第四期專題06 書面表達(dá)-沖刺2023年中考英語必考題型終極預(yù)測(cè)（深圳專用）

沖刺2023年中考英語必考題型終極預(yù)測(cè)（深圳專用）專題06書面表達(dá)1．（2023·廣東深圳·深圳中學(xué)校聯(lián)考一模）深圳是一座有溫度的城市。3月是學(xué)雷鋒月，假如你是學(xué)生李華，是深圳市某國際學(xué)校的一名學(xué)生。下周你所在的學(xué)校將舉行一系列“學(xué)雷鋒”活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，寫一個(gè)倡議書，介紹此次活動(dòng)并號(hào)召學(xué)校的同學(xué)們積極參加，要點(diǎn)：1．目的：培養(yǎng)社會(huì)責(zé)任感，提高交流技巧，幫助有需要的人2．內(nèi)容：①看望敬老院老人②幫助照顧流浪動(dòng)物③……（補(bǔ)充一點(diǎn)）3．你的號(hào)召與倡議要求：1.80詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)內(nèi)；參考詞匯：social社會(huì)的Dearfriends,Shenzhenisacitywhichcanbringpeopleloveandwarmth.InMarch,therewillbeagreateventcalled“LearningfromLeifeng”._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyou!2．（2022·廣東廣州·廣東廣雅中學(xué)?？级＃﹦趧?dòng)教育培養(yǎng)全面發(fā)展的人。假如你是學(xué)生會(huì)的主席LiHua，你將在校園廣播EnglishToday中號(hào)召全校同學(xué)加入勞動(dòng)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下思維導(dǎo)圖，寫一篇英語演講稿。注意:1.短文應(yīng)包含所有要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章連貫；2.詞數(shù)80左右，不包含所給的單詞；3.不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。Dearschoolmates,Doyouthinklaboreducationisanecessaryskillforeveryone?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ChairmanoftheStudentUnionLiHua3．（2022·廣東廣州·?？既＃W(xué)校英語報(bào)舉行“未來之城”征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你用英文寫一篇短文投稿，介紹你心目中的未來城市，并分享你在未來之城生活的想法。短文需包括下圖所以提示內(nèi)容。注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于80詞；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)考生真實(shí)的姓名、地點(diǎn)和所在的學(xué)校名詞。OurCityoftheFutureWhatwillourcitybelikein2050?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．（2022·廣東廣州·?？级＃┌倌旯艠?，是歲月的見證，更是文化傳承的載體。近日，你所在的學(xué)校發(fā)現(xiàn)一棵有著三百余年歷史的古樹，飽經(jīng)滄桑，部分樹干已枯萎。作為學(xué)校英語?？呢?fù)責(zé)人，你向全校師生發(fā)出一封英文倡議書，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格的提示內(nèi)容，呼吁大家采取行動(dòng)保護(hù)古樹?，F(xiàn)狀樹齡大，易受天氣影響、易患病；人類活動(dòng)，如人類遷徙、砍伐等。意義古樹是重要的自然資源，也是歷史和文化的標(biāo)志。保護(hù)措施1.合理澆灌，保持土壤濕潤(rùn)；2.請(qǐng)你補(bǔ)充；3.請(qǐng)你補(bǔ)充。注意：1.詞數(shù)80詞左右（文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）；2.內(nèi)容必須包括表格的所有要點(diǎn)；3.不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。參考詞匯：遷徙migrate

資源resourceDearstudentsandteachers,TodayI’mgoingtotalkabouttheprotectionofancienttrees.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．（2023·廣東深圳·統(tǒng)考一模）深圳是一座創(chuàng)新型城市，12月是深圳的“創(chuàng)意十二月”。假如你是學(xué)生李華，上周你所在的學(xué)校舉行了“校園創(chuàng)意節(jié)”（CreativeCampusFestival），請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，給你的外國朋友Mike寫一封郵件，介紹此次活動(dòng)。要點(diǎn)：1.目的：豐富校園生活，發(fā)展創(chuàng)新能力；2.內(nèi)容：①創(chuàng)意寫作大賽②機(jī)器人展③……3.你的感受：①……②……要求：1.80詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)內(nèi)；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名：3.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使條理清楚、行文連貫；4.標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確，書面整潔。參考詞匯：innovative創(chuàng)新的enrich使……豐富DearMike,Shenzhenisaninnovativecity.Agreateventcalled“CreativeDecember”isheldhere.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua6．（2022·廣東深圳·深圳中學(xué)校考一模）北京2022年冬奧會(huì)吉祥物“冰墩墩”圈粉無數(shù)，國內(nèi)外很多人都想買“冰墩墩”的周邊產(chǎn)品，可謂“一墩難求”。假如你是李華，來自冰島的好友Linda給你發(fā)郵件，抱怨買不到“冰墩墩”，詢問原因并請(qǐng)求你的幫助，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)回復(fù)郵件。1.表示理解她的心情；2.原因：①隨著中國文化的傳播，中國產(chǎn)品受到國內(nèi)外人的歡迎；②冰墩墩的設(shè)計(jì)是中國文化和現(xiàn)代科技的完美結(jié)合。3.可以自己做一個(gè)冰墩墩。參考詞匯：design設(shè)計(jì)

