2025屆高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)練習(xí)：為馬而戰(zhàn)：卡羅琳的競(jìng)賽困境++課件

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)為馬而戰(zhàn)：卡羅琳的競(jìng)賽困境1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫(xiě)原文“Doyouthinkyoucanwinthiscompetition,Caroline?”MrsWinterbottomaskedherdaughter.“Idon'tknow,mum.ButIwilldomybest.”“Iknow,mydear.Justrememberthatyourfatherpaysalotofmoneyforthehorse.Alotofmoneyforthestables(養(yǎng)馬場(chǎng)).Andalotofmoneyfortheridingclub.”“Iknow,mum,Iknow.I'lldomybest.Ireallywill.”Carolinealwaysdidherbest,butitwasneverenough.Shewasagoodrider,andherhorseApplewindwasagreathorse.Andshenevermissedacompetition.ButSophieCraigwasalwaysbetterthanher.Sophiewonalloftheshowjumpingcompetitions,andSophie'shorseBlossomwaseverybody'sdarling.EveryonelovedSophieandBlossom.4續(xù)寫(xiě)原文“Ifyoureallywanttowin,youwillwin”,Caroline'sdadsaid.Hesaidthesamethingbeforeeverycompetition.“Lifeisaboutwinning.Youhavetolearnthat,Caroline!”Carolinesighed.“Dad,”shesaid.“Iwanttowin,too.ButSophieistoogood.”“Youhavetobebetterthanher,”MrWinterbottomsaid.”Ifyoudon'twin,Caroline,I'llsellyourhorse.Notrophy(獎(jiǎng)杯),nohorse!”Withthenextcompetitiondrawingnear,Carolinetrainedevenharder.“What'sthematter,Caroline?Youlookunhappy.”ItwasSophie,Caroline'sstrongrivalaswellasclosefriend.“Dadsaidthathe'llsellApplewindifIdon'twinthenextcompetition.”5續(xù)寫(xiě)原文SophieknewclearlywhatthatwouldmeantoCaroline.Afterall,theysharedthesamehobby,andtheywentthroughmanycompetitionstogether.IfshehadtoquitridingandleaveBlossom,shecouldn'timagine,oreventhinkaboutsuchascene.PoorCaroline.PoorApplewind.“You’llwin,Caroline.Everythingwillbefine.”Sophiegaveherafirmhug.Thedayofthecompetitionsooncame.Carolineknewshewasgoingtoloseagain.AndthenherdadwouldsellApplewind.Carolinewantedtocry,butshehadtobebrave.“Areyounervous,too?”CarolinewhisperedintoApplewind'sear.“Wemustwinthecompetitiontoday.Let'sgoandgetready!”6段首句Paragraph1：Thecompetitionstarted.Paragraph2：“ButhowcouldSophiefalloffthehorseback?”Carolinewondered.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫(xiě)原文分析9卡羅琳熱愛(ài)騎馬，父親為她的馬和訓(xùn)練投入頗多，期望她在比賽中獲勝。然而，每次比賽她都輸給索菲。父親威脅她，如果下次比賽不贏就賣(mài)掉她的馬。比賽臨近，卡羅琳加緊訓(xùn)練，向好友兼對(duì)手索菲傾訴了自己的擔(dān)憂(yōu)。比賽當(dāng)天，卡羅琳雖覺(jué)得會(huì)輸，但還是決定勇敢一試。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段段首，續(xù)寫(xiě)銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para1：Thecompetitionstarted.比賽開(kāi)始了。卡羅琳深吸一口氣，輕輕揮動(dòng)韁繩，蘋(píng)果風(fēng)如離弦之箭般沖了出去。她全神貫注，目光緊緊鎖定前方的障礙，與蘋(píng)果風(fēng)默契配合，輕盈地跳過(guò)一個(gè)又一個(gè)障礙物。場(chǎng)邊的觀眾不時(shí)發(fā)出驚嘆聲，為她加油助威。與此同時(shí)，索菲和花朵也表現(xiàn)出色，緊跟在卡羅琳身后。比賽進(jìn)入白熱化階段，每個(gè)選手都在為勝利全力以赴?？_琳能感覺(jué)到蘋(píng)果風(fēng)的興奮與緊張，她不斷輕聲安撫，鼓勵(lì)它發(fā)揮出最佳水平。11續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para2：“ButhowcouldSophiefalloffthehorseback?”Carolinewondered.“可索菲怎么會(huì)從馬背上摔下來(lái)呢？”