2023北京高三一模英語(yǔ)匯編：寫作

2023北京高三一模英語(yǔ)匯編

寫作

一、建議信

1.（2023?北京東城?統(tǒng)考一模）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你的英國(guó)好友Jim所在的學(xué)校即將迎來(lái)

百年校慶。他參與準(zhǔn)備活動(dòng)，負(fù)責(zé)向來(lái)賓介紹學(xué)校的變化，問(wèn)你有什么好的建議。請(qǐng)你用英文給他回郵

件，內(nèi)容包括：

I.表示祝賀；

2.你的建議。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右;

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

提示詞：紀(jì)念日anniversary

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

2.（2023?北京西城?統(tǒng)考一模）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。最近你收到英國(guó)好友Jim的來(lái)信，得知

他和朋友們騎車旅行一周的計(jì)劃沒(méi)有得到父母的許可，他感到非常沮喪。請(qǐng)你給Jim寫一封|可信，內(nèi)容包

括：

I.表示安慰；

2.給出建議。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

3.（2023?北京海淀?統(tǒng)考一模）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，你與交換生Jim要共同完成一篇項(xiàng)目學(xué)習(xí)

的論文，他建議用AI完成初稿。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他寫?封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1.委婉拒絕并說(shuō)明理由；

2.你的建議及計(jì)劃。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右;

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

提示詞語(yǔ):項(xiàng)目學(xué)習(xí)-projecl-basedlearning

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

4.（2023?北京石景山?統(tǒng)考一模）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你的英國(guó)筆友Jim給你寫了一封信，

提及因?yàn)檎`解，他和同學(xué)產(chǎn)生了不愉快。請(qǐng)用英文給Jim回及郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1.安慰Jim；

2.具體建議。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

二、邀請(qǐng)信

5.（2023,北京朝陽(yáng)?統(tǒng)考一模）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你正在組建與英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)相關(guān)的研究性學(xué)

習(xí)小組，請(qǐng)你用英文給你校交換生Jim寫一封電子郵件，邀請(qǐng)他參加，內(nèi)容包括：

1.介紹研究的具體內(nèi)容和意義；

2.說(shuō)明邀請(qǐng)?jiān)蚝推渌嚓P(guān)事宜,

注意：1.詞數(shù)1（）0左右；

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

提示詞：研究性學(xué)習(xí)rcscarch-bascdlearning

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

6.（2023?北京豐臺(tái)?統(tǒng)考一模）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你校即將舉辦“中醫(yī)藥文化”主題活動(dòng)，

你打算邀請(qǐng)交換生Jim參加。請(qǐng)你用英文給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1.介紹活動(dòng)；

2邀請(qǐng)參加。

提示詞：TraditionalChineseMedicine（TCM）中醫(yī)藥

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

三、告知信/通知

7.（2023?北京延慶?統(tǒng)考一模）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三（1）班學(xué)生李華。你的外國(guó)筆友Jim在給你的郵件中

提到他對(duì)中國(guó)十二生肖感興趣。請(qǐng)你給他回一封郵件介紹你的生肖，內(nèi)容包括：

1.笥介中國(guó)的十二生肖；2.你的生肖和生肖對(duì)你的影響。

注意：

I.同數(shù)100左右；

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

提示詞語(yǔ)：十二生肖thenvclveanimalsigns

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

四、其他應(yīng)用文

8.（2023北京房山統(tǒng)考?模）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華。下周將有?個(gè)英國(guó)的學(xué)生代表團(tuán)求你

校進(jìn)行為期兩天的交流訪問(wèn)，你將作為學(xué)生代表致詞。請(qǐng)你用英文寫一篇發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容包括:

1.表示歡迎；

2.簡(jiǎn)要介紹主要活動(dòng)安排；

3.表達(dá)美好祝愿。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dearfriends,

參考答案

1.DearJim,

Congratulationsonyourschoofsupcomingcentennialanniversaiy!It'saremarkableachievementanda

testamenttotheschool'scommitinenttoeducation.

AsfbryourrequestfbrsuggestionsonhowtointroducetheschooPschangestoguests,Iwouldrecommend

highlightingtheschoofstechnologicaladvancements.Youcouldshowcasetheschool'sstate-of-the-artfacilities,

suchasthecomputerlabsandinteractivewhiteboards,andhowtheyhaveenhancedthelearningexperiencefbr

students.Additionally,youcouldalsomentiontheschool5seffortsinpromotingdiversityandinclusivity,suchas

theestablishmentofculturalclubsandtheimplementationofanti-bullyingpolicies.

Ihopethesesuggestionsarehelpful,andIwishyouallthebest:orasuccessfulanniversarycelebration.

