2025中考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作話題6：學(xué)校生活VIP

寫(xiě)作話題《學(xué)校生活》【課標(biāo)說(shuō)明】該話題屬于《義務(wù)教育英語(yǔ)課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)》中“人與自我”主題范疇中“生活與學(xué)習(xí)”這一主題群，涉及“豐富多彩，安全，有意義的學(xué)校生活”。該話題旨在引導(dǎo)學(xué)生熱愛(ài)學(xué)校，積極參與校園活動(dòng)，從而豐富自己的校園生活，提升各項(xiàng)能力，更好地投入校園學(xué)習(xí)中?！久}探索】結(jié)合全國(guó)近年中考真題可知，此話題屬于高頻話題，其常見(jiàn)的命題角度有：介紹學(xué)校基本情況介紹學(xué)生學(xué)校生活介紹校園活動(dòng)4.對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)的看法【詞匯積累】學(xué)校設(shè)施classroom教室library圖書(shū)館playground操場(chǎng)laboratory實(shí)驗(yàn)室dormitory宿舍auditorium禮堂teachingbuilding教學(xué)樓administrativebuilding行政樓學(xué)習(xí)相關(guān)study學(xué)習(xí)learn學(xué)會(huì)review復(fù)習(xí)preview預(yù)習(xí)takenotes做筆記assignment作業(yè)project課題；項(xiàng)目exam/examination考試test測(cè)驗(yàn)quiz小測(cè)驗(yàn)grade/mark/score成績(jī)textbook課本notebook筆記本referencebook參考書(shū)developgoodhabits養(yǎng)成好習(xí)慣校園活動(dòng)sportsmeet/sportsmeeting運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)artfestival藝術(shù)節(jié)scienceandtechnologyfestival科技節(jié)speechcontest演講比賽debatecompetition辯論賽singingcompetition歌唱比賽clubactivities社團(tuán)活動(dòng)volunteeractivities志愿者活動(dòng)fieldtrip實(shí)地考察；校外活動(dòng)attendactivities/joinclubs參加活動(dòng)/社團(tuán)takepartincompetitions參加比賽人物關(guān)系teacher老師classmate同學(xué)roommate室友headteacher班主任monitor班長(zhǎng)schoolmate校友getalongwellwithclassmates和同學(xué)和諧相處makefriends結(jié)交朋友【句子積累】描述校園環(huán)境Ourschoolissurroundedbybeautifulscenery,makingitaperfectplaceforstudyandgrowth.我們學(xué)校被美麗的景色環(huán)繞，是學(xué)習(xí)和成長(zhǎng)的理想之地。Thecampusisequippedwithmodernfacilities,whichprovideuswithgreatconvenience.校園配備了現(xiàn)代化設(shè)施，給我們提供了極大的便利。介紹學(xué)習(xí)生活Wehaveawiderangeofcoursesatschool,suchasmathematics,English,andart,whichcanmeetdifferentinterestsandneeds.我們學(xué)校有豐富多樣的課程，如數(shù)學(xué)、英語(yǔ)和藝術(shù)，能滿足不同的興趣和需求。Ifinditchallengingbutrewardingtostudysciencesubjects,astheycanbroadenmyhorizons.我覺(jué)得學(xué)習(xí)理科課程很有挑戰(zhàn)性但也很有收獲，因?yàn)樗鼈兡芡貙捨业囊曇?。講述校園活動(dòng)Participatinginthesportsmeetnotonlyimprovesmyphysicalfitnessbutalsocultivatesmysenseofteamwork.參加運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)不僅能提高我的身體素質(zhì)，還能培養(yǎng)我的團(tuán)隊(duì)合作意識(shí)。Theartfestivalisawonderfulopportunityforustoshowourcreativityandtalents.藝術(shù)節(jié)是我們展示創(chuàng)造力和才華的絕佳機(jī)會(huì)。表達(dá)師生關(guān)系Myheadteacherisalwayspatientwithusandgivesusvaluableadviceonbothstudyandlife.我的班主任對(duì)我們總是很有耐心，在學(xué)習(xí)和生活上都給我們提供了寶貴的建議。Igetalongwellwithmyclassmates,andweoftenhavediscussionsandshareideasinclass.我和同學(xué)們相處得很好，我們經(jīng)常在課堂上討論并分享想法?！舅渍Z(yǔ)諺語(yǔ)】Knowledgeispower.知識(shí)就是力量。Readingmakesafullman.閱讀使人充實(shí)。Booksarethesourceofknowledge.書(shū)籍是知識(shí)的源泉。Booksaretheladdersofhumanprogress.書(shū)籍是人類進(jìn)步的階梯。Thereisagoldenhouseinthebook.書(shū)中自有黃金屋。Agoodbookisagoodfriend.好書(shū)如摯友。Timeflies!/Howtimeflies!時(shí)光飛逝！Nothingisdifficulttothemanwhowilltry.世上無(wú)難事，只要肯攀登。Allgoodthingscometoanend.天下沒(méi)有不散的筵席?！緦?xiě)作指導(dǎo)】假定你是學(xué)校英語(yǔ)報(bào)小記者李華，上周學(xué)校開(kāi)展了“EnglishDay”活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的海報(bào)和學(xué)生參加活動(dòng)的數(shù)據(jù)寫(xiě)一篇報(bào)道，介紹活動(dòng)情況以及同學(xué)們的感受。詞數(shù)80左右。EnglishDayTime:2:00p.m.-4:30p.m.EnglishDayTime:2:00p.m.-4:30p.m.June18thPlace:IntheschoolhallLearningbyDoing:SingingCompetitionCookingShowStorytellingJoinus!