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高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)意外之喜:爭(zhēng)奪音樂會(huì)門票1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文AlexisandZoeweresittingatthekitchentabledoinghomework.Theywerehavingahardtimeconcentratingontheirassignmentbecausetheradiostationwasplayingmusicfromtheirfavoriteband,theShapeShifters.“Ican’tbelievetheShiftersaregoingtobeplayinghereandwecan’tgo!”Alexiscomplained.“Iknow,”complainedZoe.“Ticketsweresoldoutinfiveminutes,andevenifwecouldgetsome,theyaresoexpensive!”“It’stotallyunfair,”saidAlexis.“Theyshouldgivetheticketstotheirbiggestfansfirst!”“Youmeanus,right?”“Obviously,”laughedAlexis.“Everyoneknowswe’retheirnumberonefans.”4續(xù)寫原文Zoeturnedtheradioupalittlelouder.Theirfavoritesongwason,andusingapencilandabananaasmicrophones(麥克風(fēng)),theysangloudlyasiftheywereattheconcert.Asthesongended,thehoststartedtalkingabouttheconcert.“TheShapeShiftersareplayingintownthisweekend,”heannouncedloudly.“Andwe’regivingawaytwoticketstoSaturday’ssold-outshow,rightnow!We’relookingforthe10thcallerwhocancorrectlyanswerthisquestion:WhoistheoldestmemberoftheShapeShifters?”AlexisandZoelookedateachother.Theycouldn’tbelievehoweasythequestionwas.“It’sGeorgie!”saidAlexis.“No,it’sNatasha,”answeredZoe.5續(xù)寫原文“Whatdoyoumean?”askedAlexis.“EveryoneknowsGeorgieis29,he’smucholderthantherestoftheband.”“Yeah,Iknowhe’stheoldestperson,butthequestionwaswhotheoldestmemberofthebandis.Natashastartedthebandwhenshewasjust15.Theothersjoinedthegroupafterher.”explainedZoe.”“But…”Alexiswasn’tconvinced.Astheylistened,theyheardthehosttakingcallsfromexcitedfans.“CallerNumberThree,you’reup!What’syouranswer?”“Georgie,”saidthenervousvoice.“Wrongagain,”boomedthehost.“Nobodyseemstoknowtheanswer!Nextcaller!”6段首句Paragraph1:“You’reright!CALLTHESTATIONNOW!”Alexissaid.Paragraph2:“Whatareyournames,ladies?”thehostaskedseriously.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章講述了Alexis和Zoe是樂隊(duì)ShapeShifters的超級(jí)粉絲,得知樂隊(duì)將在當(dāng)?shù)匮莩?,她們因門票售罄且價(jià)格昂貴而無(wú)法前往。正當(dāng)她們?cè)趶N房做作業(yè)并跟著電臺(tái)播放的樂隊(duì)歌曲哼唱時(shí),電臺(tái)主持人宣布要送出兩張周六已售罄演出的門票,只要第10位答對(duì)問題“ShapeShifters樂隊(duì)中最年長(zhǎng)的成員是誰(shuí)”的來(lái)電者即可獲得。Alexis和Zoe對(duì)答案產(chǎn)生分歧,而此前來(lái)電者回答均錯(cuò)誤。點(diǎn)1:位于續(xù)寫第一段段首,流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ);點(diǎn)2:位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾,流暢銜接第二段段首句;點(diǎn)3:位于續(xù)寫第二段段首,續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語(yǔ);點(diǎn)4:文章結(jié)尾升華,給予讀者正能量,揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1:“You’reright!CALLTHESTATIONNOW!”Alexissaid.“你說(shuō)得對(duì)!現(xiàn)在就給電臺(tái)打電話!”亞歷克西斯說(shuō)道。