Unit2Writing課件人教版英語八年級下冊

I’llhelptocleanthecityparks.單元作文講練Unit2【語境應(yīng)用】根據(jù)漢語意思完成句子。1)

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為了能獨(dú)自撫養(yǎng)孩子們，Green太太一直努力工作。Mrs.Greenalwaysworkshardto____________________byherself.raiseyourhandtoraisemoneyraiseherchildren/kidsIwanttobeadoctor,volunteeringinahospitalisadreamcometrueforme,Icouldlearnmoreknowledgeaboutmedicineandhelpmegetmyfuturedreamjob.Whydoyouwanttodovolunteerwork?Let’sdiscussWhydoyouwanttodovolunteerwork?Let’sdiscussVolunteeringcanhelpotherpeoplelivebetterandmakedifferencetoallofus.cleanuptheplaygroundhelptheteachergiveoutexercisebookskeeporderatthesportsmeetingplanttreesWhatcouldwevolunteertodoatschool?helpcleanuptheCityParksvisitsickchildreninthehospitalhelpstophungerraisemoneyforpoorpeopleWhatcouldwevolunteertodooutsideschool?Wheredoyouwanttovolunteeratandwhy?volunteerin

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museumvolunteerinaparkvolunteerinthecommunityI’dliketo/I'minterestedin/I’mfondof/Iwantto…because…/??ntr?st/Welcometojoinusandbeavolunteer!Ifyouwanttocome,pleasewritealetterabouttheplaceyouwanttovolunteeratandthejobyoucandotous.Howcanwewritethisletter?DearSirorMadam,I’maGrade8studentfromXXmiddleschool.Iwouldliketovolunteerinanoldpeople’shome.IamgoodatcleaningthehouseandIamalsointerestedincooking.What’smore,Iamstrongincommunicatingwithothers.Therefore,Icandoalotfortheoldpeople.Firstly,Icanhelptheoldpeopletodosomecleaning.Secondly,Icancookdeliciousfoodforthem.Finally,Icantalkwiththemwhentheyfeellonelyandunhappy.IbelieveIamgoodatthisjob.Iwanttohelpoutasavolunteerinanoldpeople’shomebecauseitmakesmedowhatIlovetodoandhelpothersatthesametimeAsfortheworkingtime,IamfreetohelponSaturdays.Fromthebottomofmyheart,Iwanttogetthisjob.Ihopeyoucanoffermethechance.Yourstruly,LiHuaDearSirorMadam,I’maGrade8studentfromXXmiddleschool.Iwouldliketovolunteerinanoldpeople’shome.IamgoodatcleaningthehouseandIamalsointerestedincooking.What’smore,Iamstrongincommunicatingwithothers.Therefore,Icandoalotfortheoldpeople.Firstly,Icanhelptheoldpeopletodosomecleaning.Secondly,Icancookdeliciousfoodforthem.Finally,Icantalkwiththemwhentheyfeellonelyandunhappy.IbelieveIamgoodatthisjob.Iwanttohelpoutasavolunteerinanoldpeople’shomebecauseitmakesmedowhatIlovetodoandhelpothersatthesametimeAsfortheworkingtime,IamfreetohelponSaturdays.Fromthebottomofmyheart,Iwanttogetthisjob.Ihopeyoucanoffermethechance.Yourstruly,LiHua本單元談?wù)摰脑掝}是“志愿與慈善”。圍繞這一話題，主要談?wù)摿巳绾翁峁椭靶麄?、倡?dǎo)公益活動等。針對該話題，考試中常見的考查角度有：介紹自己或者他人某次的志愿者活動；志愿活動的安排；志愿者的招聘啟事或者自薦信等。體裁以記敘文、應(yīng)用文為主，多用第一人稱，時態(tài)多使用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時。寫作此類話題作文，常用的相關(guān)句型：話題分析Lookatthesekindsofvolunteerwork.Canyouaddmore?Whatwouldyouliketodo?Discussitwithapartner.3aHelpingkidsinanafter-schoolprogramWorkinginanoldpeople’shomeBeingaguideatamuseumPre-writingAnalyzethecontent（分析內(nèi)容）Wouldyouliketobevolunteers?Thelawofpalm手掌定律Whichvolunteerjobdoyouwanttodo?Whatareyourinterestsandhobbies?Howcanthesehelpyoutodothejob?Whydoyouwanttodothevolunteerjob?When

areyoufreetodothejob?expressyourhopePre-writingWhatareyourinterestsandhobbies?Iaminterestedin/Iamfondof/Iamcrazyabout…Iamstrongin/Iamskilledat…Whydoyouwanttodothevolunteerjob?

