高考英語復習讀后續(xù)寫練習：因誤會而波折的摯友深情

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習因誤會而波折的摯友深情1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文HannahandIhavebeenbestfriendssinceprimaryschoolandwespendalmosteverydaywitheachother,sharingeverythinghappeninginourdailylifeanddiscussingproblemsinourschoolwork.Sometimes,otherchildrensaywearenofunbecausewearebothveryacademicandliketostudy,butwelikeitthatway.Wearebothveryhard-workingandalwaysgetgoodgradesatschool.LastMonday,wehadasurprisemathquiz.Thinkingitwasquiteeasy,Iwasnotworriedabouttheresultsatall.Imusthavesoundedveryproudofmyselfafterthequiz,sayinghoweasyitwasandhowIwassuretogetagoodgrade.Unexpectedly,thenextdayafterclass,mymathteachertoldmethatIhadthelowestgradeintheclass!Myheartsankandagreatsenseofshamewashedoverme;Imustbereallystupidtofailasimplemathquiz!4續(xù)寫原文Afterwards,Ipretendedtobecheerful,asifnothinghadhappened,butHannahsensedsomethingwaswrong.Whenwewenttowashourhandsinthegirls’washroombeforelunch,Hannahtriedtofigureoutwhatwasthematter.Strugglingtoholdbackmytears,IadmittedIhadfailedthemathquiz.“Butyouareabornmathgeniusandyouhaveputallyoureffortsinit.Theremustbesomemistakes!”Hannahcouldn’tbelieveherears.“Ishouldn’thavebeensoconfident.Wouldyoupleasekeepitasecretforme?”Ibegged.Hannahnodded,promisingnottotellanyoneelseaboutthesecret.5續(xù)寫原文However,thatafternoonInoticedthatmyclassmateswerestaringatmeasIcameintomathclassand,whenIwenttositdown,Iwasshockedtofindapieceofpaperonmydeskthatsaid,“StupidSarahgotaD!”IwassoupsetthatIfeltlikecrying.IthoughtthatHannahmusthavetoldmyclassmatesaboutmygradeafterpromisingnotto.Everyonemusthavebeenlaughingbehindmyback!6段首句Paragraph1：IwassoangrythatIwentstraighttoHannah.Paragraph2：Thenextmorning,mymathteachercametome,apologizingforhiscarelessness.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9漢娜和“我”自小學起就是摯友，都熱愛學習且成績優(yōu)異。周一的數(shù)學突擊測驗，“我”自我感覺良好。然而次日老師告知“我”得了全班最低分，“我”既震驚又羞愧。向漢娜坦白后，“我”請求她保密。但當天下午，“我”發(fā)現(xiàn)桌上有羞辱紙條，認定是漢娜泄密，對她大發(fā)雷霆。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：IwassoangrythatIwentstraighttoHannah.我憤怒至極，徑直走向漢娜。到她面前，我雙眼冒火，大聲吼道：“你答應(yīng)過我要保守秘密，為什么要告訴別人？你怎么能這樣背叛我！”漢娜被我的舉動嚇了一跳，臉上滿是委屈，急忙解釋：“我真的沒有說，肯定是哪里出了誤會?！笨晌以跉忸^上，根本聽不進去，轉(zhuǎn)身就走，心里想著再也不理她了。接下來的幾天，不管漢娜怎么主動跟我搭話，我都對她不理不睬。她課間來找我，我直接走出教室；她放學想和我一起走，我加快腳步獨自離開。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Thenextmorning,mymathteachercametome,apologizingforhiscarelessness.第二天早上，數(shù)學老師找到我，為他的粗心大意向我道歉。原來錄入成績時，把我的分數(shù)和另一位同學弄混了，我的真實成績相當不錯。聽到這個消息，我愣住了，隨后無比懊悔，意識到自己誤會了漢娜。放學后，我懷著愧疚的心情找到漢娜，真誠地說：“對不起，是我錯怪你了，你能原諒我嗎？”漢娜微笑著說：“當然啦，我就知道會水落石出的。”我們相視一笑，友誼的裂痕就此修復。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)IwassoangrythatIwentstraighttoHannah.Withouthesitation,Istormeduptoherandsaid,"Itrustedyoutokeepmysecret,butyoutoldeveryoneaboutmylowgrade!Howcouldyoudothistome?"Hannahlookedatmewithdisbeliefinhereyes."Sarah,Ididn'ttellanyone.Ipromisedyou,andIalwayskeepmypromises,"shesaidearnestly.Butmyangercloudedmyjudgment,andIdidn'tbelieveher.Iturnedawayfromher,vowingnottotalktoheranymore.Inthefollowingdays,wheneverHannahtriedtoapproachme,Ijustignoredher.Sheleftmessagesinmylocker,butIdidn'trespond.Ithoughtourfriendshipwasover.14范文呈現(xiàn)Thenextmorning,mymathteachercametome,apologizingforhiscarelessness.Heexplainedthattherewasamix-upinthegrade-entrysystem,andmyactualscorewasmuchhigherthantheonehetoldme.Iwasshockedandthenfeltextremelyguilty.IrealizedIhadwronglyaccusedHannah.Afterschool,IfoundHannahandsaid,"Hannah,I'msosorry.Iwaswrongaboutyou.Canyouforgiveme?"Hannahsmiledgentlyandsaid,"Ofcourse,Sarah.Iknewitwasamisunderstanding.Ourfriendshipisstrongerthanthis."Wehuggedeachother,andourfriendshipwasmended.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)IwassoangrythatIwentstraighttoHannah.Withoutamoment'shesitation,Istormedtowardsher,myeyesablazewithfury."Iplacedmytrustinyoutokeepmysecret,yetyoubetrayedmebyrevealingmylowgradetoeveryone!Howcouldyoudosuchathing?"Ithundered.Hannahstaredatme,disbeliefwrittenalloverherface."Sarah,IswearIdidn'ttellanyone.Imadeapromisetoyou,andIalwaysabidebymyword,"shepleadedearnestly.However,consumedbyanger,Iturnedadeafeartoherexplanation.Ispunaroundandwalkedaway,determinedtoseverourfriendship.Inthedaysthatfollowed,nomatterhowmanytimesHannahattemptedtoreachout,Iremainedcold-shouldered.Messagesleftinmylockerwereleftunread,andherpresencewascompletelyignored.Iwasconvincedthatourfriendshiphadcometoanend.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Thenextmorning,mymathteachercametome,apologizingforhiscarelessness.ItwasthenthatIlearnedtherehadbeenamix-upinthegrade-entrysystem,andmyactualscorewasfarfromthelowest.Shockedtothecore,Iwasimmediatelyoverwhelmedbyaprofoundsenseofguilt.Ihadunjustlyaccusedmydearestfriend.Afterschool,IsoughtoutHannah,remorseevidentinmyeyes."Hannah,I'mtrulysorry.Iwascompletelywrongaboutyou.Pleaseforgiveme,"Ibegged.Hannah,withagentlesmile,replied,"O