高考英語復(fù)習讀后續(xù)寫練習：善良女孩莉莉與落魄商人的暖心故事+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習善良女孩莉莉與落魄商人的暖心故事1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Inaremoteandsmallmountaintown,therelivedayoungwomannamedLily.Shewasknownforherkindheartandgentlenature.Thetownsfolkadoredherverymuchandoftensoughtheroutforadviceoralisteningear.Lilyalwaysshowedherbestpassioninhelpingthem,whichmadepeopleinthetownthinkhighlyofher.Onesunnyafternoon,asLilywaswalkingthroughthetownsquare,shenoticedasmall,shabby-lookingmansittingaloneonaparkbench.Hisseeminglydecentclotheswerewornout,andhisfaceborethemarksofahardlife,appearinghelplessandbeinginlowspirits.Feelingobligedtohelp,Lilyapproachedhimwithawarmsmile.“Hellothere,sir,”shegreetedkindly.“IsthereanythingIcandoforyou?”4續(xù)寫原文“Hellothere,sir,”shegreetedkindly.“IsthereanythingIcandoforyou?”Themanlookedup,surpriseflickering(閃爍)inhiswearyeyes.“I...I’velostmyway,”herepliedhesitantly.“Idon’thaveahome.Ihaven’thadanythingtoeatforseveraldays,andIhavenoideawhoIcanturntoforhelp.”Uponknowinghishardships,Lilydecidedtoofferhimsomefoodandaplacetostay.Sheintroducedhimtoherfamily,whowelcomedhimwithopenarmsandinvitedhimtohavedinnerandstaywiththem.Theman,whointroducedhimselfasSamuel,begantoregainhisstrengthaftergracefullyfilinghimselfwiththedeliciousfoodprovidedbythewarmheartedfamily.Heexpressedhissinceregratitudetothemforthefoodandaccommodation.Monthspassed,andSamuelsettledintoaroutineandbecamepartoftheirhousehold.Hebecameskilledatvarioustasksandhisgenuinegratitudeendearedhimtoeveryone.Hesharedstoriesofhispastadventures,inwhichheevenhadanarrowescape,andthefamilyweresurprisedathisexperienceandadmiredhiscourageaswellaswisdom.Oneevening,asLilyandSamuelsatontheporch,watchingthesunsetbehindthehills,Samuelturnedtoherwithaglimmerinhiseye.“Lily,”hesaidsoftly,“Ihaveasecrettosharewithyou.”5段首句Paragraph1:Lily’scuriosityseizedher,andsheleanedincloser.Paragraph2:Truetohisword,SamuelliveduptohispromiseofgivingLilyalargesumofmoney6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8在一個偏遠的小山鎮(zhèn)，住著善良溫柔的年輕女子莉莉。她熱心助人，深受鎮(zhèn)民喜愛。一個陽光明媚的午后，莉莉在廣場看到一位衣衫襤褸、神情落魄的男子塞繆爾，他迷路且無家可歸，多日未進食。莉莉心生憐憫，帶他回家，家人熱情接納了他。塞繆爾在莉莉家安頓下來，逐漸恢復(fù)體力，還憑借自己的技能幫著做各種家務(wù)，分享過去冒險的故事，贏得了大家的喜愛。幾個月后，一天傍晚，莉莉和塞繆爾坐在門廊看日落，塞繆爾說有秘密要告訴莉莉。莉莉滿心好奇，湊近傾聽。原來塞繆爾曾是富有的商人，卻被生意伙伴背叛，失去一切流落至此。如今背叛者被抓，他的錢失而復(fù)得，想要與莉莉一家分享財富作為報答。莉莉起初拒絕，在塞繆爾的堅持下最終接受，用這筆錢改善了家庭生活，還在鎮(zhèn)上開了小生意，為當?shù)厝颂峁┝斯ぷ鳈C會，塞繆爾也繼續(xù)和他們生活在一起，幫忙打理生意，分享經(jīng)驗智慧。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點9續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph1:Lily’scuriosityseizedher,andsheleanedincloser.莉莉的好奇心被徹底勾了起來，她緊緊盯著塞繆爾，滿心期待他接下來的話。