讀后續(xù)寫-忠誠小狗Bubbles：絕境中的生命守護(hù)者+講義 高一下學(xué)期第一次月考英語試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Itwasadayjustlikeeveryotherday.IwokeupearlyinthemorningandwenttorunonMountGraciouswithmydog,Bubbles.AsIranupthemountain,withmydogfollowingclosebehind,Ifeltenergeticandrefreshed.Runninginanaturalenvironmentneverfailedtomakemefeelalive.WhenIreachedthetop,Idranksomewaterandenjoyedthebeautifulsunrise.Thisscenealwaystookmybreathaway,nomatterhowmanytimesIhadseenit.Havingrestedenough,BubblesandImadeourwaybackdownthemountain.Aswewererunningdownhill,Isawanunfamiliarpathanddecidedtoexplorethearea.Thepathwasfullofrocks.Itwasnoteasytowalk.Suddenly,Islippedonamuddypatch,rollingdownfivemetersbeforeImanagedtograbholdofanexposedrootofahugetree.Iwassafefornow.However,Iwasseriouslyinjured.Mykneeswerebadlyhurt.Myrightfootwasalsodislocated(脫臼).IknewforsureIwouldbeunabletomakemywayupordownthemountainwithouthelp.IcalledouttoBubblesandhebarkedloudlyfromabove.ItseemedlikeheunderstoodthatIneededhelp.Helookeddownatmepitifullybeforedisappearingfromsight.Asnightfell,panic(恐慌)setinandscarythoughtswentthroughmymind.ThereweremanythingsthatIhadgottodo.Icouldn'tdie!ThiswouldnothavehappenedifIhadstucktomyusualpath.IwaslosinghopewhenIheardbarking.ItwasBubbles.IrubbedmyeyesasIstruggledtokeepawake.Buttherewassilence.Whocoulditbe?WasIhallucinating(產(chǎn)生幻覺)?ThenIheardsomevoicesandmorebarking.Yes.Helpwasnear,Iknew.Icouldcountonmydogtogethelp.注意：1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)150左右；2．請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Soon,Iheardmyparentscallingmyname.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Later,myparentstoldmewhatBubbleshaddonetogethelp._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意文章講述了“我”像往常一樣帶著狗狗Bubbles去MountGracious跑步，在到達(dá)山頂休息后下山途中，因探索一條陌生小路而滑倒受傷，無法自行上下山。狗狗Bubbles似乎明白“我”需要幫助，在“我”絕望之時，Bubbles帶著人聲和狗叫聲再次出現(xiàn)，給“我”帶來了希望。故事山分析開端：“我”清晨帶Bubbles去MountGracious跑步，到達(dá)山頂欣賞日出后準(zhǔn)備下山。發(fā)展：下山時“我”選擇探索陌生小路，結(jié)果滑倒受傷，無法行動，Bubbles似乎明白情況，隨后離開。高潮：夜晚降臨，“我”陷入恐慌，在絕望之際聽到Bubbles的叫聲以及其他聲音，意識到救援將至。結(jié)局：救援人員趕到救了“我”，后續(xù)揭示Bubbles為獲得幫助所做的努力。伏筆以及在續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)“我”與Bubbles關(guān)系親密：續(xù)寫中Bubbles積極尋找?guī)椭w現(xiàn)它對“我”的關(guān)心，回應(yīng)了親密關(guān)系。Bubbles離開去尋求幫助：后續(xù)Bubbles帶著救援人員回來，證實(shí)它成功找到了幫助。“我”受傷嚴(yán)重?zé)o法自行下山：救援人員的到來解決了“我”的困境，對應(yīng)受傷無法行動的伏筆?！拔摇焙蠡谖醋邔こＢ罚嚎梢栽讷@救后反思，回應(yīng)此伏筆，體現(xiàn)教訓(xùn)。夜晚降臨“我”陷入恐慌：救援人員到來后恐慌解除，前后呼應(yīng)。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)第一段：著重描寫父母和救援人員到來后的場景，如父母的焦急神情、救援人員的救助過程，“我”的心理變化，從絕望到安心。第二段：詳細(xì)講述Bubbles為獲得幫助所采取的行動，比如它如何回到家，怎樣引起父母注意，是否有引導(dǎo)救援人員前往“我”所在位置等，展現(xiàn)狗狗的聰明與忠誠。情感線受傷后“我”從起初的冷靜到夜晚的恐慌、絕望，在聽到Bubbles叫聲及救援聲音時重燃希望，獲救時感到安心與感激。父母從發(fā)現(xiàn)“我”未歸的焦急，到看到“我”受傷的心疼，最后是對Bubbles的欣慰與贊賞。故事線父母和救援人員到達(dá)：父母呼喊“我”，救援人員展開救援，將“我”帶下山。講述Bubbles的行動：Bubbles跑回家，通過各種行為引起父母注意，帶領(lǐng)救援人員找到“我”?！拔摇钡墨@救過程：描述“我”被救助時的狀態(tài)，被抬下山后的后續(xù)處理。家人的反應(yīng)：父母看到“我”后的情緒表現(xiàn)，對Bubbles的夸贊?！拔摇钡姆此迹骸拔摇睂Υ舜蚊半U的反思，意識到不能隨意偏離常規(guī)路線。對Bubbles的感謝：“我”和家人對Bubbles的感激，以及Bubbles與“我”關(guān)系的進(jìn)一步升華。主旨升華句Intimesofcrisis,theloyaltyandintelligenceofouranimalcompanionscanbeatruelifesaver,remindingusofthedeepbondsweshare.在危機(jī)時刻，我們動物伙伴的忠誠和智慧真的能拯救生命，讓我們想起彼此間深厚的情感紐帶。Thisexperiencetaughtmethateveninthefaceofunexpecteddanger,hopecanemergefromthemostunlikelysources,liketheunwaveringdevotionofabelovedpet.這次經(jīng)歷讓我明白，即使面對意外危險，希望也能從最意想不到的地方出現(xiàn)，比如心愛寵物堅(jiān)定不移的付出。Ourpetsarenotjustanimals;theyarepartofourfamily,capableofheroicactswhenweareinneed,strengtheningtheconnectionbetweenhumansandanimals.我們的寵物不僅僅是動物，它們是我們家庭的一部分，在我們需要時能夠做出英勇之舉，強(qiáng)化了人類與動物之間的聯(lián)系。ThroughBubbles'heroicefforts,Ilearnedthevalueoftrustandtheremarkableabilitiesofthoseweholddear,andIwillforeverbegratefulforhisloyalty.通過Bubbles的英勇努力，我明白了信任的價值以及我們所珍視之人的非凡能力，我將永遠(yuǎn)感激它的忠誠。Thisincidentservesasapowerfulreminderthatnaturecanbebothbeautifulandtreacherous,andtheloveandhelpfromourfurryfriendscanguideusthroughthedarkestoftimes.這件事有力地提醒我們，大自然既美麗又危險，而來自我們毛茸茸朋友的愛與幫助能引領(lǐng)我們度過最黑暗的時刻。寫作示范第一篇