Iwanttogetthejobbecause…….Therefore,…….Thereasonisthat……forthereasonthat…expressyourhopeIsincerehopethat…Couldyoupleaseoffermethechance?Whichvolunteerjobdoyouwanttodo?Iwouldliketo/Iwantto/Ihopetovolunteerin/at/as…Sincerely,Ihope…

BrainstormmoreusefulexpressionsLet’sdraftWhatsentencescanweusetodescribethisparagraph?application1.purpose2.introduction&ability3.reason4.time/promise/expectation/contactsIamwritingtoyouaboutvolunteeringin…...I'mgoodat.../Iamstrongin...Inmyfreetime,/Iliketo...soIthinkI'dbegoodatthisjob.Ican...Iwanttohelpoutasavolunteerinyouroldpeople'shomebecause...I’mfreetohelponweekends.Thankyouforreviewingmyapplication.IwouldbeverypleasedifIcouldmakemycontributiontotheproject.EmailmeatLucy@.Learnthestructure（學(xué)習(xí)結(jié)構(gòu)）Pre-writingHowmanypartsarethereinthemainpartoftheletter?threeDearSirorMadam,Iwouldliketovolunteerinanoldpeople’shome.IamgoodatcleaningthehouseandIamalsointerestedincooking.What’smore,Iamstrongincommunicatingwithothers.Therefore,Icandoalotfortheoldpeople.Firstly,Icanhelptheoldpeopletodosomecleaning.Secondly,Icancookdeliciousfoodforthem.Finally,Icantalkwiththemwhentheyfeellonelyandunhappy.IbelieveIamgoodatthisjob.Iwanttohelpoutasavolunteerinanoldpeople’shomebecauseitmakesmedowhatIlovetodoandhelpothersatthesametimeAsfortheworkingtime,IamfreetohelponSaturdays.Fromthebottomofmyheart,Iwanttogetthisjob.Ihopeyoucanoffermethechance.Yourstruly,LiHuaBeginningBodyEndingReadandmarkthecontent（內(nèi)容）Pre-writingWhydoyouwanttodothevolunteerjob?expressyourhopeHowcanthesehelpyoutodothejob?Whatareyourinterestsandhobbies?Whichvolunteerjobdoyouwanttodo?Whenareyoufreetodothejob?DearSirorMadam,Iwouldliketovolunteerinanoldpeople’shome.IamgoodatcleaningthehouseandIamalsointerestedincooking.What’smore,Iamstrongincommunicatingwithothers.Therefore,Icandoalotfortheoldpeople.Firstly,Icanhelptheoldpeopletodosomecleaning.Secondly,Icancookdeliciousfoodforthem.Finally,Icantalkwiththemwhentheyfeellonelyandunhappy.IbelieveIamgoodatthisjob.Iwanttohelpoutasavolunteerinanoldpeople’shomebecauseitmakesmedowhatIlovetodoandhelpothersatthesametimeAsfortheworkingtime,IamfreetohelponSaturdays.Fromthebottomofmyheart,Iwanttogetthisjob.Ihopeyoucanoffermethechance.Yourstruly,LiHuaLearnthelanguagePre-writingWritingtip:makethewritingmorelogic.allowthereaderstofollowourthoughts.Moreconjunctions:next,afterthat,inaddition,additionally,also,then...Conjunctions（連接詞）Transitionalsentences（過渡句）DearSirorMadam,Iwouldliketovolunteerinanoldpeople’shome.IamgoodatcleaningthehouseandIamalsointerestedincooking.What’smore,Iamstrongincommunicatingwithothers.Therefore,Icandoalotfortheoldpeople.Firstly,Icanhelptheoldpeopletodosomecleaning.Secondly,Icancookdeliciousfoodforthem.Finally,Icantalkwiththemwhentheyfeellonelyandunhappy.IbelieveIamgoodatthisjob.Iwanttohelpoutasavolunteerinanoldpeople’shomebecauseitmakesmedowhatIlovetodoandhelpothersatthesametimeAsfortheworkingtime,IamfreetohelponSaturdays.Fromthebottomofmyheart,Iwanttogetthisjob.Ihopeyoucanoffermethechance.Yourstruly,LiHuaBody(正文)陳述觀點WhatHowWhyWhenWhich你的興趣/愛好它們對你工作的幫助說明你想做這份工作的原因你做這份工作的時間引出話題Salutation(稱呼)Signature(署名)結(jié)束語表達(dá)想做什么樣的志愿者工作Will表達(dá)意愿，感謝ThestructureoftheletterThinkanddiscusshowtowriteanapplication.purposeintroduction:interestsandhobbiesabilityreasonfreetimepromise/expectationcontactsApplication申請書Let’sdraftWhatsentencescanweusetodescribethisparagraph?Howtomakethepassagebetter?諺語能幫忙讓文章變得更優(yōu)美哦：Helpingothersisavirtue.Rosesgiven,fragranceinhand.Helpingotherstostandupisgoodexerciseforourmind.Virtueisitsownreward.Itisbettertogivethantotake.Wecan’thelpeveryone,buteveryonecanhelpsomeoneelse.Draftyourletteraccordingtoyouroutline.（起草）While-writingDearSirorMadam,I’dliketo/I'minterestedin/Iwanttovolunteerin______________.I'mgoodat/I’mstrongin/Inmyfreetime,Iliketo_________________,soIthinkIdbegoodatthisjob.Iwanttohelpoutasavolunteerin________________because_______________________.Asfortheworkingtime,I’mfreetohelpin/on__________________.Fromthebottomofmyheart,_____________.Yourstruly,__________010203