塞繆爾頓了頓，接著說道，他在找回自己的財富后，其實還有一個更大的計劃。他想在這個小鎮(zhèn)上投資建立一個大型的工廠，生產(chǎn)當?shù)靥厣氖止に嚻?，然后銷往世界各地。他深知小鎮(zhèn)的人們善良淳樸，且心靈手巧，擁有精湛的手工藝技能，只是缺乏一個將產(chǎn)品推向市場的機會。他希望莉莉能和他一起負責這個項目，憑借莉莉在鎮(zhèn)上的好人緣，一定能召集到合適的人手，并且順利開展各項工作。莉莉聽后，又驚又喜，她從未想過會有這樣的機會。一方面，她為能幫助鎮(zhèn)民們改善生活而感到興奮；另一方面，她又擔心自己能力不足，無法勝任如此重要的任務(wù)。塞繆爾似乎看出了她的顧慮，鼓勵她要相信自己，還表示會在一旁全力支持她。莉莉猶豫再三，最終決定接受這個挑戰(zhàn)。10續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph2:Truetohisword,SamuelliveduptohispromiseofgivingLilyalargesumofmoney塞繆爾信守承諾，不僅給了莉莉一筆錢，還迅速啟動了工廠的建設(shè)計劃。在莉莉的積極協(xié)助下，他們很快召集了許多鎮(zhèn)民，大家熱情高漲，紛紛投入到工作中。在工廠建設(shè)和運營的過程中，遇到了不少困難，比如資金周轉(zhuǎn)問題、技術(shù)難題等。但莉莉和塞繆爾沒有退縮，他們一起想辦法解決。莉莉憑借自己的真誠和努力，贏得了鎮(zhèn)民們的信任和支持，大家齊心協(xié)力，共同克服了一個又一個難關(guān)。隨著時間的推移，工廠逐漸步入正軌，生產(chǎn)的手工藝品受到了市場的歡迎，訂單源源不斷。小鎮(zhèn)的經(jīng)濟也因此得到了極大的發(fā)展，人們的生活水平有了顯著提高。莉莉和塞繆爾的感情也在這個過程中逐漸升溫，最終他們走到了一起，共同守護著這個充滿希望的小鎮(zhèn)。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Lily’scuriosityseizedher,andsheleanedincloser.Withaglintofexcitementinhereyes,sheurgedSamueltotellhissecretrightaway.Samueltookadeepbreathandthenstartedtounfoldhisplan.Herevealedthataftergettinghisfortuneback,hehadbeencontemplatingagrandproject.Heintendedtoestablishastate-of-the-artfactoryinthesmallmountaintown.Thefactorywouldfocusonmanufacturinghigh-qualityhandicraftsthatwereuniquetotheregion.Heexplainedthathehadnoticedtheremarkablecraftsmanshipofthetownspeopleduringhisstayhere.Theirskillsweretop-notch,buttheylackedthemeanstoshowcasetheirproductsonalargerscale.Hebelievedthatwiththefactory,thelocalhandicraftscouldreachawidermarketandbringprosperitytothetown.HethenearnestlyaskedLilytobehispartnerinthisventure.Heemphasizedthatherkindheartandpopularityamongthetownsfolkwouldbeinvaluableingatheringtherightpeopleandensuringthesmoothoperationofthefactory.Lilywastakenabackbythisunexpectedproposal.Ononehand,shewasthrilledattheprospectofhelpingherfellowtownspeopleimprovetheirlives.Ontheotherhand,shewasfilledwithself-doubt,fearingthatshemightnotbecompetentenoughforsuchahugeresponsibility.Sensingherhesitation,Samuelreassuredherwithawarmsmile.Hetoldherthathewouldbethereeverystepoftheway,providingallthesupportandguidancesheneeded.Aftermuchdeliberation,LilyfinallydecidedtotaketheplungeandacceptSamuel'soffer.13范文呈現(xiàn)Truetohisword,SamuelliveduptohispromiseofgivingLilyalargesumofmoney.Heimmediatelysetabouttheconstructionofthefactory.WithLily'sactiveassistance,theyquicklyrecruitedalargenumberoftownspeople.Everyonewasfullofenthusiasmandeagertocontribute.However,theprocessofbuildingandrunningthefactorywasfarfromsmooth.Theyencounteredvariousdifficulties.Forexample,therewereissueswithcapitalturnover.Atonepoint,theyalmostranoutofmoneytopurchaserawmaterials.Therewerealsotechnicalproblems.Someofthenewproductiontechniquestheytrieddidn'tworkasexpected.ButLilyandSamueldidn'tbackdown.Theyworkedtogetherdayandnight,brainstormingsolutions.Lily,withhersincereandhard-workingnature,wonthetrustandsupportofthetownspeople.Theyalljoinedhandsandovercameoneobstacleafteranother.Astimewentby,thefactorygraduallygotontrack.Thehandicraftsproducedbythefactorygainedgreatpopularityinthemarket.Orderspouredinfromallovertheworld.Theeconomyofthesmalltownboomed,andthelivingstandardsofthetownspeopleimprovedsignificantly.Throughoutthisprocess,LilyandSamuel'srelationshipgrewdeeper.Theirsharedexperiencesandthechallengestheyovercametogetherforgedastrongbondbetweenthem.Eventually,theyfellinloveanddecidedtospendtherestoftheirlivestogether,safeguardingtheprosperousandhopefultown.14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Lily’scuriosityseizedher,andsheleanedincloser.Withhereyesshiningwitheagerness,shecouldn'twaittohearwhatSamuelhadtosay.Samuel,afteramomentofhesitation,begantodisclosehiswell-thought-outplan.Hehadnotonlyretrievedhislostfortunebutalsoconceivedanambitiousideatobuildamodernfactoryinthissmall,yetcharmingmountaintown.Thefactory,whichwouldbededicatedtoproducingexquisitelocalhandicrafts,aimedtobringtheuniqueskillsofthetownspeopletotheglobalmarket.Heexplainedthatduringhisstay,hehadbeendeeplyimpressedbytheremarkablecraftsmanshipofthelocals,who,however,lackedtheresourcesandopportunitiestoshowcasetheirtalents.HethenearnestlyinvitedLilytobehispartnerinthisgrandendeavor,emphasizingthatherpopularityandkind-heartednessamongthetownsfolkwouldbeofgreatsignificanceingatheringtheworkforceandensuringthesmoothoperationofthefactory.Lily,overwhelmedbytheunexpectedproposal,wastornbetweenexcitementandself-doubt.Ontheonehand,shewasthrilledattheprospectofimprovingthelivesofherfellowtownspeople.Ontheotherhand,sheworriedthatshemightnotbeuptothetask.Sensingherhesitation,Samuel,withawarmsmileonhisface,reassuredherthathewouldbebyherside,providingunwaveringsupport.Aftermuchcontemplation,Lilyfinallypluckedupthecouragetoacceptthechallenge.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Truetohisword,SamuelliveduptohispromiseofgivingLilyalargesumofmoney.Heimmediatelysetthewheelsinmotionforthefactory'sconstruction.WithLily'sactiveinvolvement,theyswiftlyassembledagroupofenthusiastictownspeople,alleagertocontribute.Nevertheless,thejourneywasfilledwithobstacles.Thereweretimeswhenthecapitalturnoverbecameamajorheadache,andtheywereonthevergeofrunningoutoffundstopurchaseessentialrawmaterials.Technicalglitchesalsocroppedup,withsomenewproductionmethodsfailin