combination結(jié)合要求：1.參考提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)信息；4.詞數(shù)：不少于70詞。（開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）DearLinda,I’mhappytohearfromyou.BingDwenDwenisthemascotofBeijing2022WinterOlympics._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．（2022·廣東深圳·模擬預(yù)測(cè)）假定你是李華，校攝影社團(tuán)（PhotographyClub）負(fù)責(zé)人。社團(tuán)計(jì)劃近期舉辦一期“外國人眼中的美麗深圳”攝影展。請(qǐng)你寫一封email，邀請(qǐng)外教Jeff參加。內(nèi)容如下：（1）舉辦攝影展的目的；（2）作品要求與截止時(shí)間；（3）你的愿望。注意：（1）詞數(shù)80左右；（2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearJeff,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua8．（2022·廣東廣州·廣州大學(xué)附屬中學(xué)校考二模）假設(shè)你是李華，你的外國朋友Jack想學(xué)習(xí)漢語，希望你能給他一些建議，請(qǐng)以下列提示信息，寫一封電子郵件。1.漢語使用范圍廣，占全球1/4，漢語難學(xué)，但要有信心2.大膽交流，不要怕犯錯(cuò)；多聽中文歌曲，多讀中文報(bào)紙雜志3.其他建議……（請(qǐng)你補(bǔ)充）注意：1.詞數(shù)：不低于80（文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）2.不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息。DearJack,It’ssoexcitingtoknowthatyouareinterestedinlearningChinese.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursLiHua9．（2022秋·廣東深圳·九年級(jí)統(tǒng)考期中）假如你是某報(bào)社的心理輔導(dǎo)老師MissPearl，你剛收到讀者Eric的來信。信中說，自上了初三，學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)很繁重。在學(xué)校，一天的絕大多數(shù)時(shí)間是待在教室學(xué)習(xí)。放學(xué)回到家，父母不讓看電視、上網(wǎng)，要求在家學(xué)習(xí)、做作業(yè)。因此，這樣的生活讓他很苦惱，特寫信向你求助。針對(duì)Eric的來信，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示和要求，用英語給Eric回信。內(nèi)容提示：1.上課認(rèn)真聽講，提高學(xué)習(xí)效率(learningefficiency)；多向班上的優(yōu)生請(qǐng)教；2.保證每天必要的放松，如聽音樂、跑步等；3.多與父母溝通。要求：1.語言通順，觀點(diǎn)明確，書寫工整；2.80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。DearEric,IrightawayrealizedthatyouneededhelpwhenIreadyourletter.NowIwouldliketosharesomethingaboutyourproblems.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．（2022秋·廣東深圳·九年級(jí)統(tǒng)考期中）你是英語校報(bào)編輯李華。校報(bào)收到初一新生Ben的來信，他提出了所面臨的兩個(gè)問題。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫一封回信，說明Ben的問題，提出你的建議并陳述理由。要點(diǎn)：Ben’sproblemsYouradviceandreasons朋友少，感覺孤單1.參加學(xué)校社團(tuán)(club)——結(jié)識(shí)更多朋友2.(請(qǐng)你補(bǔ)充)英語單詞難記1.多閱讀英語故事、新聞，在運(yùn)用中學(xué)單詞2.(請(qǐng)你補(bǔ)充)要求：1.80詞以上，短文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.條理清楚，意思連貫，語句通順，標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確；3.文中不得使用真實(shí)的校名與姓名。DearBen,Iamsorrytohearthatyouarehavingtroublegettingusedtolifeinmiddleschool.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________11．（2022·廣東深圳·深圳市南山外國語學(xué)校（集團(tuán)）高新中學(xué)校考二模）假如你是李華，是你們班的英語課代表，你們班許多同學(xué)在學(xué)習(xí)英語方面遇到了困難，向你求助，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英文演講稿，給他們提供一些好的建議。1.多閱讀，培養(yǎng)良好語感；2.看英文影片，了解西方文化；3.堅(jiān)持寫英文日記，提高寫作技巧；4.補(bǔ)充1—2點(diǎn)。要求：1.詞數(shù)80左右（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2.要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名；4.條理清楚，語句通順，意義連貫，書寫規(guī)范。Goodmorning,everyone,TodayIwanttotalkabouthowtolearnEnglishwell.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________12．（2022秋·廣東深圳·九年級(jí)深圳市南山外國語學(xué)校?？