2022中考熱點(diǎn)話題作文 專題22 人民幸福感（解析版）

PAGEPAGE122022中考熱點(diǎn)話題作文專題22人民幸福感一、看圖作文1．習(xí)主席說，勞動(dòng)是一切幸福的源泉(Workingisthesourceofallhappiness.)。在這生機(jī)盎然的春天，假設(shè)你剛剛參加了學(xué)校組織的植樹勞動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)右側(cè)圖示及要求寫一篇英語作文。要求：1.詞數(shù)80-100（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名等相關(guān)信息。參考詞匯：root樹根soil土壤ATree-plantingActivityAsspringcomes,it’stimetoplanttrees._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：ATree-plantingActivityAsspringcomes,it’stimetoplanttrees.LastFriday,ourschoolorganizedatree-plantingactivityinthepark.Allofthestudentstookpartintheactivity.Ourteachersshowedushowtoplantatreefirst.Thenwestartedworking.First,Idugaholeandputalittletreeintoit.Then,Ifilledtheholewithsomesoiltocovertherootofthetree.Finally,Iwateredthelittletree.WhenIsawthetreestandinginthesoil,Igotastrongfeelingofsatisfaction.Workingisthesourceofhappiness.Thetree-plantingactivityisverymeaningful.Inotonlylearnedhowtoplanttrees,butalsoexperiencedthehappinessfrommyhardwork.I’lltakecareofthesetreesandtakeanactivepartintheseactivities.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇看圖作文。寫一篇有關(guān)學(xué)校組織的植樹活動(dòng)的短文。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)。分為三段式：第一段引出主題；第二段講述植樹的過程，第三段介紹自己的收獲和感受。寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，邏輯性要強(qiáng)，無語法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。二、材料作文2．當(dāng)代雷鋒郭明義，在《幸福就這么簡(jiǎn)單》一書中，用自己的點(diǎn)滴平凡小事詮釋出幸福的真諦。幸福就圍繞在我們身邊，簡(jiǎn)單得觸手可得，平凡得召之即來。那你的幸福觀又是什么呢？請(qǐng)以MyHappiness為題寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容包括以下方面：1.你認(rèn)為幸福是什么？2.描述一件令你感到幸福的事（需交代時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、過程與感受）。3.以自己的感悟揭示：應(yīng)該如何創(chuàng)造幸福。寫作要求：1.短文結(jié)構(gòu)完整，意思連貫，語言流暢，語法準(zhǔn)確，符合邏輯；2.卷面干凈整潔；3.詞數(shù)80左右；4.開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。MyHappinessAfterreadingGuoMingyi’s“HappinessIsSoSimple”,Iamdeeplymovedbyhisviewonhappiness.Asforme,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Happinessisimportantinourlife.Infact,happinessisalwaysaroundyouifyouputyourheartintoit.Iwillneverforgetonething.Once,Ihadabadmarkatamathtest.Iwasshyandafraidtomeetmyparents.ButwhenIgotbackhomelate,myparentsknewwhathappened,theysaidtome:“Itdoesn’tmatter,mychild.Rememberwe’llbealwaysbesideyouwhenyouneedhelp.Webelieveyoucanbebetternexttime.Nevergiveup!”Iwasmovedandmadeupmymindtoworkharderandharder.Ifeelhappy.WheneverIamintrouble,Icanfeelmyparents’love.Iwanttobeagoodchildformyparents.【詳解】幸福就圍繞在我們身邊，簡(jiǎn)單得觸手可得，平凡得召之即來，這篇作文要求寫一寫自己的幸福觀，描述自己對(duì)于幸福的定義，描述一件到幸福的事，最后談?wù)剳?yīng)該如何創(chuàng)造幸福，要注意敘述流暢，在描述過去的幸福往事的時(shí)候要注意正確使用時(shí)態(tài)，可以使用到的短語表達(dá)有：happinessisalwaysaroundyou幸?？傇谀闵磉叄籶utyourheartintoit把你的心投入其中；hadabadmarkatamathtest數(shù)學(xué)考試成績(jī)很差；afraidtomeetmyparents害怕見家長；gotbackhomelate回家晚；bealwaysbesideyou一直在你身旁；needhelp需要幫助；Nevergiveup永不放棄；madeupmymindto下定決心去做…；introuble有困難?？傮w來說這篇文章分為三大段，條理清晰，敘述完整，完成了既定的寫作任務(wù)。3．在剛剛過去的“五一”國際勞動(dòng)節(jié)，習(xí)近平總書記鼓舞大家：“奮斗當(dāng)其時(shí)，勞動(dòng)創(chuàng)造幸福，實(shí)干成就偉業(yè)?！彼Ｍ麖V大勞動(dòng)群眾大力弘揚(yáng)勞動(dòng)精神、工匠精神，勤于創(chuàng)造、勇于奮斗。作為中學(xué)生，你是如何理解勞動(dòng)(labor)的意義呢？請(qǐng)分享一次你曾有過的勞動(dòng)經(jīng)歷并談?wù)勀愕捏w會(huì)。內(nèi)容包括：

Whatdoeslabormeantoyou?

