2021年高考英語(yǔ)二輪精講精練講義-專題-書面表達(dá)一經(jīng)典精講(上)-

書面表達(dá)一經(jīng)典精講（上）主講老師：林斌北京八十中學(xué)英語(yǔ)高級(jí)老師開篇語(yǔ)地點(diǎn)描寫題一：假如你叫李華，請(qǐng)你依據(jù)以下提示，給你的伴侶Jim寫一封E-mail，介紹海淀，并談?wù)勀阍诤５砩畹母惺堋?.海淀區(qū)位于北京市西北部；面積約426平方公里；人口有184萬(wàn)。2.海淀特色：是中國(guó)高科技中心，有萬(wàn)余家高科技公司；是重要的訓(xùn)練科研基地，有78所高校；是出名的旅游區(qū)，有眾多名勝古跡，如頤和園、圓明園等；……說(shuō)明：1.詞數(shù)不少于60。2.開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出。DearJim,IamsogladthatyouareinterestedinHaidianDistrict.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestregards.Yours,LiHua題二：假定你是李華，應(yīng)英國(guó)伴侶Bob的要求，寫一封短信介紹你校圖書館的基本狀況。內(nèi)容須包括下面兩幅圖中的相關(guān)信息。DearBob,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua題三：下面是北京市第八十中學(xué)，請(qǐng)介紹下這個(gè)學(xué)校！__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________題型說(shuō)明translation1.他的幻想是當(dāng)一名老師。2.他考入北京高校。3.他總是第一個(gè)來(lái)最終一個(gè)走的同學(xué)。4.我是在北極獨(dú)自旅行的第一位女性。5.有志者事竟成。他的幻想是當(dāng)一名老師。Hisdreamistobecomeateacher.Hedreamsofbecomingateacher.他從小就幻想當(dāng)美國(guó)總統(tǒng)。HedreamtofbecomingthepresidentoftheUnitedStatesinhischildhood.他考入北京高校。HeenteredPekingHewasadmittedto/intoPeking1988年他考入哈佛法學(xué)院。In1988,hewasadmittedintoHavard他總是第一個(gè)來(lái)最終一個(gè)走的同學(xué)。Heisalwaysthefirststudenttocomeandthelasttoleave.我是在北極獨(dú)自旅行的第一位女性。IwasthefirstwomantotravelaloneattheNorthPole.他是美國(guó)歷史上的第一位黑人美國(guó)總統(tǒng)。HeisthefirstAfricanAmericantobethePresidentoftheUnitedStatesintheUShistory.有志者事竟成。Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.假如你是Jason,你的網(wǎng)友李華向你詢問(wèn)有關(guān)美國(guó)新任總統(tǒng)奧巴馬的狀況。請(qǐng)你依據(jù)在網(wǎng)站上收集到的有關(guān)信息給她回復(fù)一封電子郵件，談?wù)剨W巴馬的狀況。留意:1.郵件的開頭已為你寫好，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.詞數(shù)100左右。姓名巴拉克·奧巴馬（BarackObama）誕生時(shí)間1961誕生地點(diǎn)夏威夷檀香山（Honolulu,Hawaii）家庭狀況父親是肯尼亞黑人，母親是美國(guó)白人小時(shí)幻想當(dāng)總統(tǒng)訓(xùn)練1988年考入哈佛法學(xué)院（HarvardLawSchool），1991年獲博士學(xué)位職業(yè)及政治生涯畢業(yè)后當(dāng)律師、高校講師，后來(lái)從政。2008.11.4在美國(guó)大選中(thegeneralelection)擊敗JohnMcCain，成為美國(guó)首位黑人總統(tǒng)。成功意義（自擬)Hi,LiHua,YouaskedmeaboutBarackObama.HereissomethingabouthimIgotwhenIsearchedthewebsitesathome.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,JasonBeautifythesimplesentences句式美化In1988,hewasadmittedintoHarvardIn1991,hegothisDoctor’sDegreethere.In1988,hewasadmittedintoHarvardLaw2008年11月4日對(duì)于奧巴馬來(lái)說(shuō)是一個(gè)重要的日子。November4th,2008isanimportantdayforBarackObama.在總統(tǒng)大選(thegeneralelection)中他擊敗約翰.麥凱恩(JohnMcCain)。HedefeatedJohnMcCaininthegeneralelection.November4th,2008isanimportantdayforBarackObama,______hedefeatedJohnMcCaininthegeneralelection.在總統(tǒng)大選(thegeneralelection)中他擊敗約翰.麥凱恩(JohnMcCain)。HedefeatedJohnMcCaininthegeneralelection.他成為美國(guó)歷史上第一位黑人總統(tǒng)。