计谥校跋灿螅瑺?zhēng)做好少年”。為迎接黨的二十大的召開，我校開展了一系列的活動(dòng)。下周將舉行英語演講比賽，主題為“幸福都是奮斗出來的”。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下圖片提示，聯(lián)系自身實(shí)際，從德、智、體、美、勞等方面中選取至少三個(gè)方面寫一篇英語發(fā)言稿，談?wù)勛约簩⑷绾闻^斗。參考詞匯：giveourseatstotheelderly;learndifferentkindsofskills;doexercise;enjoyArts;plantmoretrees要求：1)詞數(shù)90詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2)表達(dá)中請(qǐng)勿提及真實(shí)校名及姓名。Goodmorning,everyone!Withtheopeningofthe20thCPCNationalCongress,I’mextremelydelightedandproudtobeaChinese.Ithinkhappinessisachievedthroughhardwork._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考答案：1．例文Dearfriends,Shenzhenisacitywhichcanbringpeopleloveandwarmth.InMarch,therewillbeagreateventcalled“LearningfromLeifeng”.Thefollowingissomedetailedinformationaboutit.Thiseventwillbeheldinordertodevelopstudents’senseofsocialresponsibility.Atthesametime,studentscanimprovetheircommunicationskillsandhelppeopleinneed.Thereareaseriesactivitiesduringtheevent.Firstly,wewillgotooldpeople’shomesandhelpthemcleantheirrooms.Secondly,someofuswillgototakecareofhomelessanimals.Wecanfeedthemorplaywiththem.Thirdly,wewillholdabookfairtoraisemoneyforthepoor.Eachstudentneedtobringsomebooksthattheydon’tneedanymore.Ithinkthiseventwillbereallyeducationalandmeaningful.Witheveryeffortwemake,wecanmakeabigdifference!Hopeeveryonecantakepartinit!That’sall.Thankyou!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇倡議書；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般將來”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹活動(dòng)的目的；第二步，介紹活動(dòng)的內(nèi)容。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①atthesametime同時(shí)②makeabigdifference有很大的影響③takepartin參加[高分句型]①Thiseventwillbeheldinordertodevelopstudents’senseofsocialresponsibility.（動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語）②Ithinkthiseventwillbereallyeducationalandmeaningfuls.（省略that的賓語從句）2．例文：Dearschoolmates,Doyouthinklaboreducationisanecessaryskillforeveryone?Wecanfindtheonlythingweneedtodoathomeisstudying.Weevendon’tneedtodoanyhousework.Thisisbecauseofourlackofthissense.Weareusedtobeinglazyinourfreetime.Infact,doingsomehouseworkorotherlaborpracticeisreallygoodforus.Itcanhelpusbuildstrongerbodiesandmakeushealthier.What’smore,wewillalsobeindependentthroughlaborpractice.So,wecanbenefitalotfromit.Whynotdoit?Atlast,whatIwanttosayisthatweshouldofferhelptoourparentsactively.Maybetheyaretiredfromwork,buttheystillhavetolookafterus.Wecanhelpthemdohousework.Lastbutnotleast,weshouldtakepartinsomecourseslikethis.Wearesupposedtoknowhowhardourparentswork.Besides,whenwearefree,wecantakepartinsportsactivities.Let’stakepartinlaboreducationtogether!ChairmanoftheStudentUnionLiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于材料作文寫作，要求按照所給的要點(diǎn)提示寫一篇演講稿，介紹勞動(dòng)教育的意義。注意寫作時(shí)要點(diǎn)要齊全，同時(shí)也可進(jìn)行合理而又緊扣主題的發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第一、三人稱來敘述；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；文章開頭已給出，寫作時(shí)，注意承接上文，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示具體介紹勞動(dòng)教育的原因，意義以及建議；文中一定要包含題干中列出的所有要點(diǎn)；可以運(yùn)用一些短語和常用句型為文章增添色彩；注意單詞書寫的準(zhǔn)確度，語法運(yùn)用的準(zhǔn)確度，上下文注意連接的流暢度，以及邏輯合理。3．

OurCityoftheFuture