Yours

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本文是一篇應(yīng)用文。文章要求考生作為高三學(xué)生李華，給英國(guó)好友Jim一些建議和祝賀，關(guān)于他

們即將到來(lái)的百年校慶。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

即將到來(lái)的：upcoming—>imminent

建議：suggestion—>proposal

提到：mention—>referto

有幫助的：helpful—>favourable

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Congratulationsonyourschool'supcomingcentennialanniversary!It'saremarkableachievementanda

testamenttotheschool'scommitmenttoeducation.

拓展句：CongratulationsonyourschooPsupcomingcentennialanniversarywhichisaremarkableachievement

andatestamenttotheschool'scommitmenttoeducation.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1]YoucouldshowcasetheschooPsstate-of-the-artfacilities,suchasthecomputerlabsand

interactivewhiteboards,andhowtheyhaveenhancedthelearningexperiencefbrstudents.（運(yùn)用了how弓|導(dǎo)的賓

語(yǔ)從句）

【高分句型2]Ihopethesesuggestionsarehelpful,andIwishyouallthebestfbrasuccessfulanniversary

celebration.（運(yùn)用省略that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句）

2.DearJim,

Pmsorrytohearthatyoudidn'tgetyourparents5permissiontogoonaweek-longbiketripwithyourfriends.

You'reupsetandI'dliketogiveyousomecomfbrtandadvice.

AsfarasI'mconcerned,themostimportantthingthatyouneeddonowishaveagoodconversationwithyour

parents,whichisbeneficialtoyourrelationship.Besides,thereisnoneedfbryoutobedisappointedaboutthis

becauseyourparentsjustwanttoprotectyoufrompotentiallydangeroussituation.

Ihopeyouwillgetbetterinnotime.

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。最近你收到英國(guó)好友Jim的來(lái)信，

得知他和朋友們騎車旅行一周的計(jì)劃沒(méi)有得到父母的許可，他感到非常沮喪。請(qǐng)你給Jim寫一封|可信，表

示安慰，并提出建議。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

失望的：disappointed/upset—?discouraged

建議：advice—?suggestion

有益的：beneficial—*helpful

北匕外：besides—?inaddition

2.句式拓展

同義句轉(zhuǎn)換

原句：You'reupsetandTdliketogiveyousomecomfortandadvice.

拓展句：Sinceyou'reupset,I'dliketogiveyousomecomfortandadvice.

［點(diǎn)睛］［高分句型1］AsfarasI'mconcerned,themostimportantihingthatyouneeddonowishaveagood

conversationwithyourparents,whichisbeneficialtoyourrelationship.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）

［高分句型2］Besides,thereisnoneedfbryoutobedisappointedaboutthisbecauseyourparentsjustwantto

protectyoufrompotentiallydangeroussituation.（運(yùn)用了because引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句）

3.DearJim,

ThanksfbryoursuggestiononusingAItofinishthefirstdraftofourpaper.Butafterfiirtherconsideration,

I'mafraidit'snotawiseidea.

Firstly,itgoesagainstthepurposeofproject-basedlearning,whichistocultivatecriticalthinkingand

teamwork.Moreover,AIisunlikelytoaccuratelypresentouriccas,becauseithasn't"gotinvolvedin”our

project.

So,Isuggestwewritethepaperourselves.Wecanstartbybrainstormingtogethertocreateanoutlineafter

generatingsomeoriginalandcreativeideas.Thenwecanworkindependentlyondifferentparts,andfinallywork

togethertofinalizeourpaper.1believewecandoabetterjobthanAL

Hopeyoucanunderstand.Expectingourdistinctivedraft.

Yours,

LiHua

4.范文1

DearJim,

I'msorrytohearthatyouarehavingtroublewithyourclassmates.Ifsnevereasywhenmisunderstandings

occur.Butdon'tworry,Tmherefbryou.

Ihavesomesuggestionsthatmighthelp.Tryhavinganopenandhonestconversationwithyourclassmates.

Explainhowyou'refeelingandlistentotheirpointsaswell.It'spossiblethattheyjustdidn'trealizetheywere

causingyouhann.ifthatdoesn'twork,don'tbeafraidtoaskteachersfbrhelp.They'reexpertatdealingwith

conflictsandcangiveyouadviceonhowtohandlethesituation.

Ihopethishelps.Justrememberthatconflictsaretotallynonnal,butwithalittlepatienceandunderstanding,

youarcsuretoworkthroughit.Takecare.

Yours,

LiHua

范文2

DearJim,

I'msorrytohearthatyou'reexperiencingsomedifficultieswithyourclassmates.Ilcanbetoughwhen

misunderstandingsoccur,butpleaseknowthatyou'renotalone.Weallgothroughsimilarsituationsiiourlives.