注意事項(xiàng)：1.必須包含提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；3.請(qǐng)勿在文中使用真實(shí)的姓名和校名。五步寫(xiě)作法——審列擴(kuò)連查第一步細(xì)審題定要點(diǎn)（五審法：審主題、審人稱、審文體、審時(shí)態(tài)、審要點(diǎn)）1）審人稱：以第一人稱為主2）審時(shí)態(tài)：以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主3）審主題：介紹“EnglishDay”活動(dòng)的情況及同學(xué)們的感受4）審文體：應(yīng)用文5）定要點(diǎn)：時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、活動(dòng)內(nèi)容、參加人數(shù)比、同學(xué)們的感受第二步分段落列要點(diǎn)首段(Beginning)：引出活動(dòng)的主題，英語(yǔ)日的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)(takeplace,from...to...)中間段(Body)：介紹活動(dòng)的具體內(nèi)容及參加人數(shù)比：活動(dòng)內(nèi)容：唱歌比賽(singingcompetition)、烹飪表演(cookingshow)和講故事(storytelling)2.參加人數(shù)比(...percentof)結(jié)尾(Ending)：呼應(yīng)首句，對(duì)活動(dòng)的感受和期待(learn,hope)第三步擴(kuò)句子精加工首段：英語(yǔ)日的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)[一般句]ItwasheldintheschoolhallonJune18th.Itlastedfrom2:00p.m.to4:30p.m.[高分句]OurschoolEnglishDaywasagreatsuccess.Ittookplaceintheschoolhallfrom2:00p.m.to4:30p.m.onJune18th.(takeplace,from...to...)中間段：活動(dòng)的具體內(nèi)容及參加人數(shù)比例(活動(dòng)一)SingingCompetition50%[一般句]50%ofthestudentstookpartinthesingingcompetition.[高分句]Halfofthestudentstookpartinthesingingcompetition.Itwasthemostpopularbecausewecouldshareandenjoythebeautifulsongs.（形容詞最高級(jí)和活動(dòng)內(nèi)容的具體化）(活動(dòng)二)CookingShow30%[一般句]30%ofuswenttothecookingshowandtasteddishes.[高分句]30%ofuswenttothecookingshowtotastevariousdishesthere.（todo句式表示活動(dòng)意義）(活動(dòng)三)Storytelling20%[一般句]20%ofthestudentshadagoodtimeinthestorytellingpart.[高分句]1.（because增加活動(dòng)原因）結(jié)尾：感受和期待[一般句]WelearnedalotontheschoolEnglishDay.WerealizedtheimportanceoflearningEnglish.[高分句]2.（notonly…butalso…，期待）第四步連句子成短文???????OurSchoolEnglishDay??OurschoolEnglishDaywasagreatsuccess.Ittookplaceintheschoolhallfrom2:00p.m.to4:30p.m.onJune18th.Therewerethreeactivitiesontheday.Halfofthestudentstookpartinthesingingcompetition.Itwasthemostpopularbecausewecouldshareandenjoythebeautifulsongs.30%ofuswenttothecookingshowtotastevariousdishesthere.Andtherestofusenjoyedourselvesinthestorytellingpartbecausethereweresomanygreatstories.WespokehighlyoftheEnglishDay.Wenotonlylearnedalot,butalsocametorealizetheimportanceofteamworkthroughpractice.Wehopetherewillbemorecolorfulactivitiesliketheseinourschool.第五步查全文得高分首先依次檢查人稱、時(shí)態(tài)是否正確，要點(diǎn)是否齊全；然后檢查句型、單詞拼寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)是否正確。實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練一假定你是李華，你校與某鄉(xiāng)鎮(zhèn)希望中學(xué)(HopeMiddleSchool)是友好學(xué)校，上周五兩校英語(yǔ)社團(tuán)在希望中學(xué)舉行了共演英文課本劇活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你為校英文報(bào)寫(xiě)一則新聞稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、參與人員；2.活動(dòng)過(guò)程簡(jiǎn)介；3.活動(dòng)意義。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右，標(biāo)題已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。參考詞匯：英文課本劇Englishtextbookdrama友好學(xué)校sisterschool【優(yōu)秀范文】AnEnglishTextbookDramaShowLastFriday,afantasticEnglishtextbookdramashowwasheldontheplaygroundofoursisterschool,HopeMiddleSchool,withupto300teachersandstudentsfromtheEnglishclubsofthetwoschoolstakingpart.Thedramashowlastedtwohours.ThemembersofbothclubsperformedthreeshortplaysoftraditionalChinesestoriesfromourtextbook,whichreflectedthegoodqualitiesoftheChinesepeopleandourexcellenttraditionalculture.Thankstothegreateffortsofallperformersandteachers,the2-hourshowwasagreatsuccess.Attheendoftheshow,allthepeoplepresentstoodupandcheeredfortheirwonderfulperformance.WeallbelievethisactivityprovidedagoodchanceforustoenjoyEnglishplays,improvingourEnglishlanguageskillsaswellasbringingthetwoschoolscloser.