基礎(chǔ)寫作（求助、咨詢信）課件-高三英語上學期二輪復習專項

應(yīng)用文寫作突破訓練求助/咨詢信顧名思義，求助信就是寫信請求對方的幫助。寫信人求助是處于劣勢的一方，應(yīng)該處處體現(xiàn)恭敬和謙卑。言辭懇切的語言（speechinearnestlanguage）是其最主要的特征。寫信過程可以看成是求助人設(shè)法讓施助者了解、同情自己的過程，以求得到幫助。特別是提供幫助會損害施助者利益的時候，更要小心措辭，要充分體現(xiàn)禮貌原則。晨讀晚背一、必背詞語1.開頭段①尋求幫助/建議_________________②給某人關(guān)于……建議

_______________③請您幫個忙__________________④幫我解決這些問題__________________________________________ask/seekforhelp/advice/suggestionsgive/offersbadviceon…askyouafavorhelpmesolvetheseproblemsbegratefultosbforsth2.結(jié)尾段①因某事感激某人__________________②提前感謝您

__________________③需要進一步的信息

__________________thankyouinadvanceneedfurtherinformation3.中間段①一次難忘的經(jīng)歷

________________②一份珍貴的禮物

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③學習中心

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anunforgettableexperienceapreciousgiftthelearningcentre④擅長/不擅長

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⑤面臨困難

__________________⑥(做)某事有困難

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⑦從事兼職工作

______________⑧拓寬我的視野

______________⑨獲得一些工作經(jīng)驗

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______________takeupapart-timejobbefacedwithdifficultieshavetrouble/difficultyin(doing)sthbegood/poorataddsomecontentsbroadenmyhorizonsgainsomeworkingexperienceattachsomematerials?參加一個英語演講比賽________________________________?為它做充分的準備

________________?收集有用的材料________________?有一個很好的表現(xiàn)_______________?給某人留下深刻印象______________?到機場去接他

_________________?帶他去賓館______________makegood/fullpreparationsforittakepartinanEnglishspeechcontestcollectusefulmaterialshaveaverygoodperformanceleavesbadeepimpressionmeethimattheairporttakehimtothehotel二、必背好句1.開頭段常用語①如果您能幫助我，我將感激不盡。

____________________________________________________________________________________________Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucoulddomeafavour./Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldoffermeahand.?把它寄回給我______________?把它帶給你

_____________senditbacktomebringittoyou②不知道我是否可以請您幫個忙？

__________________________________________________________________________________________________③很抱歉打擾你了，但我真的需要你在……方面幫助我。__________________________________________________________________________________________________④面對這么大的困難，我不得不向你尋求一些幫助。__________________________________________________________________________________________________IwonderwhetherIcouldaskyouafavor./Iwonderifyoucoulddomeafavour.Iamsorrytobotheryou,butIreallyneedyourhelpwith...Facedwithsomuchdifficulty,Ihavetoaskyouforsomehelp.2.結(jié)尾段常用語①我真誠地希望您能就如何學好語法給我建議。____________________________________________________________________________________________②如果您給我建議我將感激不盡。________________

______________________________________________③謝謝您的關(guān)注，期待收到您盡早的回復。______________________________________________________________________________________________Isincerelyhopeyoucanoffer/givemesomeadviceonhowtolearngrammar.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldgivemesomesuggestions.ThanksforyourkindconsiderationandIlookforwardtoreceivingyourearliestreply.④謝謝您的好意。_________________________________________________Thankyouverymuchforallyourkindness.3.中間段常用語①我真不知道怎么辦才好，希望你能給我一些建議。__________________________________________________________________________________________________Ireallydon’tknowwhattodoandexpectyoutogivemeyouradvice.②我感謝你在幫我處理這個問題上所做的任何事情。__________________________________________________________________________________________________③你能否給我一些建議？_________________________________________________Iwouldappreciateanythingyoucandotohelpmewiththismatter.Wouldyouliketogivemesomeusefuladvice?典例示范假定你是李華，準備參加學校組織的英文詩朗誦比賽。請給外教George寫封郵件求助，內(nèi)容包括:1.說明比賽要求；2.請他推薦英文詩；3.請教朗誦技巧。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearMr.George,______________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua步驟一：審題文體求助信寫作情境準備參加學校組織的英文詩朗誦比賽，寫信請求外教指導信的作者李華（在校學生）寫作對象/讀者外教George時態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時為主語氣禮貌、謙卑懇切，使用正式的措辭以示尊重步驟二：謀篇布局步驟三：經(jīng)典范文熟記文中黑體詞塊及有下畫線的功能句型。DearMr.George,I’mwritingtoaskforyourhelp.OurschoolwillholdanEnglishPoetryReadingContestnextweekend.Iameagertohaveatry.Participantsarerequiredtoreciteadelicately-selectedEnglishpoemwithinatimelimitof3minutes.Winnersareexpectedtowinthreejudges’creditsandtheaudience’sheart.【要點1：比賽要求】However,whattroublesmetonoendisthatIhaven’tfoundamarvelouspoemyet.Iwonderifyoucould

recommendafewEnglishpoemstomethatarepositiveandtothepoint.Moreover,wouldyoubekindenoughto

offermesomeguidanceonmyreadingskillssuchasthetune,theemotionandthegesture?【要點2：請求幫助。推薦詩歌+具體遇到的困難】I’dappreciateitifyoucouldgivemesomeguidance.Lookingforwardtoyourreply. Yours,LiHua即時訓練訓練一假設(shè)你是李華，最近你和父母相處不是很愉快，因此感到有些苦惱。為此，請向英語報社“知心話欄目”寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.寫信目的；2.簡述情況；3.表達希望。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearEditor,I’mLiHua,asenior3student._______________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHuaDearEditor,I’mLiHua,asenior3student.Recently,Ihavehadaterribleconflictwithmyparents.IreallyfeelannoyedsoIamwritingtoaskforyourhelp.Here’sthewayittookplace.Lastweek,therewasacomprehensiveexamtocheckouracademicachievementinSenior3.Unfortunately,Ididn’thaveagoodperformance.Whenmyparentssawmysharpdeclineingrades,theyattributedittomyplayingcomputergamesatweekends.Ifeelcompletelyinnocentandhelpless.Actually,Ijustspendanhouronthegametorelaxmyselfeveryweekend.IguesstherootofmyproblemisthatIhavebeenundergreatpressure,butIdon’tknowhowtoexplainittomyparents.Couldyoupleasegivemesomesuggestionsonhowtocommunicatewithmyparents?I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua

訓練二假定你是李華，你校計劃舉辦介紹中國傳統(tǒng)文化的主題班會，并在英語網(wǎng)站上展示，請你給外國朋友Chris寫封信，向他了解哪些中國傳統(tǒng)文化更吸引外國朋友，內(nèi)容如下：1.闡明寫信事由；2.征求建議；3.表達感謝。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearChris,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHuaDearChris,RecentlyourschoolisplanningtoholdaclassmeetingwiththethemeofintroducingChinesetraditionalculture,whichwillbepostedonsomeEnglishwebsites,soI’mwritingtoaskyouforsomeadvice.Asyouknow,Chinaisacountrywitharichcultureandlonghistory.Attractingmoreforeignvisitors