Disaster-and-hope-第4課時-Writing-描述一次活動經(jīng)歷(教師版)

2019外研版必修三Unit6Disasterandhope6.4Writing安全指南學習內(nèi)容學習內(nèi)容寫一篇安全指南安全指南屬于指導性說明文。此類寫作的特點是：目的明確、簡潔明了、步驟清晰、操作性強。句型以祈使句為主，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，人稱多用第一人稱或第二人稱。本寫作任務要求寫安全指南，屬于指導性說明文。此類寫作的特點是：目的明確、簡潔明了、步驟清晰、操作性強。句型以祈使句為主，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，人稱多用第一人稱或第二人稱。寫作可分三部分：第一部分：引入話題(比如：遇到有人溺水怎么辦)；第二部分：說明如何施救；第三部分：總結(jié)全文(說明實施急救的重要性)。寫作可分三部分：第一部分：引入話題(比如：遇到有人溺水怎么辦)；第二部分：說明如何施救；第三部分：總結(jié)全文(說明實施急救的重要性)。常用句式1．Weshouldcheckwhetherthepersoncanbreatheornot.2．Usethemouth-to-mouthmethodwithinfiveminutes.3．Laythepatientdownonacoatorsleepingbagifpossible.4．Coverthewoundwithabandageorapieceofdrycleancloth.5．Don’ttrytomovethepersonunlessheisindanger.6．Don’tgivethepersonanythingtoeatordrink.知識精講知識精講寫作指導增色詞匯災難_______________預報________________立即，馬上________________緊急情況________________抓住_______________導致________________洪水________________危險的________________個人財產(chǎn)________________精彩句式Otherwise，wecan’teasilydealwith...inthefaceof.......Herearesometipson...Itisimportanttomoveto...tostayawayfrom...Whateverhappens,never......Whata...dayitis!Wenotonlyhada...daybutalsolearnedsomethingnew.Iamlookingforwardtotakingpartin....寫作題目：假定你是李華，你將以“FloodSafetyGuidelines”為題就如何在洪水中自救寫一篇洪水安全指南，內(nèi)容包括：洪水到來前要做的事情洪水發(fā)生時要做的事情洪水發(fā)生時不能做的事情注意：詞數(shù)80左右可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。FloodSafetyGuidelines_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________思路點撥：主題洪水安全指南體裁說明文人稱第二人稱時態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)布局簡述洪水的危險并引出要說明的主題詳細說明，要求闡述三個方面：洪水到來前聽天氣預報等準備工作洪水發(fā)生時轉(zhuǎn)移到高處等應急措施洪水發(fā)生后不要喝不干凈的水等注意事項，可以采用列舉法，對比法等進行闡述遣詞造句增色詞匯災難_disaster預報_forecast立即，馬上_immediately緊急情況__emergency抓住__grab導致__leadto洪水__flood危險的__dangerous個人財產(chǎn)__personalproperty精彩句式Otherwise，wecan’teasilydealwith...inthefaceof.......Herearesometipson...Itisimportanttomoveto...tostayawayfrom...Whateverhappens,never......Whata...dayitis!Wenotonlyhada...daybutalsolearnedsomethingnew.Iamlookingforwardtotakingpartin....完成句子洪水是最危險的自然災害之一。__________________________________________________________________________立刻轉(zhuǎn)移到安全的地方。__________________________________________________________________________有緊急情況。__________________________________________________________________________如果你在水里，抓住一棵樹或者一塊木板。__________________________________________________________________________不要帶太多的個人財物。__________________________________________________________________________它一看見我們就爬走了。__________________________________________________________________________答案：Floodisoneofthemostdangerousnaturaldisasters.Movetoasafeplaceimmediately.Thereisanemergency.Grabatreeorawoodblockifyouareinwater.Don’ttaketoomuchpersonalproperty.Itcrawledawayimmediatelyitsawus.句式升級(2)（3）條件狀語從句Movetoasafeplaceimmediatelyifthereisanemergency.