佐伊立刻放下手中的筆,一把抓起電話,由于太過激動(dòng),她的雙手止不住地顫抖。她好不容易按下號(hào)碼,電話撥通后,每一聲鈴聲都讓她們的心揪得更緊。亞歷克西斯在一旁不停地踱步,嘴里念叨著:“一定要是第十個(gè)來(lái)電者啊?!苯K于,電話那頭傳來(lái)聲音:“您是第八個(gè)來(lái)電者,請(qǐng)等待問題?!眱扇藢?duì)視一眼,眼中滿是緊張與期待,默默祈禱著好運(yùn)降臨。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2:“Whatareyournames,ladies?”thehostaskedseriously.“姑娘們,你們叫什么名字?”主持人嚴(yán)肅地問道?!拔沂莵啔v克西斯,這是佐伊?!眮啔v克西斯回答,聲音中帶著難以抑制的興奮?!澳悄銈兊拇鸢甘??”主持人繼續(xù)追問?!澳人?!”兩人異口同聲地喊道。短暫的沉默后,主持人激動(dòng)地宣布:“回答正確!你們贏得了兩張ShapeShifters樂隊(duì)音樂會(huì)的門票!”亞歷克西斯和佐伊瞬間從椅子上跳起來(lái),尖叫著緊緊相擁。她們夢(mèng)寐以求的愿望終于實(shí)現(xiàn),想到即將能看到心愛的樂隊(duì)演出,喜悅之情溢于言表,滿心期待著周六的到來(lái)。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)“You’reright!CALLTHESTATIONNOW!”Alexissaid.Zoeimmediatelyputdownherpenandgrabbedthephone.Herhandswereshakinguncontrollablyduetoexcitement.Withgreatdifficulty,shedialedthenumber.Asthephonerang,everyringmadetheirheartspoundevenharder.Alexispacedbackandforthbesideher,muttering,“Pleasebethetenthcaller.”Finally,avoiceansweredontheotherend,“You'retheeighthcaller.Pleasewaitforthequestion.”Theyexchangedglances,theireyesfilledwithtensionandanticipation,silentlyprayingforgoodluck.14范文呈現(xiàn)“Whatareyournames,ladies?”thehostaskedseriously.“I'mAlexisandthisisZoe,”Alexisreplied,hervoicebrimmingwithanticipation.“Andyouranswer?”thehostprobedfurther.“Natasha!”theybothshoutedinunison.Therewasabriefpause,andthenthehostexclaimed,“Correct!You'vewontwoticketstotheShapeShiftersconcert!”AlexisandZoeleapedoutoftheirchairs,screamingandhuggingeachother.Theirlong-awaiteddreamofseeingtheirfavoritebandwasfinallycomingtrue.Overwhelmedwithjoy,theycouldhardlywaitforSaturdaytoarrive.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)“You’reright!CALLTHESTATIONNOW!”Alexissaid.Instantly,Zoedroppedherpenandsnatchedthephone,herhandsquiveringwithexcitement.Strugglingtosteadyherfingers,shemanagedtodialthenumber.Asthephonerang,eachringseemedtoechotherapidbeatingoftheirhearts.Pacingnervouslybesideher,Alexismutteredrepeatedly,“Please,letusbethetenthcaller.”Finally,avoicefromtheotherendannounced,“You'retheeighthcaller.Pleasewaitforthequestion.”Exchanginganxiousglances,theywerefilledwithamixoftensionandhope,ferventlyprayingforfortunetosmileuponthem.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)“Whatareyournames,ladies?”thehostaskedseriously.“I'mAlexisandthisisZoe,”Alexisreplied,hervoicetingedwithbarely-containedexcitement.“Andyouranswer?”thehostinquiredfurther.“Natasha!”theyshoutedsimultaneously.Afterabriefmomentofsilence,thehostexclaimed,“Correct!You'vewontwoticketstotheShapeShiftersconcert!”Leapingoutoftheirseats,AlexisandZoeembracedtightly,screamingwithjoy.Theirlong-cherisheddream
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