Unit4第六課時(shí)作文指導(dǎo)

Unit4EatWell第六課時(shí)

同步作文指導(dǎo)【話題分析】

本單元的話題是“EatWell”，重點(diǎn)學(xué)習(xí)了談?wù)撌澄锏某Ｓ镁湫?以及有關(guān)食物方面的可數(shù)名詞和不可數(shù)名詞。要求學(xué)生能夠恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用所學(xué)知識(shí)介紹食物，并探討如何培養(yǎng)良好飲食習(xí)慣問題?！舅夭姆e累】開頭句：1.Welcometoourrestaurant.歡迎來到我們的餐館。2.Bothwhatweeatandhowweeatareimportanttokeepahealthybodyandmind.我們吃什么和怎么吃都對(duì)保持健康的身心很重要。3.Today，I'dliketosharemyfavouritefoodwithyou.今天，我想和你(們)分享我最喜歡的食物。4.Iusuallyhaveeggsandmilkforbreakfast.我早餐通常吃雞蛋和喝牛奶。5.Breakfastisthemostimportantmealofthedayforme.對(duì)我來說，早餐是一天中最重要的一餐。中間句：1.Wouldyouliketoeaticecream?你想吃冰激凌嗎?2.Inourrestaurant，wehaveallkindsof...在我們的餐廳，我們有各種各樣的……3.It’simportanttoeatvegetablesandfruiteveryday.It'salsoagoodideatoeatlesssugaranddrinkmorewater.每天吃蔬菜和水果很重要。少吃糖多喝水也是一個(gè)好主意。4.Drinkingenoughwatercanmakeyourbodyworkbetterandmakeyouhealthier.喝足夠的水可以使你的身體更好地工作并讓你更健康。5.Healthyeatinghabitsmeanmakingtherightfoodchoicesandpreparingfoodinahealthyway.健康的飲食習(xí)慣意味著做正確的食物選擇，并以健康的方式準(zhǔn)備食物。6.Ifyouwanttobehealthy,youshouldeatthreemealsadayontime，andeatvegetablesandfruitmoreoften.如果你想要健康，你應(yīng)該按時(shí)吃一日三餐，多吃蔬菜和水果。7.Don’teattoomuchfastfood.Itmakesyouputonweight.不要吃太多快餐。它會(huì)讓你長(zhǎng)胖。結(jié)尾句：1.Comeandgetwhatyoulike!來吃你喜歡的（東西）吧！2.Comeandhavealook!Youwilllikethem.快來看一看!你會(huì)喜歡它們的。3.Ihopeyoucantrysomeofthesedishesoneday.我希望有一天你可以嘗試其中的一些菜肴。4.Foodnotonlyfillsourstomachsbutalsowarmsourhearts.食物不僅填飽我們的胃，還溫暖了我們的心。5.Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.每天一蘋果，醫(yī)生遠(yuǎn)離我。6.I’msureyouwillliveahealthyandhappylifeifyoufollowgoodeatinghabits.我敢肯定，如果你遵循良好的飲食習(xí)慣，你會(huì)過著健康快樂的生活。7.Ifyoudosomechangeslittlebylittle,youwillbehealthier.如果你一點(diǎn)一點(diǎn)地做一些改變，你會(huì)更健康。【句子升格】Havingabalanceddietisveryimportantforchildren.（用it作形式主語升格）________________________________________________________________________________________________2.Thelemonsareverysour（酸的）,soIdon'twanttoeatthem.(用too...to...升格)________________________________________________Itisveryimportantforchildrentohaveabalanceddiet.Thelemonsaretoosour(forme)toeat.3.Youeattoomuchfastfood.You'llgetfateasily.(用if合并句子升格)________________________________________________________________________________________________Ifyoueattoomuchfastfood,you’llgetfateasily.【寫作任務(wù)】健康的飲食關(guān)系到青少年的身心健康成長(zhǎng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，以“HealthyEating”為題寫一篇作文。80詞左右。

【要點(diǎn)】（1）健康飲食的重要性和益處；（2）你身邊的同學(xué)或朋友健康或不健康的飲食習(xí)慣；（3）你的建議。【思路點(diǎn)撥】第一步

審題。本文為議論文，人稱以

.為主，時(shí)態(tài)以

,為主。第二步

列提綱。第一人稱和第三人稱一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)

第三步

列出主要的短語。1.日常生活

。2.增強(qiáng)某人的體質(zhì)________________________。3.健康的飲食習(xí)慣

。4.任何一餐

。5.快餐

。6.起床晚

。dailylifebuildupsb’sbodyhealthyeatinghabitsanymealfastfoodgetuplate

。7.保持飲食均衡

。8..以這種方式

。keepabalanceddietinthisway第四步

擴(kuò)連改。為了提升學(xué)生的語法能力，特將以下語段改為語法填空。

HealthyEating

Healthyeatingisimportantforusinourdailylife.Foodcangiveusenergyandhelpus1.

(build)upourbody.

Someofmyfriendshavehealthyeatinghabits.Theyeatfruitand2.

(vegetable)everyday.Theyhavemeals3.

.timeandnevermissanymeal.4.

,someofmyfriends(to)buildvegetablesonHoweverlikefastfood.Andtheyoftenmissbreakfast5.

theygetuplate.

Ithinkeveryoneshouldhavehealthyeatinghabits.6.

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(one),weshouldhaveenoughcleanfoodeachmeal.Second,it'simportant7.

(keep)abalanceddiet.Different8.

.

(kind)offoodgiveusdifferentnutrition（營(yíng)養(yǎng)）weneedeveryday.Third,weshouldhave9.

regularmeal（規(guī)律飲食）.Inthisway,we’llbestrongerandhealthier.Andwe’lldobecauseFirsttokeepkindsa10.

(good)inourstudies.Let’simproveoureatinghabitsnow!well【一展身手】

眾所周知，健康對(duì)我們很重要。但是在我們的日常生活中，許多同學(xué)沒有養(yǎng)成健康的飲食習(xí)慣。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容寫一篇80詞左右的演講稿，談?wù)勀銓?duì)健康飲食的看法，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hello,everyone.I’msohappytogiveaspeechabouthealthyeatinghabits.Nowadays,manystudentsdonothavehealthyeatinghabits.Forexample,somestudentsgotoschoolwithouthavingbreakfast.Someeatlotsoffastfoodandsweetthings,andsomedrinktoomanysoftdrinks.Ithinkeveryoneshouldhaveabalanceddiet.Firstofall,weshouldhavethreemealsadayontime,

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