參考范文：FloodSafetyGuidelinesFloodisoneofthemostdangerousnaturaldisasters.Herearesometipsonfloodsafely.Thingstodobeforeaflood:Listentotheweatherforecast.Movetoasafeplaceimmediatelyifthereisanemergency.Prepareenoughfoodandcleanwater.Thingstododuringaflood:Trytomovetoaplacehighenoughtokeepclearoffloodwater.Grabatreeorawoodblockifyouareinwater.Thingsnottododuringaflood:Donotdrinkfloodwater.Donottaketoomuchpersonalproperty.Nevergiveuphope.寫作積累：增色詞匯災難_disaster預報_forecast立即，馬上_immediately緊急情況__emergency抓住__grab導致__leadto洪水__flood危險的__dangerous個人財產(chǎn)__personalproperty精彩句式Otherwise，wecan’teasilydealwith...inthefaceof.......Herearesometipson...Itisimportanttomoveto...tostayawayfrom...Whateverhappens,never......Whata...dayitis!Wenotonlyhada...daybutalsolearnedsomethingnew.Iamlookingforwardtotakingpartin....實戰(zhàn)應用實戰(zhàn)應用經(jīng)典例題寫作要求假設你是李華，你們學校的英語網(wǎng)站正面向全校學生征集有關安全指南的英文稿件。請你給該網(wǎng)站投稿，介紹交通事故方面的急救常識。內(nèi)容包括：1．首先保持鎮(zhèn)靜；2．檢查傷者呼吸情況，呼吸困難要實施人工呼吸；3．如傷者有出血情況要用布按壓止血，然后等候救護車及警察的幫助。注意：1.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；2．詞數(shù)80左右。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________審題謀篇項目結(jié)論體裁說明文話題如何實施急救時態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時人稱第二人稱詞句準備1．詞匯①反應 respond②幫助 assistance③傷口 wound④核實 checkout⑤注意 payattentionto2．句式①知道如何正確地應對起著重要的作用。普通表達：Knowinghowtorespondproperlycanmakeabigdifference.高級表達：___________________________________________________________________________(用強調(diào)句型改寫句子)【答案】Itisknowinghowtorespondproperlythatcanmakeabigdifference.②這里有一些規(guī)則。你可以遵守這些規(guī)則。普通表達：Herearesomerules.Youcanfollowtheserules.高級表達：___________________________________________________________________________(用定語從句合并句子)【答案】Herearesomerulesthatyoucanfollow.③如果有必要的話，要實施人工呼吸進行緊急救助。普通表達：Ifitisnecessary，usethemouth-to-mouthtechniquetogiveimmediateassistance.高級表達：___________________________________________________________________________(用省略句改寫句子)【答案】Ifnecessary,usethemouth-to-mouthtechniquetogiveimmediateassistance.課堂練筆_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】FirstAidforAccidentsIfyouhappentowitnessanaccident,whatshouldyoudotosaveotherpeople’slives?Itisknowinghowtorespondproperlythatcanmakeabigdifference.Herearesomerulesthatyoucanfollow.Firstly,youmuststaycalmandcallthepoliceandanambulance.Speaktothepersontofindoutasmuchasyoucanabouthisinjuries.Next,payattentiontotheperson’sbreathing,especiallyifheishavingtroublegettinghisbreath.Ifnecessary,usethemouth-to-mouthtechniquetogiveimmediateassistance.Besides,iftheinjuredpersonisbleeding,pressacleantowelorclothontohiswound.Finally,staywiththeinjuredpersonandcomforthimuntilthearrivalofthepoliceandambulance.鞏固練習鞏固練習假如你是李華，你們學校最近開展了創(chuàng)建“平安校園”活動，本周校報談論的主題是“發(fā)生地震時如何保護自己”。請你以“EarthquakeSafetyGuidelines”為題寫一篇文章。內(nèi)容要點：地震來臨前，做好充分準備，裝備好救生包，里面有手電筒，電池，食物和急救包等。地震來臨時，不要驚慌。如果在室外，要遠離大樹，高樓等物體。如果在室內(nèi)，要盡量躲在桌子等堅固的家具下面，并且注意保護好頭，頸部。逃生時千萬不要選擇乘坐電梯。注意：1.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；2．詞數(shù)80左右。參考詞匯：救生包emergencykit手電筒flashlight___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________