Whatwillourcitybelikein2050?Ithinkitwillbequitedifferentfromnow.Thelivingenvironmentwillbegreatlyimprovedinthefollowingways.

Thehouseswillbebothgreenandsmart.Everythingwillbemadebyenvironmental-friendlymaterials.What’smore,thehousewillbeconnectedtotheshopsandhospitalssothatyoucanorderallkindsofserviceswithoutgoingout.Mostofthetimepeoplewillworkathomeandtheywillhavefewerworkinghoursbecauseofnewtechnologies.Ifyouwanttogotravelling,therewillbenotrafficjamatall.Youcantakedifferentkindsoftransportations,suchastheflyingbuses:andthedriverlesscars.ThemostexcitingthingforstudentswillbethewidelyuseofE-booksandVRtechnologyatschool.Asaresult,therewillbepaperlessexamsandmorefuninlearning.

Ourcityin2050willbefullofhopeandweshouldworkhardtorealizeit.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般將來時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示介紹你心目中的未來城市，并分享你在未來之城生活的想法。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹未來城市的房子；第二步，介紹未來城市的工作和交通情況；第三步，最后介紹未來的學(xué)校。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①What’smore而且②suchas比如③Asaresult結(jié)果④befullof充滿[高分句型]①thehousewillbeconnectedtotheshopsandhospitalssothatyoucanorderallkindsofserviceswithoutgoingout.（sothat引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句）②Ifyouwanttogotravelling,therewillbenotrafficjamatall.（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）4．例文：Dearstudentsandteachers,TodayI’mgoingtotalkabouttheprotectionofancienttrees.Thisisanancienttreewithahistoryofmorethan300years.Aftermanyvicissitudes,partofitstrunkhaswithered.Therearetworeasons.Ontheonehand,thisancienttreeisold.Itissusceptibletotheweather.Itiseasytogetsick.Ontheotherhand,duetohumanactivities,suchashumanmigration,logging,etc.Ancienttreesareofgreatsignificance.Itisanimportantnaturalresourceandasymbolofhistoryandculture.Ithinkweshouldprotectitnow.First,waterreasonablytokeepthesoilmoist.Second,carryoutthepreventionandcontrolofdiseasesandpestsofancienttrees.Third,strengthenpublicityandeducationtoraisetheawarenessofthewholepeopletoprotect.Finally,Ihopeallofuscantakeactiontoprotectancienttrees.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：本題給出了部分提示，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏表格中“現(xiàn)狀，意義”要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并對(duì)“保護(hù)措施”部分進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充，突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表面寫作意圖，指出古樹的悠久歷史；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容，重點(diǎn)講述造成古樹現(xiàn)狀的原因，古樹的意義以及對(duì)古樹要采取的保護(hù)措施；第三步，總結(jié)，呼吁同學(xué)們積極的保護(hù)古樹。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①ontheonehand一方面②ontheotherhand另一方面③asymbolof…一種……的象征④takeaction采取行動(dòng)[高分句型]①Thisisanancienttreewithahistoryofmorethan300years.(with+名詞短語，作后置定語)②Ontheotherhand,duetohumanactivities,suchashumanmigration,logging,etc.(用suchas舉例)5．參考例文DearMike,Shenzhenisaninnovativecity.Agreateventcalled“CreativeDecember”isheldhere.Inordertoenrichcampuslifeanddevelopinnovationability,myschoolheldthe“CreativeCampusFestival”lastweek.Thecontentofthisactivitymainlyincludescreativewritingcontest,robotexhibitionandpersonalprogrammingdesign.Throughthisactivity,Ilearnedalotofknowledge,andIalsolearnedthewonderfulideasofmyclassmates.Ialsowanttolearnrelevantknowledgeandtrytodesignmyownhomenexttime.Ihopemydreamcancometrue.