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時態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時審題While-writing你在網(wǎng)站看到這篇學(xué)生中心公開招募志愿者的招聘啟事，你也很想去幫助需要幫助的人，請寫一封回信申請一份你喜歡的志愿者工作。申請內(nèi)容：1.寫明你要申請的志愿者工作是什么；2.說明你有怎樣的能力或興趣愛好能勝任這份工作。要求：80字左右，內(nèi)容充實，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，語言流暢得體。Task1審題I’dliketo/I’minterestedin/Iwanttovolunteeras…I’mgoodat/I’mstrongin/Inmyfreetime,Iliketo…soIthinkI’dbegoodatthejob.Iwanttohelpoutasavolunteerinyouroldpeople’shome/school/museum/groupbecause…I’mfreetohelpin/on…Somepatternsforreference:DearSirorMadam,Yourstruly,____While-writingWritealetterforavolunteerjob.DearSir,I’mamiddleschoolstudent.MynameisLiHua.Iwanttovolunteerasateacherinanafter-schoolprogram.Icanreadstorybookstokidsthere.Inmyfreetime,IliketoreadbooksandIthinkI’dbegoodatthisjob.Iwanttohelpoutasavolunteerintheafter-schoolprogrambecauseIlikespendingtimewithkids.AndIlikereadingverymuch.I’mfreetohelponSunday.I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yourstruly,LiHua引出話題Salutation(稱呼語)結(jié)束語HowWhyWhenSignature(署名)What篇章方面詞語方面代詞的主格、賓格等形式使用是否正確？名詞單復(fù)數(shù)是否準(zhǔn)確？動詞搭配、動詞的形式正確？形容詞、副詞的使用是否達(dá)?與修飾的對象是否相符？

。句子方面主謂是否一致？時態(tài)、語態(tài)是否正確？連詞使用是否正確？句式是否多樣？是否用到好詞好句？細(xì)節(jié)方面單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點符號、大小寫等是否正確？布局是否完整？邏輯是否合理？要點是否齊全/豐富？After-writingTask1:Self-checkDearSirorMadam,I'dliketohelpkidsinyourafter-schoolprogram.I'mamiddleschoolstudentandIwanttobeateacherwhenIgrowup.I'mgoodatsinginganddrawing.Icansingforthekidsandpl