Tellusanexperiencethatyouhad.

Whatshouldwedo?要求：1.詞數(shù)不少于80字；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Ithinkit’sveryimportantforustolearntodochoreswhenwehavefreetime.ItisthetraditionalChinesevirtue.Andwecanalsolearnalotfromit.Lastyear,mymotheraskedmetodochoreswithherbeforetheSpringFestival.Ihelpedherwashourclothes,cleanthefurnitureandsweepthefloor.Wespentmuchtimedoingchores.Intheend,weweretootiredtodoanything.Butforme,lookingatthehouseinwhicheverythingwasclean,Igotsuchastrongsatisfaction.ThiswasthefirsttimeformetodosomanychoresandIfoundthehappinessfromit.Asstudents,wearesupposedtohavearesponsibilitytosharesomehouseworkwithourparents.Inthisway,wecanknowaboutthevalueoflaborandthankothersfortheirhardwork.【詳解】1.題干解讀：這篇作文要求考生根據(jù)寫作提示，分享自己的一次勞動(dòng)經(jīng)歷，談一談對(duì)勞動(dòng)(labor)的意義的理解。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)以第一人稱和一般過去時(shí)為主，以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為輔來敘述，寫作時(shí)先引出話題，然后重點(diǎn)敘述自己的勞動(dòng)經(jīng)歷和感受，最后簡(jiǎn)單闡述勞動(dòng)的意義，使短文結(jié)構(gòu)完整、主題鮮明。行文注意主謂一致，保證無語法和單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤。4．假如你是李華，你校微信平臺(tái)開設(shè)了TeenVoiced欄目，號(hào)召同學(xué)們將自己生活中的“小確幸”（微小但確實(shí)的幸福變化）用英語大聲講出來。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下所給要點(diǎn)提示，寫一篇短文。AmazingchangesWhatdidyouusetobelike?Whatareyoulikenow?Whathasmadeyouchange?要求：1.要點(diǎn)齊全，語句通順，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文流暢；3.不少于70詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Hello,everyone.I’mLiHuafromClassThree,GradeNine.IhavechangedalotsinceI_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inaword,Ihavebecomebetterandbetter.【答案】例文：Hello,everyone.I’mLiHuafromClassThree,GradeNine.IhavechangedalotsinceIwenttomiddleschool.Iusedtobeveryshyandquiet,butnowIamoutgoingandpopular.Besides,Iusedtolikesleepingallthetime,butnowIaminterestedinswimming.ThebiggestchangeinmylifeisthatI’mnotfatanymore.Inthepast,Iwasveryheavy.Myparentswereveryworriedaboutme.Ialsofeltunhappy.ThankstomybestfriendKate,sheadvisedmetoswimwithhereveryday.Althoughthejourneywaslongandpainful,Ifinallysucceededinlosingweight.NowIamhealthyandhappy.Inaword,Ihavebecomebetterandbetter.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于給材料作文寫作。主要介紹自己生活中的變化，指出以前自己是什么樣的，現(xiàn)在自己是什么樣的，并說明什么使你發(fā)生了這種變化。變化可以從外貌、性格、行為活動(dòng)等方面來寫。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要用第一人稱來敘述自己的變化；時(shí)態(tài)主要采用一般過去時(shí)，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。在介紹自己變化時(shí)，可用“主語usedto+動(dòng)詞原形”的句式。用一般過去時(shí)介紹自己變化的原因，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)介紹自己現(xiàn)在的情況。寫作時(shí)要注意語言流暢，內(nèi)容條理。三、書信作文5.你作為一名新疆的中學(xué)生收到來自英國筆友(Amy)的一封來信，詢問近期熱點(diǎn)新疆棉事件，你在回信中闡明新疆棉事件的真相及看法，另外邀請(qǐng)她到新疆來旅游并考察。1.H&Mgroup所謂的強(qiáng)迫勞動(dòng)(forcedlabor)根本不存在，是美國詆毀(slander)中國并阻止中國發(fā)展強(qiáng)大的的彌天大謊，新疆人民現(xiàn)在安居樂業(yè)生活得很幸福。2.新疆是一個(gè)美麗的地方，人民能歌善舞，新疆的水果很著名，歡迎來新疆旅游并考察。