高考英語復習讀后續(xù)寫練習：峽谷絕境：登山者的生死掙扎與求生之路+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習峽谷絕境：登山者的生死掙扎與求生之路1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文ItstartedoutasasimplehikeintheUtahcanyon(峽谷)landsonawarmSaturdayafternoon.ForAronRalston,atwenty-seven-year-oldmountaineerandoutdoorsman,awalkintotheremoteBlueJohnCanyonwasachancetogetabreakfromawinterofsoloclimbingColorado’shighestandtoughestpeaks.He'dearnedthisweekendvacation，andthoughhemettwootherclimbersalongtheway,byearlyafternoonhehadfinallyfoundhimselfinhiselement:alone,withjustthebeautyofthenaturalworldallaroundhim.Itwas2:41pm.Eightmilesfromhistruck,inadeepandnarrowslot(狹縫)canyon,Aronwasclimbingdownawedgedboulder(巨石)whentherocksuddenlycameloose.Beforehecouldgetoutoftheway,thefallingstonepinnedhisrighthandandwristagainstthecanyonwall.4續(xù)寫原文Andsobegan4daysofsufferingforAronRalston.Withlittlewaterandfood,nojacketforthepainfullycoldnights,andtheterribleknowledgethathe'dtoldnoonewherehewasheaded,hefoundhimselffacingalingeringdeath-trappedbyan800-poundboulder100feetdowninthebottomofacanyon.Asheeliminated(淘汰)hisescapeoptionsonebyonethroughthedays,Aronfacedthefullhorrorofhissituation:Bythetimeanypossiblesearchandrescueeffortwouldbegin,he'dmostprobablyhavediedofdehydration(脫水),ifaflashflooddidn'tdrownhimbeforethat.Whatdoesonedointhefaceofalmostcertaindeath?Usingthevideocamerafromhispack,Aronbeganrecordinghisgratefulgood-byestohisfamilyandfriends,thinkingbackoveralifefilledwithadventure,anddocumentingalastwillwiththehopethatsomeonewouldfindit.5段首句Paragraph1:Aronwasgrowingweakerwitheachpassingday.Paragraph2:NowI'vehadthemostincredibleandsatisfyingreportingcareer.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析827歲的登山愛好者阿隆?拉斯頓在一個溫暖的周六下午前往猶他州的峽谷徒步，本想借此從冬季獨自攀登科羅拉多高峰的疲憊中解脫出來。下午2點41分，在距離他的卡車8英里的狹窄峽谷中，他在攀爬一塊楔入的巨石時，巨石突然松動，將他的右手和手腕死死地壓在了峽谷壁上。接下來的4天，阿隆飽受折磨，他缺水少食，夜晚寒冷難耐，而且無人知曉他的行蹤，面臨著死亡的威脅。他一一排除了可能的逃生方法后，意識到自己可能會因脫水而死，或者在那之前就被山洪淹死。面對幾乎確定的死亡，阿隆用背包里的攝像機開始記錄對家人和朋友的告別，回顧充滿冒險的人生，并留下最后的遺囑，希望有人能找到。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構建的重點9續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph1:Aronwasgrowingweakerwitheachpassingday.阿隆的身體狀況隨著時間的推移每況愈下，他的嘴唇干裂，舌頭腫脹，連說話都變得十分艱難。他的意識也開始變得模糊，眼前常常出現(xiàn)一些虛幻的景象，一會兒是家人溫暖的笑容，一會兒是曾經(jīng)攀登過的壯麗山峰。但求生的本能讓他始終保持著一絲清醒。他不斷地嘗試著各種方法想要擺脫困境，用石頭砸巨石，用身體拼命地扭動，但巨石卻紋絲不動。他的體力在一次次的嘗試中迅速消耗，身上的傷口也因為長時間的擠壓而開始潰爛，散發(fā)出陣陣惡臭。在極度的絕望中，阿隆突然想到了一個極其殘忍的辦法——切斷自己被壓住的右臂。這個想法一出現(xiàn)，他的內(nèi)心充滿了恐懼和掙扎，畢竟這是要親手斬斷自己的肢體。但隨著時間的流逝，他知道如果不這樣做，等待他的只有死亡。經(jīng)過一番痛苦的思想斗爭，阿隆終于下定了決心。他用隨身攜帶的小刀，顫抖著開始切割自己的手臂。每一下切割都伴隨著鉆心的疼痛，豆大的汗珠從他的額頭滾落，但他咬緊牙關，沒有發(fā)出一聲慘叫。終于，在經(jīng)歷了無數(shù)次的切割后，他成功地切斷了右臂，擺脫了巨石的束縛。10續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph2:Luckily,therescueteamfoundAron.幸運的是，救援隊找到了阿隆。原來，在阿隆失蹤幾天后，他的家人發(fā)現(xiàn)聯(lián)系不上他，又得知他獨自去峽谷徒步，便立即報了警。警方組織了一支專業(yè)的救援隊，在峽谷中展開了大規(guī)模的搜索。經(jīng)過幾天幾夜的努力，救援隊終于在峽谷的深處發(fā)現(xiàn)了阿隆。此時的阿隆已經(jīng)極度虛弱，他的臉色蒼白如紙，右臂處纏著簡陋的繃帶，上面還滲著鮮血。救援隊迅速將他抬上擔架，送往附近的醫(yī)院。在醫(yī)院里，醫(yī)生們對阿隆進行了緊急救治，經(jīng)過長時間的手術和精心的護理，阿隆的傷勢逐漸好轉。這次經(jīng)歷讓阿隆深刻地認識到了生命的寶貴，他也成為了人們心中的英雄。出院后，阿隆開始用自己的經(jīng)歷去激勵更多的人，告訴他們無論遇到多大的困難，都不要放棄生的希望。他還繼續(xù)堅持自己熱愛的登山運動，雖然失去了右臂，但他依然憑借著頑強的毅力和對登山的熱愛，征服了一座又一座的山峰。