八年級英語上冊Unit10Ifyougotothepartyyoullhaveagreattime單元寫作專項作業(yè)課件

單元寫作專項Unit10Ifyougotothe party,you'llhavea greattime!本單元主要談?wù)撊藗冏瞿呈驴赡艹霈F(xiàn)的后果,并針對實際情況提出合理的建議。要求學(xué)生會用if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句來提出具體問題,特別要注意主句和從句的時態(tài);同時掌握提建議的常用句型?！靖哳l詞匯】1.環(huán)游世界__________________________2.犯錯誤________________3.逃避__________runawaymakemistakestravelaroundtheworld4.解決你的難題_______________________5.保守秘密__________________6.把……切成兩半_____________cut…inhalfkeep…tooneselfsolveyourproblems【開頭句】1.IhaveaproblemnowandIneedyouradvice.我現(xiàn)在有個難題,需要你的建議。2.Ihavethesametroubleasyou.我和你有一樣的麻煩?！局虚g句】1.Ifyouhaveproblems,youshouldtalktootherpeople.如果你有麻煩,你應(yīng)該跟別人聊聊?！窘Y(jié)尾句】1.I'msurethatyoucansolveyourproblemsifyoufollowtheadvice.如果你按照這些建議做,我相信你能解決你的難題。【名言警句】1.Twoheadsarebetterthanone.兩人智慧勝一人。2.Tohelpothersistohelpyourself.幫助別人就是幫助你自己。【寫作任務(wù)】Tom是一名中學(xué)生,他沉迷于電腦游戲,并因此影響了學(xué)習(xí)。假如你是Dave,作為Tom的好朋友,你打算怎么幫助他呢？請根據(jù)下面所給的提示寫一封不少于80詞的信。提示:giveup;waste…time;beinterestedinDearTom,Iamsorrytohearthatyouareintroublenow.__________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Dave【寫作點撥】1.審題:(1)確定人稱。本文主要是給好友提建議,主要用第二人稱。(2)確定內(nèi)容。核心內(nèi)容是寫給Tom的建議,可以靈活運用提建議的句型。(3)確定時態(tài)。向Tom提建議,可以用一般將來時或一般現(xiàn)在時,也可用should,may等情態(tài)動詞。2.寫作提綱【范文點評】DearTom,I'msorrytohearthatyouareintroublenow.①Don'tworry,andletmehelpyou.Now,I'llgiveyousomeadvice.②Ifyouspendtoomuchtimeoncomputergames,youwillwastelotsoftime.①Don'tworry,andletmehelpyou.起到承上啟下的作用,使文章更加流暢。②if從句清楚地交代了playingcomputergames的缺點。③Asaresult,you'llhavelittletimetodoyourhomework.Ifyougiveupplayingcomputergames,youmaybeinterestedinotherthings,likestudyorsports.It'sgoodforyoutotakeupnewhobbiesinstead.Forexample,youcanlearnpaintingortakedancinglessons.Ofcourse,youcanplaycomputergamesforashorttimewhenyoufeeltired.③asaresult這個短語直接描述了沉迷電腦游戲的后果。④Ithinkifyoufollowtheadvice,you'llhaveagreattimeatschool.if從句使文章首尾呼應(yīng),結(jié)構(gòu)完整。

④Ithinkifyoufollowtheadvice,you'llhaveagreattimeatschool.Yours,Dave

史密斯先生由于工作壓力大,睡眠出現(xiàn)了問題。下面是他給心理專家Dr.Green寫的一封信。如果你是Dr.Green,請根據(jù)以下提示給史密斯先生寫一封回信,提出一些合理的建議幫助他恢復(fù)健康。DearDr.Green,Iwashealthybefore,butthesedaysIcan'tsleepverywell.Ialwayscan'tstopthinkingabouttheworkinthedaytime.Idon'tknowwhatIshoulddo.Couldyougivemesomeadvice,please?Thanksalot!Yours,Mr.Smith提示:1.盡量不想白天的工作;2.睡前適當(dāng)做些運動;3.聽一些音樂。要求:1.語句通順,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;2.詞數(shù)80左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________DearMr.Smith,I'msorrytohearthatyoucan'tsleepwell.Therearealotofthingstodo.Theymayhelpyousolvetheproblem.First,youshouldtrytoforgeteverythingabouttheworkinthedayafterwork.Next,ifyoucandosomesportsbeforeyougotobed,youwillgetrelaxed.Then,itisgoodforyoutolistentosomequietmusicwhenyougotobed.Besides,whydon'tyoureadsomethinginterestingbeforesleeping?Ifyoudothese,Ithinkyou'llfeelbetter.Yours,Dr.Green_____________________________________________________________________________