DearAmy,IamgratefulandhonoredtobeinvitedtoyourcityLondon.InyourletteryoutalkedaboutXinjiangcottoncaseandnowIhavetotellyousomething._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WelcometoXinjiangtoenjoythebeautifulsceneriesandinvestigate(考察).Yours,LiMing【答案】例文：DearAmy,IamgratefulandhonoredtobeinvitedtoyourcityLondon.InyourletteryoutalkedaboutXinjiangcottoncaseandnowIhavetotellyousomething.Chinaisthesecondlargestcottonproducerintheworld,andthecottonoutputofXinjiangaccountsfornearly90%ofthetotaloutputofthecountry.TheincreaseofChina’scottonproductionandthevigorousdevelopmentofthetextileindustryhavemadesomewesterncountriesfeeluneasy.Therefore,theywillstirupresistancetoXinjiang’scotton.TheirrealpurposeistosuppressChina’scottonandtextileindustry,andthenChina’seconomy.Theso-calledforcedlaborofH&Mgroupdoesnotexistatall.ItisabigliethattheUnitedStatesslandersChinaandpreventsChinafrombecomingpowerful.Wemuststopit.ThepeopleofXinjiangarenowlivingandworkinginpeaceandcontentmentandlivinghappily.Ifyoudon’tbelieveit,youcantraveltoXinjiangandinvestigateit.Afterall,seeingisbelieving.Infact,Xinjiangisabeautifulplace,peoplecansinganddancewell.Xinjiangisfamousforitsfruits,suchasgrapes,Hamimelonsandsoon.WelcometoXinjiangtoenjoythebeautifulsceneriesandinvestigate.Yours,LiMing【詳解】1.

題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行回信，信中要闡明新疆棉事件的真相及看法，寫作時(shí)要運(yùn)用正確的英語表達(dá)，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語。2.

寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要與已給出的開頭和結(jié)尾融合起來，用第三人稱來寫作，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，要做到要點(diǎn)齊全，無單詞拼寫和語法錯(cuò)誤。四、話題作文6．幸福是什么？幸福是熱氣騰騰的早餐，幸福是失意時(shí)的鼓勵(lì)，幸福是奮斗后的喜悅……請(qǐng)以“TheHappinessinMyLife”為題用英語寫一篇短文。要點(diǎn)：1.敘述讓你感到幸福的一件事情；2.闡明此事讓你感到幸福的原因。要求：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。TheHappinessinMyLife____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】參考范文：Ourlifeisfullofhappiness.Icanfeelhappyfromtimetotime.Lastterm,IwaschosentotakepartintheEnglishSpeechContest.IwasnervouswhenIheardthenews，becauseIwasalwaysafraidofspeakinginpublic.IwonderedifIcouldsucceedandIwantedtogiveup.MyEnglishteacherMarynoticedthat.Shehadalongtalkwithmeandencouragedmetochallengemyself.AfterthatIkeptpracticingeveryday.WhenIgotthefirstprizeinthecontest,Ifelthappyfrommydeepheart.Myhappinessisnotonlyfrommyteacher’sencouragementbutalsofromthesuccessthroughmyhardwork.Hopeyoucanexperienceyourownhappinessinyourlife.【詳解】1.題干解讀：這篇作文要求考生以“TheHappinessinMyLife”為題寫一篇短文，介紹讓自己感到幸福的一件事情，屬于話題作文。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)以第一人稱和一般過去時(shí)為主，以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為輔展開陳述。寫作時(shí)既要敘述讓自己感到幸福的一件事情，更要寫清楚讓自己感到幸福的原因，最后談一談感受。行文注意主謂一致和上下文的過渡，符合邏輯關(guān)系，保證無語法和單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤。7．前不久，中央電視臺(tái)記者奔赴全國各地以“什么是幸福？”為主題進(jìn)行隨機(jī)采訪，采訪對(duì)象的回答各種各樣，不盡相同。作為一位高三的學(xué)生，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下的提示，以WhatisHappiness為題，寫一篇英語短文。提示:1.不同的人對(duì)“什么是幸福？”的回答各不相同。2.你認(rèn)為追求自己人生目標(biāo)的過程就是一種幸福。3.因?yàn)樾腋碜杂跇酚^的態(tài)度，努力后的成就和簡(jiǎn)樸健康的生活。注意:1.詞數(shù)120左右。(開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。)2.不要逐句翻譯，圍繞以上提示，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，行文連貫____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】WhatisHappinessRecentlythereportersfromCCTVhavemadearandominterviewwithpeopleindifferentareasacrossChinaonwhatishappiness.Differentpeoplehavedifferentideas.Somepeoplethinkhappinesscomesfrombeingrichandfamouswhileotherssaythatbeingagoodpersonleadstohappiness.Inmyopinion,happinessresultsfromtheprocessofachievingyourowngoal.Firstly,happinessisrootedinanoptimisticattitude,withwhichwecanfaceanyprobleminworkandlife.Inthiswayhappinesswillneverbefarfromus.Secondly,truehappinessdependsonhardwork.Whenweachievesomethingafterworkinghardatit,wewillfeelcontent,whichisanimportantpartofhappiness.Lastbutnotleast,happinesscomesfromsimplicity.Thosewhospendtoomuchmoneytosatisfytheirdesireswillneverfeelhappy.Solivingasimplebutcontentandhealthylifecanmakeapersonveryhappy.