Asfbryoursituation,herearesomesuggestionsthatmighthelp.Firstly,trytohaveanopenandhonest

conversationwithyourclassmatestounderstandtheirperspectiveandclarifyanymisunderstandings.Secondly,it's

importanttoapproachthesituationwithkindnessandempathy.Finally,don'tbeafraidtoseekhelpfromateacher

orcounselorifthesituationcontinues.

Remember,you'reagreatpersonanddon'tletthissituationbringyoudown.Keepyourheadupandstay

positive!

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬「應(yīng)用文。要求考生給英國(guó)筆友Jim回復(fù)郵件，對(duì)于他和同學(xué)產(chǎn)生的不愉快表示

安慰并提出建議。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

發(fā)生：occur—>happen

觀點(diǎn)：point—>view

向...求助：ask...fbrhelp—>tumto...fbrhelp

完全：totally-?completely

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：They'reexpertatdealingwithconflictsandcangiveyouadviceonhowtohandlethesituation.

拓展句：They'reexpertatdealingwithconflicts,whocangiveyouadviceonhowtohandlethesituation.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Ihavesomesuggestionsthatmighthelp.（運(yùn)用Tthat引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句）

[高分句型2]It'spossiblethattheyjustdidn'trealizetheywerecausingyouharm.（運(yùn)用了it作形式主語(yǔ),

that引導(dǎo)主語(yǔ)從句以省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句）

【高分句型3]Ifthatdoesn'twork,don'tbeafraidtoaskteachersforhelp.（運(yùn)用了if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句）

5.DearJim,

Howisitgoing?Weplantoformaresearch-basedlearninggroup.Iwonderwhetheryouwouldliketojoinus.

Ourtopicis“AStudyontheDifferencesbetweenBritishEnglishandAmericanEnglish”.Wcmainlyfbcuson

theirdifterencesintermsofspelling,pronunciationandvocabulary.Theaimistomakeusfamiliarwiththe

underlyingcausesandeffectsofthedifferencessothatwccangainabetterunderstandingoftheEnglishlanguage.

IknowyouareanativespeakerofBritishEnglishandyoulivedinAmericafbrseveralyears,sohopefully

youcangiveussomeguidanceduringtheresearchprocess.PleaseinformmeofyourdecisionbythisFriday.

Yourinvolvementwilladdmuchjoytoourgroup.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

(2)

DearJim,

Asyouknow,wcarcrequiredtodorcscarch-bascdlearningthisterm.Iamwritingtoinviteyou:ojoinmy

team.

Hereisthedetailedinformation.WcintendtocompareChineseliteratureandEnglishliteratureinthesame

historicalperiod,forexample,ShakespeareandTangXianzuoftheMingDynasty.Sincetherewaslittlechancefbr

pureliteraryexchangebetweennationsinhistory,whatwcarcdoingcanhelpgreatwritersfromChinaandBritain

talkspirituallytosomeextent.

Iwantyouinbecause1knowyouhaveagreatpassionfbrBritishliterature.Yourprofessionalknowledgewill

surelyhelpusinefficiencyandaccuracy.Also,justimaginethesenseofaweyoumaygetfromthesimilaritiesand

differenceswewillfind.Ifyouareinterested,letmeknowbeforenextFriday.

Lookingfbrwardtoyourreply!

Yours,

LiHua

(3)

DearJim,

I'mestablishingaresearch-basedlearningteamonEnglishstudy.Iwonderifyouwouldliketobeamember

ofit.

IplantostudyhowtoimproveourEnglishabilitybywatchingEnglishmovies.TenclassicEnglishmovies

likeForrestGumpwillbecovered.Wcwillanalysetheauthenticexpressionsandnativepronunciations,and

discusshowtoapplythemtoEnglishstudy.AswatchingEnglishmoviesofiersaneasyaccesstoEnglisha

learning,thisprojectwillgivestudentsaclueaboutenjoyableandpracticallearningmethods.

Knowingyouhaveconductedrelevantresearch,Ithinkmyprojectmayfeedyourinterestfromadifferent

angle.Moreover,I'msureyourparticipationwillincreasetheefficiencyofcompletingtasks.Ifyou'dliketocome,

pleaseletmeknowbeforenextFriday.

Isincerelyhopethatwccanworktogetheronthisproject.

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】這是一篇應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫一封電子郵件，邀請(qǐng)交換生Jim參加英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)相關(guān)的研究性學(xué)習(xí)小

組，并且向他介紹研究的具體內(nèi)容和意義并說(shuō)明邀請(qǐng)?jiān)蚝推渌嚓P(guān)事宜。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累(以第一篇范文為例)

打算做：planto—>intendto

專注于：fbcuson—>bccenteredon

在...方面：intermsof—inthefieldof

2,句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：IknowyouareanativespeakerofBritishEnglishandyoulivedinAmericafbrseveralyears.