Soon,Iheardmyparentscallingmyname.Theirvoiceswerefilledwithanxiety.Itriedmybesttoshoutback,myvoicehoarsefromhoursofwaiting.Momentslater,Isawtheflashlightsoftherescueteam.Myparentsrushedtowardsme,theirfacesfullofworry.Therescuerscarefullyexaminedmyinjuriesandgentlyplacedmeonastretcher.Astheycarriedmedownthemountain,Ifeltasenseofreliefwashoverme.AllthefearandpanicIhadbeenfeelingdisappeared,replacedbygratitudeformyrescuersandmydeardog.

Later,myparentstoldmewhatBubbleshaddonetogethelp.Hehadrunallthewaybackhome,histonguehangingout.Whenhereachedthefrontdoor,hebarkednon-stop,scratchingatthedoorfrantically.Myparents,alarmedbyhisunusualbehavior,openedthedoor.Bubblesimmediatelygrabbedmyrunningshoesinhismouthandranout,lookingbackasifurgingthemtofollow.Heledthemstraighttotheparkrangers'office.Withthehelpoftherangers,theywereabletofindme.IwasdeeplytouchedbyBubbles'actions.Fromthatdayon,ourbondgrewevenstronger.

第二篇

Soon,Iheardmyparentscallingmyname.TearswelledupinmyeyesasIshoutedforthem.Therescueteamquicklylocatedme.Mymotherrushedtomyside,cryingwithrelief,whilemyfatherthankedtherescuers.Therescuerscarefullybandagedmywoundsonthespotandthenslowlycarriedmedownthemountain.Iwassogratefultobesafeandinthearmsofmyfamily.

Later,myparentstoldmewhatBubbleshaddonetogethelp.Hesprintedhomeasfastashislegscouldcarryhim.Oncehome,hejumpedonmyparents'bed,barkingloudlyandtuggingatthecovers.Whentheywokeup,confused,Bubblesrantothedoor,barkinginsistently.Myparents,realizingsomethingwaswrong,followedhim.Heledthemtoaneighborwhooftenwenthikingandknewthemountainwell.Theneighborcalledtheparkrangers,andtogethertheysetouttofindme.IwasamazedathowintelligentanddeterminedBubbleswas.Thisexperiencemademecherishhimevenmore.【答案】Onepossibleversion:Soon,Iheardmyparentscallingmyname.SoIbegancallingback.Amomentlater,Isawthelightofaflashlight.FollowingmyvoiceandwithBubblesleadingtheway,myparentsfinallyfoundme.Theylookednervousandworried.AfterlearningIwasbadly