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一封電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般過去時(shí)”；③提示：信件開頭結(jié)尾以及要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，按照提示的要點(diǎn)逐點(diǎn)闡述，不要遺漏提示中的“你的感受”這一要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，承接信件開頭，介紹學(xué)校舉辦“校園創(chuàng)意節(jié)”的目的；第二步，根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)介紹活動(dòng)內(nèi)容，可列舉具體的事例；第三步，抒發(fā)自己在此次活動(dòng)中的收獲或感受并書寫結(jié)語。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①enrichcampuslife豐富校園生活②developinnovationability發(fā)展創(chuàng)新能力[高分句型]①Ihopemydreamcancometrue.（省略引導(dǎo)詞that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）6．例文DearLinda,I’mhappytohearfromyou.BingDwenDwenisthemascotofBeijing2022WinterOlympics.Iunderstandverywellthatyoucan’tbuyBingDwenDwen.Ithinkthereareseveralreasonswhyitissopopular.First,withtheincreasinginfluenceofChineseculture,productswithChineseelementsarepopularwithpeopleathomeandabroad.Second,thedesignofBingDwenDwenistheperfectcombinationofChina’scultureandmoderntechnology.Third,themeaningofBingDwenDwenishonest,healthy,livelyandcute.Althoughyoucan’tbuyBingDwenDwen,IcanteachyoutomakeaBingDwenDwen.First,takeapieceofwhiteclayandgroupitintoaneggshape.Then,stickalittlemouth.Next,useblackclaytomakeeyeshadow.Stickontheeyes,noseandmouth.Fourth,surroundthefacialfeatureswithcolorfulmud.Fifth,stickthelegsandarms.Last,drawthelogo.YoucanmakeaBingDwenDwenaccordingtowhatIsaid.Wishyousuccess.LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為郵件作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。[寫作步驟]第一步，分析買不到冰墩墩的原因；第二步，教授制作冰墩墩的方法。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①hearfrom收到……來信②athomeandabroad國內(nèi)外③usesthtodosth用某物做某事[高分句型]①Iunderstandverywellthatyoucan’tbuyBingDwenDwen（that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）②Althoughyoucan’tbuyBingDwenDwen,IcanteachyoutomakeaBingDwenDwen（although引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句）7．例文DearJeff,IamLiHua,whoisinchargeoftheschoolPhotographyClub.InordertoletusfindmorebeautyaboutourShenzhen,especiallyintheeyesofforeigners,ourclubplanstoholdashowrecently.ThethemeoftheshowistheBeautyofShenzhenintheeyesofforeigners.WehopetheexhibitionwilloffereveryoneofusachancetousecamerastodescribethebeautyofourShenzhen.Wewillbehappytoseephotosofdifferentimages,whichhaveleftadeepimpressiononyouandmakeyouappreciatelifeinShenzhenmore.Besides,yourphotoshouldbenamed.Mostimportantly,alltheworksmustbeoriginal.PleasehandinyourworksintheofficeofPhotographyClubbeforethisFridayoryoucansendyourphotostophotoshow@.Hopetohearfromyousoon.Yours,LiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一封電子郵件。邀請(qǐng)外教Jeff參加“外國人眼中的美麗深圳”攝影展，包括舉辦攝影展的目的，作品要求與截止時(shí)間以及自己的愿望。具體的內(nèi)容要包含所給的提示。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱以第一人稱和第二人稱為主。第一段介紹舉辦此次攝影展的目的；第二段介紹此次攝影展的主題，作品要求與截止時(shí)間以及自己的愿望；最后一段表達(dá)自己希望收到對(duì)方的來信。寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。8．例文DearJack,It’ssoexcitingtoknowthatyouareinterestedinlearningChinese.Chineseisthemostwidelyusedlanguageintheword,andalmost25%ofthepopulationintheworldspeakit.Althoughitisnoteasytolearnitwellinashorttime,trytobeconfidentallthetime.Herearesomesuggestions.First,itisagoodideatolistentoChinesesongs.Second,readingChinesenewspaperandchattingwithyourChinesefriendsinChinesearealsoeffectiveways.Aboveall,don’tbe

