讀后續(xù)寫+雪夜的救命稻草：皮卡司機(jī)的援手+講義 高二上學(xué)期1月期末英語試題

AnAngelonaSnowyNightThewindwasblowinghardasIwasdrivingdownthetwistsandturnsofthecountryroad.Iwasdesperatetogethomebeforedark,butthereseemednoway.Theforecastsaidtherewasgoingtobeaheavysnowontheway.Itwasfreezingcoldoutside.Thewindwasblowingagainstthewindows,lettingoutbuzzingnoises.Hairstandingonend,Isteppedhardontheaccelerator,longingtomakeittomycozyhomeearlier.ThecarwasroaringalongtheroughroadwhenIsuddenlyheardabigbangcomingfrombehind.Thecarsomehowsloweddown,andImanagedtopullitovertothesideoftheroad.Iwasinacoldsweatfromextremeterror,wonderingwhathadjusthappened.Draggingmyselfoutofthedriver’sseat,Ishiveredwithcold.Suddenly,agustofcoldwindclearedmyhead.QuicklyIexaminedthecar.Muchtomysurprise,noseriousdamagewasdone.Itwasjustaflattire,butthecarcouldn’tmoveforwardaninch!Itwasblackdarkoutside.Therewasnotasinglesoularoundtoturnto.Awaveoffearinstantlywashedoverme.Worsestill,itbegantosnowattheverymoment.Snowflakesweredancingintheairatthemercyofhowlingwind.HowIwishedsomeonecouldcometomyrescuejustintime!Withnowheretohide,Ihadtowaitinthedarkness,coldandhelpless.Iwaitedandwaited,butnocarortruckpassedby.Swallowedbycompletedarkness,Ialmostwentmad.“Whatifnoonecomes?WhatshouldIdo?”,Imumbled.Atthispoint,Iwastotallyseizedbyanxietyandfear.Mypatiencewasrunningoutwhenloudnoisesboomedoutfromthedarknight.TherecameaFordpickup（皮卡貨車）,withdazzlinglightcastoverthewhitesnow.Isprangtomyfeet,wavingmyarmscrazily.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Thepickupfinallystopped,andoutsteppedthedriver.Thedriverdrewbackandrefusedtotakethemoney.文章大意在一個風(fēng)雪交加的夜晚，“我”駕車行駛在鄉(xiāng)村蜿蜒的道路上，一心想在天黑前到家。然而，天氣預(yù)報顯示即將有大雪，車外寒風(fēng)凜冽，吹得車窗嗡嗡作響。行駛途中，車子突然發(fā)出巨響，“我”驚恐地將車停在路邊，發(fā)現(xiàn)只是輪胎爆了，但在這荒郊野外，周圍空無一人，天也黑了，雪還在下，“我”又冷又無助，只能焦急地等待救援。就在“我”幾乎絕望時，一輛福特皮卡出現(xiàn)了，“我”瘋狂揮手求救。故事山分析開端：“我”在風(fēng)雪交加的夜晚開車回家，途中車胎爆了。發(fā)展：天色已晚，周圍無人，大雪紛飛，“我”孤立無援，在恐懼與焦慮中等待救援。高潮：皮卡出現(xiàn)，“我”看到了希望。結(jié)局（待續(xù)寫）：皮卡司機(jī)幫助“我”換輪胎，“我”對他的幫助表示感謝并試圖給錢，司機(jī)拒絕，展現(xiàn)人與人之間的溫暖與善良。伏筆以及在續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)惡劣的天氣：為故事營造緊張氛圍，在續(xù)寫中，司機(jī)在這樣的惡劣天氣下幫忙，更能體現(xiàn)他的善良。如“在這冰天雪地中，他的援手顯得格外溫暖，讓我忘卻了寒冷”?！拔摇睒O度渴望回家：在續(xù)寫中，司機(jī)的幫助讓“我”能夠繼續(xù)回家的旅程，回應(yīng)這一伏筆。如“多虧了他的幫忙，我終于可以朝著溫暖的家繼續(xù)前行”。周圍無人可求助：與后續(xù)皮卡司機(jī)的出現(xiàn)形成對比，突出司機(jī)的重要性。如“在這無人的荒野，他就像從天而降的救星”?！拔摇钡目謶峙c焦慮：在續(xù)寫中，司機(jī)的幫助讓“我”的情緒得以平復(fù)，從恐懼轉(zhuǎn)為感激。如“他的安慰和行動，驅(qū)散了我心中的恐懼，取而代之的是滿滿的感激”。皮卡的出現(xiàn)：預(yù)示著“我”將得到幫助，續(xù)寫中圍繞司機(jī)如何幫助“我”展開。如“皮卡的到來，帶來了希望的曙光，司機(jī)迅速下車開始幫我更換輪胎”。續(xù)寫要點（兩段）第一段：詳細(xì)描述皮卡司機(jī)下車后的反應(yīng)，如詢問情況、檢查輪胎、著手幫忙換輪胎的過程，以及他的動作、表情和語言，同時描述“我”看到他幫忙時的心理變化，從緊張到安心。第二段：重點描寫換好輪胎后，“我”對司機(jī)表示感謝并拿出錢酬謝，司機(jī)拒絕的場景，可通過對話展現(xiàn)司機(jī)的善良和高尚品格，以及“我”的感動，最后表達(dá)對這次經(jīng)歷的感悟。情感線起初，“我”在風(fēng)雪中駕車回家，充滿急切與期待。車胎爆后，陷入極度恐懼和焦慮，在黑暗與寒冷中孤立無援，幾乎絕望。皮卡出現(xiàn)時，看到了希望，心中燃起一絲曙光。司機(jī)幫忙換輪胎時，從緊張不安逐漸轉(zhuǎn)為安心。當(dāng)司機(jī)拒絕收錢時，內(nèi)心滿是感動與敬佩，深刻體會到人性的溫暖與善良。故事線“我”在風(fēng)雪夜駕車回家，車胎爆了。周圍無人，天色已晚，大雪紛飛，“我”孤立無援?！拔摇痹诳謶峙c焦慮中等待救援，幾乎絕望。皮卡出現(xiàn)，“我”瘋狂揮手求救。司機(jī)下車幫忙換輪胎。換好輪胎后，“我”感謝并試圖給錢，司機(jī)拒絕，“我”深受感動。