【詳解】試題分析：題目為開放式的題目，并未要求寫具體的內(nèi)容，考生可根據(jù)自己的理解來寫，每個(gè)人對(duì)幸福的定義，標(biāo)準(zhǔn)都不盡相同，所以對(duì)考生而言，發(fā)揮的空間比較大。但是這樣的題目也應(yīng)在寫之前確定他的方向，盡管幸福的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)不同，但內(nèi)容都要是積極健康的。這一點(diǎn)尤其重要。寫作亮點(diǎn)：文章從內(nèi)容來說很豐富，寫出了什么才是真正的幸福，主次得當(dāng)。從語言來說，句子結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)且沒有語法錯(cuò)誤，文中也使用了一些定從以及非謂語動(dòng)詞作主語的形式，使語言豐富多彩，不枯燥。例如：happinessisrootedinanoptimisticattitude,withwhichwecanfaceanyprobleminworkandlife.Inthiswayhappinesswillneverbefarfromus.Solivingasimplebutcontentandhealthylifecanmakeapersonveryhappy.考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文8.每個(gè)人對(duì)幸福都有自己的理解，幸福是什么？請(qǐng)你以“Happiness”為話題，寫一下曾經(jīng)發(fā)生過的令你感到幸福的事情。參考內(nèi)容：1.parentsgiveyouahappyfamily…2.friendshelpyou...3.teachersencourageyou...4注意事項(xiàng):1、詞數(shù)80-100詞，標(biāo)題與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù):2、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名，校名，人名等信息。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Happinessisimportantinourlife.Infact,happinessisalwaysaroundyouifyouputyourheartintoit.Iwillneverforgetonething.Once,Ihadabadmarkatamathtest.Iwasshyandafraidtomeetmyparents.ButwhenIgotbackhomelate,myparentsknewwhathappened,theysaidtome:“itdoesn’tmatter,mychild.Rememberwe’llbealwaysbesideyouwhenyouneedhelp.Webelieveyoucanbebetternexttime.Nevergiveup!”Iwasmovedandmadeupmymindtoworkharderandharder.Ifeelhappy.WheneverIamintrouble,Icanfeelmyparents’love.Iwanttobeagoodchildformyparents.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇話題作文。這篇作文要求根據(jù)題目中給出的提示，介紹曾經(jīng)發(fā)生過的令你感到幸福的事情，題干中給出了寫作的提綱，這給學(xué)生們的寫作提供了思路，學(xué)生們可以此為依據(jù)，再補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容，用正確的英語表達(dá)出來。注意要點(diǎn)要齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般過去時(shí)。寫作時(shí)要認(rèn)真審題，根據(jù)本文內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作；可以圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等；語言的表述要符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；層次要分明、條理要清晰。9.幸福是什么？幸福是熱氣騰騰的早餐，幸福是失意時(shí)的鼓勵(lì)，幸福是奮斗后的喜悅……，我們?cè)谏钪袝?huì)經(jīng)歷很多令我們幸福和快樂的事情。請(qǐng)以“Onehappythinginmylife”為題用英語寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容包括：1.敘述讓你感到幸福的一件事情；2.闡明此事讓你感到幸福的原因。要求：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文OnehappythinginmylifeOurlifeisfullofhappiness.Icanfeelhappyfromtimetotime.Lastterm,IwaschosentotakepartintheEnglishSpeechContest.IwasnervouswhenIheardthenews,becauseIwasalwaysafraidofspeakinginpublic.IwonderedifIcouldsucceedandIwantedtogiveup.MyEnglishteacherMarynoticedthat.Shehadalongtalkwithmeandencouragedmetochallengemyself.AfterthatIkeptpracticingeveryday.WhenIgotthefirstprizeinthecontest,Ifelthappyfrommydeepheart.Myhappinessisnotonlyfrommyteacher’sencouragementbutalsofromthesuccessthroughmyhardwork.Hopeyoucanexperienceyou