讀后續(xù)寫練習+愛的禮物：從娃娃到裙子的傳遞 高三上學期英語一輪復習專項

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習愛的禮物：從娃娃到裙子的傳遞1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文ASpecialGiftIalwaysbelievethattherearecertaingiftsstickinginourmindsforavarietyofreasons.ThegiftgiventomethatItreasuredmostwasadollnamedPatsy.ImetherinagiftshopwhenIwasnine.OnholdingPatsyIimmediatelyfellinlovewithherandcouldn’tevenbeartopartfromher.Atthattime,mymothernoticeditandatChristmas,asIreceivedthegiftfromher,Iwassurprisedtofindmydreamdollinthebox.FromthenonPatsybecamemybabyandIlovedherdearly.4續(xù)寫原文Amonthlater,IwasonmywaytothecinemawhenIglimpsedsomelovelygiftsinprettyboxesthroughthewindowofthegiftshop.Seeingthemremindedmethatmymother’sbirthdaywasafewmonthsaway.Wouldn’titbenice,Ithought,ifIcouldgivehersomethingreallyspecial,justlikethegiftshegaveme?Isteppedinsideandcaughtsightofabeautifuldresshungonthecoatstand,whichIwassuremymotherwouldlike.SoIaskedthesaleswomanitsprice.5續(xù)寫原文Theladymusthaveseenmydisappointmentwhenshetoldmehowmuchitwouldcost.Butshehadasuggestionwhichimmediatelyliftedmyspirits.ShetookoutanotebookfromunderthecounterandwrotemynameaswellastheitemIwantedtobuyonit,andinreturnIpaidherfivecentsfrommysixcentspocketmoney.ItmeantnocandiesthatdaybutIdidn’tcare.Attheageofnine,Imademyveryfirstinstallment(分期付款)andfeltlikeagrown-up.Fromthenon,everySaturdayonmywaytothecinema,Iwenttotheshopandpaidafewcentswhichtheladydutifullyrecordedonhernotebook.6段首句Paragraph1：Thedaybeforemymother’sbirthday,Ipaidthelasttwocents.Paragraph2：Thespecialdayfinallycame.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9“我”九歲時，媽媽在圣誕節(jié)送“我”夢寐以求的娃娃帕齊，“我”非常珍視。一個月后，“我”路過禮品店，看到一件漂亮裙子，想在媽媽生日時當作特別禮物。得知裙子價格后，“我”因錢不夠而失望，店員提議分期付款。于是，“我”每周六從零花錢中拿出幾美分支付，最終在媽媽生日前完成付款，滿心期待著給媽媽一個驚喜。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節(jié)構建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1:

Thedaybeforemymother’sbirthday,Ipaidthelasttwocents.媽媽生日的前一天，我懷著激動的心情來到禮品店，付了最后兩美分。店員微笑著把精心包裝好的裙子遞給我，那一刻，我感覺自己完成了一件了不起的大事。我小心翼翼地捧著禮物，仿佛捧著全世界最珍貴的寶貝。一路上，我都在想象媽媽看到禮物時的驚喜表情，腳步也變得格外輕快?；氐郊液螅野讯Y物藏在一個隱秘的地方，滿心期待著明天的到來。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Thespecialdayfinallycame.那個特別的日子終于來臨了。一大早，我就把禮物放在媽媽的床頭，然后躲在一旁偷偷觀察。媽媽醒來后，看到禮物，臉上露出疑惑的神情。當她打開包裝，看到那條漂亮的裙子時，眼中瞬間充滿了驚喜和感動。她把我緊緊地抱在懷里，不停地說著謝謝?？粗鴭寢岄_心的樣子，我也感到無比幸福。這個禮物不僅是對媽媽的感恩，更是我們之間愛的見證。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Thespecialdayfinallycame.Earlyinthemorning,Iplacedthegiftonmymother'sbedsidetableandthenhidnearbytowatch.Whenmymotherwokeupandsawthegift,alookofconfusioncrossedherface.Assheunwrappeditandsawthebeautifuldress,hereyeswidenedwithsurpriseandjoy.Shepulledmeintoatighthug,saying"thankyou"overandoveragain.Seeingmymother'shappiness,Ifeltanoverwhelmingsenseofcontentment.Thisgiftwasnotonlyatokenofmygratitudebutalsoatestamenttothelovebetweenus.14范文呈現(xiàn)Keepingatightholdonherhand,wewalkedonalongthetrailmarkedonourmap.Christinaremainedrelativelyquietduringthejourney,butIcoulddistinctlysensethetrustshehadplacedinme.Aswecontinuedourtrek,thesceneryaroundusbecameincreasinglycaptivating.Eventually,wearrivedatthelocationofthesequoiapines.Theirmassivetrunkstoweredaboveus,asiftheyweregiantsguardingtheforest.Christina'seyeswidenedinamazement.Fortheremainderoftheday,weexploredtheareatogether,sharingsnacksfromourbackpacks.Ialsoregaledherwithvariousinterestingstoriesabouttheforest.ThisexperiencemademerealizethatperhapsthisfamilyvacationwasnotasbadasIhadinitiallythought.Maybe,justmaybe,wecouldtrulybecomearealfamily.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Thedaybeforemymother’sbirthday,Ipaidthelasttwocents.Heartpoundingwithexhilaration,Isteppedintothegiftshop,asenseofaccomplishmentswellingwithinme.Thesaleswoman,wearingawarmsmile,handedovertheexquisitelywrappeddress,asifpresentingmewithacrownjewel.Holdingitgingerly,IfeltasifIwerecradlingthemostpreciousitemonearth.Onthejourneyhome,mymindwasablazewithimagesofmymother'sastonishedanddelightedexpressionuponreceivingthegift.Myfeetseemedtobarelytouchtheground,buoyedbytheanticipation.Oncehome,Isecretedthegiftinawell-hiddenspot,myheartbrimmingwithexcitementforthemorrow.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Thespecialdayfinallycame.Atthebreakofdawn,Itiptoedintomymother'sroomandgentlyplacedthegiftonherbedsidetable,beforeconcealingmyselfbehindacurtain,myeyesfixedintentlyonthescene.Whenmymotherstirredandopenedhereyes,afurrowofconfusioncreasedherbrowatthesightofthegift.Asshebegantounwrapit,hereyesgraduallywidenedindisbelief,andthen,likeaflowerbloominginspring,aradiantsmilespreadacrossherface.Inaninstant,Iwaspulledintoatightembrace,hervoicechokedwithemotionassherepeated"thankyou"overandover.Witnessingherunbridledjoy,aprofoundsenseoffulf