主旨升華句Inthedarkestandcoldestmomentsoflife,asimpleactofkindnessfromastrangercanbelikeawarmfire,lightingupourwayandmeltingtheiceofdespair.（在生命中最黑暗、最寒冷的時刻，來自陌生人的一個簡單善舉就像一團(tuán)溫暖的火焰，照亮我們的道路，融化絕望的堅冰。）Thisencounteronthesnowynighttaughtmethathumanity'skindnessknowsnobounds,andithasthepowertotransformourmostdesperatesituationsintomomentsofhopeandgratitude.（這個雪夜的遭遇讓我明白，人性的善良沒有界限，它有力量將我們最絕望的處境轉(zhuǎn)化為充滿希望和感激的時刻。）Thedriver'sselflesshelpinthefaceoftheharshweathernotonlyfixedmycarbutalsomendedmyfaithinthegoodnessofpeople,remindingmetoalwaysbereadytolendahand.（司機(jī)在惡劣天氣下的無私幫助不僅修好了我的車，還修復(fù)了我對人性美好的信念，提醒我要隨時準(zhǔn)備伸出援手。）Sometimes,themostunexpectedheroesemergeinthemosttryingtimes,andtheiractsofkindnessbecomethemostpreciousmemoriesthatwarmourheartsforever.（有時候，最意想不到的英雄會在最艱難的時刻出現(xiàn)，他們的善舉成為最珍貴的回憶，永遠(yuǎn)溫暖著我們的心。）Throughthisexperience,Ilearnedthatthetruevalueoflifeliesnotinthematerialgainsbutintheconnectionswebuildwithothersthroughkindnessandthelovethatissharedintimesofneed.（通過這次經(jīng)歷，我明白了生命的真正價值不在于物質(zhì)收獲，而在于我們通過善良與他人建立的聯(lián)系，以及在需要時分享的愛。）寫作示范一Thepickupfinallystopped,andoutsteppedthedriver.Hewasatall,sturdymanwithafriendlysmileonhisface.“What'swrong?”heasked,hisvoicewarmandcomforting.Iquicklyexplainedthesituation,andwithoutaword,hewalkedaroundthecar,examiningtheflattire.Then,heopenedthebackofhispickupandtookoutajackandasparetire.Hegotdownonhiskneesinthesnowandstartedtowork.Hishandswereredfromthecold,buthedidn'tseemtonotice.AsIwatchedhim,myanxietygraduallyfadedaway,replacedbyasenseofrelief.Thedriverdrewbackandrefusedtotakethemoney.“Helpingothersiswhatweshoulddo,”hesaidwithagentlesmile.“I'mjustgladIcouldbeofsomehelptoyoutonight.”Hiswordstouchedmyheartdeeply.Ithankedhimagainandwatchedashegotbackintohispickupanddroveaway.Inthatmoment,Irealizedthateveninthedarkestoftimes,thereisalwayshopeandkindnessintheworld.Thisexperiencewouldstaywithmeforever,remindingmetobekindtoothers.寫作示范二Thepickupfinallystopped,andoutsteppedthedriver.Amiddle-agedmanwithaweather-beatenface,helookedaroundandimmediatelyunderstoodthesituation.“Don'tworry,I'llgetyoubackontheroadinnotime,”heassuredme.Hethenrolleduphissleevesandgottowork.Heexpertlyremovedtheflattireandreplaceditwiththespareone.Allthewhile,hekepttalkingtome,tryingtocalmmynerves.Hiscalmdemeanorandefficientactionsmademefeelmuchbetter.Thedriverdrewbackandrefusedtotakethemoney.“Idon'twantyourmoney,”hesaidfirmly.“IfIwereinyoursituation,I'dhopesomeonewoulddothesameforme.”Hisselflessnessleftmespeechless.Iwatchedhimdriveoff,histaillightsdisappearingintothesnow-fillednight.Thisencounternotonlysavedmynightbutalsotaughtmeavaluablelessonaboutthepowerofkindness.Itmademerealizethatasmallactofkindnesscanhaveahugeimpactonsomeone'slife.【答案】Thepickupfinallystopped,andoutsteppedthedriver.“What’sup?youngman!”askedthedriver.“Ihaveaflattire.”Iresponded.Thedriverthenkneltonhiskneeandtookacloselookatthebrokentire.“Nothingserious,I’llhelpreplacethetire.”Hearinghiswords,Ibreathedasighofrelief.Asurgeofwarmthsoonflowedthroughmyheart.Thedriverimmediatelypulledsometoolsoutofthetrun