afraidofmakingmistakes.Trytospeakitbravely.IhopeyoucanhavefuninlearningChinese.Inmyopinion,Ithinkpracticeisthemostimportant.Practicemakesperfect.TrytopractisemoreandyoucanspeakChinesebetterandbetter.Yours,LiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于郵件寫作，寫作時(shí)要按郵件格式寫，主要是根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容給他一些學(xué)習(xí)漢語的建議，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，中心內(nèi)容按照提示要求分層次來寫，需要敘述完整，保證條理清晰。在最后還需要給出來除表格提示之外的自己的建議。9．例文：DearEric,IrightawayrealizedthatyouneededhelpwhenIreadyourletter.NowIwouldliketosharesomethingaboutyourproblems.Duringthelastschoolyearofyourjuniorhighschool,studieshavebeensoheavythatyoucanhardlybreathe.Therefore,reducingstressseemsmoreimportant.Meanwhile,youshouldstudyhard.First,youshouldimprovelearningefficiency.Thatistosay,youmustlistencarefullyinclass.Whenyoufaceproblems,youcanasktheexcellentstudentsforhelp.Inaddition,relaxingyourselfisalsoimportant.Youcanlistentomusicorplaysports.Mostimportantly,youmustcommunicatemorewithyourparents.Inmyopinion,communicationisausefulwaytosolveproblems.Yours,MissPearl【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為書信作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”為主；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意結(jié)合提示要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行寫作，針對(duì)Eric的問題，用英語給Eric回信?？蛇m當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。首先介紹一下Eric遇到的問題來引出重點(diǎn)介紹的內(nèi)容；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。具體介紹Eric在初三遇到的問題以及解決措施；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。表達(dá)“溝通是解決問題的有效方法?！钡挠^點(diǎn)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①wouldliketodosth.想要做某事②therefore因此③inaddition此外④asksb.forhelp向某人尋求幫助[高分句型]①Studieshavebeensoheavythatyoucanhardlybreathe.（so…that…引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語從句）②Therefore,reducingstressseemsmoreimportant.（動(dòng)名詞作主語）10．例文DearBen,Iamsorrytohearthatyouarehavingtroublegettingusedtolifeinmiddleschool.Inyourletteryousaidthatyoualwaysfeltlonelybecauseofhavingfewfriends.Ithinkitisagoodchoicetojoinsomeclubsinyourschool.Inthisway,youcanmakemorefriendswhosharethesameinterestwithyou.Besides,you’dbetterbefriendlytoothers.Smileatothersandyouaresuretogetasmileinreturn.Ontheotherhand,youfounditdifficulttorememberEnglishwords.ReadingmoreEnglishstoriesandnewscanhelpyoulearnEnglishwordsinapracticalway.Inaddition,ifyoucandevelopahabitofkeepinganEnglishdiaryeveryday,itwillbeeasierforyoutoremembermorewords.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionsuseful.YoursLiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為書信寫作；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；③提示：寫作時(shí)需要針對(duì)來信中的兩個(gè)問題分別給出建議，圍繞提示展開，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。[寫作步驟]第一步，說明回信目的；第二步，具體給出每個(gè)問題的建議；第三步，書寫結(jié)語，表達(dá)關(guān)心。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①hadbetter最好②ontheotherhand另一方面③inaddition除此之外[高分句型]①Ithin