢問作者的情況，作者講述了自己擔心孩子的心情。安迪表示會幫助作者盡快回家，瑪麗安也安慰作者，讓作者放心。作者對安迪一家的幫助表示感激。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Later,Isawatallfiguremovingtowardmeinthedark,carryingaflashlightandashovel.Theflashlightilluminatedthepathahead,andIcouldseethesnowswirlingaroundhim.Asheapproachedthecar,heopenedthedoorandsaid,“I'mAndy.Let'sgetyououtofhere.”Igotoutofthecarandfollowedhimthroughthesnow.Thewindwasblowinghard,andthesnowwasfallingheavily.Andywalkedahead,usingtheshoveltoclearthesnowinfrontofus.13范文呈現(xiàn)InAndy’shome,hiswife,MaryannBouvier,treatedmetohotdrinks.Shehandedmeacupofhotteaandsaid,“Youmustbefreezing.Sitdownandwarmup.”Isatdownonthecouchandtookasipofthetea.AndyandMaryannaskedmeaboutmysituation,andItoldthemhowworriedIwasaboutmykids.Theyreassuredmethateverythingwouldbeokayandsaidthattheywouldhelpmegetbackhomeassoonaspossible.Iwasgratefulfortheirkindnessandhospitality.14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Later,Isawatallfiguremovingtowardmeinthedark,carryingaflashlightandashovel.Thebeamoftheflashlightcutthroughthedarkness,revealingthesnow-coveredlandscape.Ashegotcloser,Icouldseehisdeterminedexpression.Heopenedthecardoorandsaid,“I'mAndy.Let'sgetyououtofhere.”Igotoutofthecarandfollowedhimthroughthesnow.Thewindwashowling,andthesnowwasfallingthickly.Andywalkedahead,usingtheshoveltoclearthepath.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)InAndy’shome,hiswife,MaryannBouvier,treatedmetohotdrinks.Shehandedmeacupofhotteaandsaid,“Youmustbefreezing.Sitdownandwarmup.”Isatdownonthecouchandtookasipofthetea.AndyandMaryannaskedmeaboutmysituation.ItoldthemhowworriedIwasaboutmykids.Theyreassuredmethateverythingwouldbeokayandsaidthey'dhelpmegetbackhomeassoonaspossible.Iwasgratefulfortheirkindnessandhospitality.