HebecamethefirstAfricanAmericantobethepresidentoftheUnitedStatesintheUShistory.HedefeatedJohnMcCaininthegeneralelection,__________thefirstAfricanAmericantobethepresidentoftheUnitedStatesintheUShistory.成功的意義他的成功絕非偶然。Hissuccessisnoaccident.有幻想，為之努力奮斗，你就會(huì)成功。Ifonehasadream,workhardforitandhewillsucceedoneday.有志者事竟成。Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.付出的越多，得到的就越多。Themoreyoupain,themoreyouwillgain.readthethreesentencesIn1988,hewasadmittedintoHarvardLawSchool,November4th,2008isanimportantdayforBarackObama,whenhedefeatedJohnMcCaininthegeneralelection.HedefeatedJohnMcCaininthegeneralelection,becomingthefirstAfricanAmericantobethepresidentoftheUnitedStatesintheUShistory.BasicWriting--CharacterintroductionJustguessthemandescribedinthefollowingsentences！1.他1910年11月2日生于一個(gè)富有家庭,2005年4月24日因病于北京逝世。(dueto)①HewasbornintoarichfamilyonNovember2,1910anddiedduetodiseaseinBeijingonApril24,2005.②BornintoarichfamilyonNovember2,1910,hepassedawayduetodiseaseinBeijingonApril24,2005.2.他高校時(shí)先從事于醫(yī)學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)，但后來(lái)卻轉(zhuǎn)變方法。Whenhewenttocollege,hefirstchosetoworkonmedicinebutthenchangedhismind.3.他1930－1935年于清華高校學(xué)習(xí)，之后到英國(guó)連續(xù)深造。(furthereducation)Between1930and1935,hestudiedinTsinghuaUniversityandthenwenttoEnglandforfurthereducation.4.他獲得博士學(xué)位。Hereceivedhisdoctor’sdegree.5.他一生致力于社會(huì)科學(xué)(sociology)爭(zhēng)辯，促使(advance)中國(guó)農(nóng)村經(jīng)濟(jì)進(jìn)展。HedevotedhimselftotheresearchonsociologyandadvancedthedevelopmentofChina’sruraleconomy.費(fèi)孝通是我國(guó)出名的社會(huì)學(xué)家和社會(huì)活動(dòng)家。請(qǐng)依據(jù)下文提示，用英文寫一篇短文介紹一下費(fèi)孝通先生。生平1910年11月經(jīng)受1、高校時(shí)先從事于醫(yī)學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)，但后來(lái)卻轉(zhuǎn)變方法。2、1930－1935年于清華高校學(xué)習(xí)，之后到英國(guó)連續(xù)深造，并獲得博士學(xué)位。3、1938年后，曾任教于清華高校和北京高校。評(píng)價(jià)1、致力于社會(huì)科學(xué)爭(zhēng)辯，促使中國(guó)農(nóng)村經(jīng)濟(jì)進(jìn)展。2、費(fèi)孝通是一個(gè)活到老，學(xué)到老的人。參考詞匯：社會(huì)學(xué)家sociologist;社會(huì)活動(dòng)家socialactivist【寫作要求】使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部所給的內(nèi)容，并組織成連貫的短文。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________HowdoyoudotheBasicWriting?Thesuggestedsteps:1.審題:確定文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)2.整合信息:把全部?jī)?nèi)容整合成5句3.翻譯句子：考慮語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)4.連句成篇5.檢查生平1910年11月2經(jīng)受1、高校時(shí)先從事于醫(yī)學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)，但后來(lái)卻轉(zhuǎn)變方法。②2、1930－1935年于清華高校學(xué)習(xí)，之后到英國(guó)連續(xù)深造，并獲得博士學(xué)位。③3、1938年后，曾任教于清華高校和北京高校。④評(píng)價(jià)1、致力于社會(huì)科學(xué)爭(zhēng)辯，促使中國(guó)農(nóng)村經(jīng)濟(jì)進(jìn)展。2、費(fèi)孝通是一個(gè)活到老，學(xué)到老的人。⑤檢查(Howtocorrect?)

