高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：怪物的威脅與+“我”+的艱難抉擇

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)怪物的威脅與“我”的艱難抉擇1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文AfterWilliamwaskilled,Icouldn’tgetovermydeepfeelingsofsadnessandloss.Worsestill,Justine,whowasaloyalservantandattachedtomyfamily,waswronglysentencedtodeathevenifeverybodyinmyfamilybelievedshewasthelastonetokillWilliam.IknewitwasthemonsterwhokilledmydearWilliambuthowcouldIprovethat?IfeltregretfulandguiltybecauseitwasImyselfwhocreatedsuchamonsterbutthereseemedtobenothingIcoulddotostophim.InowfeltthatIwasthetruemurderer.TheendlesshorroranddespairconsumedmeeverydaywheneverIthoughtofmycreationbeingcapableofkillinganyoneclosetome.IwishedIcouldkillhimrightaway!Iwantedtotakerevenge(復(fù)仇)forthedeathofWilliamandJustine.4續(xù)寫原文ThencamethechancewhenIclimbedMontanvertoneday.Reachingthetopandenjoyingtheview,Isuddenlysawalargemancomingtowardsmeatsuperhumanspeed.Realizingitwasthemonster,Ishoutedwithangerandhorror,“Devil!Howdareyoucomenearme?Aren’tyouafraidthatIwilltakemyrevenge?”“Mycreator,youwanttokillme?Howdareyouplaywithlifelikethis?”5續(xù)寫原文Inflamedbyburninghatred,Ijumpedathimbutheeasilymovedoutoftheway.Thenmagicallyheusedeloquence(口才)topersuademeintolisteningtohimaboutallhissufferings.Foramoment,sympathytookpossessionofmewhenheaccountedhowhewashatedandcondemnedbyhumansjustbecauseofhisfrighteningappearance,evenifhealwaysbehavednicelytothemandtriedtobekindandgentle.“Iwasgood,butIamalone.”Themonsterconcludedwithatorturinglookinhisuglyface.“Promiseyouwillcreateacompanionforme.Humanswillhavenothingtodowithme,butafemaleasdeformedandhorribleasmyselfwouldnotrefuseme.”Irefusedhisrequestwithouthesitation.HowcouldIcreateanothermonsteraftersomanytragedies(悲劇)?6段首句Paragraph1：HethenthreatenedthatifIdidn’tagree,hewoulddestroymeandmyfamily.Paragraph2：Weeksaftermypromise,Ifounditincreasinglyhardtocontinuemyhorriblework.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9威廉被殺后，“我”深陷悲痛與自責(zé)，因是“我”創(chuàng)造的怪物行兇，而忠誠的賈斯汀還被誤判死刑。一天在蒙唐韋爾山頂，“我”偶遇怪物，欲復(fù)仇卻被其說服聽其苦難。怪物請求“我”為它造個(gè)伴侶，遭拒后威脅“我”和家人，“我”無奈答應(yīng)。之后，“我”越發(fā)覺得繼續(xù)這可怕工作困難重重，內(nèi)心滿是掙扎與恐懼，不知是否該信守承諾。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：HethenthreatenedthatifIdidn’tagree,hewoulddestroymeandmyfamily.怪物威脅若“我”不答應(yīng)為它創(chuàng)造伴侶，便會對“我”和家人下手。“我”心中滿是恐懼與憤怒，可又實(shí)在擔(dān)心家人的安危。在怪物的步步緊逼下，“我”腦海中不斷浮現(xiàn)家人遭遇不幸的畫面，最終在極度的痛苦與無奈中，“我”顫抖著答應(yīng)了它的要求。怪物見狀，發(fā)出一陣令人毛骨悚然的笑聲，隨后消失在黑暗之中?！拔摇卑c倒在地，心中滿是對未來的擔(dān)憂與迷茫，不知這一決定將會帶來怎樣更可怕的后果。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Weeksaftermypromise,Ifounditincreasinglyhardtocontinuemyhorriblework.答應(yīng)怪物之后的幾周，“我”每拿起一件制作怪物的工具，手都會止不住地顫抖。每當(dāng)夜深人靜，“我”望著那些材料，仿佛看到兩個(gè)怪物在世間肆虐，給人類帶來無盡災(zāi)難。“我”深知?jiǎng)?chuàng)造另一個(gè)怪物是在玩火，可又害怕違背承諾會讓家人陷入絕境。這種矛盾的心理日夜折磨著“我”，讓“我”食不知味，夜不能寐?！拔摇痹诠ぷ魇依锱腔玻瑹o數(shù)次想要停下手中的工作，但一想到怪物的威脅，又只能無奈地繼續(xù)，內(nèi)心的痛苦與掙扎愈發(fā)強(qiáng)烈。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)HethenthreatenedthatifIdidn’tagree,hewoulddestroymeandmyfamily.Facinghismenacingwords,Iwasoverwhelmedwithamixoffearandrage.MyheartpoundedviolentlyinmychestasIstaredatthemonster,whoseeyesglintedwithaterrifyingdetermination.Thoughtsofmyfamilybeingharmedflashedthroughmymindlikeanightmare.IknewIcouldn'trisktheirlives.Withaheavyheartandatremblingvoice,Ifinallygaveintohisdemand.Themonster,uponhearingmypromise,letoutasinisterlaughthatechoedthroughthedesolatemountaintop.Then,hevanishedintotheshadows,leavingmealonewithmydespair.Istoodthere,frozen,realizingthatIhadjustmadeadealwiththedevil,andthefutureseemedfilledwithevenmoreuncertaintyanddread.14范文呈現(xiàn)Weeksaftermypromise,Ifounditincreasinglyhardtocontinuemyhorriblework.EverytimeIapproachedtheworkbenchfilledwiththematerialsforcreatingthefemalemonster,asenseofrevulsionwelledupinsideme.AsIlookedatthosecomponents,Icouldvividlyimaginethetwomonsterscausingchaosanddestructionintheworld.IwasacutelyawarethatwhatIwasdoingwaslikeplayingwithfire,butthefearofthemonster'srevengeonmyfamilyheldmeback.Thisconflictedfeelinghauntedmedayandnight.Ipacedrestlesslyintheworkshop,constantlyonthevergeofgivingup.However,thethoughtofmyfamily'ssafetyforcedmetokeepgoing,eventhougheverystepfeltlikeIwaswalkingonbrokenglass,filledwithpainandhesitation.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)HethenthreatenedthatifIdidn’tagree,hewoulddestroymeandmyfamily.Struckbyhismenacingwords,fearandragesurgedwithinme.AsIstaredatthemonster,whoseeyesglintedwithterrifyingdetermination,thoughtsofmyfamilyinperilflashedthroughmymindlikeahauntingnightmare.Unabletorisktheirlives,Ifinally,withaheavyheartandtremblingvoice,gaveintohisdemand.Themonster,uponhearingmypromise,letoutasinisterlaughechoingthroughthedesolatemountaintop.Then,intotheshadowshevanished,leavingmealoneindespair,realizingI'dmadeadealwiththedevilandthefutureloomedwithevenmoreuncertainty.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Weeksaftermypromise,continuingmyhorribleworkbecameincreasinglydifficult.EverytimeIapproachedtheworkbenchfilledwithmaterialsfo