2025屆高考英語復習讀后續(xù)寫練習：意外燒傷后的溫暖回訪與延續(xù)+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習意外燒傷后的溫暖回訪與延續(xù)1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Inthesummerof2005,KathrynFumie,havingjustfinishedherfreshmanyearofcollege,waslivinginanapartmentandlearningtocook.Oneday,shedecidedtomakesouponthestove.Asthesoupgentlycookedonthestove,Fumiewenttocheckonit.Inamomentofdistraction,sheaccidentallyknockedthepotover,causingtheboilingsouptosplashontoherhand.Thepainwasimmediateandunbearable,andshequicklyrealizedshehadseverelyburnedherskin.4續(xù)寫原文Herclassmate,whowasnearby,sawtheaccidentandquicklycalledforanambulance.Withinminutes,theambulancearrived,andanEMT(急救醫(yī)療醫(yī)生),wearingamask,begantoassisther.TheEMThelpedFumiestaycalmduringthe45-minutedrivetothehospital,despitehercontinuouslyaskingforsomealleviationofherpain.“Couldyoudosomethingtoeasemypain,please?CouldIhaveacoldpack?”Fumieaskedrepeatedly.TheEMTexplainedgentlybutfirmlythathecouldn’tgiveheracoldpackbecauseextremecoldmightcausefurtherdamagetoheralreadyinjuredskin.Shehadtotoleratethepainuntiltheyreachedtheburnunit.5續(xù)寫原文Atthehospital,thedoctortreatinghertookacompassionate(有同情心的)approach.Hetalkedtoherthroughoutthetreatmentprocesstohelpdistractherfromthepain.Theychattedaboutvarioustopics,includingherpart-timejobatafactory,whichhelpedtotakehermindoffherinjuries.Mostimportantly,thedoctormadeherknowthatshewasgoingtobeokay.“Hehadanamazingvoice,andjustwassocalm.HemadesurethatIgottherighttreatment,”Fumieremembered.Thedoctor’sprofessionalandempatheticdemeanormadeasignificantdifferenceinherexperience.Fumiewasinhospitalforfourandahalfdays,receivingexcellentcare.Twomonthslater,fullyrecovered,shereturnedtoherpart-timejobasareceptionistatthefactory.However,thestorydidn’tstophere.6段首句Paragraph1：Oneday,whileworkingatthereceptiondesk,amanapproachedher.Paragraph2：“Ijustreallywantedtocomecheckonyou,”saidtheEMT.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析92005年夏天，剛結(jié)束大一生活的凱瑟琳?富美在做飯時意外被燙傷，同學叫來救護車，急救醫(yī)生在送醫(yī)途中安撫她，告知不能用冷敷緩解疼痛。到醫(yī)院后，醫(yī)生的關(guān)懷讓她安心。富美住院四天半后完全康復，回到工廠兼職。一天，在工作時，她遇到了一個熟悉的人，故事有了新的發(fā)展。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Oneday,whileworkingatthereceptiondesk,amanapproachedher.一天，富美正在前臺工作，一個男人朝她走來。富美下意識地抬起頭，一瞬間，一種強烈的熟悉感涌上心頭。男人戴著口罩，只露出一雙溫和的眼睛，但富美卻覺得似曾相識。男人越走越近，開口說道：“還記得我嗎？我是那天送你去醫(yī)院的急救醫(yī)生?！备幻赖哪X海中瞬間閃過被燙傷后那痛苦又無助的場景，她驚訝極了，完全沒想到會再次見到他。富美愣了好幾秒，才回過神來，激動地說道：“當然記得，真的太感謝您了！當時要不是您，我真不知道該怎么辦?！?1續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：“Ijustreallywantedtocomecheckonyou,”saidtheEMT.“我只是真的很想過來看看你恢復得怎么樣?！奔本柔t(yī)生說道。他的語氣充滿了關(guān)切，就像當初在救護車上安撫她一樣。富美感動不已，眼眶微微泛紅。她向醫(yī)生詳細講述了自己康復后的情況，包括在醫(yī)院的治療過程，以及回到工作崗位后的生活。醫(yī)生認真地聽著，臉上不時露出欣慰的笑容。兩人交談了許久，仿佛不是醫(yī)患，而是相識已久的朋友。這次相遇，讓富美再次感受到了人與人之間真摯的關(guān)懷，也讓這段意外經(jīng)歷畫上了一個溫暖的句號。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Oneday,whileFumiewasworkingatthereceptiondesk,amanapproachedher.Fumielookedupinstinctively,andastrongsenseoffamiliaritystruckherimmediately.Themanwaswearingamask,onlyshowingapairofgentleeyes,butFumiefeltasifshehadseenhimsomewherebefore.Asthemangotcloser,hesaid,"Doyourememberme?I'mtheEMTwhotookyoutothehospitalthatday."Instantly,thepainfulandhelplesssceneofbeingburnedflashedthroughFumie'smind.Shewasextremelysurprised.Sheneverthoughtshewouldseehimagain.Fumiewasstunnedforafewsecondsbeforeshecametoherselfandsaidexcitedly,"OfcourseIremember.Thankyousomuch!Ireallydidn'tknowwhattodowithoutyouatthattime."14范文呈現(xiàn)"Ijustreallywantedtocomecheckonyou,"saidtheEMT.Histonewasfullofconcern,justlikewhenhecomfortedherintheambulance.Fumiewasdeeplymoved,andhereyesbecameslightlyred.Shetoldthedoctorindetailaboutherrecovery,includingthetreatmentprocessinthehospitalandherlifeafterreturningtowork.Thedoctorlistenedattentively,witharelievedsmileappearingonhisfacefromtimetotime.Theytalkedforalongtime,asiftheywerenotadoctor-patientrelationshipbutoldfriendswhohadknowneachotherforalongtime.ThisencountermadeFumiefeelthesincerecarebetweenpeopleonceagainandbroughtthisunexpectedexperiencetoawarmend.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Oneday,asFumiewasengrossedinherworkatthereceptiondesk,amanmadehiswaytowardsher.Fumie'sheadjerkedupinstinctively,andawaveoffamiliaritywashedoverher.Theman,cladinamaskthatconcealedallbuthiskind-eyedgaze,exudedanairofrecognition.Ashedrewnearer,hisvoicecutthroughtheambientnoise:"Doyourecallme?I'mtheEMTwhorushedyoutothehospitalonthatfatefulday."Inaninstant,afloodofmemoriesofthesearingpainandherstateofhelplessnessuponbeingburnedinundatedFumie'smind.Shewastakenaback,neverinherwildestdreamsimaginingthatshewouldcrosspathswithhimagain.Fumiestoodthere,momentarilystunned,beforesnappingbacktoreality.Hereyesbrighteningwithexcitement,sheexclaimed,"OfcourseIremember!Ican'tthankyouenough.Iwascompletelyatalosswithoutyourhelpthatday."16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)"Ijustreallywantedtocomecheckonyou,"theEMTreiterated,hisvoicelacedwithgenuineconcern,reminiscentofthesoothingtoneshehadusedintheambulance.Fumiewasprofoundlytouched,andhereyeswelledupwithemotion.Shelaunchedintoadetailedaccountofherrec