高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+路遇危機(jī)她們勇敢救援的暖心故事+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)路遇危機(jī)，她們勇敢救援的暖心故事1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Youneverknowwhenyou’llbegiventhechancetosavealife.Duringaweekendholiday,Molly,Jane,Joneschosetocelebrateoffcampus.Theytookadifferentroad,ascenicroutethatledthemthroughaquiet,ruralarea.Whenhungerstruck,theypulledoverforlunchatauniquespotbytheroadside.Theyneverknewthatthisspur-of-the-moment(一時沖動的)decisionwouldleadtoamomentthey’dneverforget.Astheydrovealong,suddenlyaheavyrainpoureddown.Theyhadtopulluptowaitforittofade.Molly,whowassittingbored,noticedsomethingodd-asuddenflashofwhitefollowedbyaloudcrash.Lookingthroughthetrees,theywereshockedtoseeacarhalf-submerged(半沒入水中的)inanearbypond.Apanicwomanwasyellingforhelp,withherchildlyingaside.Withoutamoment’shesitation,theysprangintoaction,withMollydialing911whileJaneandJonesleapedoutoftheircar.4續(xù)寫原文However,fateseemedtotestthemfurther.Mollytrippedoveraropelyingonthegroundasshesteppedoutofhercar.Shefellhard,butquicklygotbackonherfeet.Astheygotcloser,theysawthecarsinkingfast,disappearingintotheriver.Theylookedarounddesperatelyforsomethingtohelp.Withnotimetolose,theyjumpedintoaction,fearpushingthemforward.Theyscannedtheirsurroundingsforanythingthatcouldaidtheirrescuemission.Mollyfeltachill(害怕的感覺)assheheardthemom’sdesperatecriesforhelp.Thechild’sscreambrokeherheart,whichwaspoundingwithurgency.Sheknewtheyweretheironlyhopenow,andgivingupwasn’tanoption.Withaflashoflightningbreakingthesky,Mollycouldn’thelplookingattheropelyingontheground.5段首句Paragraph1：AnideaoccurredtoMollyatthecriticalmoment.Paragraph2：Finally,withonelastpull,theydraggedthemotherandchildtosafety.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8文章講述了周末假期，Molly、Jane和Jones選擇校外游玩，途中遇暴雨停車等待。這時，Molly發(fā)現(xiàn)附近池塘有車半沒入水中，車內(nèi)一女子和孩子呼救。她們毫不猶豫展開救援，Molly撥打911，Jane和Jones下車行動。然而，Molly下車時被繩子絆倒，情況危急，車還在不斷下沉。關(guān)鍵時刻，Molly看到地上的繩子，準(zhǔn)備以此實(shí)施救援。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Shedecidedtopublicizehisdeeds.在這危急時刻，Molly突然靈機(jī)一動。她想到可以用這根繩子來搭建一個簡易的救援工具。她趕忙呼喊Jane和Jones過來，一邊比劃一邊說道：“咱們把繩子的這頭系在這棵大樹上，然后順著繩子慢慢下到池塘邊，再把另一頭遞給車?yán)锏娜?，試著把他們拉上來?！闭f干就干，盡管雨水不斷地打在她們臉上，模糊了視線，腳下的地面也因?yàn)榉e水變得泥濘濕滑，但她們沒有絲毫退縮。Jane和Jones小心翼翼地拉著繩子朝著池塘挪步，Molly則在后面緊緊拽住繩子的另一端，時刻留意著周圍的動靜，防止出現(xiàn)意外。就在她們快要接近車子的時候，車又下沉了幾分，水已經(jīng)漫過了車窗，情況愈發(fā)危急了，可她們沒有放棄，咬著牙繼續(xù)前進(jìn)，一心想著要盡快救出那對母子。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Finally,withonelastpull,theydraggedthemotherandchildtosafety.終于，經(jīng)過一番艱難的努力，她們把繩子遞到了車內(nèi)女子的手中。女子像是抓住了救命稻草一般，趕忙把繩子在自己和孩子身上纏好?！按蠹乙黄鹩昧Π?！”Molly大喊道。她們?nèi)耸钩鰷喩斫鈹?shù)，拼命地往后拉繩子，每拉一下都顯得格外吃力，雨水和汗水混在一起，順著臉頰流淌。隨著最后一次用力拉扯，那對母子終于被拖到了岸邊，脫離了危險。女子抱著孩子癱坐在地上，泣不成聲，不停地感謝著她們。Molly、Jane和Jones相互看著對方，雖然疲憊不堪，但臉上都露出了欣慰的笑容，她們知道在這一刻，自己做了一件無比正確且有意義的事。