卡羅琳疑惑不已。就在她準(zhǔn)備挑戰(zhàn)最后一個(gè)也是最難的障礙時(shí)，眼角的余光瞥見(jiàn)索菲那邊出現(xiàn)狀況。花朵不知為何突然失蹄，索菲瞬間失去平衡，摔倒在地?？_琳心中一緊，但此時(shí)容不得她多想，她迅速調(diào)整狀態(tài)，集中精力跨越眼前的障礙。蘋(píng)果風(fēng)似乎感受到主人的決心，奮力一躍，完美地越過(guò)障礙，率先沖過(guò)終點(diǎn)線。全場(chǎng)頓時(shí)爆發(fā)出熱烈的歡呼聲，卡羅琳贏得了比賽。她下馬后，急忙跑向索菲，確認(rèn)她并無(wú)大礙。雖然贏得了比賽，但卡羅琳心里明白，這場(chǎng)勝利有著意外的因素，她對(duì)索菲也充滿(mǎn)了擔(dān)憂(yōu)。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Thecompetitionstarted.Carolinetookadeepbreathandgentlywhippedthereins.Applewindrushedoutlikeanarrowleavingthebow.Shewasfullyconcentrated,hereyesfirmlyfixedontheobstaclesahead.CooperatingwithApplewindtacitly,shegracefullyjumpedoveroneobstacleafteranother.Theaudienceonthesidelinesexclaimedfromtimetotime,cheeringheron.Meanwhile,SophieandBlossomwerealsoperformingoutstandingly,closelyfollowingCaroline.Asthecompetitionreachedawhite-hotstage,everycompetitorwasgoingalloutforvictory.CarolinecouldfeelApplewind'sexcitementandnervousness.Shekeptwhisperingwordsofcomfort,encouragingittoperformatitsbest.14范文呈現(xiàn)“ButhowcouldSophiefalloffthehorseback?”Carolinewondered.Justasshewasabouttotacklethelastandmostdifficultobstacle,outofthecornerofhereye,shecaughtsightofsomethingwrongwithSophie.Forsomeunknownreason,Blossomstumbled,andSophieinstantlylostherbalanceandfelltotheground.Caroline'shearttightened,buttherewasnotimeforhertothinktoomuch.Shequicklyadjustedherstateandfocusedoncrossingtheobstacleinfrontofher.Applewindseemedtosensethedeterminationofitsownerandmadeapowerfulleap,perfectlyclearingtheobstacleanddashingacrossthefinishlinefirst.Thewholefielderuptedintoenthusiasticcheers.Carolinewonthecompetition.Afterdismounting,sherushedtoSophietomakesureshewasokay.Althoughshehadwonthegame,Carolineknewthatthisvictoryhadanunexpectedfactor,andshewasalsoveryworriedaboutSophie.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Thecompetitioncommenced.Takingadeepbreath,Carolinegentlyflickedthereins,andApplewindboltedforwardlikeadartreleasedfromabow.Withunwaveringconcentration,hereyeswererivetedontheobstacleslyingahead.InseamlesscoordinationwithApplewind,shenimblyclearedonehurdleafteranother.Thespectatorsonthesidelinesgaspedinadmiration,theirvoicesrisinginacrescendoofcheers.Meanwhile,SophieandBlossomwereputtingupanequallyimpressiveshow,trailingcloselybehindCaroline.Asthecompetitionreacheditszenith,eachcompetitorwassparingnoeffortinthepursuitofvictory.CarolinecouldsensethepalpableexcitementandnervousnesscoursingthroughApplewind.Shemurmuredwordsofreassurance,spurringitontogiveitsall.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)“ButhowcouldSophiehavefallenoffthehorseback?”Carolinepondered.Justasshewasonthevergeoftakingonthefinalandmostformidableobstacle,aperipheralglimpserevealedanincidentwithSophie.Forreasonsunbeknownst,Blossomstumbled,causingSophietoloseherbalanceandtumbletotheground.Caroline'sheartskippedabeat,yettherew