復(fù)合句：1knowyouareanativespeakerofBritishEnglishwholivedinAmericatbrseveralyears.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Iwonderwhetheryouwouldliketojoinus.（whether引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句）

[高分右J型2]TheaimistomakeusfamiliarwiththeunderlyingcausesandefTectsofthedifferencessothatwecan

gainabetterunderstandingoftheEnglishlanguage.（不定式作表語(yǔ)以及sothat引導(dǎo)的目的狀語(yǔ)從句）

6.DearJim,

ExtremelythrilledtoknowthatyouarcfascinatedbytraditionalChinesemedicine,!amwritingtoinviteyouto

participateinanactivitythemedtraditionalChinesemedicineculture,whichistobeheldintheschoolhall,this

Saturdayafternoon.

TraditionalChinesemedicinehasbeenpasseddownfbrthousandsofyears.Withanextensiveandprofound

culture,itisthetreasureofChinesecivilization.Theactivityisintendedtoprovideyouwithsomebasicknowledge

ofmedicaltheory,diagnosticmethods,prescriptionsandcuresconcerningtraditionalChinesemedicine.Presentat

theactivity,youwillalsobeexposedtosomewide-spreadstoriespraisingtheexperiencedandnotabledoctorsin

ancientChina.

Thisissurelyagoodchanceforyoutoknowmorewaysofpreservinggoodhealthandtohaveadeeperinsightinto

tracitionalChinesemedicine.Lookingfbnvardtoyoushowingup.

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)為一篇應(yīng)用文。要求學(xué)生給交換生Jim寫一封邀請(qǐng)信，邀請(qǐng)他參加學(xué)校舉辦的“中醫(yī)

藥文化”活動(dòng)。

【詳解】L詞匯積累：

對(duì)...感興趣：befascinatedby—>showinterestin/beenthusiasticabout

激動(dòng)的：thrilled—>excited

目的是：beintendedtodo—>bcaimedatdoing/aimtodo

提供：provide-*ofter/supply

了解：haveaninsightinto—>haveanunderstandingof7knowabout

2.句式拓展：

原句：TraditionalChinesemedicinehasbeenpasseddownfbrthousandsofyears.Withanextensiveandprofound

culture,itisthetreasureofChinesecivilization.

拓展句：TraditionalChinesemedicinehasbeenpasseddownfbrthousandsofyears,whichisthetreasureof

Chinesecivilization,withanextensiveandprofoundculture.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】

Presentattheactivity,youwillalsobeexposedtosomewidc-sprcadstoriespraisingtheexperiencedandnotable

doctorsinancientChina.（運(yùn)用了形容詞作狀語(yǔ)。）

【高分句型2】

ExtremelythrilledtoknowthatyouarefascinatedbytraditionalChinesemedicine,Iamwritingtoinviteyouto

participateinanactivitythemedtraditionalChinesemedicineculture,whichistobeheldintheschoolhall,this

Saturdayafternoon.（運(yùn)用了形容詞作狀語(yǔ)和which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。）

7.DearJim,

I'mgladtoknowthatyou,reinterestedinChineseculture,especially12Chinesezodiacsigns.Asyouknow,12

Chinesezodiacrepresenttwelvediflcrcntanimals,eachyearoneanimal.Thesetwelveanimalsplayasignificant

roleinChinesecultureandareoftenusedinvariousfbnnsofart,festivals,andevenindailylife.Theyareoften

associatedwithcertaincharacteristicsandarcbelievedtoinfluencethepersonalitiesandfortunesofpeoplebornin

theircorrespondingyears.

htheChinesezodiac,Tmamonkey.Iamoutgoing,lively,goodwithpeople,andhavemanyfriends.What's

more,Iamalsoresourceful,forward-looking,andcompetitive.What'sthemostimportantisthatIhaveagood

hearttoothers.

Ihopemyintroductionishelpfultoyou.

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三（1）班學(xué)生李華。你的外國(guó)筆友Jim在給你的郵

件中提到他對(duì)中國(guó)十二生肖感興趣。請(qǐng)你給他回一封郵件介紹你的生肖，內(nèi)容包括：1.簡(jiǎn)介中國(guó)的十二生

肖；2.你的生肖和生肖對(duì)你的影響。

【詳解】L詞匯積累

對(duì)...感興趣：beinterestedin—*haveinterestin

特別是：especially—>particularly

重要的：significant—>vital

此外：Whafsmore=Besides

2.句式拓展

合并簡(jiǎn)單句

原句：IntheChinesezodiac,Tmamonkey.Iamoutgoing,lively,goodwithpeople,andhavemanyfriends.

拓展句：IntheChinesezodiac,Tinamonkey,soIamoutgoing,lively,goodwithpeople,andhav