[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主；③提示：根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容介紹學(xué)校舉行的英文課本劇活動(dòng)，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，介紹時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、參與人員；第二步，介紹活動(dòng)的過(guò)程；第三步，介紹活動(dòng)的意義。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①thanksto幸虧②standup站起來(lái)③aswellas和[高分句型]①ThemembersofbothclubsperformedthreeshortplaysoftraditionalChinesestoriesfromourtextbook,whichreflectedthegoodqualitiesoftheChinesepeopleandourexcellenttraditionalculture.(定語(yǔ)從句)②WeallbelievethisactivityprovidedagoodchanceforustoenjoyEnglishplays,improvingourEnglishlanguageskillsaswellasbringingthetwoschoolscloser.(賓語(yǔ)從句)實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練二讀萬(wàn)卷書(shū)，行萬(wàn)里路。近年來(lái)，參觀博物館、看工廠、訪農(nóng)村等形式多樣的研學(xué)活動(dòng)，極大地豐富了中學(xué)生的課余生活。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)及要求，描述自己曾經(jīng)的一次研學(xué)旅行經(jīng)歷。要點(diǎn)：1）研學(xué)地點(diǎn)、時(shí)間、交通工具、研學(xué)過(guò)程；2）研學(xué)旅行的收獲和感受；3）研學(xué)旅行的重要性。要求：1）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2）詞數(shù)100左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)?！緝?yōu)秀范文】Studytourismoreandmorepopularthesedays.Now,letmetellyouoneofmystudytours.Aschooltourisagoodwaytoputwhatyouhavelearntintopractice.WewenttoZhengzhouScienceandTechnologyMuseumlastSundayfirst.Wegottherebybus.Wesawmanyfantasticinventionsanddidsomescientificexperiments.ThenwewenttotheWildlifePark.Wegotclosecontactwithdifferentkindsofwildanimalsandbirdsandlearnedalotabouttheirlivinghabits.Ittookusadaytotakepartinthisactivities.Weweretiredbuthappy.Thisactivitynotonlymadeusrelaxed,butalsomadeuslearnsomethingnewandmeaningful.[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”與“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，承接上文，介紹自己曾經(jīng)的一次研學(xué)旅行經(jīng)歷；第二步，具體闡述研學(xué)的地點(diǎn)、時(shí)間、交通工具、研學(xué)過(guò)程以及收獲和感受；第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)，總結(jié)研學(xué)的重要性。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①fantastic極好的②takepartin參加③meaningful有意義的[高分句型]①Aschooltourisagoodwaytoputwhatyouhavelearntintopractice.（what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句）②Ittookusadaytotakepartinthisactivities.（it固定句式）實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練三三年的初中學(xué)習(xí)生活只有幾個(gè)月就要結(jié)束了，你想進(jìn)入一所什么樣的高中？為了讓同學(xué)們更明確自己將來(lái)的學(xué)習(xí)和生活目標(biāo)，學(xué)校英文報(bào)正在以“MyDreamHighSchoolLife”為題開(kāi)展征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你結(jié)合以下圖示，寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿。要求：短文必須包括圖示中的所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；(2)80詞左右(標(biāo)題和開(kāi)頭都已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))；(3)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名和校名?！緝?yōu)秀范文】MyDreamHighSchoolLifeMyseniorhighschoollifeisjustaroundthecorner.I’mastudentinGrade9.NowI’mworkinghardinordertoentermydreamhighschool.Mydreamschoolisverybigandbeautiful.Therewillbefreshairandmanygreentrees.Itiscleanandpic