1、是否恰好五句話？２、是否每句都含必要信息？３、可否自由發(fā)揮？４、pants糾錯(cuò)原則：1)pattern2)agreement3)number4)tense5)spelling上半講到此結(jié)束歡迎連續(xù)學(xué)習(xí)下半講書面表達(dá)一經(jīng)典精講（上）講義參考答案地點(diǎn)描寫題一：DearJim,IamsogladthatyouareinterestedinHaidianDistrict.HaidianDistrictliesinthenorthwesternpartofBeijing.Itcoversanareaof426squarekilometersandhasapopulationof1.84million.Itisthecountry’scenterforhightechnology,withmorethantenthousandhi-techcompanieslikeLenovo.Itisalsohometo78famousuniversitiesandinstitutes,includingPekingUniversityandTsinghuaUniversity.Atthesametime,itiswell-knownformanyworld-famousplacesofinterest,suchastheSummerPalaceandInaword,it’saniceplaceforpeopletostudy,workandlive.IamreallyproudofbeingacitizenofHaidian.Ihopeyoucancomeandseeitforyourselfsomeday.Bestregards.Yours,LiHua題二：DearBob,Thankyouforyourlastletteraskingaboutourlibrary.Ourlibraryisinthecentreoftheschool.Thereisabeautifulgardeninfrontofitandourclassroombuildingisrightbehindit.Thelibraryisbig.Whenyougetinside,youwillseemanyshelvesfullofbooksondifferentsubjects.Therearealsolotsofnewspapersandmagazines.Weborrowbooksanddosomereadinginthelibrary.Accordingtotherule,everystudentcanborrowupto5bookseachtimeandkeepthemfor10days.Itisopenfrom9a.m.to7p.m.fromMondaytoFridayandclosedonweekends.Wealllikeourlibraryverymuch.Yours,LiHua題三：Foundedin1956,No.80HighSchoolisnowoneofthemostdistinguishedschoolsinBeijing.Currentlywehavemorethan3000students,rangingfromYear7toYear12,alongwith400staffmembers.Thewholeschoolisdividedintotwosections,withjuniorsectionlocatedneardowntownwhileseniorsectionfurtherawayatoutskirts.Ourschoolhaswonthefameasa“garden-likeschool”duetoitsimpressivelandscapingandfacilities.Themomentyouenterthecampus,youwillsee“thewaytosuccess”.Theroadstartsfromtheeastgate.Attheendoftheroadistheauditoriumwheregraduationceremonyisheldeverysummer.Theauditoriumisshapedlikeahatofadoctorate,whichsymbolizesacademicsuccess.That’swhythisroadhasgotsuchaname.OnthelefthandsideisourclassroombuildingwhileontherightistheComplexwheremostlaboratoriesarelocated.Eastoftheschoolstandsthelibrary,rightbehindwhichistheastrodome,whereweobservestarsandtheuniverse.Southoftheschoolliesthegardenwherestudentsspendtimereadingorstudyingplantsinbiologylessons.Nexttothegardenisstudents’dormitory.Fourstudentssharearoomandeachroomisair-conditioned.Westoftheschoolliestheplaygroundintheopenair.StudentsdomorningexercisesandhavePElessonshere.Rightinthemiddleisthefootballfield.Whentheweatherisbad,wehavePElessonsinthegymnasium.Schoolbasketballteamtrainshereatthebasketballcourt.No.80HighSchool,Beijing,opensherarms,readytoembracefriendscomingfromeverypartoftheworld.SuchisBeijingNo.80,whereweliveandstud