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)AnideaoccurredtoMollyatthecriticalmoment.Shethoughtthattheropecouldbeusedtomakeasimplerescuetool.ShequicklycalledJaneandJonesoverandexplainedherplanwhilegesturing,“Let'stieoneendoftheropetothisbigtree,andthenslowlymakeourwaydowntothepondalongtherope.Afterthat,we'llpasstheotherendtothepeopleinthecarandtrytopullthemout.”Withouthesitation,theystartedtoact.Despitetherainconstantlyhittingtheirfacesandblurringtheirvision,andthegroundbecomingmuddyandslipperyduetothewater,theydidn'tbackoff.JaneandJonescarefullymovedtowardsthepondwhileholdingtherope,andMollytightlygraspedtheotherendattheback,keepinganeyeonthesurroundingstoavoidanyaccidents.Astheyweregettingclosertothecar,thecarsankalittlemoreandthewaterhadalreadycoveredthecarwindows.Thesituationwasgettingmoreandmoredangerous,buttheydidn'tgiveupandcontinuedtomoveforward,determinedtorescuethemotherandchildassoonaspossible.13范文呈現(xiàn)Finally,withonelastpull,theydraggedthemotherandchildtosafety.Afteralotofhardwork,theymanagedtopasstheropetothewomaninthecar.Shegraspeditasifitwereherlasthopeandquicklytieditaroundherselfandherchild.“Pulltogether!”Mollyshouted.Thethreeofthemexertedalltheirstrengthandpulledtheropewithgreateffort.Everypullseemedextremelydifficult.Rainandsweatmixedtogether,runningdowntheircheeks.Withthefinalpull,themotherandchildwerefinallydraggedtotheshoreandoutofdanger.Thewomansatontheground,huggingherchildtightlyandcryinguncontrollably,thankingthemrepeatedly.Molly,JaneandJoneslookedateachother.Althoughtheywereexhausted,theyhadrelievedsmilesontheirfaces.Theyknewthatatthismoment,theyhaddonesomethingextremelyrightandmeaningful.14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)AnideaflashedacrossMolly'smindatthecriticalmoment.Itdawnedonherthattheropecouldbetransformedintoamakeshiftrescuedevice.Hastily,shebeckonedJaneandJonesover,explainingherplanwithanimatedgestures,“Let'sfastenoneendofthisropefirmlytothatsturdytree,andtheninchourwaydowntothepond,clingingtotherope.Oncethere,we'llextendtheotherendtothosetrappedinthecarandstrivetohaulthemout.”Withthat,theysprangintoactionwithoutamoment'sdelay.Therain,peltingdownrelentlessly,blurredtheirvision,whiletheground,soddenandslipperyunderfoot,posedaconstantthreat.Yet,undeterred,JaneandJonesinchedforwardtowardsthepond,clingingtenaciouslytotherope,withMollyfirmlygrippingtheotherendattherear,hereyesscanningthesurroundingsvigilantlyforanylurkinghazards.Astheynearedthecar,alas,itsankdeeperstill,thewatersurgingoverthewindows,heighteningtheperil.Buttheypressedon,resoluteintheirdeterminationtosavethemotherandchildposthaste.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Finally,withonelastpull,theydraggedthemotherandchildtosafety.Throughpainstakingefforts,theymanagedtopasstheropetothedesperatewomaninthecar.Sheseizeditasifitwereherlifeline,deftlyloopingitaroundherselfandherchild.“Pullwithallyourmight!”Mollycriedout.Thethreeofthemsummonedeveryounceofstrength,theirmuscles