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Aronwasgrowingweakerwitheachpassingday.Hislipswerecrackedandhistonguewasswollen.Itwasextremelydifficultforhimtoevenutteraword.Hisconsciousnessstartedtofade,andheoftenhadhallucinations.Sometimeshesawthewarmsmilesofhisfamily,andsometimeshesawthemagnificentpeakshehadclimbedbefore.However,theinstinctforsurvivalkepthimabitawake.Heconstantlytriedvariouswaystogetoutofthepredicament.Hesmashedtheboulderwithstonesandtwistedhisbodydesperately,buttheboulderdidn'tmoveatall.Hisphysicalstrengthwasrapidlyexhaustedintherepeatedattempts,andthewoundonhisbodybegantofesterduetothelong-timecompression,givingoffafoulsmell.Inthedepthsofdespair,Aronsuddenlycameupwithanextremelycruelidea-tocutoffhistrappedrightarm.Assoonasthisthoughtcametohismind,hisheartwasfilledwithfearandstruggle.Afterall,itmeantcuttingoffhisownlimbwithhisownhands.Butastimewentby,heknewthatifhedidn'tdothis,deathwastheonlythingwaitingforhim.Afterapainfulideologicalstruggle,Aronfinallymadeuphismind.Hetookoutthesmallknifehecarriedwithhimandstartedcuttinghisarmwithtremblinghands.Eachcutwasaccompaniedbyexcruciatingpain,andbeadsofsweatrolleddownhisforehead,buthegrittedhisteethanddidn'tletoutasinglescream.Finally,aftercountlesscuts,hesuccessfullycutoffhisrightarmandgotridoftheboulder'srestraint.13范文呈現(xiàn)Luckily,therescueteamfoundAron.ItturnedoutthatafewdaysafterArondisappeared,hisfamilycouldn'tgetintouchwithhim.Whentheylearnedthathehadgonehikinginthecanyonalone,theyimmediatelycalledthepolice.Thepoliceorganizedaprofessionalrescueteamandcarriedoutalarge-scalesearchinthecanyon.Afterseveraldaysandnightsofhardwork,therescueteamfinallyfoundAroninthedepthsofthecanyon.Atthistime,Aronwasextremelyweak.Hisfacewasaspaleaspaper,andhisrightarmwaswrappedwithasimplebandage,withbloodstilloozingout.Therescueteamquicklycarriedhimonastretcherandsenthimtothenearbyhospital.Inthehospital,thedoctorscarriedoutemergencytreatmentonAron.Afteralong-timeoperationandcarefulnursing,Aron'sinjurygraduallyimproved.ThisexperiencemadeArondeeplyrealizethepreciousnessoflife,andhealsobecameaheroinpeople'shearts.Afterbeingdischargedfromthehospital,Aronbegantousehisownexperiencetoinspiremorepeople,tellingthemthatnomatterhowgreatthedifficultiesare,theyshouldnevergiveupthehopeofsurvival.Healsocontinuedtosticktohisbelovedmountaineering.Althoughhelosthisrightarm,hestillconqueredonepeakafteranotherwithhistenaciousperseveranceandloveformountaineering.14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Aronwasgrowingweakerwitheachpassingday.Hislipswereparchedandcracked,histongueswollentothepointwhereeventhesimplestofwordswereastruggletoform.Hisconsciousnesswasfadinginandout,plaguedbyvividhallucinations.Attimes,hesawthetendersmilesofhislovedones,andatothers,themajesticpeakshehadonceconquered.Yet,theprimalinstinctforsurvivalkepthimclingingtoathreadofawareness.Hemadecountlessattemptstofreehimself,smashingtheboulderwithwhateverstoneshecouldfindandwrithinghisbodyinadesperatebidforfreedom,butthemassiverockremainedimmovable.Hisstrengthwasrapidlydwindlingwitheachfailedeffort,andthewoundonhisbody,duetotheprolongedcompression,begantofester,emittinganauseatingstench.Inthedepthsofhisdespair,acruelyetseeminglyinevitablethoughtemerged:hehadtocutoffhistrappedrightarm.Theveryideafilledhimwithdreadandinnerturmoil.Afterall,itmeantmutilatinghisownbody.Butasthehoursturnedintodays,heknewthatwithoutthisdrasticmeasure,deathwasimminent.Afteraheart-wrenchinginternalbattle,Aronfinallysummonedthecourage.Withatremblinghand,hetookouthissmallknifeandbegantheagonizingprocessofseveringhisarm.Eachcutwasaccompaniedbysearingpain,sweatpouringdownhisforehead,butheclenchedhisteeth,refusingtoletoutasinglecryofpain.Finally,afterwhatfeltlikeaneternity,hemanagedtofreehimselffromtheboulder'sgrip.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Luckily,therescueteamfoundAron.Itwasafewdaysafterhisdisappearancewhenhisfamily,unabletoreachhimandawareofhissolocanyonhike,immediatelyalertedthepolice.Thepolicewastednotimeinorganizingaprofessionalrescueteam,whichlaunchedanextensivesearchoperationinthevastcanyon.Afterdaysandnightsofrelentlesseffort,theyfinallylocatedAronintheremotedepthsofthecanyon.Bythen,hewasonthevergeofcollapse.Hisfacewasashen,hisright